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1、英語(yǔ)作文閃光句+漂亮搭配大匯總一、開(kāi)頭類:語(yǔ)文作文常言題好一半文,英語(yǔ)也一樣,好的開(kāi)頭也就是一篇成功作文的一英語(yǔ)作文閃光句+漂亮搭配大匯總一、開(kāi)頭類:語(yǔ)文作文常言題好一半文,英語(yǔ)也一樣,好的開(kāi)頭也就是一篇成功作文的一半,a good beginning is half done, 想想閱卷老師要批全年級(jí)噶許多作文,如果每篇上來(lái)都像串通好了一樣的I think I think, 這會(huì)是如何郁悶的感覺(jué)= =,always put yourself in the others shoes, 寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候也要換位思考,替批分的老師想想阿四。如果這個(gè)老師,在進(jìn)行了一上午枯燥的批閱過(guò)程后,猛然間,讀到一個(gè)
2、繽紛絢爛的開(kāi)頭,被深深shock到,被deeply impressed到, 那會(huì)是何等的驚艷!下面就來(lái)欣賞一些容易吸引眼球的閃亮開(kāi)頭。開(kāi)頭公式一:名人名言+諺語(yǔ)俗語(yǔ)有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”,很好辦:編! 盡管編! 但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦!而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧?不過(guò)要記住,一篇120字左右的作文里,出現(xiàn)1-2句名言點(diǎn)綴一下即可,切忌為求華麗生搬硬套,那樣只會(huì)成為你的累贅,在老師眼里也只是一種顯擺的行為,不討巧。在用到名言的時(shí)候,大致有這么4種寫(xiě)1. A proverb says,2. It goes without saying that 3. As
3、 a classic proverb goes that (推薦!as a proverb/saying goes幾乎人人會(huì)用,但加上個(gè)classic味道一下子就不一樣了!)4.there is much truth in the saying “”(俗話說(shuō)得好)5. cited as saying,“” 援引的話(這個(gè)比較漂亮,用的人也相對(duì)較少,推薦?。┩扑]背誦的名人名言+諺語(yǔ):在論述努力學(xué)習(xí)一類的作文中可用到以下這些Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。(強(qiáng)調(diào)多做練習(xí)的重要性)Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。(
4、學(xué)習(xí)要堅(jiān)持不懈)It's never too old to learn. 活到老,學(xué)到老。A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。(強(qiáng)調(diào)腳踏實(shí)地的重要性)Action speaks louder than words. 行動(dòng)勝過(guò)語(yǔ)言。(學(xué)習(xí),是要去做的)Experience is the mother of wisdom. 實(shí)踐出真知。(做學(xué)問(wèn)要實(shí)踐)Rome was not built in a day. 偉業(yè)非一日之功。(學(xué)習(xí)是個(gè)積累的過(guò)程)One false step will make a
5、 great difference. 失之毫厘,謬之千里。(強(qiáng)調(diào)治學(xué)要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn))An idle閑散的 youth, a needy貧困的 age. 少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。(不好好學(xué)習(xí)你就悲劇了)As a man sows, so shall he reap. 種瓜得瓜,種豆得豆。(聲明天道酬勤的真理)All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息,聰明孩子也變傻。(也要說(shuō)說(shuō)學(xué)習(xí)不能過(guò)度)剛學(xué)完的O6課文提倡健康不要一味注重外表美,前面的O2也是這個(gè)主題,搞不好考試作文也出,下面就來(lái)看看關(guān)于外表的一些名句+諺語(yǔ)Beauty will buy n
6、o beef. 漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃。Beauty is only skin-deep. 美貌不過(guò)一張皮Beauty without virtue is like a rose without fragrance. 無(wú)德之美猶如無(wú)香之玫瑰,徒有其表。Good looks are not a must. 美貌并非必需A fine coat does not make a gentleman. 衣著并不能裝扮出一個(gè)君子Never judge a book by its cover. 不可以貌取人開(kāi)頭公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì),用報(bào)告說(shuō)話要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)
7、字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:1. According to a recent survey,2. A recent statistics shows that 3. A recent survey revealed that 開(kāi)頭公式三:描述身邊現(xiàn)象/生活現(xiàn)狀/社會(huì)現(xiàn)象在寫(xiě)到一些要求對(duì)某類熱點(diǎn)民生話題的作文時(shí),開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě)1. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that (比如意識(shí)到環(huán)保、節(jié)能、低碳的重要性)2. Many individua
8、ls, if not the most, harbor the idea that (比較高階的一種,詞漂亮又有插入語(yǔ),推薦!)3. Now, it is generally accepted/commonly thought that 4. There is a growing tendency for to do (開(kāi)始呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢(shì))5. Nowadays, many people are living under the idea/illusion/thought that 6. has caused wide public concern recent years(描述某件引起廣泛關(guān)注
9、的話題時(shí))7. There is a general debate on/over Heated/hot debates have been stirred up these day/recently(寫(xiě)到有爭(zhēng)議的話題時(shí))8. is now being questioned by more and more/a increasing number of people(寫(xiě)到某些舉措不得人心,或者你持反對(duì)態(tài)度的時(shí)候,可以這么寫(xiě))開(kāi)頭公式四:介紹某些人、事、物1. When speaking of/When it comes to (萬(wàn)能公式)2. ,described as ,is e.g. Mi
10、croblog, described as an entire new form of communication, has now caught on quickly among teenagers by enabling the users to update their latest status within just a few words.3. It seems that is (sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight)(比如說(shuō)說(shuō)科技的飛速發(fā)展,電腦、網(wǎng)絡(luò)的興起等等)4. For many/most of
11、us, is e.g. For most of us, a drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap.半,a good beginning is half done, 想想閱卷老師要批全年級(jí)噶許多作文,如果每篇上來(lái)都像串通好了一樣的I think I think, 這會(huì)是如何郁悶的感覺(jué)= =,always put yourself in the others shoes, 寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候也要換位思考,替批分的老師想想阿四。如果這個(gè)老師,在進(jìn)行了一上午枯燥的批閱過(guò)程后,猛然間,讀到一個(gè)繽紛絢爛的開(kāi)頭,被深深shock到,被deeply
12、impressed到, 那會(huì)是何等的驚艷!下面就來(lái)欣賞一些容易吸引眼球的閃亮開(kāi)頭。開(kāi)頭公式五:氣勢(shì)磅礴的排比1.For ,it is .For , it is .And for ,it is(從多方面多角度去描述你要寫(xiě)的東西,前兩個(gè)要為第三個(gè)蓄勢(shì),觀點(diǎn)最后亮)e.g. For baseball fans, 2009 was the year of the Yankees. For job seekers, it was the year of the Great Recession. And for people who track baby names, it was the year of
13、 the vampire.2. What do you but ?What but ?What but ?(在想要勾起讀者興趣,增強(qiáng)文章互動(dòng)性時(shí)可用這個(gè),不同于上句的層層遞進(jìn)式,這個(gè)句式偏重三句并列)e.g. What do you use every single day, but never pay for? What is truly yours but came from somewhere else? What is very personal but shared with everyone? The answer? Its your name.3. is a ,a , a (遞進(jìn)
14、式)e.g. First love, is a surge of adrenalin, a rush of blood, a thing of innocence and pain that lasts a lifetime.初戀是情感巨浪的洶涌,是情感在熱血中的奔流,是情感純真的表露,亦是一生中永恒的傷痛開(kāi)頭公式六:回憶式開(kāi)頭回憶式的寫(xiě)法的作用就相當(dāng)于語(yǔ)文中的倒敘,用你的開(kāi)頭將讀者帶回到當(dāng)時(shí)的情景,用在敘述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好1. I never forget/remember/bear in mind the day when e.g. I never forget the swee
15、t day when we walked down the street hand in hand.2. I remember some words said by +某位名人或熟知的人e.g. I remember some words by the third President of the United States, 3. Once upon a time was just a (用于強(qiáng)調(diào)某人某物今非昔比時(shí))e.g. Once upon a time Liubei was just a peddler selling straw sandals.曾經(jīng)劉備也只是個(gè)賣(mài)草鞋的小販4. Th
16、ere was a time when I/we/you did sthe.g. There was a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didnt let go our hope.5. There are very few things/people I truly love/hate in life.(few表達(dá)你對(duì)該事物的特殊感情,再用truly進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào),接著要做的就是開(kāi)始具體敘述你所要寫(xiě)之事)開(kāi)頭公式七:否定句開(kāi)頭有時(shí)候否定句起到的強(qiáng)調(diào)效果往往要好于肯定句,也更具有文采1. Perhaps no one/nothi
17、ng else (on Earth/in history)has such a as (用來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)描寫(xiě)對(duì)象的獨(dú)一無(wú)二)e.g. Perhaps no one else on Earth has such an affinity with the North Pole as Jean-Louis Etienne.也許這個(gè)世界上沒(méi)有人會(huì)像Jean-Louis Etienne那樣與北極有過(guò)如此親密的接觸2. There arent many (people/teenagers/citizens)who have had the honor/chance to e.g. There arent very
18、 many US citizens who have had the honor to meet a president, let alone a kid from a foreign country.3. No has received more praise and abuse than e.g. No invention has received more praise and abuse than computer.開(kāi)頭公式八:強(qiáng)大的倒裝句相比前幾種開(kāi)頭,倒裝句式更能顯示一個(gè)人的英語(yǔ)功底,同時(shí)因?yàn)橛盟娜讼鄬?duì)較少,也更能博得閱卷老師“歡心”1. Never before in hist
19、ory has (the issue of) been more (controversial; serious; appealing) than now(十分強(qiáng)大的一個(gè)句式,既有倒裝又有雙重否定,極力推薦?。〆.g. Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now.e.g. Never before in history has the relationship between China and Japan been more hopeful than now.中日兩國(guó)關(guān)系
20、從沒(méi)像現(xiàn)在這么樂(lè)觀過(guò)/中日兩國(guó)關(guān)系空前樂(lè)觀2. Gone are the days when was/were; did/could do(!強(qiáng)大句型!抒情記敘說(shuō)明文通用!此句一出如同必殺> <)e.g. Gone are the days when we strived, we laughed and cried together with Deng.e.g. Gone are the days when we could release the greenhouse gases without a second thought.開(kāi)頭部分小結(jié):一般大多數(shù)情況下能夠套用的格式大致有
21、以上這么多種,但所謂水無(wú)常形兵無(wú)常勢(shì),創(chuàng)作的力量是無(wú)窮的,在靈感如涌泉,文思如尿崩的時(shí)候也不妨用自己獨(dú)一無(wú)二的搭配寫(xiě)出一個(gè)獨(dú)一無(wú)二的開(kāi)頭,要知道,作文寫(xiě)到最高境界就是沒(méi)有公式,自成一派,信手拈來(lái)。畢竟人是活的,公式是死的,公式只是為你提供一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu),就像一塊優(yōu)質(zhì)的畫(huà)布,但顏料還得你自己往上涂。二、文章內(nèi)容類:光有個(gè)漂亮的開(kāi)頭還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠哦,文章的中間部分也就是豬肚環(huán)節(jié)同樣要寫(xiě)得充實(shí)瀟灑,不然配在一個(gè)光鮮的開(kāi)頭下面,不但不能相得益彰反而顯得干癟無(wú)力,讓老師的印象分也驟然下降。那接下來(lái)我們就看看如何將這“大頭”部分寫(xiě)得出彩。要在內(nèi)容部分得高分,用到的技巧大約有這幾種:長(zhǎng)短句交叉、使用插入語(yǔ)、用詞多樣準(zhǔn)
22、確生動(dòng)又形象、關(guān)鍵詞靈活換用不重復(fù)、句型使用多樣表述地道內(nèi)容技巧一:華麗的長(zhǎng)短句寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)短句的宗旨,一張一弛,文武之道,一長(zhǎng)一短,長(zhǎng)句在前短句后,通篇長(zhǎng)句累死讀者,通篇短句不夠刺激,長(zhǎng)句華麗短句簡(jiǎn)潔,穿插著用方為王道這類句子是跟著你行文內(nèi)容走的,沒(méi)有什么固定公式可以套,其精髓在于多用從句,順帶著插入一些短語(yǔ)進(jìn)一步修飾。但一些優(yōu)秀的長(zhǎng)句你可以刻意去學(xué),去模仿,然后靈活運(yùn)用到自己的文章中去,至于短句部分言簡(jiǎn)意賅地跟在長(zhǎng)句后即可。下面就拿某W的Comment中的漂亮長(zhǎng)句為例1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely
23、recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is ones inner beauty that really counts.(非限制性定從,放在句子中間修飾中心詞sentences, 顯然要比直接+aim at好得多)2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.
24、(一個(gè)非限制性定從+ 一個(gè)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producers image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.(not only but also也是寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句時(shí)的主力軍?。?. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messenger
25、s of peace, representing China.(bearin mind, 一個(gè)賓從&現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hoping to give
26、 a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.決不袖手旁觀(有1個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句+1個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句+1個(gè)名詞&動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式構(gòu)成的復(fù)合形容詞+1個(gè)現(xiàn)在分詞作目的狀語(yǔ),be no+名詞表決不,動(dòng)詞搭配又合理,可謂長(zhǎng)句中的典范)第6句為某E同學(xué)Comment中的一句長(zhǎng)句,大家把它和第5句對(duì)照著看,對(duì)照著學(xué)6Even though Zhao has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial co
27、mpensation still can not hold a candle to無(wú)法與相提并論 Zhaos 11 years torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .(讓步狀從+非限制性定從+復(fù)合形容詞+現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)+引用諺語(yǔ))7. Sunshangxiang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirm
28、ing the saying that, Women are no inferior to men. (現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)與引用名言的完美結(jié)合,推薦)內(nèi)容技巧二:神出鬼沒(méi)的插入語(yǔ)為嘛要用插入語(yǔ)?短句中用插入語(yǔ),可以充更多字?jǐn)?shù),中長(zhǎng)句中間用插入語(yǔ),讓句式更整齊美觀來(lái)看一些典型的插入語(yǔ)單詞作插入語(yǔ),如:besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though1.On the other hand, however, computer is not without its defects/disadvantages.(however作插入語(yǔ),作無(wú)論如何/但是的意思
29、,是最常用的一個(gè)插入語(yǔ))2. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits of computers and avoid the opposite facet方面.(therefore作插入語(yǔ),使用的頻率也非常之高,同時(shí),上句中用fruits代替了advantages, 避免了前后重復(fù)并且相當(dāng)之形象)短語(yǔ)作插入語(yǔ),如for example, by the way, in other words, so far, as a matter of fact, as a result等等1. China and India, for exampl
30、e, are neighbours.2. The United Nations are calling for more environment-friendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world (should)switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth.內(nèi)容技巧三:適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)句,更能反映客觀事實(shí),如:1. Attention should be paid to 替換 We sh
31、ould pay attention to2. Immediate/Instant/Effective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to 替換 We should take immediate measures to 3. Great/Joint effort should be made to 替換 We should make great/joint effort to 4. It should be pointed out that/It should替換never be neglected/overlooked/i
32、gnored that I must point out that / We should never neglect/overlook/ignore that 5. We are brought up to believe that 替換 We firmly believe that 內(nèi)容技巧四:關(guān)鍵詞、高頻詞句的表達(dá)多樣性一遍新、兩遍厭,好曲不能聽(tīng)三遍,同樣地,再精彩的單詞被你反復(fù)用來(lái)用去,語(yǔ)勢(shì)就要弱很多。相反,若能在表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思時(shí)切換用不同的近義詞,不但給人耳目一新之感,也大大增加文章整體的文采。但使用時(shí)也要注意,不要刻意追求難詞深詞高級(jí)詞,要是寫(xiě)出來(lái)一篇作文通篇全是專六專八的單詞,批
33、卷老師查金山詞霸都來(lái)不及還幫你批好分?jǐn)?shù)?下面來(lái)看對(duì)于表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思,有多少種不同的寫(xiě)法(最土的寫(xiě)法放最后的括號(hào)里)1. 我(個(gè)人)認(rèn)為:For my part;From my point of view/From my perspective;Personally speaking;Personally I maintain that ;I(firmly) hold the view that;In my humble opinion ;Im of the opinion that (In my opinion & I think)2. 大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為、知道Many, if not mo
34、st/Most, if not all, harbor the idea that ;The majority of the people/Many individuals take the attitude that ;Its universally/widely accepted/acknowledged that ;Its shared by a large number of people that ;Theres no one but knows that (Many people think that)3. 越來(lái)越流行to become increasingly popular;
35、gain growing popularity;is increasingly appealing to;is catching on a increasing/growing number of people(is more and more popular)4. 關(guān)注,重視pour attention into ;take into account;take into consideration;be concerned with/about;keep oneself (well)informed of;become aware of/that ;(pay attention to/put
36、 emphasis on)5. 據(jù)我所知,to the best of my knowledge;for all I know/ for what I can tell(as far as I know)6. 做是有好處的、有幫助的It pays to ;Its rewarding to ;Its of great benefit to ;One can reap huge fruits from (its good/helpful to)7. 導(dǎo)致了give rise to;(greatly)contribute to; is a major contributor to ;lead to
37、; result in (cause)8. 喜愛(ài),熱衷于take a fancy to/have a fancy for have an affection for have a love affair withbe fond of/be keen on/be keen about be obsessed with (like)9. 凡事都有兩面性No garden has no weedsEverything has its pluses and minusesEverything cuts both ways is a double-edged swordWe should not be
38、blind to the other side of (every coin has two sides )10. 努力做某事、盡某人之力做某事do everything in ones power to take pains to dospare no effort/ make an effort to dodo ones utmost to go all out to do do ones bit to (try ones best to do)11. 不盡如人意 has/leaves a lot to be desired fails to meet/satisfy ones need/demand/requirement is far from satisfactory doesnt come up to ones expectations(is undesirable)12. 就是個(gè)極好的例子,恰好能說(shuō)明我的觀點(diǎn) is such a prime examplewe
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