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1、A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?(09.02.27 )騰哥高分高大上句型 現(xiàn)代擇業(yè)方式的重要特征之一就是人們?cè)谶x擇自己喜歡的事業(yè)方面更加自由，靈活。One of the traits ofis that 的最重要的特征之一就是 鑫姐姐 One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy

2、more freedom and flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 人們常常陷入兩難的困境，是選擇高薪假期少的工作好，還是低薪假期多的工作好。 It often happens that modern job-seekers often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of choosing a handsomely paid job with less vacation or opting for a career with meager salary but less l

3、eisure hours. vacation 假期(美國(guó));holiday 假期(英國(guó))當(dāng)提及到是應(yīng)該選擇自由時(shí)間更多的工作，還是經(jīng)濟(jì)回報(bào)更好的工作的時(shí)候，人們常常爭(zhēng)議不斷。 When it comes to the issue that whether people shall take up the job with more freedom or the counterpart that could provide them alluring economic incentive, there never lacks debates and arguments. 很多人喜歡高薪的工作，

4、盡管他們的自由時(shí)間減少。Many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even though they may have less time at their disposal. 理由高大上（支持）掙到很多的錢可以提高生活的質(zhì)量(細(xì)節(jié)展開(kāi))接受精英教育 老年的時(shí)候，偷得余生半日閑假期來(lái)臨，在海邊的奢華度假勝地享受生活把薪水當(dāng)成是幸福的一種象征高薪工作意味社會(huì)地位高，也贏得他人的尊敬，明星和企業(yè)家就是很好的例證。 Making large sums of money could improve ones quality of life to rec

5、eive fine education with high quality to smell the flowers when aging to take a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes take their salary as an indication of happiness A well-paid career indicates high social status，which could earn respect from others. Some top stars or financ

6、ially richer business leaders could serve as perfect examples. 低薪長(zhǎng)假有更多的自由享受工作的靈活 有更加靈活的工作時(shí)間 有更多的時(shí)間留給家庭，朋友和愛(ài)好enjoy more freedom = have more time at ones own disposal enjoy the flexibility of work have a flexible working time have more time that could be allocated to their families， friends or hobbies

7、 整體高分作文1 引入主題：觀點(diǎn)不一2 細(xì)化背景：兩類朋友截然不同的生活方式3 擺出爭(zhēng)論焦點(diǎn)及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)說(shuō)到要做什么樣的工作時(shí)，人們的觀點(diǎn)不一。我的許多朋友渴望鮮有工作壓力又放松的生活方式；一些人甚至滿足于做農(nóng)民，因?yàn)榭梢韵硎苡H近自然，享受舒適的生活方式，即使薪酬相對(duì)較低。可是在我看來(lái)，為了能過(guò)上快樂(lè)富足的生活，一份賺錢的工作無(wú)疑是非常必要的，又必然做出一些犧牲來(lái)?yè)Q取高薪，比如不斷縮減的個(gè)人時(shí)間。 Peoples views vary from one another when they try to decide what kind of job they should do . Many o

8、f my friends yearn for a relaxed lifestyle with little work pressure ; some of them even feel quite satisfied to be merely a farmer for they can enjoy the closeness of nature and gentle pace of life despite the relatively lower pay. In my opinion , however , in order to lead a happy , opulent life,

9、a lucrative job is undoubtedly necessary and certain sacrifices, including diminished personal time , have to be made for it .1 主題句2 例子對(duì)比論證：高薪購(gòu)優(yōu)品，低薪購(gòu)廉價(jià)品5，6 例子對(duì)比論證：旅游方面的對(duì)比首先，高薪能使生活變得更便捷更美好。當(dāng)購(gòu)物時(shí)，我因?yàn)槟軌蜇?fù)擔(dān)昂貴的東西而不用考慮第二好的物品。相反，收入較低的人總是很謹(jǐn)慎地購(gòu)物，買二手貨，租房子而不買房。另外，許多可供選擇的娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)能給生活增色。觀看新上演的表演，展覽，演唱會(huì)，戲劇將成為日常生活；相反，我的

10、一些住在農(nóng)村的朋友幾乎負(fù)擔(dān)不起一年一兩次進(jìn)城看劇的支出。旅游也將成為一大樂(lè)趣。我可以坐在頭等艙里，喝小口香檳，看電影，舒適地伸展腿。此種奢侈在狹窄悶熱的經(jīng)濟(jì)艙里是不能享受的。In the first place , earning a high salary would make my life more convenient and enjoyable. When going shopping , I , being capable of affording goods of high quality, would never have to do with the second best

11、; on the contrary, those who are lower-paid would invariably shop with great discretion, buying second-hand things and renting apartments instead of purchasing. Additionally, there would be various kinds of entertainment available which would add color to my life. The latest shows, exhibitions, conc

12、erts, dramas would most certainly e daily practices; on the contrary, some of my acquaintances in the country can merely afford to come to town to visit the theatre once or twice a year. Traveling, too, would be a great pleasure. In the first class compartment of the plane, I would be able to sip ch

13、ampagne, watch films and stretch my legs with ease; such refinements would not be available in the economic compartments where it is cramped and stuffy.1 主題句2，3，4 進(jìn)一步解釋論證1 其次，更高的收入將使我擁有更高的社會(huì)地位。2高薪的職業(yè)人群如會(huì)計(jì)，商人和建筑師經(jīng)常比其他人更受青睞，更受尊重。3此外，我如果有一份風(fēng)光的工作，能夠結(jié)識(shí)同樣上層擁有大量信息的人士。4同這些人接觸，我能增強(qiáng)學(xué)識(shí)，拓寬視野。Secondly , having a

14、 higher pay would enable me to enjoy a high social status. Accountants, businessmen and architects who have a higher pay often gain more love and respect from people than anyone else. Moreover, I , with a decent job, would be able to get acquainted with those who are equally in the upper class and o

15、f large information. By socializing with them, my knowledge can be enhanced; eyesight, broadened.1許多人，可能不是多數(shù)，強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)為和家人相處更重要陪小孩玩，照顧父母。2 然而，沒(méi)有高薪的支撐，我們絕對(duì)不能負(fù)擔(dān)愛(ài)人昂貴的珠寶，孩子高價(jià)的玩具和父母舒適的大房子。Many people, if not most , are strong believers in the claim that it is more important for us to find more time to spend wi

16、th our family, playing with kids and taking care of parents. Nevertheless, without being well-paid ,we would by no means be able to afford dear jewellery for wives , expensive toys for kids and big, beautiful houses for the elderly to live.綜上所述，我們有理由相信：爭(zhēng)取高薪工作絕對(duì)比滿足于低收入工作對(duì)我們更好。Taking into account what is discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that it is categ