2022-2023學(xué)年雙語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)綜合能力檢測(cè)六（讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

2022-2023學(xué)年雙語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)-綜合能力檢測(cè)六（讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）試題原題第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。28-year-oldLukeWesleywasarestaurantsmanager.Andhewastall,energeticandkind-hearted.Oneevening,hesawanold,thinmaninawheelchairentertherestaurantandstopbythewindow.Afteralongtime,themanorderednothing.Lukeapproachedhimandasked,“Sir,wouldyoulikesomecoffeeandasandwich?”Theoldmanhadhiseyesfixedoutsidethewindow.Itseemedlikehewaslookingforsomeoneorsomethingtoappearoutofthedarknight.ThenhelookedatLukeandsaidhewasfine.Sincetherestaurantshouldhaveclosedanhourearlier,Lukeinformedthemanthatitwasbeyondclosingtime.“Oh,Fmsorry,“theoldmanapologized."It'sjustthatthisplaceremindsmeofmanymemories…mywifeand…"Lukewascluelessaboutwhatthemanwassaying.Hesawtheman'seyesfilledwithtears.“MynameisAndrewSmith.Iwasaregularvisitorhere40yearsago,“themancontinued."ItwasinthisrestaurantthatImetmybelovedPriscilla.Shelovedtowatchmountainsjustlikeme.”AbsorbedinAndrew,sstory,Lukekeptlistening.Asitturnedout,AndrewandPriscilla'sloveformountainsbroughtthemtogether."Istillrememberthemomentsheagreedtomarryme!”Andrewcried."Butthen,sheleftmeanddiedalone.”Lukecomfortedhimandcuriouslyasked,“SowhathappenedtoPriscilla?”“Wewerecelebratingourfirstweddinganniversaryandwereonourwaytoamountain,“Andrewbegan."Duringthejourney,aspeedingtruckhitus.”AndrewrevealedPriscilladiedafterthecrashwhilehesurvivedbutlosthisabilitytowalk.AndAndrewsaidtheyhadnochildren.Sad,LukepattedAndrewonhisshouldertocomforthim."MyonlywishistogoupthatmountainonelasttimewithPriscilla'sphoto.Shereallywantedtohikethatmountain,“Andrewpainfullysaid.Consideringhisphysicalconditions,Andrewknewwhathewantedwasimpossible.ButLukethoughtotherwise.Thatevening,LukedroppedAndrewathisaddressandpromisedtovisithimoncetheweathercleared.Paragraph1:Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.Paragraph2:LukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthe/nountaintop.試題分析1.人物：Luke:>28-year-oldLukeWesleywasarestaurantsmanager.Andhewastall,energeticandkind-hearted.Andrew：“MynameisAndrewSmith.Iwasaregularvisitorhere40yearsago,“themancontinued."ItwasinthisrestaurantthatImetmybelovedPriscilla.Shelovedtowatchmountainsjustlike，，me.“Istillrememberthemomentsheagreedtomarryme!”Andrewcried."Butthen,sheleftmeanddiedalone.”“Wewerecelebratingourfirstweddinganniversaryandwereonourwaytoamountain,“Andrewbegan.uDuringthejourney,aspeedingtruckhitus.”AndrewrevealedPriscilladiedafterthecrashwhilehesurvivedbutlosthisabilitytowalk.AndAndrewsaidtheyhadnochildren.“MyonlywishistogoupthatmountainonelasttimewithPriscilla'sphoto.Shereallywantedtohikethatmountain,“Andrewpainfullysaid..情節(jié)：Luke,28歲，是一個(gè)飯店的老板，個(gè)高精力充沛心地好。有一天，他看到有一位瘦瘦的老人坐著輪椅進(jìn)了他的飯店，等了好久也不見(jiàn)老人點(diǎn)餐。于是，他好奇地走過(guò)去，與老人聊了起來(lái)。這位叫Andrew的老人，說(shuō)在40年前，他是這家飯店的老客，正是在這家店里，他認(rèn)識(shí)了也同樣熱愛(ài)大山的姑娘Priscilla并結(jié)了婚。但是，在一次前往登山的途中，發(fā)生了車(chē)禍，后面的那輛開(kāi)的飛快的卡車(chē)直接撞了上來(lái),Priscilla被撞死，而他雖活了下來(lái)，但失去了走路的能力。他無(wú)兒無(wú)女，唯一的愿望是有一天能帶著心愛(ài)的Priscilla的照片去登上那座一直沒(méi)能登上的大山。聽(tīng)完Andrew的故事，當(dāng)天晚上Luke去了Andrew的住所，答應(yīng)當(dāng)天氣轉(zhuǎn)好的時(shí)候，他會(huì)再次去見(jiàn)他。.主題：“人與社會(huì)”如何幫助老人Andrew實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望.續(xù)寫(xiě)安排：第一段：Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.①（與前一句銜接）Andrew的反應(yīng)②簡(jiǎn)單溝通登山計(jì)劃，驅(qū)車(chē)前往山腳③（與下一段開(kāi)頭句銜接）成功登頂?shù)诙危篖ukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthemountaintop.①（做好與開(kāi)頭句的銜接）安放好Andrew后，Luke的表現(xiàn)②Andrew接下去做了什么？（這是有心的Luke特意安排Andrew和Priscilla40周年紀(jì)念日這天登山）③從Andrew的身上，Luke學(xué)到了很多，從此他倆成了一生的朋友。下水作文Paragraph1:Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.Neverhadhethoughttheyoungman,Luke,wouldkeephispromise.Afterabriefdescriptionofthemarvelousplan,LukewentstraighttohelpAndrewintohisvehiclewithabackpackonhisback.Alltheway,theychattedasiftheywerelonglostfriends.Anhour'sdriveledthemtothefootofthemountain.Allwentsmoothlyasplanned.Energeticandkind-heartedLukecarriedAndrewon,goingupwithsteadyandfirmsteps.Nothingwasbetterthanmakingittothetop.(86words)Paragraph2:LukegentlyloweredAndrewtoaflatrockonthemountaintop.Stilloutofbreath,Lukefeltitwasallworthit,fascinatedbythebeautifulsceneryandthousandsofthanksfromAndrew.Amoment'ssilence,AndrewputthephotoofhisbilovedPriscillaonthetopofarock,tellingherhehadfulfilledtheirwonderfulwishandhowhesurvivedthosedarkyears,tearsinhiseyes.Indeed,itwastheir39weddinganniversarythatday!Andrew,sbitterbutthebeautifulmemorywasabookworthLuke'scarefulreading.Fromthenon,alifelongfriendshiplasted.(87words)參考范文Dayslater,Andrewansweredthedoorbell,surprisedtoseeLukestandingoutside.AfterLukeexplainedthereasonforhisvisit,Andrewwassotouched.Asthetwodrovetothemountain,AndrewsilentlyweptbecauseitwasthesameroutehehadtakenwherehelostPriscillaintheaccident.Whentheyarrivedatthefootofthemountain,LukecarriedAndrewonhisback.Theyarrivedatthetoptwohourslate.Thebirdsflyinghi