上海英語中考作文題

1、上海英語中考作文題【篇一：上海市歷屆中考英語作文題目】上海市歷屆中考英語作文題目2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心愛之物2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一個(gè)可愛的上海人2004leave school 畢業(yè)時(shí)分2005 growing pains and gains 成長的煩惱2006 i have a dream 我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)2007 a story about my parent(s) ”一個(gè)關(guān)于我父/母的故事2008love around me 愛在我身邊2009i want to do something for my scho

2、ol 我想為我的學(xué)校做點(diǎn)什么2010im proud of myself 我為我自己感到自豪2011i m a member of .我是的一員2012if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she carestoo much about the result. 寫給一個(gè)考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議2013 how to protect myself 如何保護(hù)自己2014 this time next year 明年此時(shí)【篇二：2014 上海中考英語作文范文和點(diǎn)評(píng)】中考作文點(diǎn)評(píng)今年的中考英語作文題是“明年此時(shí)” (this tim

3、e next year ) ，黃浦區(qū)初中英語教研員周加有分析，這道題比較抽象，給予了考生一定的想象空間，可以說是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前幾年的作文題比較多的是從學(xué)生的角度對(duì)某些事物談感受，或者對(duì)一些事情進(jìn)行評(píng)論，比較容易套題。但今年的這道題不是很具體，加上時(shí)態(tài)是將來式，因此對(duì)學(xué)生來說不太容易套題，要寫好必須有自己的想法，所以有一定難度。不過，今年的這道作文題依然延續(xù)前幾年的特點(diǎn) 以 “我 ”為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，談的還是學(xué)生自己，這點(diǎn)方便了學(xué)生有話可說、有情可抒。2014 年中考英語作文：題目： this time next year亮點(diǎn)一：定語從句修飾對(duì)高中生活的向往亮點(diǎn)二：用as.

4、as 的比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)，抓人眼球亮點(diǎn)三：用到了idiom ，而且用的極為恰當(dāng)亮點(diǎn)四：on topof the list永遠(yuǎn)放在第一位亮點(diǎn)五：be of great importance 名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端亮點(diǎn)六：turn a new leaf of my future life翻開未來生活的新篇章?寫作小tip ：今年中考是篇看似記敘卻要敘中帶議的文章。全文的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)全部運(yùn)用一般將來時(shí)，對(duì)未來生活進(jìn)行展望。全文應(yīng)表達(dá)積極陽光的信念。2014 年上海中考英語范文1 this time next yearits exciting to imagine what the happy life will be

5、like.at this time next year, i will be a senior high student, and i will make a lot of new friends. i hope to be more independent so that perhaps i will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken english. also i will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of

6、myself when i am alone.life will be totally different, but im really looking forward to it.【解析】這篇作文需要涉及三個(gè)方面：變化、期望和自己的作為，因此文章中需要涵蓋著三點(diǎn)。第二段的第一句是明年此時(shí)的變化，第二句是期望及第一個(gè)作為，緊接其后的是第二個(gè)作為，而最后表達(dá)出了作者對(duì)變化的想法及態(tài)度。2014 年上海中考英語范文2this time next yearlife is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is

7、 full of challenge as well as hope.perhaps i will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in english. basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. then, i will

8、benefit from readingenglish books. what is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral english. only in this way can i progress in english endlessly.make plans and go for what i want. and i believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.(110 words)文章的標(biāo)題告訴我們文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)

9、該是與未來的生活相關(guān)的，生活在變化，一年后我將進(jìn)入高中，但是學(xué)習(xí)還在繼續(xù)，所以我仍有自己的目標(biāo)。文章主要立足于兩點(diǎn)，我對(duì)未來的計(jì)劃或者期待，以及我要如何去實(shí)現(xiàn)。作為一名英語學(xué)習(xí)者，我會(huì)從三點(diǎn)去提高自己的英語。英語學(xué)習(xí)是一個(gè)持續(xù)的過程，只有不斷努力才會(huì)有收獲【篇三：上海中考英語作文】上海中考英語作文學(xué)習(xí)資料一 . 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)上海中考英語作文總分為20 分，其中內(nèi)容分8 分、語言分8 分、組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4 分。以下為上海中考英語作文官方評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1. 內(nèi)容分8 分。內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚完整。2. 語言分8 分。學(xué)生需用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用恰當(dāng)。首先是字?jǐn)?shù)，少

10、于60 字的作文要酌情扣分。3. 組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4 分，也就是我們常說的文采分。根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型/單詞和諺語/俗語的情況來加分。二 . 注意點(diǎn)：每少 5 個(gè)詞扣 0.5 分，拼寫錯(cuò)誤每處扣0.5 分，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫錯(cuò)誤每 2 處扣 0.5 分 3 內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)總分達(dá)15 分及以上，得23 分內(nèi)容和語言總分1314 分，如確有好句型或表達(dá)用語，可酌情給12 分 通篇句型，句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯(cuò)誤，也不給分 開頭句 +給的幾個(gè)參考點(diǎn)+結(jié)尾句 +亮點(diǎn)。先劃檔次：a 檔 1815 分 b 檔 14.512 分 c 檔 11.58 分 d 檔3.50 分 然后再仔細(xì)批閱看有否語法錯(cuò)誤,最后給

11、出總分。三 .學(xué)生常出現(xiàn)的問題：1. 內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，總是用一些不合適的句子內(nèi)容來表達(dá)，所以可能讓老師覺得理由或是內(nèi)容太假，當(dāng)然也就得不了高分。2. 議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，我們把議論當(dāng)成的作文的重點(diǎn)，所以常常會(huì)跑題。應(yīng)當(dāng)多描述提示的內(nèi)容或加以想像，不能只翻譯了事。3. 總是使用同一個(gè)主語寫句子，重復(fù)太多。盡量使用不同的主語來表達(dá)，比如：i must learn english well. 就可以換成：it isimportant for me to learn english well.4. 結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，想哪兒寫哪兒，亂七八糟。應(yīng)該使用總分或總分總的 結(jié)構(gòu)。5

12、. 都是簡(jiǎn)單句，缺少復(fù)合句。多用狀語從句，賓語從句，定語從句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目標(biāo)初二下英語同步輔導(dǎo)（一）初中二年級(jí)下un. 初中二年級(jí)下un. 可以用用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。6. 連詞的使用較少，句子之間的連接很生硬?？梢约尤胍恍罕热?to my surprise （ 讓我驚 訝的是）,what ' s more（而且，還有）等， 讓上文與下文銜接更緊密。意思也能更流暢地表達(dá)。四 中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法1 .作文開頭的有用句as we all know, as it is known to all, it s known to all thatit ' s common

13、knowledge that it ' s commonly accepted that there is no denying that how time flies! in a blink of an eye, time flies like a speeding arrow, time goes like the flowing water.2 、中間分層部分的有用結(jié)構(gòu):分正反兩面論述:on one hand, on the other hand 分兩點(diǎn)：forone thing, for another, 分三點(diǎn)：firstly, secondly, last but notl

14、east3 、結(jié)尾部分all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in brief, in short, to put everything in a shell, 概括的說，簡(jiǎn)單的說last but not least組織語言發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)的in my opinion, from my point of view, inmy eyes, as far as i am concerned, believe it or not, 表示遞進(jìn)的in addition furthermore more importantlywhat smore moreover 其他與我”有

15、關(guān)的寫作材料1、重點(diǎn)句型it's+a. for sb.to do sth. so +a./ad. thatsuch a +a.+n. that too?to do not?.until that ' s Why+ 那是。的原因 it ' s said that 旬 子4 、增添亮點(diǎn)使用復(fù)合句和諺語諺語舉例i firmly believe that “ aforei gn language is a weapon in the struggle of life” . as afamous saying goes, “ a man becomes learned by as

16、king questions. ” it s common knowledge that the road to successis not always full of roses. an old saying goes,“ nothing isimpossible to a willing h eart. ”五 2002-2013 上海中考英語作文題目集錦2002 my favorite thing（s） 我的心愛之物2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一個(gè)可愛的上海人2004 leave school 畢業(yè)時(shí)分2005 growing pains and

17、gains 成長的煩惱2006i have a dream 我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)2007 a story about my parent（s） 一個(gè)關(guān)于我父/母的故事2008 love around me 愛在我身邊2009 i want to do something for my school 我想為我的學(xué)校做 點(diǎn)什么2010 im proud of myself 我為我自己感到自豪2011 my favourite thing （ s） 我的心愛之物2012 if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she cares too much a

18、bout the result. 寫給一個(gè)考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議。2013 write at least 60 words about the topic“ how to protectmyself ” （以 “如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60 個(gè)詞的短文）六近 5 年上海中考英語真題范文分享2009 命題作文write at least 60 words about the topic“ i want to do somethingfor my school ” 以. （“我想為學(xué)校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（ 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校

19、名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。 ）use the following points as a reference. （ 以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）lwhat do you want to do for your school?2 why do you want to do it?3 how are you going to do it?例文1：i want to make school clean. you may think it is very simple. but i dont think so. our teacher said, school is your home, you shou

20、ld keep it clean. but i have never done anything to make school clean. for example, i have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. i also threw the rubbish on the ground. so i want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. during this summer holiday, i

21、 will go to school to make school clean. of course, i will do it with myclassmates. we will make school clean every weekends next term as well. now, do you think it is simple?2 one possible versioni want to do something for my school im leaving my school. i want to plant a tree in my school garden.

22、i have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so i want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. if i plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. in their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010 命題作文上海中考英語作文題:im proud of myse

23、lf1 、 what kind of person are you?2 、 what makes you proud of yourself(give an example/examples)3 、 why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60 字范文： 1i am a boy of less confidence. i always hate running. but as we all know, the students of grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. at that moment, i just wanted to give up. but my parents encouraged me: impossible is nothing, you could challenge yourself! so with the encouragement of them, i tried my best to run and insisted on running. when i got to the finishing line, i felt proud of my