中考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)課件(共41張PPT)

1、中考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)：1.了解中考作文要求及命題特點(diǎn)。2.學(xué)習(xí)如何組織作文。3.如何有效地使用連詞。學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)：要求：要求學(xué)生在15-20分鐘內(nèi)，根據(jù)所給提示，寫一篇語(yǔ)言正確、內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句連貫的短文。詞數(shù)控制在80個(gè)左右。特點(diǎn)：1.貼近生活，貼近時(shí)代，有充分的思維空間。 2.多種題材，書信，畢業(yè)贈(zèng)言，事件描述，個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，且多種文體結(jié)合。1. 中考作文要求及命題特點(diǎn)2.如何組織作文。書面表達(dá)六步法審時(shí)態(tài)人稱體裁（記述文，應(yīng)用文，議論文）健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)

2、你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。Cross-question(審題)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle (體裁）：_Person（人稱）：_Tense（時(shí)態(tài)）: _調(diào)查報(bào)告，記敘文第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Before writing1. Cross-question(審題) List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or par

3、ents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (th

4、e key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. C

5、ome and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending)美(beautify) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.方法一:善用意義相近的 高級(jí)詞匯，避免行文單調(diào)英語(yǔ)寫作技巧Which is better?1.我希望你能幫助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2.我不吃垃圾食品。A I don

6、t eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3.我們應(yīng)該努力取得好成績(jī)。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.方法二 : 活用多種句型,避免重復(fù)和呆板,增加文采英語(yǔ)寫作技巧盡量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正確、通順為最基本要求Which is better?1 雨下得很大，所以他沒(méi)趕上校車。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He m

7、issed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，豐富文章內(nèi)容，增加說(shuō)服力。英語(yǔ)寫作技巧加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should c

8、oncentrate on our studies.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs 三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.The early bird catches

9、the worm.一天一個(gè)蘋果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。條條大路通羅馬。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.8.All roads lead to Rome.青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to

10、 protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “Al

11、l work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes t

12、hem relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at ho

13、me,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使行文連貫流暢

14、，使文章富有層次感。英語(yǔ)寫作技巧1.表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示遞進(jìn): besides, whats more 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果: because, since, for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示條件:if, unless 關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words)6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, while, on the one h

15、andon the other hand7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示順序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next, later, since then, from then on9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結(jié)論: all in a

16、ll, in a word, generally speaking, 關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.( )Its too late to

17、 invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastASteps of writing4. CheckingSpelling(拼寫)Tense(時(shí)態(tài))Grammar (語(yǔ)法)Handwriting(書寫)Punctuation marks(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào))Great changes in my hometown For the past several yea

18、rs, my hometownchanges a lot. In the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly and made little money. But now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money. Because its relaxing work in the factory, so they

19、 lead a happily life.Inworked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywereSteps of writing5. Copying out 書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整潔, 0分。第三檔（一般）： （69分）一、評(píng)分原則1.本題總分為15分，按五個(gè)檔次給分。2.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔 次，然后以該檔的要求來(lái)衡量，結(jié)合內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá) 綜合給定分?jǐn)?shù)。3.考生可以根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，加入自己的觀點(diǎn)。4.詞數(shù)少于80的，從總分中減去1分。5.拼寫錯(cuò)誤多，書寫較差以致影響表達(dá)，在所確定檔次的份上范圍內(nèi)，減去1分。 中考

20、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔（很好）：（1215分） 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，涵蓋了基本的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)， 或在發(fā)揮時(shí)內(nèi)容有新意或亮點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，行文連貫， 表達(dá)清楚。第二檔（好）：（912分） 完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，涵蓋了基本的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言 有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（一般）； （69分） 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，寫出了一些內(nèi)容；語(yǔ)言有 一些錯(cuò)誤，行文不夠連貫。第四檔（較差）： （35分） 未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出與內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些 單詞；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。第五檔（差）： （03分） 未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出與內(nèi)容有

21、關(guān)的一些 單詞；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤很多，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。范文1： 在日常生活中你主動(dòng)幫助你的父母做家務(wù)活嗎？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時(shí)所作家務(wù)以及你對(duì)家務(wù)的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做飯 4.洗衣服 5. 為花澆水 6. 飯后洗碗要求：語(yǔ)句通暢，語(yǔ)法正確。 不得逐句翻譯。范文1： 在日常生活中你主動(dòng)幫助你的父母做家務(wù)活嗎？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時(shí)所作家務(wù)以及你對(duì)家務(wù)的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做飯 4.洗衣服 5. 為花澆水 6. 飯后洗碗要求：語(yǔ)句通暢，語(yǔ)法正確。 不得逐句翻譯。_人稱時(shí)態(tài)事件觀點(diǎn)要

22、點(diǎn)審列如何列提綱：Para1:Para2:Para3:I think its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（綜述）開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，表明觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)提示，概述家務(wù)。給出評(píng)論，發(fā)表己見(jiàn)。e.g.I help my mother sweep the floor.擴(kuò)I help my mother cook the lunch .I always wash clothes for my

23、 family. I always wash dishes.擴(kuò)就是把提示信息擴(kuò)寫成句子，使文章內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，是寫作的關(guān)鍵步驟。I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning._做午飯洗衣服洗盤子連合理恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過(guò)渡句是英語(yǔ)寫作的制勝法寶。它們不僅使你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，銜接自然，而且可以有效地提升作文檔次。As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.For me, I often help my parents do housework. For example, I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morningDoing housework can not only make your parents happ