福建西山學(xué)校高二英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀課件 《B5_U5_Writing》(高中英語(yǔ)必修五第五單元寫(xiě)作)

1、本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是描述急救內(nèi)容或過(guò)程，在此類(lèi)寫(xiě)作中本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是描述急救內(nèi)容或過(guò)程，在此類(lèi)寫(xiě)作中要注意內(nèi)容的條理性和對(duì)過(guò)渡詞的合理使用。過(guò)渡詞在文章中要注意內(nèi)容的條理性和對(duì)過(guò)渡詞的合理使用。過(guò)渡詞在文章中有著承上啟下的作用。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用過(guò)渡詞可使文章讀起來(lái)連貫、有著承上啟下的作用。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用過(guò)渡詞可使文章讀起來(lái)連貫、流暢，有一氣呵成的感覺(jué)，為文章增添色彩。因此，掌握好過(guò)流暢，有一氣呵成的感覺(jué)，為文章增添色彩。因此，掌握好過(guò)渡詞是十分必要的。渡詞是十分必要的。 Writing必背詞匯1段落起始過(guò)渡詞：段落起始過(guò)渡詞：to begin with/first of all/in the first

2、 place 首先首先generally speaking 一般來(lái)說(shuō)一般來(lái)說(shuō)2表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：firstly., secondly., thirdly., besides首先首先， 其次其次， 再次再次，此外此外to begin with., moreover., finally.首先首先， 此外此外， 最后最后Hardly had.when.一一就就No sooner.than.剛剛就就3表時(shí)間順序：表時(shí)間順序：next, eventually（最終）（最終）, since then, afterwards, meanwhile, therefore, immediately4表因果關(guān)

3、系：表因果關(guān)系： accordingly ( 根據(jù)，于是根據(jù)，于是), for this reason, as a result, so， consequently（因此）（因此）, due/owing to (由于由于), because of, thus/therefore, so that5表對(duì)比關(guān)系：表對(duì)比關(guān)系： in contrast with（與（與相比）相比）, similarly, whereas ( 然然 而而 ), on the contrary（與（與相反）相反）, be different from, equally important ( 同樣重要同樣重要), on

4、the other hand6表舉例：表舉例：a case in point (恰當(dāng)?shù)睦忧‘?dāng)?shù)睦?, for example, namely/that is (這這就是說(shuō)就是說(shuō))7表強(qiáng)調(diào)：表強(qiáng)調(diào)：in fact, also, indeed, again, in particular 8表總結(jié)：表總結(jié)：in conclusion, in brief, to sum up, in a word, on the whole常用句式1Watch out for.當(dāng)心當(dāng)心2Follow these instructions.按這按這些操作指南些操作指南3Look out for/Be careful

5、 (not) to.and.小心小心和和4Dont.because.不要不要因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)?Make sure that./Take care to. 確保確保/注意注意6If it is./On condition that.go to hospital. 如果如果/一一旦旦去醫(yī)院。去醫(yī)院。7Mind you do. 麻煩你麻煩你8Cover.with. 用用覆蓋覆蓋9Never.決決不不常用寫(xiě)作模板Follow the instructions.First, .Second/Next, .Third/Then, .It is important/vital/necessary.Dont.Mind

6、 you/Make sure that.【小試牛刀】急救知識(shí)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪邪l(fā)揮著重要作用，適當(dāng)?shù)募本燃本戎R(shí)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪邪l(fā)揮著重要作用，適當(dāng)?shù)募本忍幚砜梢跃徑獠∪说耐纯?，甚至挽救一個(gè)人的生命。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以處理可以緩解病人的痛苦，甚至挽救一個(gè)人的生命。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下關(guān)于骨折的緊急處理知識(shí)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。下關(guān)于骨折的緊急處理知識(shí)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容1一旦有人骨折，先檢查病人有沒(méi)有流血，如果有，必須一旦有人骨折，先檢查病人有沒(méi)有流血，如果有，必須先止血。情況嚴(yán)重時(shí)要及時(shí)撥打先止血。情況嚴(yán)重時(shí)要及時(shí)撥打 120；2然后仔細(xì)檢查骨折部位，看是否有骨裂然后仔細(xì)檢查骨折部位，看是否有骨裂(fr

7、actured bones)現(xiàn)象，如果有，不要隨便動(dòng)病人的骨折部位；現(xiàn)象，如果有，不要隨便動(dòng)病人的骨折部位；3接下來(lái)用繃帶將骨折部位固定不動(dòng)。記住一定要細(xì)心，接下來(lái)用繃帶將骨折部位固定不動(dòng)。記住一定要細(xì)心，動(dòng)作要輕柔。動(dòng)作要輕柔。寫(xiě)作要求短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。 First aid is very important for us in daily life. So learning somefirst aid measures is necessary. For example, if someone breaks hisbone, what sh

8、ould we do?_參考范文： First aid is very important for us in daily life. So learning some first aid measures is necessary. For example, if someone breaks his bone, what should we do? Firstly, take care to stop bleeding. If the victim receives serious injuries, call 120 as soon as possible. Secondly, look carefully for any signs of fractured bones and if possible advise the injured person to keep the wounded part of the body as still as they can. Thirdly, use wide bandages above and below the fractured bone. Mind you always handle fractured bones with great care