中考英語復(fù)習(xí)專題寫作訓(xùn)練

1、精選ppt 寫作訓(xùn)練寫作訓(xùn)練 2013年年3月月 20132013年中考專題復(fù)習(xí)年中考專題復(fù)習(xí) 精選ppt中考英語書面表達中考英語書面表達 書面表達是中考題的重要題型，分值較高，占總分的書面表達是中考題的重要題型，分值較高，占總分的10%。根據(jù)。根據(jù)英語新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的要求，初中階段英語的要求，初中階段英語書面表達主要是綜合考查考生的以下兩方面內(nèi)容：書面表達主要是綜合考查考生的以下兩方面內(nèi)容： 知識方面知識方面： 在寫作過程中熟練運用以下基礎(chǔ)知識：在寫作過程中熟練運用以下基礎(chǔ)知識：（1）常用）常用時態(tài)時態(tài) （2）主要）主要句型句型 （3）固定短語固定短語（4）主要）主要從句從句 （5

2、）常用）常用連詞連詞 2. 能力方面能力方面：（1）觀察觀察能力（能力（2）思維能力（）思維能力（3）運用運用語言知識的能力語言知識的能力 （4）用英語）用英語組詞造句、連句成篇組詞造句、連句成篇的能力（的能力（5）書寫書寫能力能力精選ppt2010-2012年中考英語書面表達題分析年中考英語書面表達題分析年份年份 題題 目目 體體 裁裁 內(nèi)內(nèi) 容容 主體時態(tài)主體時態(tài)2010楚雄楚雄州中州中考考Share My Happiness /Sadness with Others記敘文記敘文 個人經(jīng)歷個人經(jīng)歷（寫一件你（寫一件你經(jīng)經(jīng)歷過的事歷過的事） 一般過去時一般過去時2011八地八地聯(lián)考聯(lián)考 I

3、Am Not a Child Any More2012八地八地聯(lián)考聯(lián)考The Best Moment in My Memory表達情感表達情感記事記事一般過去時一般過去時精選ppt近幾年中考作文發(fā)展趨向及答題要求近幾年中考作文發(fā)展趨向及答題要求1.作文詞數(shù)增加作文詞數(shù)增加,要求要求80100個詞，即個詞，即10-15句句話，切忌畫蛇添足；話，切忌畫蛇添足；2.近幾年只局限于命題作文近幾年只局限于命題作文, 而且是通過記敘某而且是通過記敘某一件事來表達真實情感，感悟人生的哲理；一件事來表達真實情感，感悟人生的哲理；3. 文章的表達不局限于一種時態(tài)；文章的表達不局限于一種時態(tài)；4.句子結(jié)構(gòu)的難度增

4、加句子結(jié)構(gòu)的難度增加, 要求會使用一定比例的要求會使用一定比例的復(fù)合句和適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞復(fù)合句和適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞, 使段落層次分明，使段落層次分明，從而提高文章的檔次；從而提高文章的檔次；5.對卷面整潔和書寫規(guī)范有一定的要求。對卷面整潔和書寫規(guī)范有一定的要求。精選ppt楚雄市統(tǒng)測八年級滿分作文楚雄市統(tǒng)測八年級滿分作文2012年年I Love 精選ppt一一 檔檔 ( 8 - 10 分分)內(nèi)容內(nèi)容切題切題、層次清楚層次清楚、語言流暢、語言流暢、 基本基本無語言錯誤無語言錯誤；二二 檔檔（6 - 7分）內(nèi)容切題、層次比較清分）內(nèi)容切題、層次比較清楚、語言比較流暢、語言表達錯誤較少；楚、語言比較流暢、語言表

5、達錯誤較少；三三 檔檔（4 - 5分）內(nèi)容基本切題、層次不分）內(nèi)容基本切題、層次不夠分明、語言表達較多錯誤；夠分明、語言表達較多錯誤；四四 檔檔 ( 1 - 3 分分)有一定內(nèi)容、但語言表有一定內(nèi)容、但語言表達錯誤較多。達錯誤較多。 (注意：抄襲卷中閱讀材料的，抄襲部分不給分。)中考滿分作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中考滿分作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)精選ppt第三節(jié)書面表達(滿分l5分)I Am Not a Child Any More 提示：在陽光雨露里，我已長高、長壯!但這還不是全部，長大還應(yīng)包括什么?是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)?是體貼、理解父母?是感恩、回報親朋師長?還是成長的點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請以I Am Not a

6、 Child Any More”為題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一個小孩。20112011年八地聯(lián)考書面表達真題展示年八地聯(lián)考書面表達真題展示精選pptI Am Not a Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to unders

7、tand and care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too t

8、ired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.中考滿分范文展示中考滿分范文展示精選ppt范文范文 “骨架骨架” 常用句型等常用句型等第一句：I am now. I have changed

9、a lot. 第二句：I used to be . But now, I am .第三句：The most important thing is that I have 第四句：It was a . When I So I . 第五句：I didnt know until 第六句：They both said, although it. 第七句：After supper, I found, I. 第八句：When , with, she said: “.”第九句：It was the first time that I. 第十句：I realized I was .解密中考滿分作文高分技巧解密

10、中考滿分作文高分技巧精選ppt中考英語書面表達中考英語書面表達“五步曲五步曲”看看（Look）想想（Think）列列（Rank）連連（Link）美美（Beautify）審題抓點審題抓點確定體裁確定體裁 把握時態(tài)把握時態(tài)構(gòu)思文路構(gòu)思文路提煉要點提煉要點草擬提綱草擬提綱 斟酌詞句斟酌詞句連句成文連句成文長短交替長短交替亮點潤色亮點潤色規(guī)范謄寫規(guī)范謄寫留好印象留好印象從句適量從句適量高分有望高分有望精選ppt3、一般將來時、一般將來時表達想法和愿望表達想法和愿望1、一般過去時、一般過去時記敘已發(fā)生的事情記敘已發(fā)生的事情技巧一：用準(zhǔn)三種時態(tài)技巧一：用準(zhǔn)三種時態(tài)2、一般現(xiàn)在時、一般現(xiàn)在時描寫人或事物描寫

11、人或事物I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.How time flies! But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable.I grow up day by day.中考英語書面表達高分技巧中考英語書面表達高分技巧五個五個“三三”精

12、選ppt技巧二：確定關(guān)鍵詞句技巧二：確定關(guān)鍵詞句 用對用對三種句型三種句型（表示人或事物的身份、特征、形狀等）（表示人或事物的身份、特征、形狀等）句型句型3：主語：主語+動詞動詞+賓語賓語句型句型2 2：主主+系系(am/ is /are)+表表(n./ adj. /num.)句型句型1 1：主主+謂謂It is the most unforgettable thing.Teachers smile was like a spring wind.She had a heart-to-heart with me.I always remember this thing . I grow up.精

13、選ppt技巧三：列出提綱技巧三：列出提綱 用上三個從句用上三個從句1、狀語從句狀語從句2、定語從句定語從句3、賓賓語從句語從句I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.I think I am so lucky to b

14、ecome one of her students. 精選ppt技巧四：技巧四：用好三類連詞將用好三類連詞將“三段式三段式” 作文連段成文作文連段成文1、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞: but , although , however2、表因果的連詞、表因果的連詞: because, so3、表順序的連詞、表順序的連詞: at first , to begin with , then , later , at lastBeginning （23句話）句話）“鳳頭鳳頭”Body （68句話）句話）“豬肚豬肚”Ending （23句話）句話） “豹尾豹尾”A. “三段式三段式” A. 三類連詞三類連

15、詞 精選ppt技巧五：技巧五：凸顯三處亮點凸顯三處亮點 美化文章美化文章 1、There + be + 物物 + 地地 / + 事事 + 時時2、tooto/ sothat3、Its + adj.+ for Sb.+ to do Sth. /I find it +adj. to do sth.In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to

16、 learn well. Teachers smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. 精選ppt 提示：人生中會有很多提示：人生中會有很多令人難忘的令人難忘的人和事人和事，給你留下了很多揮之不去的，給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶，讓你咀嚼，讓你回味?；蛟S是回憶，讓你咀嚼，讓你回味。或許是同學(xué)、朋友間的互助和支持同學(xué)、朋友間的互助和支持, ,父母的關(guān)父母的關(guān)心和照顧心和照顧, ,老師的鼓勵與幫助老師的鼓勵與幫助, ,又或是又或是你我你我身邊的身邊的一次次一次次感動感動這一切都這一切都會令我們記憶猶新，難以忘懷。

17、請以會令我們記憶猶新，難以忘懷。請以“An Unforgettable ThingAn Unforgettable Thing”為話為話題，用英語寫一篇不少于題，用英語寫一篇不少于8080詞的短文，詞的短文，記敘一件值得你回憶的事記敘一件值得你回憶的事，鐫刻這美，鐫刻這美好的瞬間。好的瞬間。An Unforgettable Thing備考演練備考演練精選ppt看看（Look）想想（Think）列列（Rank）連連（Link）美美（Beautify）審題抓點審題抓點確定體裁確定體裁 把握時態(tài)把握時態(tài)構(gòu)思文路構(gòu)思文路提煉要點提煉要點草擬提綱草擬提綱 斟酌詞句斟酌詞句連句成文連句成文長短交替長短交替

18、亮點潤色亮點潤色規(guī)范謄寫規(guī)范謄寫留好印象留好印象從句適量從句適量高分有望高分有望請用請用“五步曲、三段式五步曲、三段式”完成寫作完成寫作記敘文記敘文一般過去時態(tài)一般過去時態(tài)wordssentencesparagrapharticle記敘一件值記敘一件值得你回憶的得你回憶的事事或許是或許是同學(xué)、朋友間同學(xué)、朋友間的互助和支持的互助和支持, ,父母的父母的關(guān)心和照顧關(guān)心和照顧, ,老師的鼓老師的鼓勵與幫助勵與幫助, ,又或是你我又或是你我身邊的身邊的一次次一次次感感動動精選pptrememberhave a heart-to-heart talkhappinessgentlegrow upsmil

19、eshare withunforgettableluckyencouragewonderfulmakeimpressforgetmemoriesbe eager to do (渴望做)discusswrite shareAn Unforgettable thinglearn frombecome interested intry my best to be full ofWhats the topic? 精選ppt Step 1 (1) 各自在小卡紙上寫出你認(rèn)為最好的開頭句和結(jié)句；各自在小卡紙上寫出你認(rèn)為最好的開頭句和結(jié)句；(2) 組內(nèi)或組間交互；組內(nèi)或組間交互；(3) 各組代表在黑板上展示本

20、組收集的精彩首、尾句。各組代表在黑板上展示本組收集的精彩首、尾句。Step 2 (1) 組內(nèi)討論，選定一個事件，簡要寫出關(guān)鍵詞或句；組內(nèi)討論，選定一個事件，簡要寫出關(guān)鍵詞或句；(2) 寫出正文初稿，修改完善，工整謄寫在大卡紙上；寫出正文初稿，修改完善，工整謄寫在大卡紙上；(3) 各組發(fā)言人交流發(fā)言。各組發(fā)言人交流發(fā)言。精選pptWonderful sentencesBeginning 開頭句開頭句 1. How time flies,I grow up day by day . 2. In our lives , there are so many wonderful memories tha

21、t make us unforgettable. 1.For me, its the most unforgettable thing. 2.I always remember the thing in my heart.Ending 結(jié)尾句結(jié)尾句Body 中間句中間句 精選pptAn Unforgettable ThingHow time flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forge

22、t one thing that impressed me very much. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you.主題句重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞One possible version :Beginning (首段首段)精選ppt I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and

23、 almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, with a gentle smile, she had a heart-to-heart talk with me about how to learn English well. Teachers smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. At that moment, happiness was from the bottom of heart. Every time

24、 I wanted to give up , she encouraged me with the brightest smile. 連接詞連接詞Body （正文）（正文）精選pptIt made me try my best again. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I become interested in English and good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Also, Ive learned a lot

25、from her. I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. For me, It is the most unforgettable thing. I always remember the thing in my heart. Whenever I remember this thing, my heart is full of happiness and courage. Ending （尾段）（尾段）再次點題再次點題并抒發(fā)情感并抒發(fā)情感精選pptAn Unforgettable Thing How time

26、flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do wel