U3 Holiday fun(writing)

1、泰州市胡莊中心小學(xué) 王娟Unit 3Holiday funTime tunnel 第一段時(shí)光隧道isaredopickgocatchcanseeeatvisithavemakeMeet the black hole如何 脫離 黑洞 呢I _ to Shanghai for the holiday. I _ my aunt. Then, I _ to the Bund and visited the Shanghai Museum. I _ many interesting things. I _ very happy in this holiday.My National Day holida

2、ywentvisitedwentsawwas用時(shí)光隧道里的動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式幫助Liu Tao和Mike完成假期作文My National Day holidaywentpickedcaughtwentwasFor the holiday, I _ to a farm with my family. The farm is near Star Lake. We _ some oranges and _ fishing.I _ a big fish. It _ great fun. My National Day holidayI went to Shanghai for the holiday. I

3、visited my aunt. Then, I went to the Bund and visited the Shanghai Museum. I saw many interesting things. I was very happy in this holiday.For the holiday, I went to a farm with my family. The farm is near Star Lake. We picked some oranges and went fishing.I caught a big fish. It was great fun.My Na

4、tional Day holidayLiu Tao和Mike是從哪些方面去寫(xiě)他們的假期生活的？HolidayWhere?Who?How?What?How long?（多久）.I go to Guangzhou for the holiday.We have a big dinner.I buy some clothes.I eat a lot of food.It is great fun.Time tunnel 第二段時(shí)光隧道Meet the black holeMy winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went ther

5、e with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.用剛剛總結(jié)的幾個(gè)方面分析一下S

6、u Hai的假期生活Where?Who?How long?What?How?細(xì)心的你有沒(méi)有發(fā)現(xiàn)剛才隧道里出現(xiàn)的句子就來(lái)自這篇文章呢？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping

7、 centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Who?How long?What?How?Where?Where?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner

8、 together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my witer holiday. It was great fun.Who?How long?What?How?Where?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with m

9、y family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How long?What?How?Where

10、?Who?Who?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate

11、 a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How long?What?How?Where?Who?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I al

12、so went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.What?How?Where?Who?How long?How long?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my un

13、cle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.What?How?Where?Who?How long?stay there for. 在那兒待了. My winter holidayI went t

14、o Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter h

15、oliday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?What?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre.

16、 I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner togethere. I

17、went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?go to a theme park去一個(gè)主題公園 My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I wen

18、t there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food . I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Wher

19、e?Who?How long?What?How?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner togethere. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring

20、 Festival. I ate a lot of food . I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Where?Who?How long?What?How?Time tunnel 第三段時(shí)光隧道My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the s

21、econd day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day（在最后一天）, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Meet the black holeGood things never come ea

22、sy! 好事多磨！My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of

23、 food. I liked my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beauti

24、ful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I liked my winter holiday. It was great fun.對(duì)比蘇海的作文，發(fā)現(xiàn)有什么相同和不同？哪個(gè)更好？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed ther

25、e for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to

26、 Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring F

27、estival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.文章結(jié)構(gòu)Title 標(biāo)題 Beginning開(kāi)頭Main body正文Ending 結(jié)尾 Tip1: 一篇完整的文章首先要有標(biāo)題，然后包含開(kāi)頭、正文、結(jié)尾，分段說(shuō)明會(huì)更加清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)就如同語(yǔ)文作文的總分總。注意英語(yǔ)作文頂格寫(xiě)。你能給出其他的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾嗎？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed th

28、ere for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went

29、to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Sprin

30、g Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.內(nèi)容編排Tip2:文章中加入一些時(shí)間短語(yǔ)或是表示時(shí)間先后的副詞，可以使文章表達(dá)更加有條理。My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a

31、theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I vi

32、sited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great f

33、un.句子表達(dá)My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a

34、 lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of b

35、eautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.句子表達(dá)My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I

36、visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with

37、my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I

38、 ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.句子表達(dá)Tip3:巧妙地將兩句話合并或使用連詞，如and、but等，可以使句子更加完整連貫。My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took

39、 a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fu