貼近時事應(yīng)用寫作-新高考導(dǎo)向研究協(xié)作體-高二統(tǒng)測應(yīng)用文分析

1、貼近時事， 應(yīng)用寫作浙工大附中 郭燁輝浙江省新高考導(dǎo)向研究協(xié)作體2021學(xué)年高二統(tǒng)測應(yīng)用文分析素材原題呈現(xiàn)第一節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分) “雙減”政策（the policy of double-lightening the burden），即有效減輕義務(wù)教育階段學(xué)生過重作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)和校外培訓(xùn)負(fù)擔(dān)。一時間，學(xué)生和家長對即將到來輕松的學(xué)業(yè)反而無所適從。你校英文報刊正在征稿，請你就實施“雙減”政策后學(xué)生如何規(guī)劃自己的學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活寫一篇短文。要求：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Its really a wonderful news that the policy

2、of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of their time after school.范文欣賞Its really a wonderful news that the policy of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new

3、challenge of making the best of their time after school. First of all, make various plans and complete the contents based on the plan alone. For example, read a variety of books, and constantly expand your reading in order to make up for the lack of reading. Besides, develop your new interest in som

4、e subjects which are unfamiliar to you. Some new areas will broaden your horizons and increase your knowledge. Last but not least, participate in various sports activities and promote physical and mental health through physical exercise. I think if you want to study better, you should have a good bo

5、dy first.In a word , the policy of double-lightening the burden can help us plan our life better.標(biāo)志雙減Relevant materials時政熱點名詞政策措施 ban academic agencies from raising capital through IPOs.禁止教培公司上市集資 set guidance prices for off-campus training courses uphold the non-profit nature of after-school tutori

6、ngreform the score-oriented education system改革唯分?jǐn)?shù)論的教育體制rotate teachers and principals among schools to improve the teaching quality and promote balanced distribution of educational resources.教師和校長輪換制The tutoring boom has worried Beijing as it has put heavy workload on students and financial burden o

7、n parents.reduce students academic burden and households education spending。Students were bogged down by excessive school work.這三句都闡述了當(dāng)前的教育導(dǎo)致學(xué)生課業(yè)壓力大，家庭教育支出增加，導(dǎo)致家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力激增。表層原因解讀The authority was also concerned that the spending spree on after-school academic training may widen education disparity and

8、stoke social turmoil.擴(kuò)大教育差距，引發(fā)社會動蕩。The government decided to kill the sector because it had created many problems ranging from education inequality to low birth rates.由于教培行業(yè)引起了諸如教育不公和低出生率等問題，政府決定嚴(yán)打教育培訓(xùn)行業(yè)。Governments found ideological problems in private tutoring courses involving foreigners.政府還發(fā)現(xiàn)在有外

9、教授課的補習(xí)中還存在著一些意識形態(tài)問題。Crammed study schedules not only lead to inefficiency but also mean students get less or no time for playing sports or doing physical exercise or taking rest, resulting in a rising rate of obesity and myopia among Chinese children.學(xué)習(xí)課程安排的滿滿當(dāng)當(dāng)不僅會降低學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)效率，而且意味著學(xué)生們很少有時間或者根本沒有時間運動或休

10、息。這也會導(dǎo)致中國學(xué)生的肥胖率和近視率上升。各方反應(yīng)Group education anxiety has reared its head(抬頭，出現(xiàn)).Receive intense resistance from parents who were worried the changes would mean worse scores on the gaokao.Buckets of ink were spilled analysing what the rules signal about the Chinese education.在描寫社會熱點事件的時候，可以運用這一句型。She co

11、uld see the force of change crashing through the industry雙減政策引起整個行業(yè)的震蕩?？偨Y(jié)：crash through, ripple through, cascade through表示“影響、波及”The Chinese government crackdown on private tutoring was like watching an avalanche from a nearby mountain. 觀望中國政府整頓教培行業(yè)，仿佛是眼看著臨近雪山雪崩。總結(jié)：運用比喻來形象化表達(dá)“影響”，句型The effect was li

12、ke an earthquake hitting主體，sthwas like watching an avalanche from a nearby mountainFor parents and tutors in China, the crackdown set off a scramble as parents tried to navigate the new rules or rush to hire private tutors.The Sword of Damocles hangering over them is the gaokao, Chinas notoriously d

13、ifficult one-size-fit-all university entrance exam.優(yōu)劣分析Students can breathe a sigh of relief.They will not be pushed to study all the time for tests anyone, and invest their free time in hobbies and self-exploration.The restrictions on after-school classes could undermine fairness in education, as c

14、hildren of affluent families that can afford private tutors will have a big edge over their less fortune peers.edge在此處是“優(yōu)勢”的意思，A has a big edge over B, A相對于B占極大的優(yōu)勢地位。另外常用的表達(dá)還有cutting edge，意為“事物發(fā)生的前沿，領(lǐng)先階段，優(yōu)勢”E.g The real cutting edge has shifted to a new form: short Web videos.Anything negative?Under

15、 heavy pressure, the retention 滯留 of practitioners in the education and training industry has become the focus of everyones attention.原創(chuàng)命題1假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack聽說中國正在實行“雙減”政策，來信詢問新政策下中國的中學(xué)生們應(yīng)如何規(guī)劃自己的學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回信。內(nèi)容包括1. 你的個人建議；2. 你對該政策的感想。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2. “雙減”政策：the policy of “double-lightening

16、the burden”3. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答圖片Dear Jack,I m writing to share with you how to plan our study and after-school life under the policy of “double-lightening the burden”.Firstly, make full use of the time at school. Concentrating on our lessons and solving all the problems in time can help us better m

17、anage our time. Secondly, finish homework effectively, which helps us develop the ability of being attentive. Lastly, take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich our after-school life and gain some useful life skills.Hopefully, the policy will relieve our study pressure, helping us grow up

18、 healthily and happily.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的美國朋友Jack寫一份回信，關(guān)于他詢問在“雙減”新政策下中國的中學(xué)生們應(yīng)如何規(guī)劃自己的學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活。原創(chuàng)命題2自7月24日國家頒布雙減政策以來，節(jié)假日校外培訓(xùn)紛紛停止。與此同時，9月以來各校校內(nèi)又紛紛進(jìn)行周末補課。針對此現(xiàn)象，某英語學(xué)習(xí)論壇版主發(fā)布了一個主題為“Should high school students have lessons at weekends?”的帖子。請你根據(jù)以下要點回帖發(fā)表自己的看法。1. 你的觀點 2. 陳述理由 3. 結(jié)論注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80左右圖片2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文I dont think we should attend classes at weekends. Here are my reasons.