鄭州留學(xué)中介：出國留學(xué)申請文書寫作務(wù)必做到詳略得當(dāng)

1、個人特點(興趣愛好、天賦、性格等等) 寫作要領(lǐng)服諾網(wǎng)介紹： 不要過度吹噓、夸大自己的成就，需要跳出來對自己做一個相對客觀的評價。Miracles happen, but they dont come easily.I fell in love with volleyball in junior high school in China. Maybe it was my passion, talent and a bit of work that made me stand out in this sport. I was selected as the leader of the class

2、team to prepare for the school volleyball competition. I made training plans, asked help from professional trainers, and after months of special drills and two weeks of competing events, our class eventually won the first prize. I was quite proud of myself about this. So when I got the chance to be

3、an exchange student in America, I immediately decided to try out for the local volleyball team, and was not surprised to see my name on the Varsity list. But there was a surprise in store for me I was put on the second string list.This is not happening to me, I prayed. But that was the harsh reality

4、, and the truth is: I cannot change reality if I dont change myself! So, at home, I made a self-resolution and listed out all the problems I had: First, I was not familiar with the English terms about volleyball, which would affect my performance if I could not understand the coach well. Second, som

5、e of the skills I used back in China were not defensive or offensive enough to deal with my new team of players. Then, goals set, I got to work!I gathered terms often used from professional volleyball websites and magazines, and learned about the names of different serves, sets, passes, and those of

6、 various attacks, blocks, and digs. After the term problem settled, the bigger mission came to me: to enhance my skills. My coach said my often used underhand serves were too easy to receive, so I should practice employing some more unpredictable serves like the jump float. He was caring enough to p

7、oint out every other problem I had in training. I always spent extra hours playing on the court after the training session ended for others, and practiced till my weaknesses mentioned by my coach were corrected.I was blessed to have such a helpful coach by my side to give me guidance, encouragement,

8、 and recognition, because after a lot of hard work, my skills were tremendously improved, and my team even selected me as the leader in the end. This was huge for me - from a second string player to a team leader!This could be counted as the most valuable experience I had during my exchange year in

9、America, because I did something extraordinary: made possible the seemingly impossibly. It gave me greater enjoyment than any award received in my academic studies, because thats what I always do well, but in volleyball, not quite a forte of mine, this achievement was certainly something larger than

10、 life!在我上初中的時候，我愛上了打排球?；蛟S我的熱情，天分和努力讓我在這項運(yùn)動中脫穎而出。我被選為班級排球隊的隊長來為接下來的校級排球比賽做 準(zhǔn)備。我制定了訓(xùn)練計劃，邀請專業(yè)的教練員指 導(dǎo)我們訓(xùn)練，經(jīng)過幾個月的特殊訓(xùn)練和兩個星期的激烈比賽，我們班最終獲得了比賽的冠軍。我對此感到非常自豪，因此當(dāng)我有機(jī)會作為交換學(xué)生到美國交流學(xué)習(xí)的 時候，我立即決定要參加當(dāng)?shù)嘏徘蜿牭脑囉?xùn)。不出意外，我在校隊的名單上看到了我的名字。然而讓我感到意外的是，我只被排在了二線隊員的名單中。我在心底祈禱：別讓這樣的事情發(fā)生在我身上。然而我不得不面對殘酷的現(xiàn)實，那就是如果我不改變自己我就無法改變現(xiàn)狀。因此，在家中，我進(jìn)

11、行了一次自 我反省，列出所有我存在的問題：首先， 我并不熟悉有關(guān)排球的英文術(shù)語，而如果我不能很好地理解教練的指導(dǎo)，那么我的表現(xiàn)就勢必會受到影響。第二，我在中國常用的一切技巧對我的新隊友來說進(jìn)攻和 防守的力度都不足夠。在設(shè)定了目標(biāo)之 后，我知道接下來我需要努力!我從專業(yè)的排球網(wǎng)站和雜志中收集了專業(yè)的排球術(shù)語，學(xué)習(xí)了各種發(fā)球、接球、傳球的方式，以及各種進(jìn)攻、防守和救球的專業(yè)表達(dá)。在過了術(shù)語關(guān)之 后，一個更大的問題擺在了我的面前：如何提升我 的排球技巧。教練對我說我經(jīng)常使用下手擊球，這讓我的球很容易被對方接起來，因此我應(yīng)該學(xué)著更多地使用其他擊球方式，比如跳飄球。我的教練對我十分用心，總是能夠指出我在

12、訓(xùn)練中暴露出的問題。我經(jīng)常在集體訓(xùn)練結(jié)束之后留在場地上加練幾個小 時，糾正教練指出的問題。我的教練對我?guī)椭艽?，他給予我很多的指導(dǎo)、鼓勵和認(rèn)可，對此我十分感激。經(jīng)過一段時間的刻苦訓(xùn)練，我的能力得到了巨大的提升， 我的隊友們更是選舉我作為隊長。這對我來說意義重大，誰能想到一個二線隊員竟然可以成長為全隊的隊長!這段經(jīng)歷可以說是我在美國交換學(xué)習(xí)的過程中最有意義的，因為我做了一件不平凡的事情，我完成了一件看似不可能完成的事情。它帶給我的快樂遠(yuǎn)大于 我在學(xué)習(xí)中取得的任何成就，因為在學(xué)習(xí)上，我一直成績優(yōu)秀，而排球卻并非我的專長，也正因如此，排球帶給我的成就感遠(yuǎn)大于其他。一篇好文往往不只單一地表達(dá)一個意思，而是多個層次意義的結(jié)合。文章既要保證將每個意義都講述清楚，同時也要注意有所側(cè)重，做到詳略得當(dāng)。范文 便很好地做到了這一點。文章想要表達(dá)兩個意義：一是奇跡