高考英語讀后續(xù)寫考情分析及真題講解(19頁)

1、高考英語讀后續(xù)寫考情分析及真題講解、考綱摘錄 讀后續(xù)寫：滿分25分。提供一段350詞左右的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(150詞左右)，將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時(shí)將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：(1)與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；(2)內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所給關(guān)鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；(3)應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；上下文的連貫性。二、考情表解短文特點(diǎn)卷別長(zhǎng)度體裁主題2018. 6320記敘文爸爸帶兒子去朋友家農(nóng)場(chǎng)游玩迷路 的故事。續(xù)寫2017. 11338記敘文和父母一塊去旅游的故事。續(xù)寫2017. 6344記敘文和朋友

2、一起騎車游玩，野外遇狼的 故事。續(xù)寫2016. 10332記敘文小兩口野外露營(yíng)，因小事發(fā)生爭(zhēng)執(zhí)， 女主人獨(dú)自走進(jìn)森林迷路，在野外 獨(dú)自度夜的故事。續(xù)寫考試說明樣卷364記敘文Arthur在幫助一個(gè)年輕人時(shí)聽到有 人搶劫了銀行，于是Arthur懷疑這個(gè)年輕人就是搶劫銀行的嫌疑犯續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫劃線關(guān)鍵詞語卷別名詞（詞組）動(dòng)詞（詞組）介詞（詞組）形容詞2018.67212017.11732017.6732016.10622考試說明樣卷91二、命題揭秘讀后續(xù)寫要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基礎(chǔ)上，充分調(diào)動(dòng)想象創(chuàng)新思維，大膽預(yù)測(cè) 文章缺失部分的內(nèi)容走勢(shì)，進(jìn)行充滿個(gè)性色彩的設(shè)計(jì)，并用英語進(jìn)行續(xù)寫表達(dá)。所提供

3、短文詞數(shù)在350左右，劃線詞語涉及到名詞（詞組）、動(dòng)詞（詞組）、介詞（詞組 )和形容詞等，其中，以名詞 (詞組)為主，在續(xù)寫中至少要使用5 個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞語，需要注意： 在使用關(guān)鍵詞語時(shí)根據(jù)時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)的需要，可以改變動(dòng)詞的形式， 可以改變名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，但不要改變關(guān)鍵詞語在原文中的含義和詞性 ；多以 記敘文故事類文章 或者 夾敘夾議類文章 為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏，但故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。1. 創(chuàng)造性：即發(fā)揮想象力，該題型具有一定的開放性，考生需用自己的語言對(duì)故事情節(jié)進(jìn)行內(nèi)容創(chuàng)造；2 .邏輯性：即根據(jù)已提供的關(guān)鍵信息，按照可能的合理的方向續(xù)寫， 使文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)完整；3 .豐富性： 即語言能力的充

4、分體現(xiàn)，詞匯句法的準(zhǔn)確與復(fù)雜程度，細(xì)節(jié)描寫的生動(dòng)性等都將讓故事更加立體飽滿。四、 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)( 1)評(píng)分原則1. 本題總分為 25 分，按 5 個(gè)檔次給分。2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于 130 的，從總分中減去2 分。4. 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮：(1) 與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；(2) 內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所標(biāo)出關(guān)詞語的應(yīng)用情況；(3) 應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；5 .拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)重要方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。6 .如書寫較差以致影

5、響交際，可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。(2)各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次描述一與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了 5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語。第五檔 一所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完(21 25)全不影響意義表達(dá)。一有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。一與所給短文融洽度較高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接較為合 理。第四檔 一內(nèi)容比較豐富，應(yīng)用了 5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語。(16-20)一所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯較為豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義表達(dá)。一比較有效地使用了語句間的連接成分， 使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊 湊。一與所給短文關(guān)系

6、較為密切，與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程 度的銜接。第三檔一寫出了若干有關(guān)內(nèi)容，應(yīng)用了 4個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞(1115)語。一應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求，雖有一些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義的表達(dá)。一應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。一與所給短文有一定的關(guān)系，與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程 度的銜接。第二檔一寫出了一些有關(guān)內(nèi)容，應(yīng)用了 3個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞(6 10)語。一語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限，有些語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的 錯(cuò)誤，影響了意義的表達(dá)。較少使用語句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。一與所給短文和開頭語的銜接較差。一產(chǎn)出內(nèi)容太少，很少使用短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語。第一

7、檔 一語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目很有限，有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方(1 5)面的錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響了意義的表達(dá)。一缺乏語句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容不連貫。0白卷、內(nèi)容太少無法判斷或所寫內(nèi)容與所提供內(nèi)容無關(guān)。五、真題及樣題閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事(2018年6月浙江卷)It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque

8、, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad ensdf,ripicked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in th

9、e guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“ The day starts at dawn on my farm,After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take

10、the sheep out to graze吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn gtoing to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put

11、on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “ Don bet late for supper, U” ncle Paul cried, “ and keep to the trackso that you don gett lost! ”“ OK!” my dad crkie. dAfbtearca whileUncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and

12、 the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （編織的） blanket spread outupon the ground just for us. 、二 注意：1 . 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 l50 左右；2 . 至少使用 5 個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使

13、用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.One possible version:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I

14、tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and sodid I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved.But it w

15、as clear that we got lost.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didn ' ktnow where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But itwas really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point ofdesperation, w

16、e heard a faint voice from the distance.Uncle Pa ul,It'mussabeSo we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!（2017年11月浙江卷）A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of m

17、y mother loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sightsalong the

18、way. As the first day of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-oldbrother, and I unwillingly said good- bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we' d esee them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment,and a tent into the car

19、and bravelydrove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we' d returnsthe purse and traveler ' Momhhckfeforgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms ifMom was driving while Dad slept:"You stand outside the door and play lookOUt （哨）whi

20、le I go, and I ' ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. terrible pictures in my mind: "Honeywhere are the kids? ” “What?Oh, GoshI thought they were being awfully quiet. We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren ' t about to take any chances.On

21、the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn ' t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad tu

22、rned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections （反對(duì)）.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.住思：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2 .至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)

23、寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had

24、brought with uWe decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when_Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the

25、hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off thecar excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we

26、enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing sceneryin nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she ne

27、ver forgot to express her love to us.（2017年6月浙江卷）On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up wit

28、h him soon. As Mac pedaled 箭行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.s a big't <Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him."Man, that 'he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw in

29、stantly that it wasn but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mad s heajjmped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac' s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was

30、by his side again Then it attacked the back of Mac ' s bike, tearing open hitent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase 追趕）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep

31、uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he ' d be easy caught up and teetwowould be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn ' t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the si

32、de of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 住思：1

33、 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got

34、 out of the car immediately to give help. But with the bare hands, they didn ' dtare to fight with the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicyc

35、le and was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac' friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more c

36、ars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance. （2016年10月浙江卷）One weeken

37、d in July, Jane andher husband,Jom, had driven three hours tocamp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Janewas so angry that she said to Tom." I ' m going to find a better s

38、pot for us to carand walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she

39、 was lost.“Tom! ” she cried. "Help! ”No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dar

40、k, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw

41、 some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me? Unfortunat

42、ely, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 l50 左右；2. 至少使用 5 個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每

43、段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.One possible version:Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark againJane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold n

44、ight. Although she felt a little sad, she didnShe thought about Tom “ He must have called for thoselicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow. She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.Paragraph 2:It was day break when Jane woke up. She ate some ber

45、ries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she fl

46、agged the yellow blouse Luckily, the helicopter didn' t miss Jane thtime and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears.（實(shí)驗(yàn)省份考試說明樣題）A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walk

47、ed along Park Avenue nearthe First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn' t g（Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you ' ve got a problem, “ Art

48、hu " I ' m afraid so. I ' m in a big hurry and I can ' t start my car. ” “Is there something I can do to help?” Thrthyo ungedan looked at be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.the two suitcases in the back seatand then said,Thanks. If youre sure it w

49、ouldn“No trouble at all. I ' d be glad to help. ”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the 10ng loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery劫）！Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and th