中考英語寫作指導(書面表達)話題3-人物介紹課件

1、話題3 人物介紹命題探索教材鏈接三階攻關目錄寫作練兵話題3 人物介紹命題探索教材鏈接三階攻關目錄寫作練兵分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針對“人物介紹”這一話題，主要考查1次：2017年從“自身的優(yōu)點、如何提升自我和將來的夢想”三方面介紹自己。再結合全國近年中考真題可知，此話題通常有以下命題角度：介紹個人基本信息、外貌特征、性格特點、興趣愛好、夢想及如何實現(xiàn)夢想等。命題探索分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針對“人物介紹”這人教課本中涉及“人物介紹”這個話題的單元有：教材鏈接人教課本中涉及“人物介紹”這個話題的單元有：教材鏈接(2017河北) 英語課上，同學們正在準備舉行以“真實

2、的自我”為主題的演講活動。請你以李華的名義寫一篇演講詞，向同學們介紹一下自己。 典例剖析審主題：真實的自我一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句審文體：應用文審人稱：第一人稱(2017河北) 英語課上，同學們正在準備舉行以“真實的自提示：(1)What are your strong points?(2)How do you improve yourself? (3)What is your dream for the future?要點2：如何提升自己；時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句要點3：夢想(積極正向); 時態(tài)：一般將來時要點1：優(yōu)點；時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時提示：(

3、1)What are your strong poi要求：(1)演講詞須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。(2)演講詞中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數80個左右(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。Hello, everyone! Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself._ Thanks for your attention!一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句要求：(1)演講詞須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。一二【句子擴寫范例】1. My friend Carol is kind and funn

4、y.My best friend Carol is really kind and very funny.八(上)Unit 3 P212. Im shy.Im shy so its not easy for me to make friends.八(上)Unit 3 P211角度介紹性格特點一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【句子擴寫范例】1角度介紹性格特點一二3. I know she cares about me.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen.八(上)Unit 3 P21一階 審好題三階練語

5、段&成篇章二階寫好句3. I know she cares about me.一【句子擴寫】1. My friend Lily is kind.(擴寫具體表現(xiàn)) _2. Jack used to be shy.(擴寫具體表現(xiàn)) _ _My friend Lily is really kind and she often helps others.Jack used to be shy. His face always turned red when he talked to girls.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【句子擴寫】My friend Lily is really3. O

6、ur teacher is very strict with us.(擴寫原因) _ _4. Wang Yong is a brave boy.(擴寫結果) _一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Our teacher is very strict with us because she or he wants us to be a better person.Wang Yong is a brave boy so he isnt afraid of the dark.一二Our teacher is very strict w【好句范例】1. My parents want me to

7、be a doctor, but Im not sure about that.八(上)Unit 6 P422. As for my dream, I want to be an actor and play different roles in the TVs or the movies.3. Id like to be a scientist, because I like science very much.2角度介紹夢想、生活目標一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【好句范例】2角度介紹夢想、生活目標一二【句子仿寫】1. 我想成為一名科學家，但是我媽媽希望我成為一名老師。 _2.

8、至于我的夢想，我想成為一名護士。 _3. 我想成為一名導游，因為我喜歡環(huán)游世界。 _ _ I want to be a scientist, but my mother wants me to be a teacher.As for my dream, I want to be a nurse.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句I would like to be a guide, because I like traveling around the world.【句子仿寫】 I want to be a scientis【好句范例】1. Im going to practice ba

9、sketball every day.八(上)Unit 6 P412. We are going to take singing lessons.3. Im going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers.八(上)Unit 6 P434. Im going to take guitar lessons. I really love music.3角度如何實現(xiàn)目標一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【好句范例】3角度如何實現(xiàn)目標一二【句子仿寫】1. 我將堅持做運動。 _2. 我將每天跑步。我真的很喜歡運動。

10、_3. 我將每天練習說英語并寫下自己的感受。 _ _Im going to keep on doing exercise.Im going to run everyday. I really love sports.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Im going to practice speaking English every day and write down how I feel.【句子仿寫】Im going to keep on doi【句子升格范例】1. I admire Wang Yang very much.(用one of) Wang Yang is one of

11、 the people I admire most. 2. My mother is a great person.(用最高級) My mother is the greatest person Ive ever known.3. Mr. Wang is my English teacher. Mr.Wang is very humorous. (用定語從句) Mr. Wang is my English teacher who is very humorous.4角度介紹基本信息一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【句子升格范例】4角度介紹基本信息一二【句子升格】1. I admire

12、Mr.Liu very much.(用one of升格) _2. My father is a great person. (用最高級升格) _3. Let me introduce something about Lucy. Lucy is my best friend.(用定語從句升格) _Mr.Liu is one of the people I admire most. My father is the greatest person(that) Ive ever known.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Let me introduce something about Lu

13、cy who is my best friend.【句子升格】Mr.Liu is one of the peo【句子升格范例】1. He has brown hair. He wears glasses. (用and連接) He has brown hair and wears glasses. .七(下)Unit 9 P502. My sister has a round face. She has bright eyes. (用with連接) My sister has a round face with bright eyes.3. He used to be thin. He is s

14、trong now. (用感嘆句) He used to be thin, but how strong he is now!九(全)Unit 4 P265角度介紹外貌特征一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句【句子升格范例】5角度介紹外貌特征一二【句子仿寫】1. 她又高又漂亮，有一頭長長的卷發(fā)。 _2. 他很帥并且有一雙漂亮的藍眼睛。 _3. 露茜過去很安靜，但現(xiàn)在她多外向??！ _4. 我的媽媽高鼻梁，小嘴巴。 _She is tall and beautiful with long curly hair. He is very handsome and has beautiful blu

15、e eyes.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Lucy used to be quiet, but how outgoing she is now!My mother has a high nose and a small mouth.【句子仿寫】She is tall and beautifu My English teacher is a very kind person(性格1). _ (具體表現(xiàn)1). He is also hardworking(性格2). This makes him _(結果). He has helped almost every student in

16、our class(具體表現(xiàn)2). _(具體表現(xiàn)3). With his help, I make great progress in my subjects and my school life becomes easier and more colorful.He always has a big smile on his face一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句練語段語段練習1介紹他人性格 one of the best teachers in our schoolHe helped me with my English My English teacher is I want

17、_(自己的夢想)when I grow up. _(原因1). _(原因2). If I achieve my dream, I will _(自己的感受)to be a teacher一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 語段練習2介紹自己的夢想Because I like playing with childrenbeing a teacher is also my mothers dreamfeel very happyBesides, I want _ When I go to senior high school, I will _(做法1). I think it is goo

18、d for my future life(好處1). I will _(做法2). Its _(好處2). Besides, I will _(做法3). I believe my senior high school life will be colorful.study hard一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句語段練習3如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標spend more time helpful to enrich my lifejoin some clubs on my study When I go to senior highIm _(介紹自己的姓名)and Im very happy

19、to stand here to talk about myself. Im a kind and helpful person(介紹自己的優(yōu)點1). _(針對自己優(yōu)點的具體表現(xiàn)1). I can sing and dance so well(介紹自己的優(yōu)點2) that _ (具體表現(xiàn)2)一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句語段練習4介紹基本信息Li HuaIm always ready to help others when theyre in troubleI often give performances at our school partiesIm _(介紹自己的姓名)and

20、Im一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章Hello,everyone! Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself. Im a kind and helpful person. Im always ready to help others when theyre in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school parties.一二成篇章Hello,everyone!一階 審好題三階

21、練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework. It is good for my future life to do housework. As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. Ill make friends with my students. I want to teach them everything I know! Thanks for your attention!一二 When I think back wh