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1、中考英語作文萬能模板及萬能句型匯總一各檔評分標準:2分:條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大局部句子均有錯誤,且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5分:根本切題。表達思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。8分:根本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚,文字勉強連貫;語言錯誤相當多,有一些是嚴重錯誤。11分:切題。表達思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。14分:切題。表達思想清楚,文字通順、連貫,根本上無語言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。(注:白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,那么給0分,字數(shù)缺乏應酌情扣分。)二初中英語寫作六要素 一、審題要清看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容
2、。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。二、要點明確要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐一羅列出。三、列出提綱為寫作做好準備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下,形成提綱。四、寫順全文寫短文時要做到五個方面:1.防止使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。2.段落清楚,層次清晰,文章寧可平平淡淡,也不要漏洞百出。3.多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型??蛇m當多
3、使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)等復雜的句型。4.注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤;主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致;注意冠詞用法,例如:It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能寫成a;注意拼寫,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要寫成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意標點符號和大小寫。5.描寫人物時,要生動具體,可以選擇使用以下詞匯,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;顏色
4、:red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。6.上下文要連貫。同學們應把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法:并列關(guān)系:and,as well as,or;轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:but,yet,however;時間關(guān)系:when,while,after,before,t
5、hen,after that;因果關(guān)系:so,there-fore,asaresult;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that;列舉:for example ,such as;總結(jié)性:in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking五、沒有病句中考作文時,由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手:(1)看字數(shù)是否到達要求
6、,看有無遺漏要點。(2)看文體格式是否正確規(guī)范。(3)看有無語法或用詞上的錯誤。(4)看單詞拼寫、字母大小寫是否有錯,標點符號有無遺漏或用錯等等。(5)注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)、人稱是否上下文一致。六、先打草稿考試中,書面表達應做到先打草稿,寫完后多讀幾遍,檢查是否有誤,然后再抄到試卷上,注意字跡要工整,不涂、不畫、不勾不抹,防止不必要的扣分。 三各種題型的框架一、闡述主題題型要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進行論述 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義2 分析并舉例使其更充實二、解決方法題型要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 問題現(xiàn)狀 2 怎樣解決解決方案的優(yōu)缺點In recent days, we h
7、ave to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -說明的現(xiàn)狀Second, -舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -解決方法一。 For another -解決方法二。 Finally, -解決方法三。Personally, I believe that -我的解決方法。 Consequently, I
8、m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because -帶來的好處。三、說明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再比照事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度利或弊出發(fā),最后往往要求考生說明自己的態(tài)度或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A測.說明事物現(xiàn)狀 .事物本身的優(yōu)缺點或一方面 .你對現(xiàn)狀或前景的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follo
9、ws. First -的優(yōu)點之一。 Besides -的優(yōu)點之二。But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -的第一個缺點To make matters worse,-的第二個缺點Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore,I would like to
10、 -我的看法From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, -對前景的預測四、議論文的框架1 不同觀點列舉型 選擇型 There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文題目_. But it is well known that the opinion
11、concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 觀點一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, _原因一_.Furthermore, in the second place, _原因二_. So it goes without saying that _觀點一_.People,however,differin
12、their opinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _觀點二_. In their point of view, on the one hand, _原因一_. On the other hand, _原因二_. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat _觀點二_.As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _觀點一或二_.Itis not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more
13、_.2利弊型的議論文Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that_作文題目_. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _題目議題_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _優(yōu)點一_. And secondly _優(yōu)點二_.Just As a popular saying goes, “eve
14、ry coin has two sides, _討論議題_ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺點一_. In addition, _缺點二_.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _討論議題_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will d
15、efinitely make a better use of the _討論議題_.五、圖表作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetablegraph/picture/pie/chart, _作文題目的議題_ has been on rise/ decrease goesup/increases/drops/decreases,significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_ in _ to _ in _. From the
16、sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _. Ontheonehand, _. Ontheotherhand,_ isduetothefactthat _.Inaddition, _ isresponsiblefor _.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow _.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasons ar
17、ecommonly convincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,I hold the point of view that _. Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.六、現(xiàn)象說明文新中國成立以來發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化,Recently _,what amazes us most is_,it is ture that_.There are many reasons explaining_.The main reason is_.what is more_ly_.As a result_.Considering all ther
18、e,_.For one thing_,for another_.In Conclusion_.七、一種事物或現(xiàn)象負面意義傾向關(guān)于A的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會關(guān)注。如今在電視、報紙、日常生活的很多角落,都有越來越多的關(guān)于A的議論。給A一個精確恒定的定義并非易事,因為它的概念涉及了科學、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟、社會、自然等廣闊的領域。一般而言,我們可以這樣描述AA能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點,主要是由于它對個人、集體乃至整個世界都有著不容無視的不良影響。認 真分析后我們可以看到,A對社會/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先,從最直觀的角度來看,A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了這里參加一句針對性的話,如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡
19、。舉例。其次,從更深一層次上講,它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是,由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益,卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?,破壞了人類生存的法那么和空間。事實上,A的出現(xiàn)是社會開展和人類進步的產(chǎn)物,A所帶來的危害是人類進化過程中付出的代價。同時,A的產(chǎn)生來源于局部人們的自私和趨利性,他們看到的是淺薄和片面的利益,而從未從整個全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認識和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對此,我奉勸他們,跳出狹小的角落,用長遠和全局的眼光去重新審視A。而如今,我們已深受其害,要想消除它的危害,我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生,我們每一個人都應給予A高度的重視,用系統(tǒng)的和科學的方法去解決,
20、唯有這樣,防止它帶來更多損失,我們?nèi)祟惽斑M的腳步才會更加平穩(wěn),更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。八、說明原因型Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX 。It is clear that 1 。 If you 2 , as a result,your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you 3, failure will be followingwith you. It
21、 turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that 4. You dont have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know 5. It will exert a profound influence upon 6. With reference to my standpoint, I think 7。四常見文體的模板一、英語書信的常見寫作模板開頭局部:How nice to hear from
22、 you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.Im glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.Im pleased to hear that youre coming to China for a visit.Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.結(jié)尾局部:With best wishes.Im looking forward to your reply.Id appreciate it i
23、f you could reply earlier.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板呼語及開場白局部:Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.正文局部:All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.P
24、lease come on time and dont be late.結(jié)束語局部:Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope youll have a nice time here.Thats all. Thank you.三、議論文模板議論文模板導入:第1段:Recently weve had a discussion about whether we should.。. 導入話題Our opinions are divided on this topic.觀點有分歧正文:第2段:Most of t
25、he students are in favour of it.正方觀點Here are the reasons. First.。. Second.。. Finally.。.列出23個贊成的理由第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. 反方觀點Their reasons are as follows. In the first place.。. Whats more.。. In addition.。.列出23個反對的理由結(jié)論:第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the dis
26、advantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.個人觀點2.“A或者B類議論文模板:導入:第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文:第2段:There are many reason
27、s why I prefer A. The main reason is that 。. Another reason is that.。.贊同A的原因第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent.。. 列出12個B的優(yōu)勢結(jié)論:第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that 。.得出結(jié)論 議論
28、文模板:導入:第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個決定作為議論的話題As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. 亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對The reasons for this may be listed as follows. 過渡句,承上啟下正文:第2段:First of all.。. Secondly.。. Besides.。.列出23個贊成或反對的理由結(jié)論:第3段:In conclusion, I believe that.。. 照應第1段,構(gòu)成“總分總結(jié)構(gòu)4.“How to類議論文模板:導入:第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某種困難作
29、為議論的話題正文:第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all.。. Another way to solve the problem is 。. Finally.。.列出23個解決此類問題的辦法結(jié)論:第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should tak
30、e action to.。.強調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法四、圖表作文寫作模板The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題。 The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 。 This means that as 進一步說明。We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節(jié)一 。 After 動詞-ing 細節(jié)一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間緊跟著的變化 。 The figures also tell us that圖表細節(jié)二 。 In the co
31、lumn, we can see that accounts for 進一步描述。Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 結(jié)論。 The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that 給出原因。 / It is high time that we 發(fā)出建議。中考英語作文必備萬能句型10個1. 不用說 It goes without saying that = It is needless to say that = It is obvio
32、us that 例:不用說早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2. 在各種之中, Among various kinds of , /= Of all the , 例在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.3. 就我的看法;我認為In my opinion = To my mind = As far as I am concerned = I am of th
33、e opinion that 例:In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打電動玩具既花費時間也有害健康。4. 隨著人口的增加 With the increase/growth of the population, 隨著科技的進步 With the advance of science and technology, 例:With the rapid development
34、of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.隨著臺灣經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。5. 是必要的 It is necessary for sb. to do / that 是重要的 It is important/essential for sb. to do / that 是適當?shù)?It is proper for sb. to do / that 是緊急的 It is urgent for sb. to do / that 例:It is proper for us to keep the pu
35、blic places clean.It is proper that we should keep the public places clean.我們應當保持公共場所清潔。6. 花費 spend on sth. / doing sth. 例:我們不應該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.7. how 引導的感慨句例:那至少可以證明你很誠實。At least it will prove how honest you are.8
36、. 狀語從句A如果你不,你就會 If you don't , you'll 例If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.如果你不堅持努力工作,你就會失去這次時機。B如此 ,以至于 so that 例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.當時,我非常傷心,最后都想放棄了。C每當就每當我聽到我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear
37、, I cannot but feel excited.每當我做我就忍不住感到悲傷。 Whenever I do , I cannot but feel sad.每當我想到我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous.每當我遭遇我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with , I cannot but feel frightened.每當我看到我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see , I cannot but feel surprised.例:Whenever I think of the cle
38、an brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。9. 賓語從句我認為, / 我認為不 I think / I don't think that 我想知道是否 I won
39、der whether 例:He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.他認為我不應該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。10. Since + S + 過去式, S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中,他就一直很用功。英語作文萬能段首句1. 關(guān)于人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that
40、 _.2. 俗話說常言道,它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場合仍然適用。 There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 現(xiàn)在,它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先,;其次,。更為糟糕的是。Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. What makes things worse
41、is that_.4. 現(xiàn)在,很普遍,許多人喜歡,因為,另外而且。Nowadays,it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides,_. 5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 關(guān)于人們的觀點各不相同,一些人認為說,在他們看來, Peoples opinions about _ vary from perso
42、n to person. Some people say that _.To them,_. 7.已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當中,將引發(fā)劇烈的辯論。 has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way. 8.在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用。它給我們帶來了許多好處,但同時也引發(fā)一些嚴重的問題。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-da
43、y life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well9.人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題,這個問題變得越來越嚴重。Man is now facing a big problem () which is becoming more and more serious.10.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出。很顯然,但是為什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in th
44、e /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that while. Obviously, ,but why?11.如今,人們普遍認為.,但是我疑心.。Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that.12.如同硬幣的正反面,.也有積極的一面和消極的一面。Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to.13.近來,.的問題已經(jīng)成為人們注目的焦點。
45、 Currently, the issue of .has been brought to public attention14.隨著.的快速增長,.在日常生活中已經(jīng)變得越來越重要。Along with the rapid growth of .,.has become increasingly important in our daily15.由汽車(或xx引起的空氣和噪音污染對我們的健康造成了危害。Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.英語作文樣板1.最近,教育部啟動了“陽
46、光體育運動,建議全國中小學生每天堅持鍛煉一小時,讓他們健康、快樂。此項活動受到了廣闊學生的歡送。李華對所在學校學生參加活動的情況和反映做了一個調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下面調(diào)查表的內(nèi)容,幫他給學校寫一篇報道。詞數(shù):80詞左右。報道的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計入總詞數(shù)。Interviewees(調(diào)查對象) Activities Feelings Reasonsmost students play sports interested have lots of funmany stude
47、nts skip rope happy keep healthysome students take a walk relaxed enjoy fresh aira few students worried not enough time to finish their ho
48、meworkThe “Sunshine Sports program is very popular in our school . Nearly all the students take part in it . Most students are interested in playing sports . They think they have lots of fun . Many students are happy with skipping rope . They believe it can keep them healthy . Some students relax wh
49、ile they are taking a walk . In this way they can enjoy fresh air . However , a few students are still worried that they may not have enough time to finish their homework .No matter what students think about the program , they all like the idea , which will make them happy and keep them fit at the s
50、ame time .2.假設你是王欣,請根據(jù)以下信息寫一封信給校長,推薦九年級一班學生劉建為電腦俱樂部主席。因為他有很多很好的個人品質(zhì):1愛好廣泛如電腦、足球和籃球等;2聰明用功如合理安排時間、成績好等;3熱心助人,受同學們歡迎。480詞左右。Dear Sir,I think Liu Jian in Class 1 , Grade 9 is the best person to be chairman of the Computer Club .He is not only good at computer , but also good at football and basketball
51、. He is smart and always works hard and gets good grades . He knows how to use his time well to do things he likes . He is always ready to help others . We all like him , and he is very popular among us .I will be thankful if you can think about my advice carefully and make Liu Jian chairman of the
52、club .Best wishes,
53、 Yours,
54、; Wang Xin3.今年6月份中考結(jié)束后,你(Bruce)將迎來一個較為輕松的暑假。請把你的計劃寫成書信寄給(Tom)。信件內(nèi)容包含以下要點:
55、; 1堅持每天一小時的體育鍛煉;2與家人多交流,做些家務;3拜訪幾個老師與好友;4安排一趟3-5天的旅游。 5詞數(shù)不少于80。Dear Tom , My summer holiday is coming . I have made a plan for it . During the holiday , I want to go to visit some of my teachers and friends . In Grade Three , I was so busy that I had no time to talk with them . I will talk more with my family . I will try to do some housework . My parents work very hard . I should try
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