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1、Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous 76._ mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77._was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78._the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 79. _climbe

2、d the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 80._ and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82._Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83._of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service

3、 was good. 84._ I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85._head touched the pillow.Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous 76. a mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. was fine. It was about noon we

4、 arrived at the foot of 78. whenthe mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 79. usclimbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 80. visitedand told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81. picturessince the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. pass

5、edEvening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. downof the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. 84. but I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. athead touched the pillow.Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,1 _Miss Fang. Id

6、 like to your penfriend, and get to 2 _Know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself.3 _My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4_Capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We 5_Study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese 6 _English and physic

7、s. I use to play ping-pong a lot 7_In my spare time, but now I am interesting in 8_Football. Do you play any ball games? What your favourite 9_Sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.10_ Yours, Li Hua My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is football. I was a member of 1_Our school football team

8、. We practise for three times 2_Every week and often watch football match on 3 _together. Play football not only makes us grow up 4_Tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and 5_Team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 6_For the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7_Teaches u

9、s the important of obedience. Each 8_Player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9_the team. And they must not break the rules too 10_often if we want tp win the game. Now I cant watch much television but a few years ago 1_I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2_A little tired after a d

10、ays work and watch TV 3_Demands very little effort. Unfortunate there are 4_Too many people among my family. Some wanted 5_To see the programme while others preferred 6_Another. I am happy with any programme but 7_The others spent a lot time arguing and there 8_Was no way of settling the matter exce

11、pt by 9_Selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10_ The day before the speech contest English teacher 1_talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 2_wished me success, but it didnt matter that I would 3_win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so 4_nervous as I

12、 shook like a leaf. There were so many people 5_present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6_the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered 7 _her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first 8_prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9_

13、Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.10_Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 1_sisters in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 2_love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 3_that I get a good education. They did not want me to d

14、o 4_any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 5_my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. We 6_may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7_not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 8_as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do

15、they 9_really understand their own daughter? What things are in 10_other homes, I wonder.When I first learned to write in English, I 1_Ran into many difficulties. The main problem Was in that I always thought in Chinese 2_And tried to translate anything into 3_English. My teacher advised me to keep

16、my 4_Diary. I followed her advice and should put 5_Down 100 words or so each day. Soon I Began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as 6_I was learning to express me in simple 7_English. One day I wrote a little story and Showed to my teacher. She liked it very 8_Much and reads it to the class. All said

17、 the 9_Story was a good one. Their word were a 10_ great encouragement to me命題特點命題特點 1、以記敘文為主；、以記敘文為主； 2、錯誤類型設(shè)置相對穩(wěn)定，錯詞占、錯誤類型設(shè)置相對穩(wěn)定，錯詞占6行，正確占行，正確占1行，多詞和缺詞共占行，多詞和缺詞共占3行；行； 3、重點調(diào)查動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂、重點調(diào)查動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂語方式、動詞詞義辨析，兼顧名詞、語方式、動詞詞義辨析，兼顧名詞、介詞、代詞、冠詞、描畫、副詞、介詞、代詞、冠詞、描畫、副詞、連詞，還涉及到句型構(gòu)造、行文邏連詞，還涉及到句型構(gòu)造、行文邏輯和固定習慣搭

18、配等方面的錯輯和固定習慣搭配等方面的錯誤。誤。解題思緒解題思緒 1. 動詞的調(diào)查動詞的調(diào)查. 謂語動詞主要調(diào)查時態(tài)謂語動詞主要調(diào)查時態(tài), 語態(tài)語態(tài), 主主謂一致謂一致; 非謂語動詞主要調(diào)查不定式非謂語動詞主要調(diào)查不定式, 分詞和動名詞的運用及前后一致關(guān)分詞和動名詞的運用及前后一致關(guān)系系. 解題思緒解題思緒: 根據(jù)上下文判別根據(jù)上下文判別.eg. (1) They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies They did not want me to do a

19、ny work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies do(2)Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. costs(3) My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education

20、. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can to make sure that I get a good education.(4) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strongPlaying2. 名詞的調(diào)查名詞的調(diào)查 調(diào)查名詞的數(shù)調(diào)查名詞的數(shù). 解題思緒解題思緒: 句中名詞該用單數(shù)還是復句中名詞該用單數(shù)還是復數(shù)數(shù). eg. my stu

21、dies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. subjects3. 代詞的調(diào)查代詞的調(diào)查 調(diào)查人稱代詞的格調(diào)查人稱代詞的格, 指代及關(guān)系代詞指代及關(guān)系代詞與從句關(guān)系與從句關(guān)系. 解題思緒解題思緒: a.人稱代詞的格能否誤用人稱代詞的格能否誤用; b. 代詞前后指代能否一致代詞前后指代能否一致; c. 定語從句中關(guān)系詞能否誤定語從句中關(guān)系詞能否誤用用.eg. we arrived at the foot of the mount

22、ain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain us4. 描畫詞和副詞描畫詞和副詞 調(diào)查詞法調(diào)查詞法. 解題思緒解題思緒:判別句中描畫詞和副詞能否混判別句中描畫詞和副詞能否混淆運用以及比較級最高級能否正確淆運用以及比較級最高級能否正確. eg. (1) generally live much more

23、 longer than people more 去掉去掉 (2) Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. Unfortunately5. 連詞的調(diào)查連詞的調(diào)查 調(diào)查句法調(diào)查句法. 解題思緒解題思緒: 判別句中并列連詞判別句中并列連詞,從屬連詞從屬連詞能否誤用能否誤用,多用或少用多用或少用. eg. (1) It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest

24、. Do they really understand their own daughter? It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? or(2) It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.6. 介詞的調(diào)查介詞的調(diào)查 調(diào)查慣用法

25、調(diào)查慣用法. 解題思緒解題思緒: a. 留意介詞詞組的一些搭配留意介詞詞組的一些搭配; b. 慣用法中介詞能否誤用慣用法中介詞能否誤用,多用或少多用或少用用. Eg. not seem to get much time to talk about together. not seem to get much time to talk about together. 去掉去掉about7. 冠詞的調(diào)查冠詞的調(diào)查 調(diào)查冠詞的用法調(diào)查冠詞的用法. 解題思緒解題思緒: a. 籠統(tǒng)名詞籠統(tǒng)名詞, 物質(zhì)名詞泛指時能否多物質(zhì)名詞泛指時能否多用了冠詞用了冠詞; b. 名詞前能否缺冠詞名詞前能否缺冠詞; c. 定冠詞和不定冠詞能否混淆運用定冠詞和不定冠詞能否混淆運用. eg. (1) We may be one family and live under a same roof We may be one family and live under a same roof the (2) Each player must