(新教材)2019-2020學(xué)年外研版英語必修第一冊提分作業(yè)文檔：Unit5IntothewildPeriod5

1、Period 5 Writing讀后續(xù)寫一一動物描寫技法指導(dǎo)讀后續(xù)寫的文章要注意以下幾點：第一點：讀懂前文，把握文章的關(guān)鍵信息和語言特點。第二點：按照原文中事件發(fā)生的邏輯性，構(gòu)思好情節(jié)發(fā)展，這個發(fā)展須符合 情節(jié)內(nèi)在的邏輯。第三點：要注意保持卷面整潔，字體工整清晰；嚴格控制字數(shù)。 典例演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Brady is a recently retired search and rescue dog. He is not happy and misses his owner Al because Al has gone out on a rescue

2、 mission without him. Al's nephew Steve decides to take Brady along when he and his friend Zach go on an overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning has set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to anoth

3、er. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox 危機四伏的地區(qū)）,and the thunderstorm wasn't helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve's arm. " Let's go! We can make itebck to the river we crossed today. ”Brady barked_a sharp warning.Ahead of t

4、hem lay a dense curtain of smoke across the trail. They'd never make it through thatthey'd have to find another escape route. The dogwas tugging （拖，拉）at his leash （皮帶）trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him th

5、ey were moving away from the river.Brady lifted his head and snuffed （出聲地嗅）the smoke-laden wind. Next moment, the dog bounded away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he didn't come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve helped Zach up the slope.

6、 He couldn't blame Brady for panicking and bolting. He himself wanted to run even though he didn't have a clue which way. They hadn't gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came bounding toward them.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)在150左右；2 .至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后

7、，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:“Wherdve you been? '' Steve cried.Paragraph 2：Brady led themback down the incline and into the trees精彩范文Paragraph 1:“Whereve you been? ” Steve cried. He bent down and held tightly to Brady, “Never will you leave me again ! ” He then checked the leash to ensure t

8、hat Brady wouldn't escape again. The fierce fire kept burning, straight towards their slope under the control of wind. Despair surrounded Steve and Zach. What could they do now? Surprisingly, Steve found Brady was struggling to pull him down the slope. “Where're you heading? ”“ Steve, "

9、 Zach said, “ you have told me that Brady was a rescuedog, right? Why not give him a chance? ” Steve gave it a second thought and agreed. Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the incline and into the trees The air was full of smoke,and to their huge astonishment, Brady was leading them to an alterna

10、tive escape_route,_exactly opposite to the river. After some initial hesitation, Steve chose to trust Brady. Smoke getting thicker, sight growing weaker, they ran after Brady blindly. It seemed a century had passed, a lake with a boat on its surface, came into sight. “Wow! Thank you, Brady! You save

11、d us all! ” So far, it taught us that animals are worth our trust!總評本篇范文在原文的基礎(chǔ)上能夠合理進行續(xù)寫，通過提示句巧妙銜接所 續(xù)寫的下文，Paragraph 1描寫了火勢的嚴重性以及關(guān)鍵時刻選擇相信Brady的決定，Paragraph 2描述了 Brady如何幫人們脫險，全文一氣呵成，續(xù)寫自然。亮點呈現(xiàn)(1) “Never will you leave me again! ” 是 “neveFF頭的否定倒裝。(2) “smoke getting thicker, sight growing weake這種獨立主格并列，很有

12、氣場， 渲染了當時的惡劣環(huán)境。(3) “It seemed a century had passed個用 腦seen®寫心理活動的寫法很實用跟蹤演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast.“ Hello ! ” they shouted. The men on the boat look

13、ed at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.“ Something's wrong with their fishing net, “ he said. They got nearer to the net.“What's that? '' said Tonya.“There is something in the net. It's alive.”Very slowly they moved nearer.“I can see it now, “ said Tonya. "It&#

14、39;s a killer whaleit's hurt. There's blood in the water. How can we help iB ”“I can see it too. It's a baby but we must be careful " said Max.Jack jumped into the water, “ I can get the net off its fin （魚獸）,“ he said.Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut o

15、n its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.“Jack! ” Tonya shouted. “Get in quickly. " Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish.“That baby killer whale . I am going to call it Lucky, “ he said.As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.Jack said, “W

16、e must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let's go.The town got nearer but the_waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.“Is everyone OK? ” shouted Jack.“Tonya? . She's not in the boat " said Sasha."Sin the water. ”They looked into the cold, dark wat

17、er for hours.“Tonya! Say something, Tonya.Where are you? ” shouted Max.The_wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat.“Jack, do you want us all to die? ” said Max. “We can't do any more. Tonya is wearing a life_jacket 徵生衣）and she can swim very well. Let's

18、 sail to the town:Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha slept on the_beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking about Tonya.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；2 .至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:At that time, Tonyaw

19、asfive hundred metresaway out in the seaParagraph 2：Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he .寫前導(dǎo)讀：本文是一篇記敘文。Jack和妻子Tonya在與朋友一起乘船環(huán)游非 洲時冒險救下了一頭虎鯨，這時突然下起雨來，風(fēng)越來越大，他們的小船被海浪 擊中，Tonya掉進水中不見了。精彩范文Paragraph 1:At that time, Tonya was five hundred metres away out in the sea A big wave came and crashed

20、onto her, swallowing her. She struggled to come up from under the water, only to find her lifejacket gone. "Help! Anyone help ! ” She shouted at the top of her voice but heard nothing in response except the roaring waves. All of a sudden, she caught sight of a giant dark fish like creature movi

21、ng swiftly towards her. "A shark! ” Tonya froze. "I will be killed ! ” The next moment, another giant wave hit her unconscious.Paragraph 2：Jack was walking along the beachand suddenlyhe spotted something like a tiny boat moving towards the beach. “Maybe someone has picked up Tony a "

22、He was expecting a miracle to fall upon Tonya. "Oh, no, it wasn't a boat. It was Lucky- the injured killer_whale we had rescued ”“Why is it here? ” Before Jack figuredout what was happening, another killer whale came out of nowhere, holding up a person high in the air!"It's Tonya!

23、”課外拓展閱讀一一中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當?shù)膬?nèi)容（1個單詞）或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。In much of Asia, especially the so called “rice bowl " cultures of China, Japan, Korea, _1_ Vietnam, food is usually eaten with chopsticks.Chopsticks are usually two long, thin pieces of wood or bamboo. They can also be made of plastic, an

24、imal bone or metal. Sometimes chopsticks are quite artistic. Truly elegant chopsticks might 2 (make) of gold and silver with Chinese characters. Skilled workers also combine various hardwoods and metal 3 (create) special designs.The Chinese have used chopsticks for five thousand years. People probably cooked their food in large pots, 4 (use) twigs (樹枝)to remove it. Over time, _5_ the population grew, people began cutting food into small pieces so it would cook more quickly