2021高考英語短文改錯專項(xiàng)拔高練習(xí)(解析版)

1、改錯專項(xiàng)211.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有1。處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（'戊J掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均只限一詞；2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。In recent years, the sandstorm in the northern part of China has become more and more common

2、natural disaster. The strong wind blows up some sand, making them difficult for people to go out. Sandstorms are caused by a variety of reason. First, in the past people feed a great number of sheep. As a result, the sheep ate so many grass that the land turned into deserts. Second, people were not

3、concerning about protecting forests, and cut down many trees, that caused the loss of soil. When it comes to improve the situation, the government starts to stress at the importance of the environment. I believe final the problem will be solved in the near future.【答案】become后添加a them it©reason r

4、easons feed fed many much©conceming concernedthat which©improve >iinproving去掉at final -finally【解析】(1)考查冠詞。disaster n.災(zāi)難;徹底的失敗;不幸;禍患名詞復(fù)數(shù):disasters ,例句But the disaster wasn't unimaginable.但這種災(zāi)難并非難以想象。此處表示泛指應(yīng)用不定冠詞，且more為 輔音音素開頭的單詞故應(yīng)用ao故become后添加a0(2)考查代詞。sth. make(s) it+形容詞+fbr sb. to

5、do sth.”固定句式, “某事/某物讓做某事對于某人來說是的"。代詞it作形式賓語， 真正的賓語后文to go out。故them改為it。(3)考查名詞。a variety of固定短語，“各種各樣的“，修飾復(fù)數(shù)名 詞，故 reason 改為 reasons。(4)考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上文in the past可知應(yīng)用一般過去時。故feed 改為fed。(5)考查形容詞。grass為不可數(shù)名詞，故用so much修飾，表示 “如此多的"；SO many修飾可數(shù)名詞,故many改為mucho（6）考查形容詞。句意：第二，人們不關(guān)心保護(hù)森林，砍伐許多樹木，這導(dǎo)致了土壤流失。sb

6、. be concerned about doing sth.固定短語，“某人關(guān)心做某事'"concerned表示“關(guān)心的"；concerning為介詞，表示“關(guān) 于“。故 concerning 改為 concerned o（7）考查定語從句。此處為非限制性定語從句修飾上文整個句子， 且從句中缺少主語，故應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性 定語從句。故that改為whicho（8）考查非謂語動詞。句意：當(dāng)談到改善這種情況時，政府開始強(qiáng) 調(diào)環(huán)境的重要性。when it comes to doing sth.,固定短語，“當(dāng)談及做 某事的時候故improv

7、e改為improving0（9）考查介詞。stress為及物動詞，后面可直接跟賓語，不需要介 詞。故去掉at。（10）考查副詞。修飾句子應(yīng)用副詞finally, “最終工 故final改為 finally o2.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫 的以下作文。文中共有1。處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯 誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)

8、分。I have learned a lot about Shanghai and I had been dying to go there. When I'm in Shang-hai, and I'll walk along the Bund （上海外灘）,on which I can see many western-style buildings. At noon, we want to eat some delicious snack in Yu Garden. After lunch, I plan to visiting the Oriental Pearl TV

9、 Tower, which is the seventh high tower in the world. Besides, I will also climb to the top of that tower to have a look on the whole city. Only in this way, can I have better understanding of that modernly city. Visiting Shanghai is my wish. I hope it will be realizing this year.【答案】 hadhave 刪除and

10、we-I snacksnacks ©visiting>visit highhighest on-at better前加a modernlymodem ©realizing>realized【解析】本文是一篇記敘文。講述了作者想去上海的愿望。（1）考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)"I have learned a lot about Shanghai”可知，此處 應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時，故had改為have。（2）考查狀語從句。本句為when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，主句語從 句之間不能再加連詞。故刪除口1前的and。（3）考查代詞。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，本文都是從“我”的角度進(jìn)行描

11、 寫，故we改成I。（4）考查名詞。根據(jù)上文中的“some”和“snack”為可數(shù)名詞可知，此 處應(yīng)該用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故snack改為snacks。（5）考查非謂語動詞。plan 2d。固定短語，“計(jì)劃去其后接 不定式，故visiting改為visit。（6）考查形容詞。此處結(jié)構(gòu)是the+序數(shù)詞+形容詞最高級，意為“第 幾所以high改為highest。（7）考查介詞。have a look at固定短語，"看一看故on改為at。（8）考查冠詞。have a better understanding of 固定短語，“對有更好的理解"。所以better前要加上冠詞ao（9

12、）考查形容詞。名詞前要用形容詞修飾,故modernly改為modern。（10）考查語態(tài)。句意：我希望我的愿望將在今年實(shí)現(xiàn)。主語it與 謂語realize為被動關(guān)系。且置于情態(tài)動詞之后。故realizing改為 realized o3.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫 的以下作文。文中共有1。處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯 誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（八），并在此符號下面寫出該加的 詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2）只允許修改1

13、0處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。With the college entrance examination approaches, many of my classmates suffer from much pressure. Some of them are burying in endless homework day and night, which robs them of happiness and do them harm physically and mentally.Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivat

14、ion, but too much pressure has a seriously negative effect. Therefore, we should learn to relieve pressure. First, we should have a right evaluation of us in order to make use advantages and avoid disadvantages. Second, we*d better set aside some times for fun such as listening to music. Sometimes e

15、ven cry is an efficient way to release stresses. Besides, we can turn to our teachers, friends and parents, that will give us guidance and comfort.【解析】本文是一篇說明文，高考臨近，學(xué)生承受很大壓力，作者 提出了減壓的幾個建議。（1）考查非謂語動詞。此處是、,汕+名詞（賓語）+非謂語形式（賓 補(bǔ)）”結(jié)構(gòu)，名詞短語 the college entrance examination 和動詞 approach 是邏輯上的主動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞。故appr

16、oaches改為approaching o（2）考查固定搭配。be buried in sth.,固定短語,“忙于某事”。故 將 burying 改為 buried 0（3）考查主謂一致。此處是非限制性定語從句，先行詞是句子 Some of them are burying in endless homework day and night, 在從句 中作主語，句子作主語，謂語是單數(shù)，文章講的是現(xiàn)在事實(shí)，時態(tài) 用一般現(xiàn)在時，主謂一致，所以謂語動詞rob和動詞do要用單數(shù)， 應(yīng)是robs和does。故do改為does。（4）考查連詞。句意：雖然壓力在一定程度上可以提供動力，但壓 力過大會產(chǎn)生嚴(yán)重

17、的負(fù)面影響。Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，不能與 but連用，去掉but。故去掉but。（5）考查形容詞。句意：雖然壓力在一定程度上可以提供動力，但 壓力過大會產(chǎn)生嚴(yán)重的負(fù)面影響。名詞短語negative effect要形容詞 修飾，故 seriously 改為 serious o（6）考查代詞。句意：首先，我們應(yīng)該正確評價我們自己，揚(yáng)長避 短。主語we和賓語us都是指同一人，賓語用相應(yīng)的反身代詞 ourselveso 故 us 改為 ourselveso（7）考查介詞。make use of sth.,固定短語，“利用某物故在use 后面加ofo（8）考查名詞。句意：第二，我們最好留出一

18、些時間來娛樂，比如 聽音樂。此處指“時間”, time指“時間”時,是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù) 形式，故times改為time。（9）考查非謂語動詞。句意：有時候哭也是釋放壓力的有效方法。此處是動名詞作主語。故cry改為cryingo（10）考查定語從句。此處是非限制性定語從句，先行詞是our teachers, friends and parents,指人，在從句中作主語，that不能引導(dǎo) 非限制性定語從句，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞who。故that改為who。4.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫 的以下作文。文中共有1。處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯 誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加

19、、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。I was born as poor boy and grew up in the street without the care, guidance and supervision of your beloved parents. I have been experienced a hard life, being almost naked（赤裸

20、的）with an empty stomach and exist without secure shelter and proper education. Now, as a young man with some sadly experiences of early life, I have a dream. I want to become a great man who have power and authority, like Abraham Lincoln, Benjamin Franklin, Winston Churchill or so on. Yes, I dream t

21、o be like these great man. I want to change and developed my beloved country, when people in need can live a happy and peaceful life.【答案】as后添加ayour一my去掉beenexistexistingsadly 一sadhave-has©or -andmanmen ©developed develop when 一wheie【解析】【分析】本文是一篇記敘文，作者出身貧寒，在街頭長大， 過著艱難的生活，卻有成為一個有權(quán)力和權(quán)威的偉人的夢想。作者想 改變和發(fā)展自己心愛的國家，讓需要幫助的人可以過上幸福和平的生 活。（1）考查冠詞。boy為可數(shù)名詞，此處表示泛指應(yīng)用不定冠詞，且 poor為輔音音素開頭的單詞故用a。故