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1、A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?(09.02.27 )騰哥高分高大上句型 現代擇業(yè)方式的重要特征之一就是人們在選擇自己喜歡的事業(yè)方面更加自由，靈活。One of the traits ofis that 的最重要的特征之一就是 鑫姐姐 One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy

2、more freedom and flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 人們常常陷入兩難的困境，是選擇高薪假期少的工作好，還是低薪假期多的工作好。 It often happens that modern job-seekers often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of choosing a handsomely paid job with less vacation or opting for a career with meager salary but less l

3、eisure hours. vacation 假期(美國);holiday 假期(英國)當提及到是應該選擇自由時間更多的工作，還是經濟回報更好的工作的時候，人們常常爭議不斷。 When it comes to the issue that whether people shall take up the job with more freedom or the counterpart that could provide them alluring economic incentive, there never lacks debates and arguments. 很多人喜歡高薪的工作，

4、盡管他們的自由時間減少。Many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even though they may have less time at their disposal. 理由高大上（支持）掙到很多的錢可以提高生活的質量(細節(jié)展開)接受精英教育 老年的時候，偷得余生半日閑假期來臨，在海邊的奢華度假勝地享受生活把薪水當成是幸福的一種象征高薪工作意味社會地位高，也贏得他人的尊敬，明星和企業(yè)家就是很好的例證。 Making large sums of money could improve ones quality of life to rec

5、eive fine education with high quality to smell the flowers when aging to take a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes take their salary as an indication of happiness A well-paid career indicates high social status，which could earn respect from others. Some top stars or financ

6、ially richer business leaders could serve as perfect examples. 低薪長假有更多的自由享受工作的靈活 有更加靈活的工作時間 有更多的時間留給家庭，朋友和愛好enjoy more freedom = have more time at ones own disposal enjoy the flexibility of work have a flexible working time have more time that could be allocated to their families， friends or hobbies

7、 整體高分作文1 引入主題：觀點不一2 細化背景：兩類朋友截然不同的生活方式3 擺出爭論焦點及個人觀點說到要做什么樣的工作時，人們的觀點不一。我的許多朋友渴望鮮有工作壓力又放松的生活方式；一些人甚至滿足于做農民，因為可以享受親近自然，享受舒適的生活方式，即使薪酬相對較低?？墒窃谖铱磥?，為了能過上快樂富足的生活，一份賺錢的工作無疑是非常必要的，又必然做出一些犧牲來換取高薪，比如不斷縮減的個人時間。 Peoples views vary from one another when they try to decide what kind of job they should do . Many o

8、f my friends yearn for a relaxed lifestyle with little work pressure ; some of them even feel quite satisfied to be merely a farmer for they can enjoy the closeness of nature and gentle pace of life despite the relatively lower pay. In my opinion , however , in order to lead a happy , opulent life,

9、a lucrative job is undoubtedly necessary and certain sacrifices, including diminished personal time , have to be made for it .1 主題句2 例子對比論證：高薪購優(yōu)品，低薪購廉價品5，6 例子對比論證：旅游方面的對比首先，高薪能使生活變得更便捷更美好。當購物時，我因為能夠負擔昂貴的東西而不用考慮第二好的物品。相反，收入較低的人總是很謹慎地購物，買二手貨，租房子而不買房。另外，許多可供選擇的娛樂活動能給生活增色。觀看新上演的表演，展覽，演唱會，戲劇將成為日常生活；相反，我的

10、一些住在農村的朋友幾乎負擔不起一年一兩次進城看劇的支出。旅游也將成為一大樂趣。我可以坐在頭等艙里，喝小口香檳，看電影，舒適地伸展腿。此種奢侈在狹窄悶熱的經濟艙里是不能享受的。In the first place , earning a high salary would make my life more convenient and enjoyable. When going shopping , I , being capable of affording goods of high quality, would never have to do with the second best

11、; on the contrary, those who are lower-paid would invariably shop with great discretion, buying second-hand things and renting apartments instead of purchasing. Additionally, there would be various kinds of entertainment available which would add color to my life. The latest shows, exhibitions, conc

12、erts, dramas would most certainly e daily practices; on the contrary, some of my acquaintances in the country can merely afford to come to town to visit the theatre once or twice a year. Traveling, too, would be a great pleasure. In the first class compartment of the plane, I would be able to sip ch

13、ampagne, watch films and stretch my legs with ease; such refinements would not be available in the economic compartments where it is cramped and stuffy.1 主題句2，3，4 進一步解釋論證1 其次，更高的收入將使我擁有更高的社會地位。2高薪的職業(yè)人群如會計，商人和建筑師經常比其他人更受青睞，更受尊重。3此外，我如果有一份風光的工作，能夠結識同樣上層擁有大量信息的人士。4同這些人接觸，我能增強學識，拓寬視野。Secondly , having a

14、 higher pay would enable me to enjoy a high social status. Accountants, businessmen and architects who have a higher pay often gain more love and respect from people than anyone else. Moreover, I , with a decent job, would be able to get acquainted with those who are equally in the upper class and o

15、f large information. By socializing with them, my knowledge can be enhanced; eyesight, broadened.1許多人，可能不是多數，強烈認為和家人相處更重要陪小孩玩，照顧父母。2 然而，沒有高薪的支撐，我們絕對不能負擔愛人昂貴的珠寶，孩子高價的玩具和父母舒適的大房子。Many people, if not most , are strong believers in the claim that it is more important for us to find more time to spend wi

16、th our family, playing with kids and taking care of parents. Nevertheless, without being well-paid ,we would by no means be able to afford dear jewellery for wives , expensive toys for kids and big, beautiful houses for the elderly to live.綜上所述，我們有理由相信：爭取高薪工作絕對比滿足于低收入工作對我們更好。Taking into account what is discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that it is categ