高考英語真題-短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練及解析(1)

1、【專項突破】高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（一）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請彳修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ 八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1Last Sunday, it was my father s funny day. After supper, my father

2、went to see the film. But in our surprise, hecame back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked

3、 at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “ Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please. The fact was that his ticket

4、foundthe glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We waited a long time a

5、nd buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without a

6、ny companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3September 15, 2013FineOne week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if

7、 nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of myclassmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I m wrong. We can tell others our neehelp and accept his help. Some da

8、y we can not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but nobus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner

9、had I left when the bus arrived. Ithought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have towait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effortthat we have put it in. Now whenever I

10、am close to lose my patience, I ll think of this experience.Passage 5How harmful cigarettes are getting now! My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer. She knows smoking was harmful, so she justcouldn t quit

11、. She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking. My grandmother was my rolemodels and I loved her so much. Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don t have to go

12、throughPassage 6Today it was a sunny day. In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in thestore packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We gree

13、ted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell.As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again

14、.Passage 7An most interesting thing happened to me last winter. During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money ona special gift for Grandma. One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phonespecial designed for seniors. I gave them to my grandma when I came to vis

15、it her at the weekend. Upon receivethe phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it. I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed. Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away. Under my help, she successfully called her good friend. That afterno

16、on Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make callswith the new phone I bought her. They all praised what thoughtful I was.高考英語 - 短文改錯集訓(xùn)（一）答案與解析Passage 1本文是一篇記述了作者與父親周末看電影時所發(fā)生的一件小趣事。I.the fa考查冠詞的用法。文中my father went to see the film提到的 看電影”，用英語表示時，應(yīng)用seea film 或 go to the cinema。 除此， 英語中類似的說

17、法還有：see a doctor, see a play等。1.1 n fto考查介詞搭配的用法。句子But in our surprise, he came back just about中的介詞短語應(yīng)是 to one ssurprise,意為 使某人驚訝得是 ”。除此，英語中類似的表述還有：to one s delight, to one 等等;s joy3 .what fthat 考查定語從句的用法。文中 told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema 里 面的thing為定語從句中的先行詞，what had h

18、appened是定語從句，修飾thing ,其引導(dǎo)詞應(yīng)為that,在從句中作主語，因為what 不能引導(dǎo)定語從句。4 .while fwhen考查特殊句式的用法。文中 was sitting in his seat while a woman came to 里面的 while 不 能與be doing結(jié)構(gòu)連用。在特殊句式be doing when 句型中，when用作并列連詞，相當(dāng)于 and then,其意義為：正在做忽然.或正在做這時.。類似的表述還有：had donewhen 剛要了 這時，be about to do when剛要做這時，be on the point of doing

19、 when要做這時等句式。5 .her -him考查邏輯關(guān)系。從語意上來看，此處的邏輯關(guān)系應(yīng)為：電影院里的那個女的這時向著父親走 過來。所以應(yīng)用him 來指代父親才合乎邏輯。6 .Surprising f Surprised查形容詞作狀語的用法。文中 Surprising, they looked at 里的 Surprising 作形容 詞用，置于句首，作狀語，表示原因，作用相當(dāng)于because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。因為其邏輯主語為they,指人，應(yīng)用Surprised。7 .ticketftickets?？疾槊~數(shù)別的判斷。文中 they looked at their ticket car

20、efully 里的 ticket 指二人合起來 的電影票，應(yīng)用tickets。8 . carefully前面加more。考查邏輯關(guān)系。從語篇整體上來看，邏輯關(guān)系應(yīng)為這時父親和那個女的把電影票 看得比前面還認真，最后才弄清了事由。所以應(yīng)用carefully 副詞比較級。9 .makefmade考查時態(tài)的用法。從語篇對話的時間上來看，這時，應(yīng)為父親向那個女的道歉，承認自己 剛才弄錯了，所以，動詞的時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過去時。10 .去掉 out?？疾閯釉~短語的辨析。文中 The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass 里的 found out

21、意為 “查清楚；弄明白”，但是，此處要表達“發(fā)現(xiàn)；看到”的意思，應(yīng)用find 才對，用過去分詞，作定語，修飾 ticket。Passage 2本文是以第一人稱記述了作者去年與家人一塊過中秋節(jié)時去動物園游玩的事。1 .at 一in考查介詞短語的用法。從結(jié)構(gòu)上來看，文中 wentto the park at their car判斷，語意為作者 坐著 某人的車去了公園”，英語中，表示 打著某人的車“，應(yīng)用by car/in ones car/in a car,可同義轉(zhuǎn)換，都是 開 車“坐小汽車”的意思，但不能說 by ones car/by a car。2 .stood standing前加 who

22、。考查there be句式的用法。在 there be句式中，主語后可跟 v-ing形式作定 語或直接添加關(guān)系詞來構(gòu)成定語從句，修飾該主語。3 .去掉front前面the?？疾楣谠~的用法。從整體文意來看，應(yīng)為作者和父母親來到公園門口時，看到了售 票窗口前面站著許多游人。所以，證明游人是站在窗子的外面而不是站在窗子的里面等候買票。因此，使 用in front of the ticket window 才符合語境意義。4 .buy bought考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)的用法。全面地看來，句子 We waited a long time and buy three tickets是由并 列連詞and連接wait

23、ed與buy而構(gòu)成的一個并列句，兩個謂語動詞時態(tài)應(yīng)當(dāng)呼應(yīng)，故用一般過去時。5 .too -so考查邏輯關(guān)系。全文悉知：主要是由于作者要看動物的急切心理和激動的心情才快速穿過擁擠 的人群，不幸，這時與父母走失了。因此，應(yīng)用 sothat 句式才吻合語境意義。6 .frightenedfrightening查-ing和-ed形容詞的辨析。從全篇來看，此處是說明或描述動物的特性，應(yīng)用-ing的形容詞才合理。7 .hard前加a。考查固定短語的用法。文中 I had hard time looking for是動詞短語 have a hard time doing something的搭配結(jié)構(gòu)。8 .

24、him - them考查邏輯關(guān)系。從語境來看，此處是作者在尋找自己的父母親。9 .alone - lonely考查同義詞的辨析。從語篇語義推斷：此處是作者在與父母親走失后所表現(xiàn)出來的寂寞 心情，應(yīng)用lonely。但是，alone強調(diào)獨自一個人，沒他人協(xié)助。10 .covered f covering考查分詞作狀語。 從句法結(jié)構(gòu)來看，文中一 so I had to walk home, covered as much as5 kilometers此處是作者不得不步行 5公里路后才回到家里，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞covering ,作狀語，表示伴隨情況，修飾 walk home。Passage 3本文是一篇

25、日記。記述了 2013年9月15日作者在上體育課時，扭傷了腳，疼痛難忍。令人不解的是，作者本來可以接受同學(xué)的幫助但卻被拒絕了。事后，自己終于醒悟過來了。如果人遇到了困難，就要 面對現(xiàn)實，一定要與賜予幫助的人一起戰(zhàn)勝困難，這樣，既救助了自己又幫助了他人，因為，給別人不帶來麻煩本身就是一種幫助。1 .while fwhen考查特殊句式的用法。文中 I was having a PE lesson while I fell down 里面的 while與特 殊句式搭配不當(dāng)。根據(jù)語意，其句式應(yīng)為be doingwhen，表示 芷在做這時.”的含義。2 .greatly f great查副詞的誤用。 句

26、中was in greatly pain at that moment 里面的 greatly,是副詞，不能 作定語，只能作狀語。但是，此處語意和結(jié)構(gòu)已經(jīng)表明，只能用其形容詞great作定語，修飾名詞 pain,表示疼痛的程度。3 .has -haW查動詞時態(tài)的誤用。根據(jù)語境時間來推斷： 句中tried to act as if nothing has happened until theclass was over里面的has happened動詞的動作時間已經(jīng)先于tried to act的動作時間，應(yīng)為過去完成時。4 .walk fwalking考查動詞短語搭配的用法。通過句式結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句

27、子 had difficulty walk back to my classroom是動詞短語have difficulty (in) doing something的固定搭配，意為 很難做 或干 有困難” 等意義。5 .but -and考查邏輯關(guān)系。從語境來看，此處是作者不但沒有告訴他人并且拒絕了他人的幫助，表示隱瞞實情。又從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看，應(yīng)為句子 didn t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of1白勺 didn t tell和even refused兩個動詞的語意連接或并列。6 .As后加a?？疾楣潭?xí)語的用法。從全局來看，A

28、s result此處用作插入語，表示補充或說明I所造成的嚴重后果，應(yīng)為 As a result o7 .bad fworse考查形容詞比較級的用法。從全篇來看，前面有As a result信息提示，說明情況變得更加嚴重。故用形容詞 bad的比較級才吻合語境意義。8 .his f their考查邏輯關(guān)系。從整篇語意來看，句子 We can tell others our need for help and accept his help 里的his前面有others信息暗示，因此，其須與 others邏輯關(guān)系取得呼應(yīng)。9 .去掉not?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。從全文來看，呼吁人們應(yīng)該互相幫助，而不是不幫助

29、。10 .to fwith考查動詞固定搭配的用法。句中g(shù)et along to each other是動詞短語 get along with somebody的搭配結(jié)構(gòu)，意為與某人相處Passage 4本文是一篇夾敘夾議文。作者通過自己在公交站臺等車時的真實感受來挑戰(zhàn)自己的最大耐心。全文準確地定位了耐心是容不得半點急躁，否則，將前功盡棄。1 .wait后加for?？疾閯釉~短語搭配的用法。句子 Once I waited a bus to come at a stop里的固定搭配是 wait forto do形式，意為 等著或等待干”的含義。2 .past fpassed考查形近詞的辨析。句中

30、a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past中的past,是介詞，只能與其賓語一起構(gòu)成介詞短語，充當(dāng)一定的句子成份。但是，此處是作名詞短語30 minutes 的謂語，應(yīng)為動詞pass,其過去式為 passed3 .feet ffoot考查介詞固定搭配的用法。句中to walk on feet里的on feet是介詞短語on foot的誤用形式，意為 “步行 ” ，該搭配中的foot 不能變?yōu)閒eet。4 .when f than考查特殊句式的用法。文中 門。sooner had I left when the bus arrived 里面的 when與此句

31、 式搭配不當(dāng)。特殊句式no soonerthan 表示”一就，若no sooner置于句首時，該句須用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。類似的結(jié)構(gòu)還有：hardlywhen 或scarcelywhen ,等句式。5 .a-the考查冠詞的用法。從全文來看，作者應(yīng)是等待下一趟公交車，表示自己已經(jīng)知道的那一趟車。6 .other - anothe考查數(shù)詞固定搭配的用法。從整篇語境來看，表明作者如果等下一趟車的話，自己就得再多等候30分鐘。英語中，表示數(shù)值或數(shù)量的在原有的基礎(chǔ)上增加即另外多”含義時，常用“another+基數(shù)詞或者基數(shù)詞+more” 形式。7 .dofdid?？疾樘厥饩涫降挠梅?。文中 Only then d

32、o I realize my problem 里面的only修飾副詞，介詞短語或狀語從句且置于句首時，該句須用倒裝形式。所以，此處采用添加助動詞來構(gòu)成倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，其應(yīng)與事件發(fā)生的謂語動詞的時態(tài)保持對應(yīng)。8 .possible f possibly查形容詞的誤用。 句子will possible waste all the effort 里面的 possible 是形容詞， 與句子成份作用不配。根據(jù)句式結(jié)構(gòu)來推斷，該句謂語動詞waste前面應(yīng)用副詞possibly,作狀語，表示對事件的把握程度。9 .去掉it?？疾槎ㄕZ從句的用法。句中 waste all the effort that we ha

33、ve put it in的effort為先行詞，在從句 中作賓語，it 顯示重復(fù)。10 .lose f losing考查形容詞固定搭配的用法。句中 am close to lose my patience中的固定搭配 be close to doing 或to something , to是介詞，后跟名詞，代詞或動詞 -ing形式，意為 靠近 ，接近 ”等含 義。Passage 5本文是一篇夾敘夾議文。作者通過自己祖母死于肺癌的真實事例來敘說吸煙給人們所帶來的極大傷害。本文強力呼吁：吸煙有害于健康。1 .at 后加 the?？疾榻樵~短語的固定搭配。句子lung cancer at age of

34、 sixty on Jan 27, 2009 中的 at age of介詞at后缺少了 the,固定搭配at the age of ,意為 在歲或在年齡”。2 .mainly fmain?？疾楦痹~的誤用。句子 were the mainly cause of her cancer里面的 mainly 是副詞，用來 作狀語。但此處用在名詞cause前作定語，須用其形容詞形式main。 t quit3 .knows f knew 考查動詞時態(tài)的誤用。句子 She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn的 knows 是一般現(xiàn)在時，與語境背景時間不

35、吻合，此處須用一般過去時。4 .so f but考查邏輯關(guān)系。從整篇語境來看，句子 was harmful, so she just couldn表明：傳獺的祖母明知故犯。所以，應(yīng)用but 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。5 .hoped - hoping 考查現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。從全文來看，句子 always hid her addiction, hoped that I would neverstart smoking 表明：作者的祖母把自己的不良習(xí)慣千方百計地隱瞞起來，其目的就是不讓作者受影響。所以，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞hoping 作狀語，表示伴隨情況，修飾hid her addiction 。6 .models

36、f modeJ 考查名詞數(shù)別的判斷。從語義來看，句子 My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much 說明：作者的祖母在作者本人心里是自己的模范和榜樣。所以，應(yīng)用model 的單數(shù)形式。7 . 去掉 in 。 考查名詞短語作狀語的用法。從句法結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子 Now I still wake up in every day 里的 everyday 名詞短語，其本身就是作狀語，不能與相關(guān)的介詞連用。因此，介詞in 重復(fù)。8 .has f had考查虛擬語氣的用法。從句式結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子 every day wishing that

37、smoking has never been invented 里的 wish 后的賓語從句用了虛擬語氣，表示對過去情況的一種心態(tài)，須用過去完成時。9 .Our - My 考查邏輯關(guān)系。從整篇語境來看，句子 Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live 表明：作者對其祖母所許下的諾言。所以，應(yīng)用 My表示對應(yīng)關(guān)系。10.which fwhat?？疾橘e語從句引導(dǎo)詞的辨析。從句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以看出，句子 go through which she did 里 面的which表示具有選擇性，意為“那個”在句中作主語，賓語，表語

38、或定語。但是，此處應(yīng)是表明作者的祖母所做的一切。須用連接代詞what來引導(dǎo)賓語從句，表示概括性，意為“一切事”，在句中作主語，賓語或表語。Passage 6本文中肯地記述了今天早晨發(fā)生在作者自己身上的一件特別固冏的小事。1 .breads f brea曲查名詞數(shù)別的用法。從語義來看，作者早晨去食品店里買面包吃。句中 to buy some breads里面的bread是物質(zhì)名詞，為不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)用bread。2 .packing packed考查句子謂語動詞的確立。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看， 句子After the man in the store packing thebread in a small

39、 bag for 句中的 After引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，從句中的主語是the man,缺少謂語動詞，故用packed。3 .with后加the?？疾槎ü谠~的用法。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子 with bag in my hand句中白b bag是指用來裝面包的小袋子，即表示上文已提到的物件，同時也構(gòu)成了介詞with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，應(yīng)補全the。4 .that fwh請查非限制性定語從句的用法。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看， 句子 neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walkingher dog 句中的 Miss Wang 是出來遛狗的人，其后應(yīng)跟一個非限制性定語從句來起補充或說明作用，因先行詞

40、指人，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞who 來引導(dǎo)。5 .去掉with?？疾閷嵙x動詞的用法。句子 We greeted with each other句中的greet是及物動詞，其后直接跟賓語。6 .begin began?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的用法。句子 greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather 中的and 是連接了greeted 和 begin 兩個謂語動詞，其動作時間應(yīng)保持一致。7 .his -her考查邏輯關(guān)系。從整篇語境來看，是鄰居 Miss Wang家的狗撲向了作者手里的裝著面包的小袋子。所以，應(yīng)用her 來表示其所對應(yīng)的邏輯關(guān)系

41、。8 .though f because/since/for/as考查邏輯關(guān)系。從全篇語境來推斷，正是因為作者的手里的飄香的面包味 才導(dǎo)致鄰居Miss Wang家的狗撲了過來。所以，應(yīng)用because來表示其所對應(yīng)的邏輯關(guān)系。9 .or f and 考查邏輯關(guān)系。從整個語篇來分析，句子 As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dogbegan to enjoy it 表明：面包撒落到地上后，Miss Wang 家的狗就開始津津地吃了起來。所以，兩個句子邏輯關(guān)系應(yīng)是并列的。10.late -late博查形近詞的辨析。從故事

42、結(jié)局來看，過了五分鐘后，作者又去那家食品店買面包去了。所以，此處的時間應(yīng)為later。句中l(wèi)ate,形容詞和副詞，表示 遲到了；沒有趕上時間，而later,副詞，則表示“時間以后才開始做”含義。Passage 7本文是一篇關(guān)于孝敬老人，學(xué)會感恩的熱點記事短文。全文呼吁：尊敬老人，善待老人；老有所樂，老有所享是我們現(xiàn)代社會敬待老人的不渝信念。1.spend - spent考查動詞時態(tài)的用法。句子-T spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma 中的謂語動詞spend,其動作時間應(yīng)與全文背景時間保持一致。2.specialfspeciall

43、y考查形容詞的誤用。句子 a larger button phone special designed for seniors 中的special 是形容詞，作定語。但此處是作狀語，修飾過去分詞短語designed for seniors 且二者合起來再用來作定語，前面的修飾中心詞button,應(yīng)用副詞。3 .them - it 考查邏輯關(guān)系。從中心、事件來看，句子 I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend 表明：作者買了一部大字型手機送給了奶奶。此處指代應(yīng)為it。4 .receive f receivi

44、n翳查介詞固定結(jié)構(gòu)的用法。句子 Upon receive the phone, Grandma 中的upon表示時 間匕時含義時，其后通常跟動詞 -ing形式。所以，應(yīng)用 receiving o5 .eager后力口 to?？疾樾稳菰~固定搭配的用法。句子 was very happy and eager learn how to use it中的固定搭配be eager to do something,表示 渴望/急切做”，其后通常跟動詞不定式。因此，應(yīng)補加小品詞to。6 .去掉 had。考查動詞時態(tài)的用法。句子 I had patiently explained all the import

45、ant functions she needed 中的謂語動詞had patiently explained ,其動作時間應(yīng)與作者給奶奶親手教手機的使用方法的時間取得一致，故用一般過去時。7 .but - and考查邏輯關(guān)系。文章敘述到奶奶了解了手機使用的一些方法后又馬上想試打一下電話，本句 Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away 中的連詞應(yīng)表示并歹U關(guān)系。8 .Under With考查介詞固定習(xí)語的用法。句子 Under my help, she successfully called中的固定搭配 wi

46、thone s help with the help of somebody ,表示在某人幫助下”含義時，介詞應(yīng)為 with。9 .neighbor f neighbor/查名詞數(shù)另1J的判斷。句子 That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that They all praise中的They表述中可以看出， neighbor應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)。10 .what 一how考查名詞性從句中引導(dǎo)詞的用法。句子 They all praised what thoughtful I was 表述中可以看 出，thoughtful是形容詞，其前面應(yīng)用 how

47、來修飾thoughtful ,置于主句 They all praised的后面，引導(dǎo)賓語 從句。【專項突破】高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（二）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請彳修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ 八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1Last month, the 18 th

48、 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily,the Students Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn t show some interest armuch confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the c

49、ompetition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to comingand it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher s smiling faycceo,nIfibdueinltcuep. Mmuch to my delight, theresult was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher s encouragement, I coul

50、dn t hprize. I m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospita

51、l. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for

52、 this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to

53、 you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shab

54、by bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scene

55、ry spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4As we all know, playing is one of mans itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since ma

56、ny years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of.

57、Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people s health.Passage 5Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a