高中英語1Module1MyFirstDayatSeniorHigh高一階段

高一階段書面表達(dá)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)一、試題重現(xiàn)第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)（第一次月考）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry很關(guān)心你并發(fā)郵件向你詢問高一的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況.請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校：川南名校，環(huán)境優(yōu)美；有教學(xué)樓、體育館和圖書館。2.同學(xué)：友善勤奮，易相處，交了很多好朋友。3.教師：介紹自己最喜歡的老師及其原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.不要逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。、3.文章開頭已寫好，但不計入詞數(shù)。DearTerry,Howiseverythinggoing?審題：學(xué)生作文DearTerry,Howiseverythinggoing?xxisafamousschoolinthesouthofSichuan.Theenvironmentofschoolisbeautiful.Ithasteachingbuildings,astadiumandalibrary.Theclassmatesarekindandhardworking.Theyareeasytogetonwellwith.IhavemademanygoodfriendsChineseteacherismyfavoriteteacher.Thereasonisthatheiskindandhumorous.Histeachingmethodisthebest.Icanunderstandhimtotallywhataretheweaknesses(缺點）ofthisarticle?二、試題范文DearTerry,Howiseverythinggoing?Knowingthatyouarecaringaboutmylifeandstudyinmynewschool.I'mwritingtogiveyousomeinformationaboutit.Aboveall,letmeintroducemyschooltoyou.xxhighschoolisveryfamousinthesouthofsichuan,whosecampusisverybeautiful.Inaddition,itiswellequipped,suchashighteachingbuildings,alargestadiumforsportsandabiglibrary.Moreover,myclassmateswhoarefriendly,kindanddiligentaresoeasytogetonwellwiththatIhavemadealargenumberofgoodfriends.Lastbutnot(the)least,theteachershereareexcellent,amongwhomchineseteacherismyfavoritebecauseofhiskindnessanduniqueteachingmethod,whichmakemeundestandthoroughlyInaword,thisissuchagoodbeginningthatIwilldevotemyselftoit.Howaboutyourhighschoollife?lookingforwardtoyourreply.BestwishesYours,Lihua三、Whatcontributetoagoodcomposition?四、結(jié)合本次作文歸納如何使文章靚起來？你的新西蘭朋友Terry很關(guān)心你并發(fā)郵件向你詢問高一的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況.請你回復(fù)郵件Knowingthatyouarecaringaboutmylifeandstudyinmynewschool,I'mwritingtogiveyousomeInformationaboutit學(xué)校：川南名校，環(huán)境優(yōu)美；有教學(xué)樓、體育館和圖書館。xxisafamousschoolinthesouthofSichuan.Thecampusoftheschoolisbeautiful.Ithasteachingbuildings,astadiumandalibrary.xxhighschoolisveryfamousinthesouthofsichuan,whosecampusisverybeautiful.Inaddition,itiswellequipped,suchashighteachingbuildings,alargestadiumforsportsandabiglibraryforreading.同學(xué)：友善勤奮，易相處，交了很多好朋友。Theclassmatesarefriendly,kindandhardworking.Theyareeasytogetonwellwith.IhavemademanygoodfriendsMyclassmateswhoarefriendly,kindanddiligentaresoeasytogetonwellwiththatIhavemadealargenumberofgoodfriends.教師：介紹自己最喜歡的老師及其原因。Chineseteacherismyfavoriteteacher.Thereasonisthatheiskindandhumorous.Histeachingmethodisthebest.IcanunderstandhimtotallyTheteachershereareexcellent,amongwhomchineseteacherismyfavoritebecauseofhiskindnessanduniqueteachingmethod,whichmakemeundestandthoroughly歸納：如何使文章靚起來？方法一盡量使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替單個詞以增加文采。用替代use;用替代see;用代替visit,用替代important,用替代should,用Iagoodidea替代Ihadagoodidea等避免重復(fù)使用同一單詞或短語如果前文用了interesting,后文就可用alotoffun;若前文用了clever,后文就可用smart;前文用了moreandmore+adj.,后文就用increasingly。3.巧用高級詞匯1）Hedidn’tcometothemeetingyesterdaybecausehewasill(一般)Hisillnessaccountedfor(解釋......原因)hisabsencefromthemeetingyesterday.(高級)2）Whenhewasachild,hewantedtolearneverything.(一般)Whenhewasachild,hehadastrongappetiteforknowledge.3）I'llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication.(一般)I’wouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakeapplicationintoconsideration.(高級)方法二1.感嘆句e.g.ahandsomeboyheis!happyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!2.

with短語e.g.thenumberoftourists(increase),trafficwillbecomemorecrowded.3、狀語從句(1)Itrytotalktomyclassmates,Istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem.(2)weworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.(3)Heisyounghecan’tgotoschool.(4)wehadtowait________itwasrainingcatsanddogs.4、定語從句e.g.(1)Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.(2)Friendsarejustthepeopleshareyourjoyandsorrow.5、各種名詞性從句e.g.(1)That'swelookedlike.(2)Ithoughtabouthowfar(wehad/hadwe)areadytravelled.倒裝句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Notuntil11:30couldwegotobed.省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.8、強調(diào)句e.g.Itwas_thisyoungboy__that__helpedtheoldwoman.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.9、虛擬語氣Myadvice/suggestionisthatwe___(should)pay_moreattentiontotheenvironmentalpollution.IfIwereaboyagain,Iwouldcultivatecourage.Itishigh/abouttimethatwewent(go)tobed.10.用非謂語動詞1)一切做完之后，我們就坐在院子里跟老人聊天。普通句型：Afterwehaddoneeverything,wesatintheyardandchattedwiththeelderlypeople.亮點句型：Havingdoneeverything,wesatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.2)因為這篇文章是用簡單英語寫的，所以它非常容易讀懂。普通句型：BecauseitiswritteninsimpleEnglish,thepassageiseasytounderstand.亮點句型：WritteninsimpleEnglish,thepassageiseasytounderstand.方法三1.表示并列：1)first,second,third,last(不推薦，忒俗)2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally(不推薦，忒俗)3)inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly(不推薦，忒俗)4)tobeginwith,furthermore,finally(強烈推薦)5)firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast(強烈推薦)6)mostimportantofall,moreover,finally(推薦)7)foronething,foranother(thing)(適用于并列的兩種情況)2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折：1)however,onthecontrary,nevertheless2)ononehand,…butontheotherhand…3.表示因果：consequently,asaresult,therefore,forthisreason4.表示舉例：forexample,forinstance5.表示比較：similarly,inthesameway,bycontrast6.表示強調(diào)：especially,particularly,actually7.表示總結(jié)：tosumup,toconclude,inshortAfter-classassignment.Practise:Improvethiscomposition（慶祝生日的方式）NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.(2)Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsand