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.,概要寫作Summarywriting,高考新題型,.,Whatisagoodsummary?,概要寫作評分標準第五檔（2125points）：1.理解準確，涵蓋所有要點2.準確使用相應的語法結構和詞匯3.完全使用自己的語言。(60-80W)4.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使概要結構緊湊,contents(內容),languageskills(語言),structure(結構),.,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?（182W）,.,Step1.Understandthewholepassageandgraspthekeypoints.,.,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?,.,概要寫作難點1,Howtogetthekeypointsquicklyandcorrectly?(如何快速、準確地捕捉要點),抓住主題句或關鍵信息，忽略次要信息,.,Para1：,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.,detailedexample,忽略具體事例,topicsentence,概要寫作難點2,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?(如何靈活詮釋，規(guī)避抄襲的嫌疑),characteristics,.,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever._,industrialgoodsweremade_.,Sometimeago;Inthepast;Decadesago,tobeusedforalongtimetofunctionwellforalongtime;durable,近義詞替換,.,Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.,Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable.,spentmuchmoneyon,treasure,treatitkindly,Youspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.,Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.,Para1.,useitcarefully,.,Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!,topicsentence,detailedexamples,characteristics,result,忽略具體事例,.,Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!,.,1.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.3.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.,ModernIndustry,madeusbelieve,convinced,notpermanent,Modernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.,short-lived,近義詞替換,.,2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.Itismoreexpensivetorepairthemthantothrowthemaway.,改變主語（形式主語）,正話反說、反話正說,.,Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.,改變句式,resultin,.,Modernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.,Para2.,.,Para3：,提煉相關信息,Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?,過渡句,Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeitstoolate,Thiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.,Wearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotakeaction.,.,Thiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.Wearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotakeaction.Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeitstoolate.,Para3.,Thiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.Wearerunningoutofresources.Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeitstoolate.,.,Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable.Wespentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Modernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Thiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.Wearerunningoutofresources.Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeitstoolate.(71W),Polishyourwriting,有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使概要結構緊湊,1921分,However,Therefore,.,Step1：Step2:Step3:Step4:,讀懂文章大意,抓住主題句或關鍵信息，忽略次要信息,Howtowriteagoodsummary?,Conclusion,靈活運用語言，對關鍵信息進行改編,添加有效連接成分，使概要結構緊湊,.,Thefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealth.Althoughsciencehasmadebigstepsinmakingfoodmorefittoeat,ithas,atthesametime,mademanyfoodsunfittoeat.Someresearchhasshownthatperhapseightypercentofhumanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell.Thatfoodisrelatedtoillnessisnotanewdiscovery.In1945,someresearchersrealizedthatthingscommonlyusedtokeepcolourinmeatsandotherfoodadditives（添加劑）causedcancer.Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttoknowwhichthingsonthewrappings（包裝）offoodsarehelpfulorharmful.Theadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirect.Farmersoftengivepenicillintotheiranimals,andbecauseofthis,penicillinhasbeenfoundinthemilkofcows.Sometimessimilartingsaresuppliedtoanimalsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomakeaprofit.Thefarmersaresimplytryingtofattentheanimalsinordertogetahigherpriceonthemarket.Althoughsomecountrieshavetriedtocontrolsuchthings,thepracticecontinues.（201W）,.,Thefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealth.Althoughsciencehasmadebigstepsinmakingfoodmorefittoeat,ithas,atthesametime,mademanyfoodsunfittoeat.Someresearchhasshownthatperhapseightypercentofhumanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell.Thatfoodisrelatedtoillnessisnotanewdiscovery.In1945,someresearchersrealizedthatthingscommonlyusedtokeepcolourinmeatsandotherfoodadditives（添加劑）causedcancer.,Para1：,.,(1.)Thefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealth.(2.)Althoughsciencehasmadebigstepsinmakingfoodmorefittoeat,ithas,atthesametime,mademanyfoodsunfittoeat.(3.)Someresearchhasshownthatperhapseightypercentofhumanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell.,1.Ourfoodaffectsourhealth.,2.Althoughsciencehasgreatlyimprovedthequalityofourfoods,somearestillunsafetoeat.,.,(3.)Someresearchhasshownthatperhapseightypercentofhumanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell.,3.Researchhasprovedthatmostofourdiseasesarecausedbyfood,includingcancer.,.,Ourfoodaffectsourhealth.Althoughsciencehasgreatlyimprovethequalityofourfoods,somearestillunsafetoeat.Researchhasprovedthatmostofourdiseasesarecausedbyfood,includingcancer.,Para1：,.,Para2：,Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttoknowwhichthingsonthewrappings(包裝)offoodsarehelpfulorharmful.Theadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirect.Farmersoftengivepenicillintotheiranimals,andbecauseofthis,penicillinhasbeenfoundinthemilkofcows.Sometimessimilartingsaresuppliedtoanimalsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomakeaprofit.,.,(1.)Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttoknowwhichthingsonthewrappingsoffoodsarehelpfulorharmful.(2.)Theadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirect.(3.)Sometimessimilartingsaresuppliedtoanimalsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomakeaprofit.,1.Wecanhardlytellwhethertheadditivesinourfoodareharmfulornot.,2.Theyaffectourbodyindirectly.,.,(3.)Sometimessimilartingsaresuppliedtoanimalsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomakeaprofit.,3.Somefarmersraisetheiranimalswithadditivestoearnmoremoney.,.,Wecanhardlytellwhethertheadditivesinourfoodareharmfulornot.Theyaffectourbodyindirectly.Somefarmersraisetheiranimalswithadditivestoearnmoremoney.,Para2：,.,Para3：,Thefarmersaresimplytryingtofattentheanimalsinordertogetahigherpriceonthemarket.Althoughsomecountrieshavetriedtocontrolsuchthings,thepracticecontinues.,Somecountrieshavetakenmeasurestostopsuchthings,butinvain.,.,Ourfoodaffectsourhealth.Althoughsciencehasgreatlyimprovedthequalityofourfoods,somearestillunsafetoeat.Researchhasprovedthatmostofourdiseasesarecausedbyfood,includingcancer.Wecanhardlytellwhethertheadditivesinourfoodareharmfulornot.Theyaffectourbodyindirectly.Somefarmersraisetheiranimalswithadditivestoearnmoremoney.Somecountrieshavetakenmeasurestostopsuchthings,butinvain.(77W),it,有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使概要結構緊湊,because,.,Weightlossismostlikelytobesuccessfulwhenpeoplechangetheirhabits.Hereareseveralwaystomakethathappen.Regularphysicalactivityburnscaloriesandbuildsmuscles-bothofwhichhelpyoulookandfeelgoodandkeepweightoff.Walkingthefamilydog,cyclingtoschool,anddoingotherthingsthatincreaseyourdailylevelofactivitycanallmakeadifference.Onereasonpeoplegetlessexercisethesedaysisbecauseofanincreasein“screentime”-theamountoftimespentwatchingTV,lookingatthecomputer,orplayingvideogames.Limitrecreationalscreentimetolessthan2hoursperday.Whenyoureallygetawayfrom“screens”,suchasTV,computers,IPadormobilephones,youwillreallybenefitalot.Portionsizesarebiggerthantheyusedtobe,andtheseextracaloriescontributetoobesity.Anotherkeyfactorinweightgainisthatmorepeopledrinksugarydrinks,suchassodas,juicedrinks,andsportsdrinks.Sochoosesmallerportions(orsharerestaurantportions)andgoforwaterorlow-fatmildinsteadofsoda.Peoplewhoskipbreakfastoftenfeelsohungrythattheyeatmorelateron.Sotheygetmorecaloriesthantheywouldhaveiftheyatebreakfast.Infact,peoplewhoskipbreakfasttendtohavehigherBIMsthanpeoplewhoeatbreakfast.Ifyoureallyputtheaboveintopracticeatonce,youwilldefinitelyreduceyourweightgradually.Andwishyouhaveagoodfigure.,.,Weightlossismostlikelytobesuccessfulwhenpeoplechangetheirhabits.Hereareseveralwaystomakethathappen.Regularphysicalactivityburnscaloriesandbuildsmuscles-bothofwhichhelpyoulookandfeelgoodandkeepweightoff.Walkingthefamilydog,cyclingtoschool,anddoingotherthingsthatincreaseyourdailylevelofactivitycanallmakeadifference.,Changingsomehabitsmaybeagoodwaytoloseweight.,Ifpeoplechangetheirhabits,theywillsurelysucceedinlosingweight.,Whetherpeoplecanloseweightornotdependsontheirlivinghabits.,Takingmorephysicalexercisewillmakemuchdifferencetopeopleshealth.,Increasingtheamountofregularexercisewillbenefitpeoplealot.,.,Onereasonpeoplegetlessexercisethesedaysisbecauseofanincreasein“screentime”-theamountoftimespentwatchingTV,lookingatthecomputer,orplayingvideogames.Limitrecreationalscreentimetolessthan2hoursperday.Whenyoureallygetawayfrom“screens”,suchasTV,computers,IPadormobilephones,youwillreallybenefitalot.Portionsizesarebiggerthantheyusedtobe,andtheseextracaloriescontributetoobesity.Anotherkeyfactorinweightgainisthatmorepeopledrinksugarybeverages,suchassodas,juicedrinks,andsportsdrinks.Sochoosesmallerportions(orsharerestaurantportions)andgoforwaterorlow-fatmilkinsteadofsoda.,Itisnecessarytolimit“screentime”ifpeoplewanttoloseweight.,Wearesupposedtoreduce“screentime”.,Stickingtosmallerportionsandavoidingsugarydrinkscontributetoweightloss.,Watchingoutforportionsizesanddrinkingwaterinsteadofsugarydrinksarealsoakeytoweightloss.,.,Peoplewhoskipbreakfastoftenfeelsohungrythattheyeatmorelateron.Sotheygetmorecaloriesthantheywouldhaveiftheyatebreakfast.Infact,peoplewhoskipbreakfasttendtohavehigherBIMsthanpeoplewhoeatbreakfast.Ifyoureallyputtheaboveintopracticeatonce,youwilldefinitelyreduceyourweightgradually.Andwishyouhaveagoodfigure.,Peopleshouldavoidskippingbreakfast.,Skippingbreakfastisactuallynotawisewaytoloseweight.,Peoplewillhaveagoodfigureiftheytaketheabovesuggestions.,.,Changingsomehabitsmaybeagoodwaytoloseweight.Takingmorephysicalexercisewillmakemuchdifferencetopeopleshealth.Wearesupposedtoreduce“screentime”.Stickingtosmallerportionsandavoidingsugarydrinkscontributetoweightloss.Peopleshouldavoidskippingbreakfast.Peoplewillhaveagoodfigureiftheytaketheabovesuggestions.(58W),First,Meanwhile,Besides,Finally,.,Ratseatourfoodormakeitsodirtythatitisntfitforpeopleatall.Thatswhypeopleoftenkillthembylayingdownpoison.Afteradayortwo,theyfindthepoisonstillthere.Theratshaventtouchedit,eventhoughitisnearthefoodwhichtheyeat.Peoplethinktheymustbecleverandcunning.Somescientistshavebeentryingtofindthebestwaytopoisonrats.Theyhavewatchedtoseejustwhataratdoesdayandnight.Theyhavefoundoutthatratsarentsoclever.Theyarejustveryshy.Ratsusuallyliveinholes.Theyrunfromtheseholestotheplaceswheretheyeatanddrink.Theyhavespecialpathsonwhichtheytraveleachtime.Sotheyknowtheirpathsquitewell.Ifanythingnew,suchasstoneorwood,isputinthepath,theratswontgonearitatfirstastheyaretoofrightened.Itwilltakethemmanydaystogetoverthefear.Theyarealsofrightenedtogonearaplacethattheyknow,wheresomethinghasbeentakenaway.Ifapathgoesaroundarock,theratsfollowthesamepatharoundtherockeachtime.Iftherockistakenaway,theywillstillrunroundtheplacewheretherockwas!Theywontcrosstheemptyplace,whichisnowopentothem,eventhoughitwouldbequicker.Ratswillalwayskeepawayfromanythingunusualtothem.Thatswhytheywonteatpoisononthefirstorsecondnight.Theyusuallywontgoanywherenearitforaboutfourdaysuntiltheygetusedtobeingthere.Eventhentheyonlyeatalittleatatime.Ifpeoplewanttokillratswithpoison,alltheyhavetodoistoleaveitoutforafewdays.Oncetheratshavegotusedtoit,theywilleatitanddie.（331W）,.,(1).Ratseatourfoodormakeitsodirtythatitisntfitforpeopleatall.(2).Thatswhypeopleoftenkillthembylayingdownpoison.(3).Afteradayortwo,theyfindthepoisonstillthere.(4).Theratshaventtouchedit,eventhoughitisnearthefoodwhichtheyeat.(5).Peoplethinktheymustbecleverandcunning.(6).Somescientistshavebeentryingtofindthebestwaytopoisonrats.(7).Theyhavewatchedtoseejustwhataratdoesdayandnight.(8).Theyhavefoundoutthatratsarentsoclever.(9).Theyarejustveryshy.,Para1：,.,(3).Afteradayortwo,theyfindthepoisonstillthere.(5).Peoplethinktheymustbecleverandcunning.(9).Theyarejustveryshy.,Itisgenerallyconsideredthatratsaresm