2016屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)：短文改錯(cuò)題組---含答案名師制作優(yōu)質(zhì)教學(xué)資料

1、四、短文改錯(cuò)題組(一 )短文改錯(cuò)Passage 1(2015 ·春市質(zhì)檢二長(zhǎng) )Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English. Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25 year old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University. I

2、 have been a English guide for two years after graduation. As a result, my oral English is pretty well. I have great interest the job. I had much confidence in myself. If I am given to the job, I can assure you I will do my best to do it well. I'd like to meet you at your convenient to discuss t

3、he possibility of working in your company. An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully ，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager，I am writingto express my interest inyourrecently advertised positions as a secretary ofEnglish. Here I would like to introducemebriefly.positionmyselfI a

4、ma25 year oldyoungman/graduated fromtheForeign Languageswho/thatgraduatingDepartment of Jilin University. I have beena English guide for two years after graduation. As aanresult, my oral English is prettywell . I have great interest the job. Ihadmuch confidence inmyself. If I am givengoodinhavet oth

5、e job,I can assure you Iwill do mybest todo it well. I'dliketo meet you at yourconvenientto discuss the possibility of working in your company. An early reply to my applicationconveniencewill behighappreciated.highlyYours respectfully ，Wang YongPassage 2(2015 ·州質(zhì)檢二鄭 )Dear Mandy ，I'm not

6、 doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy, but it's not true. I work really hard, often study late into the night! I've tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work as har

7、d like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades. It's not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad, all he said was, “ You mustn't waste your time in art. You

8、must focus your mind on your lessons！” I'm feeling quite puzzling about what to do now. Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy ，I'm not doing well in my lessons at school,especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard especiallybecause he wants me go to u

9、niversity. He thinks I'm lazy, but it's not true. I work really hard,tooftenstudylate intothe night! I've tried to talk to mymother, but she always said I have tostudyingsaysworkas hardlike my brotherdoes. My brotherdoesn'tstudy very hard, and he always getsasbutexcellent grades. It&

10、#39;s not fair!The only thing I like itis art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year . When I told my dad, all he saidyearswas, “You mustn't waste yourtime in art. Youmust focus your mind on your lessons！” I'monfeeling quitepuzzlingabout what to do now. Would you pl

11、ease help me out?puzzledThanks a lot!Yours sincerely，LisaPassage 3(2015 ·家莊一模石 )One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats.Gatheri

12、ng at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentencesas possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, searchfor any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burstinto the cheers as

13、 if we had discovered a new world.With the Chinese translation and vividlypictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.答案：One year ago, I had a special English lessonholdat the railway station. It was quite

14、differentheld， for we had no textbooks, no blackboardfrom the regular English classes we were familiartoor no fixed seats.withandGathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words andweresentences as possiblehere . Curious andexcited, we walked around thestationandloo

15、kedthereeverywhere, searchfor anyinformationinEnglish. Whenever an English word comes intosearchingcamesight, the class would burst into th echeers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividlypictures,we could figure out its meaning with ease.vividNow, this unforgett

16、able lesson still encourages me to be an active learnerwhereI go.whereverPassage 4(2015 ·昌市一模南 )I'm going to study in the senior middle school on September. I can live either at school and at home. But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own

17、room, but I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5 6 student at school. Maybe I can't sleep good. It's a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eat withmy classmates. I think it's a great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, I

18、9;ll have ride to school. It's a waste of time and not safely. It's so hard to make a decision.答案：I'm going to study in the senior middle schoolon September. I can live either at school and at in orhome. But I can't decide because bothhas advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have

19、 my ownroom,but so/andhaveI can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 56student studentsatschool. Maybe I can't sleepgood. It's a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy welleatwith my classmates. I think it'seatinga great fun and I can make more fri

20、ends. If I live at home, I'll have ride to school. It's awaste of time and notsafely. It's so hard to make a decision.tosafe(二 )短文改錯(cuò)Passage 1(2015 山·東濟(jì)南模擬 )Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions. Every year many tourist come here to enjoy itsbeautiful scenery and rich cultur

21、e. But several years ago, visitors behave badly. Some talked loudlyin publicand threwlitter everywhere. Some picked flowers,cuttingdowntrees and hurt animals.And even better, some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily, things has changed. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People ar

22、e friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods. All these changes make us happily. As student, I think we shouldknow it's our duty to protect the environment. Let's to change our behavior when we travel.答案：Beijing has lots of famoustouristattractions. Every year many tourist come here t

23、o enjoy itstouristsbeautifulscenery and richculture. Butseveral years ago,visitorsbehavebadly. Some talkedbehavedloudly inpublic and threwlittereverywhere. Some pickedflowers,cuttingdowntrees and hurtcutanimals. And even better ， some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.worseLuckily, things

24、haschanged. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendlyhaveatanimals. Everybody smokes in the woods. All these changes make ushappily . Asto/towardsNobodyohappyastudent, I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment. Let's tchange our behavior when we travel.Pa

25、ssage 2(2015 山·西質(zhì)量檢測(cè) )Trying to come to decision completely of your own can be risky. Some decisions are so important that they should not be made without talking to the others first. There are several advantages of consulting people you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice b

26、ut they may point out some things you may have overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from making big mistakes. When consult others about important decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is figuring out whom we respect enough to trust their judge. The second thing to con

27、sider is what to do if you disagree to this person. Maybe getting a third or fourth opinion was the best option. In short, making any big decision lonely can lead to some problems. Talking to friends or family members first is always a good idea.答案：Trying to come toadecision completelyofonyour own c

28、an be risky. Some decisions are soimportant that they should not be made without talking to th eothers first. There are several advantages of consulting people you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice but they may point out some things you may have overlooked. Forandanother, frien

29、ds may stop you from making big mistakes. Whenconsultothers about importantconsultingdecisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is figuringout whomwerespectyouenough to trust theirjudge. The second thing to consider is what to do if you disagreejudgment/judgementtothis person. Mayb

30、e getting a third or fourth opinionwas the best option. In short, making anywithisbig decisionlonely can lead to some problems. Talking to friends or family members first is alwaysalonea good idea.Passage 3(2015 ·州雙基過(guò)關(guān)考試蘭)Dear Sir/Madam ，I'm one of your customer. I ordered a set of books on

31、 your website two weeks ago, but I didn't received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.I'm sorry to have received such poorly s

32、ervice, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I'd like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua答案：Dear Sir/Madam ，I'

33、m one of yourcustomer . I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn'treceivedreceivecustomersit until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books weretoosopoorly packed upthat the cover of one bookwere torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I fou

34、nd onewasbookmissed .missingI'm sorry to have received suchpoorlyservice, and I believe I have every right ask you topoortodeal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ba ckor deliver a new set of books to me.Beside ， I'd like to be informed of the process of yourdealwith m

35、y complaint.BesidesdealingLooking forward to your reply.Li Hua(2015 南·寧適應(yīng)性測(cè)試 )Passage 4I threw my magazines into a waste basket and decide to join in Malaysian life. Then everythingcame alive. I stared at everythingas if I were looking at itthe first time. The day passed fast. Ilooked at my wat

36、ch but was surprised that it was 3 p m. Soon the train pulled up at Butterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They all looked beautifully. When my uncle arrived at with asmile, I threw my arm around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this ago. He seemed surprising and then his wea

37、ther beaten face warmed up with the huge smile. We walked arm in arm to her car.答案：I threw my magazines into a waste basket anddecideto joinin Malaysianlife.Thendecidedeverything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at itthe first time. The dayforpassed fast. I looked at my watchb

38、ut was surprised that it was 3 p m. Soon the train pulled up atandButterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They alllooked beautifully . When my unclearrived a tbeautifulwith a smile,I threw my arm around him to give him awarm hug. I had never done thisarmsago . He seemedsurprising and then

39、 his weather beaten face warmed up with the huge smile.beforesurprisedaWe walked arm in arm to her car.his(三 )短文改錯(cuò)Passage 1(2015 ·州實(shí)戰(zhàn)考試蘭 )Recently a survey has been done find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. With this survey, two thousands senior middle school student

40、s from ten schools in Lanzhou were interviewed. They were asking which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey show that more than a half of the students like to read news most. Twenty six percent of the st