2022雅思小作文重要句子

1、改錯“The bar chart illustrates that the trend of call types in the united kingdom for 8 years from 1995 to .The bar chart compares the figures in terms of minutes spent on telephone calls, splitted into three types.The bar chart gives information about telephone calls. It is in three types Local, Nati

2、onal & International and Mobile call minutes from year 1995 to in UK.The graph compares the total using time of 3 call types in the UK over a 7-year period from 1995.The bar chart presents the amount of phone calls in billion of minutes make in the UK over a period of seven years into the categories

3、 of local, national/international and mobile phone calls.ANSWERS FROM SIMON:The main problem seems to be that people are making the sentence too difficult. If you read my introduction (at the bottom of the lesson), its easier and clearer than the students sentences. Just keep your introduction as si

4、mple as possible!Here are the problems:1. The main problem is the use of the word that. Just write The bar chart illustrates the amount of time / the trend etc.2. The main mistake is the word splitted. The past and past participle are split and split.3. The main problem is the phrase It is in three

5、types Local. I dont know what the word it refers to.4. The phrase the total using time of 3 call types isnt right.5. Problems with make and into the categories.Posted by: Simon | HYPERLINK l comment-6a0120a5bb05d8970c01b7c81796cf970b Friday, February 19, at 11:27FROM SIMON (continued):Here are my su

6、ggestions:1) The bar chart illustrates trends in different types of phone call in the United Kingdom over 8 years from 1995 to .2) The bar chart compares figures for UK phone calls in terms of minutes spent on three types of call (between1995 and ).3) The bar chart gives information about three type

7、s of telephone call, namely local, national/international and mobile calls, in the UK between 1995 and .4) The chart compares the total number of minutes of three types of phone call made in the UK over a 7-year period from 1995.5) The bar chart shows the amount of time spent on three types of phone

8、 call, in billions of minutes, in the UK over a period of seven years.有關電話旳短語：amount of timethe time spent onin terms ofthroughout the periodthe period showna dramatic increase inincreased steadilyreached a peakthe figure forthe rise inCollocations related to the phone calls topic:local callsnationa

9、l callsinternational callsfixed line / landline callsmobile callsoverall usageuser minutes填空：Use these words:at, in, on, to, for, bythe amount of time spent _ people in the UK _ three different types of phone callcalls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, _ terms of overall usaget

10、he figures _ all three types of phone call increasedthe amount of time spent _ local calls using landlines had reached a peak _ 90 billion minutesthe rise _ the other two types of phone call continuedthe figure _ mobiles rose _ around 45 billion minutesby, on2. in3. for4. on, at5. in6. for, to練習題The

11、 chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-.Heres my suggested outline for a 4-paragraph report:Introduction:rewrite the question statement in your own words.Overview:point out which category was highest in each

12、 year, which was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.Details:compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened up until 1999.Details:notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a comparison of the figures in .開頭段：The

13、bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and .It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobi

14、le calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.Heres my full answer for the phone calls bar chart in HYPERLINK this lesson:The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and .It is clear that ca

15、lls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of ju

16、st over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily.By 1999, the

17、amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Subsequently, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued. In , the number of minutes of national / international landline calls passed 60 billion, while t

18、he figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.Dont use these phrases Can you see whats wrong with the phrases below? Try to explain the problem with each phrase, and suggest a better alternative.The bar chart displays the percentage of.A glance at the bar chart provided reveals.From an ove

19、rall perspective, it is clear from the evidence that.Looking at the pie chart, it is noticed that.As can be seen, the figures show that.練習題： Living alone in England by age and gender, Number of bedrooms in one-person households (England, )Introduction:Heres the question statement again:The bar chart

20、 below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in . The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.And heres my introduction:The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year . The bar

21、 chart compares figures for occupants age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.Overview / summary paragraph:Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age

22、categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.Heres my full report for the living alone charts from HYPERLINK this lesson.The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year . The bar chart compares figures f

23、or occupants age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common numbe

24、r of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males

25、were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes

26、 had four or more bedrooms.練習題：Fill each gap with one word.the amount of money spent _ coffeesales of coffee _ up in the UK saw by _ the highest levels of spendingrevenue _ bananas was highest in the UK, _ 15 millionthe year _ dramatic increases _ the money spenton2. went3. far4. from, at5. saw, in練習題： HYPERLINK I