和高考真題學(xué)寫作-敘事：難忘的經(jīng)歷 講義-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

和高考真題學(xué)寫作--敘事：難忘的經(jīng)歷講義2022年高考英語真題（新高考一卷）的完形填空是一篇記事類的記敘文?；貞浟藘纱坞y忘的宿營經(jīng)歷。閱讀完全文后，可以看出作者的思路很有條理，時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件都交代的很明確。行文過程中，人物動作、心理、天氣環(huán)境都有適度描寫。語言簡練，不拖沓。我們先一起看一下原文：Myhusband,ourchildrenandIhavehadwonderfulcampingexperiencesoverthepasttenyears.Someofourmemoriesarefunny,especiallyfromtheearlyyearswhenourchildrenwerelittle.Once,wecampedalongChalkCreek.Iwasworriedthatour15-month-oldboywouldfallintothecreek(小溪).Itiedaropearoundhiswaisttokeephimneartoourspot.Thatlastedabouttenminutes.Hewasuncomfortable,andhiscryingletthewholecampgroundknowit.Soinsteadoftyinghimup,Ijustkeptacloseeyeonhim.Itworked---hedidn’tendupinthecreek.Mythree-year-old,however,did.Anothertime,werentedaboatinVallecitoLake.Theskywasclearwhenweheadoff,butstormsmoveinfastinthemountains,andthisonequicklyinterruptedourpeacefulmorningtrip.Thewindpickedupandthunderrolled.Myhusbandstoppedfishingtostartthemotor.Nothing.Hetriedagain.Noluck.Wewerestuckinthemiddleofthelakewithadeadmotor.Asweallsattherehelplessly,afishermanpulledup,threwusaropeandtowed(拖)usback.Weweresafe.Now,everyyearwhenmyhusbandpullsourcamperoutofthegarage,wearefilledwithasenseofexcitement,wonderingwhatcampingfunandadventurewewillexperiencenext.梳理一下文章的脈絡(luò)：宿營經(jīng)歷1時間（when）once(whenourchildrenwerelittle)地點(diǎn)（where）besideChalkCreek人物（who)I,15-month-oldboy,3-year-oldboy事件（what）溪邊宿營，大兒子掉河里了事件發(fā)展（how）溪邊宿營，擔(dān)心小兒子掉小溪里，繩子綁腰，兒子哭鬧，松綁后的小兒子沒掉河里，大兒子反而掉河里了。原因（why)宿營經(jīng)歷2時間（when)anothertime(whenourchildrenwerelittle)地點(diǎn)（where）inVallecitoLake人物（who)I,husband,fisherman事件（what）租船游湖，被困獲救事件發(fā)展（how）租船游湖，天氣驟變，發(fā)動機(jī)無法啟動，被困湖中，漁夫幫忙，全家獲救。原因（why)主體段落（第二、三段）使用了如下的邏輯關(guān)系助力情節(jié)發(fā)展：第二段（宿營經(jīng)歷1）時間關(guān)系：when,once,last因果關(guān)系：worried→tiedarope,cry→so...承接關(guān)系：and轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：insteadof,however解釋說明關(guān)系：破折號——第三段（宿營經(jīng)歷2）時間關(guān)系：anothertime,when,as轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but承接關(guān)系：and并列關(guān)系：and因果關(guān)系：with大家認(rèn)真體會，多多誦讀，以讀促寫。接著我們泛讀一篇適合高中生的外刊文章，再趁熱打鐵練一篇小作文?！就卣归喿x】外媒節(jié)選：DAWN相關(guān)主題：生活故事難易程度：易詞數(shù)：800AMemorableDayIwokeupexcitedly.Thisdaywasspecial.ItwasmybirthdayandIwassurethatIwasgoingtoreceiveagreatdealofwishesandpresentsthisyear.Igotofffrommybedandrushedtomybathroomtogetdressedinthebestpossiblemanner.IworethebeautifuldressthatIhadboughtespeciallyforthisday.Islippedonmytwinklingjewelry,putonsomelightmake-up,dressedmyhairandwentdownforbreakfast.Momwasinthekitchen.Iflashedabrightsmileather,waitingforhertowishmeandgivemeahug.Butmysmilesoonvanishedasmymotherstartedrollingwithlaughter.Iwasconfused.Iaskedherwhatthematterwas.Controllingherlaughter,shemanagedtoanswerme,whichsoundedsomethinglike,“Whyareyoudresseduplikethatearlyinthemorning?Areyoualright?”Istartedwonderingwhatwaswrongwithher,andmyworriesgrewevenmorewhenshestoppedlaughingsuddenly.Withaconcernedfaceshecametowardsme.Shetappedmycheektwiceandasked,“Honey,areyousleepwalking?”Iwantedtoburstoutinanger.Iwantedtoscreamather.IwantedtotellherthatIwasdressedupbecauseitwasmybirthday!Butthen,somethingstruckmymind.Isaidtomyself,'Ismomalright?'Ihadnoideawhattosaytoher.IjusttoldherthatI'llberightbackandthenwentuptomyroom.IchangedintoacasualdressandjustwhenIwasabouttostartcryingwithmyheadburiedinthepillow,mymomcame.Sheseemedmorecomposed.Shetoldmethatshewassorryforherbehaviordownstairs,shejustcouldn'tcontrolit.Shegavemeahugandtookmedownforbreakfast.Ibreathedasighofrelief.Irealizedthatnothingwaswrongwithher.Shehadonlyforgottenmybirthday.Idecidednottotellhermyself.Afterafewmoments,mybrotherandmyfathercameforbreakfastaswell.Igavethemboththesameflashysmile,butwasheartbrokeninstantlywhennoneofthemwishedme.Ithoughtthatmaybetheyareplanningasurprisebirthdaypartyforme,andthatwasthereasonnoneofthemwishedme.IfeltexcitedasIlovesurprisebirthdayparties.Alldaylong,Istayedinmyroomsothatmyfamilycouldeasilyprepareformyparty.Ikeptcountingeverypassingsecond,impatiently.Iloggedontotheinternetanddidn'tfindasinglebirthdaywishorcardintheemail.Itexcitedmeevenmore.IwasimaginingwhatpresentsImightgetthisyearwhenmymomcametomyroomandsaid,“Whyareyoustuckinyourroomsincemorning?I'mconcerned!Areyouupsetoranything?”IsmiledatherandtoldherthatIwasfineandIjustwantedalittletimetomyselftoday.Shesmiledbackandleft.Intheevening,mymothercametomeandsaidthatshewasleavingforherfriend'shouseandifIwantedtocomealongaswell.Iknewshewastryingtofoolmeandsheonlywantedmetogetdressedfortheparty.Irepliedtoherinaffirmativeandstarteddressingup.IheldmybreathwhenIwasleavingmyroom,preparingmyselfforourhousedecoratedwithballoonsandribbons.Iclosedmyeyesandsteppedoutofmyroom.ThenIopenedmyeyesand...WHAT?Thehouseislookingexactlylikeithasalwaysbeen!Noballoons?Noribbons?Nofriends?Noparty?Iwonderedwhatthesurprisereallywas,becausemymomdidtakemetoherfriend'splace.Onourwaytoherhouse,Ikeptwonderingifweweregoingsomewhereformyparty,butweweren't.Onourwayback,IthoughtmaybenowIwouldfindmyfriendsatmyplace.ButIwasdisappointedagain!Sadly,Iwentbacktomyroom.Itwasgettinglateandnobodyhadwishedme.Iwassoheartbrokenforeverybodyhadforgottenmybirthday.Iwasweepingwhenmymomcametomyroom.Seeingmecrying,shegotconcernedandaskedmewhatthematterwas.ItoldherthatIwasupsetbecauseeverybodyhadforgottenmybirthdayandnowthedaywasalmostover.Mymothersmiledasifshewascontrollingherlaughterandtoldmepolitelythatitwas29thNovemberandnot29thDecember,whichismyactualdateofbirth!Howmyfamilykeptmakingfunofmetillmybirthdayactuallycame!【寫作訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是李華，你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以“人生中難忘的一次經(jīng)歷”為主題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1、經(jīng)歷過程；2、個人感受。AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyLife______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文1】AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyLifeWithtimegoingby,lotsofgoodmemoriesarenolongerfresh.TheexperienceasavolunteerintheHarbinSnowandIceFestival,however,hasbeensovividandunforgettableuptonow.Morethanoneyearago,I,togetherwith11otherstudentsofourschool,washonoredtobechosentoservetouristsfromhomeandabroadattheopeningceremonyofthefestival.Wetriedourbesttointroducesnowculturetovisitors,guidethemtoadmireicesculpturesandanswertheirquestions.Sosuccessfulwastheeventthatwevolunteersgothighlypraised.Itistheexperiencethatmakesmeawareoftheimportanceof