通用版2018版高考英語大一輪復(fù)習(xí)第3部分寫作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練七提升檔次的非謂語動(dòng)詞及建議信課件

1、學(xué)案七提升檔次的非謂語動(dòng)詞及建議信學(xué)案七提升檔次的非謂語動(dòng)詞及建議信眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞不僅使句型多樣，而且使習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。寫作運(yùn)用探究一、非謂語動(dòng)詞的分類1.不定式高考佳句Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016全國(guó)，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)我抱歉地說，我不能和你一起在星期五下午去書店了。We should take pains to improve

2、ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)我們應(yīng)當(dāng)通過學(xué)習(xí)盡力提升自己，為未來做好準(zhǔn)備。2.動(dòng)名詞高考佳句Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.(2016天津，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)在操場(chǎng)上做同樣的運(yùn)動(dòng)給了我們機(jī)會(huì)促進(jìn)我們的友誼。Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.質(zhì)疑能夠?qū)で蟮酱鸢浮?2015湖北，滿分

3、作文)3.現(xiàn)在分詞高考佳句A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.(2016北京，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)一周前的世界地球日我們的學(xué)校張貼了海報(bào)，呼吁我們參加一個(gè)綠色的地球的行動(dòng)。In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.(2015福建，

4、標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)在這幅畫中，我們可以看到一個(gè)穿著破舊衣服的男孩，坐在一張放著一摞書的舊木桌旁。 4.過去分詞高考佳句It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.(2015全國(guó)，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)它刊登了由外國(guó)朋友寫的有關(guān)他們國(guó)家的文章。Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.(2014湖北，滿分作文)與那些逃逸的司機(jī)相比，我為自己做的事感到自豪?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成句子1._，we are all fi

5、lled with joy and cheer.(2014浙江，滿分作文)聽說你將成為我們的一名新成員，我們心里充滿了興奮和快樂。2.Another suggestion is _.(2015四川，滿分作文)還有一項(xiàng)建議是練習(xí)說的能力。3.Hopefully，these books will help the students _.(2015天津，滿分作文)讓人滿懷希望的是，這些書籍將有助于學(xué)生更好地了解和學(xué)習(xí)漢語。 4._ your temper in this way can avoid hurting others.(2014安徽，滿分作文)用這種方式釋放自己的情緒能避免傷害別人。5._

6、，we will go for an outing tomorrow.天氣允許的話，我們明天去郊游。答案1.Hearing youll be a new member of us2.to practice speaking3.(to) know and learn Chinese better 4.Letting out5.Weather permitting 寫作時(shí)，我們可以利用非謂語動(dòng)詞對(duì)兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換，使其成為較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式。轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)可采用“三步法”：第一步：寫出兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。第二步：找準(zhǔn)兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句的對(duì)接點(diǎn)，讓一個(gè)句子作為主干，另一個(gè)句子用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行改寫。第三步：判斷應(yīng)用何種非謂語

7、動(dòng)詞，把握好時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，最后連接起來。二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句示例第一步：寫出兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”.It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.第二步：讓句作主句，用非謂語動(dòng)詞改寫句。第三步：讓句作定語，由于其動(dòng)詞aim與主語it之間為主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語。In the newspaper of our school there is a

8、 column called “Foreign Culture”， aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.(2015全國(guó)，滿分作文)【即時(shí)演練】用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換6.All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom.(用過去分詞作定語)_7.The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry.(用動(dòng)名詞作主語)_8.The boys we

9、re making the most of time.They wanted to finish the work earlier.(用不定式作目的狀語)_答案6.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.7.The boys coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.8.The boys were making the most of time so as to finish the work earlier. 用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句比轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句要容易一些，因?yàn)樾柁D(zhuǎn)

10、換的一般是從句部分，這時(shí)只需要判斷用何種非謂語動(dòng)詞，再把握好時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)即可，所以只需兩步。三、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句示例第一步：寫出復(fù)合句。Since you have realized that your time is limited，youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.第二步：把since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為非謂語動(dòng)詞，realize與you之間為主謂關(guān)系，且表示完成，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語。Having realized that your time is limited，youll h

11、ave to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.(2014安徽，滿分作文)【即時(shí)演練】用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換9.When we are faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help._，we need friends to give us comfort and help.10.When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back._，I

12、 reached my hand out and pulled her back.11.After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner._，we strongly desired to be the winner. 答案9.Faced with difficulties10.Seeing a car running towards her11.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two

13、 months 用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換1.We were touched by the teachers words.We decided to work hard._2.I feel quite sorry for that.I begin to think about what to do to help._3.Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good._單句跟蹤演練4.Because I had paid a visit to the place，I will go so

14、mewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation._5.As the society develops rapidly，its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer._答案1.Touched by the teachers words，we decided to work hard.2.Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.3.Amazed at

15、how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.4.Having paid a visit to the place，I will go somewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation.5.With the society developing rapidly，its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. 建議信常用詞匯1._ adj.有益的2._ adj.明智的3._ n.建議4

16、._ v.推薦5._ adj.實(shí)用的6._ v.關(guān)心；涉及7.may/might _ well不妨8.make a _重要9.make _ of理解10.with regard _/as for/as to關(guān)于答案1.posal/suggestion/advice4.recommend5.practical6.concern 7.as8.difference9.sense10.to 1.段首常用語：(1)I am writing to express my views concerning.(2)You have asked for my a

17、dvice about.and I will try to make some suggestions.建議信常用句式2.表達(dá)建議常用語：(1)I think the most suitable.for you is.(2)I would like to suggest that.(3)Youd better./Its better to.(4)As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.(5)For one thing.；for another.(6)If I were you，I would.(7)It seems to me that you coul

18、d.3.段尾常用語：(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could.(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/ useful/helpful.(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 建議信是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給

19、個(gè)人，也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin/start with，then，later，last but not least等依次陳述建議，具體為：建議信常用方法技巧與注意事項(xiàng)第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓對(duì)方認(rèn)為是投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使對(duì)方容易接受。假定你是李海，你的堂兄李華在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信：1.建議他回國(guó)；2.你的理由是：(1)學(xué)有所用，就業(yè)容易；(2)照顧父母。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.行文應(yīng)連貫，內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整；3.開頭語與落款已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！灸M訓(xùn)練】Dear Li Hua，Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me