托福獨立寫作中應(yīng)避免的開頭方式

1、托福獨立寫作中應(yīng)避免的開頭方式一個好的托福寫作開頭的重要性不言而喻。大家都希望能通過好的開頭,可以吸引考官的注意,從而使他對你的作文有個好印象,可是,如果開頭十分糟糕,它便足以“完美”地禍害這次托?？荚?。下面是培訓(xùn)老師為考生們總結(jié)的應(yīng)避免的開頭方式。托福作文開頭1:避免廢話連篇,急煞讀者失敗案例:Topic -Should college students be allowed to get married?This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about this topic. Because I am

2、 also a college student and I am not married修改方案:開門見山,直奔主題In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。托福作文開頭2:避免觀點不明,態(tài)度曖昧失敗案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, on

3、ly 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me托福作文開頭3:避免漸行漸遠,離題千里失敗案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?I think to success, we

4、 must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。托福作文開頭4:避免中式英語,人見人跪失敗案例:Topic 1-The h

5、appiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrilyTopic 2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。Topic3- Is th

6、ere fairness in todays business world?I think in todays society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy thingsTopic 4- The advantage of being a nice personBeing a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad托福作文開頭5:避免語法錯誤,慘不

7、忍睹失敗案例:Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parents responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。托福

8、作文開頭6:避免過分簡單,沒有重點失敗案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!托福作文開頭7:避免用詞不當(dāng),表達不準(zhǔn)失敗案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and

9、so we cant take the responsibility to form a family。托福作文開頭8:避免意思重復(fù),徘徊不前失敗案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK familiesMy opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。托福作文開頭9:避免

10、中國俗語,隨心翻譯失敗案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”正確說法:Happiness lies in having many childrenTopic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?We all know, our Chinese ol

11、d fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, dont know isdont know”Topic 3- Do you think ones character is greatly influenced by his/her family?Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rats son can make holeTopic 4- The advantage of being a nice personI believe

12、one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。托福作文開頭10:避免觀點武斷,脫離實際失敗案例:Topic1-The importance of confidenceIn my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who dont have confidence, they all have failed.Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problemI think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don