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andEndingsentenceUnitSixStepOnePresentation1.Note-writing祝賀便條除了時(shí)間、稱呼、結(jié)尾客套話和署名外還需有：1）對(duì)祝賀的反應(yīng)2）祝賀行為3）對(duì)祝賀的評(píng)價(jià)和對(duì)對(duì)方的欽佩4）美好祝愿SampleMarch,30thDearTom,Iamratherpleasedtohearthatyouhavewonthemasterdegree.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltcongratulations.Iknowyoureallydeserveit,foryouhavebeenworkingsohardinyourstudy.IamalwaysadmiringyourpersistencyandIhopeyouhaveabrightfuture.Sincerelycongratulationsagain.Yours,BearSomeusefulexpression:祝賀之事和自己的反應(yīng)：I‘mhappytolearnthatyou’vejustpassedyourthesisdefense.I’msopleasedtohearthatyou’vegottheadmissionbytheCambridgeUniversitytofurtheryourgraduatestudy.

Someusefulexpression:祝賀行為:Congratulationsonyoursuccess.I’dliketoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonit.Pleaseacceptmywarmestcongratulations.Congratulationsuponhavingreceivedyourmaster’sdegreefromBeijingUniversity.Someusefulexpression:

對(duì)成功的評(píng)價(jià)和對(duì)對(duì)方的欽佩:Youreallydeserveitbecause…Thismeantyearsofyourhardwork,andit’sanachievementyoucanwellbeproudof.Ihavebeenappreciatingyourexcellentperformanceinstudyandabilityinyourwork.Someusefulexpression:美好祝愿:Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture.Ibelieveourschoollifewillbemorecolorfulunderyourleadership.Ibelievethattheknowledgeyou’veacquiredwillenableyoutobesuccessfulinwhateveraspectoflife.StepOnePresentation2.Someinformationabouthomework問題解決型

StructureIntroduction－problemBody－reasonsConclusion－solutionsSomeimportantexpression:Recently,theissue/problem/questionofyouthcrimehasbeenbroughtintofocus./hasbeenbroughttopublicattention./hasbeenposedamongpublicattention.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,_________.Therearemainlythreecausesofthisproblem-thenegativeeffectofmassmedia,increasingpressurefromsocietyandhighdivorcerates.

Inthepastfewdecades/Inrecentyears,therehasbeenasharpincrease/adramaticdeclinein___.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,___.Theanswertotheproblem/issueinvolvesacoupleofcomplicatedreasons/factors,whichwillbeillustratedasfollows.

Thus,asfarasIamconcerned,itisofimportanceforpeopletofindoutitscausesandascertainsomepossiblesolutionstoaddressit.Oneofthemostimportantreasonsfortheincreaseinjuveniledelinquencyliesinthenegativeinfluenceofcommercializedmassmedia.…………Anotherfactorforthesignificantchangeinjuvenilecrimeistheincreasingnumberofsingle-parentfamilies.Finally,theincreasingpressurefrombotheducationandsocietygivesrisetotheyouthcrime.Confrontedwith………,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,……Foranother……Finally…….Alongwiththeawarenessoftheabovementionedreasonscomethefollowingmeasureswhichshouldbetakenimmediately.Thetoppriorityis………Anotherapproachis…..Finally,…..Onlyinthiswaycanwe……..Nouns：：Solution,approach,measure,action,method,step,MeansModifiedadj.:effective,forceful,immediate,practicalVerbs:Solve,dealwith,copewith,handle,resolve,address,tackle,workoutReviewTopicSentence:OneDefinition:ThefocusoftheparagraphTwoParts:TopicandassertionThreeFeaturesofTopicSentence:CompleteNotTooBroadNotTwoNarrowTip:NeveraquestionFoursentencestructuresI.Supportingsentence1.DefinitionSupportingsentencescomeafterthetopicsentence,makingupthebodyoftheparagraph.Theygivedetailstodevelopandsupportthemainideaoftheparagraph.Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.該段落落的第第一句句話就就是主主題句句意思思是廣廣告影影響每每個(gè)人人，第第二和和第三三句都都是擴(kuò)擴(kuò)展句句對(duì)主主題句句進(jìn)行行展開開說明明。2.Requirements好的擴(kuò)擴(kuò)展句句能使使段落落結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)更加加清晰晰，更更具說說服力力。要要寫出出好的的擴(kuò)展展句，，應(yīng)該該注意意把握握以下下幾點(diǎn)點(diǎn)：1．清清晰翔翔實(shí)，，說服服力強(qiáng)強(qiáng)(避免寫寫出與與主題題不相相關(guān)的的句子子)擴(kuò)展句句是用用來體體現(xiàn)段段落中中心思思想的的，因因此不不可含糊其其辭、、言之之無物物，而而要清清晰翔翔實(shí)；；同時(shí)時(shí)擴(kuò)展句是是用來來支持持主題題句的的，所所以要要具有有較強(qiáng)強(qiáng)的說服力力，能能清楚楚有力力地表表達(dá)思思想，，不可可只考考慮篇幅、、湊足足字?jǐn)?shù)數(shù)草草草了事事。例如：：ThereareseveralwaystoimproveourEnglishwritingskillsandkeepingadiaryinEnglishissurelyoneofthem.Comparedwithotherformsofwriting,itisshorterandtakeslesstime.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.ItcanhelpuscultivatethehabitofthinkinginEnglish.Ifwecankeepthispractice,wewillgraduallylearnhowtoexpressourselvesinEnglish.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.2．層次次分明，，邏輯清清楚主題句和和擴(kuò)展句句除了要要保持意意義的相相關(guān)性以以外，還要保持持思想邏邏輯的連連貫性。。為了清清楚地表表達(dá)主題思想，，擴(kuò)展句句必須條條理分明明、脈絡(luò)絡(luò)清楚。。所以在寫擴(kuò)展展句時(shí)，，要注意意連接轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)折詞語(yǔ)語(yǔ)的使用用，擴(kuò)展句之間間一般會(huì)會(huì)有一定定的邏輯輯關(guān)系，，如因果果、轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進(jìn)進(jìn)等，這這就要求求使用連連接詞使使句子之之間連貫，邏輯清楚楚。無疑，邏邏輯清楚的文文章便于閱卷卷理解，也是閱閱卷者判分的的重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之之一。TherearereasonswhyIliketofish．Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．．Myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．Thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．．Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．TherearethreereasonswhyIliketofish．First，Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．Moreover，myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．．Second，thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．Finally，Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．Ofthethreereasons，，Ipreferthelast．3．句式多變變，節(jié)奏明快快為了使段落靈靈活多樣，擴(kuò)擴(kuò)展句除了要要有說服力，邏輯清清楚以外，還還要有多變的的句式，否則段落落語(yǔ)言會(huì)顯得得單調(diào)呆板，，語(yǔ)言水平低下。如如長(zhǎng)短句、簡(jiǎn)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合合句并用可以使段落落具有節(jié)奏感感。讀起來才有活活力，令人回味味?？梢曰旌鲜褂糜煤?jiǎn)單句、并并列句、復(fù)合合句和短語(yǔ)等等Therearealsomanyquiet,privatethingsthatIenjoydoing.(主從復(fù)合句)Iwouldspendawholedayreadingabook,andIsometimestayuplateatnightreadingagoodnovel.(并列句)WhenIamtiredofphysicalactivities,ImayfindagoodmoviesoralightTVprogramveryentertaining.(主從復(fù)合句)Inshort,Iliketodomanydifferentkindsofthings,dependingonthemoodIaminandthekindofpeopleIaminandthekindofpeopleIamaround.(簡(jiǎn)單句，分詞詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)語(yǔ))3.Writingskills3.1LanguageA.平行結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用用

句式式優(yōu)美、、表達(dá)清清晰、重重點(diǎn)突出出主題句：：Pcgamesareakindofentertainment.利利用平行行結(jié)構(gòu)拓拓展為:Theybringpleasurestoyoungsters,trainthemtorespondquickly,stimulatetheirimaginationinelectronics.B.句式靈活活多變?nèi)粑闹械牡暮?jiǎn)單句句出現(xiàn)得得太多,就會(huì)顯顯得單調(diào)調(diào)、含混混、不生生動(dòng)。要要寫出生生動(dòng)而鮮鮮明的句句子,可可通過喬喬姆斯基基的轉(zhuǎn)化化生成語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法中的的嵌入方方式來實(shí)實(shí)現(xiàn).一一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單單句,嵌嵌入定語(yǔ)語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)語(yǔ)、補(bǔ)語(yǔ)語(yǔ)后,變變得生動(dòng)動(dòng)有趣。。Eg:Booksareworthreading.Bookstellingpeoplehowtoadaptthemselvestothesocietyareworthreading.C.地道道的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)習(xí)語(yǔ)AttachgreatimportancetoLeaveadeepimpressiononD.連接手手段的補(bǔ)充充啟承轉(zhuǎn)合根據(jù)在文章章中的作用用,過渡渡詞大致可可以分為以以下四類(1)表表達(dá)“啟””的常用詞詞語(yǔ):用用于引導(dǎo)主主題句,或或用于主主題句的后后面,引引導(dǎo)第一個(gè)個(gè)發(fā)展句。。Aproverbsays......Atpresent.......Astheproverbsays....Currently.....Generallyspeaking,....Now,....Ingeneral,.....OntheWhole....Itisclearthat....Recently.....Itisoftensaidthat....Withoutdoubt,.......(2)表表達(dá)“承””的過渡詞詞語(yǔ):用用于承接主主題句或第第一個(gè)(或或前一個(gè))發(fā)展句。。First(ofall),......Moreover,.........Firstly,............Noonecandenythat....Inthefirstplace,.........Obviously.....Tobeginwith,.........Ofcourse,.........Also,.......Similarly,.........Atthesametime......Therefore,weshouldrealizethat.....Certainly......Thereisnodoubtthat.......Inaddition,.....What'smore,..........Infact........Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Meanwhile......(3)表表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)””的過渡詞詞語(yǔ):用用來表示不不同或相反反的情況。。But...Still,......Buttheproblemisnotsosimple...Thereisacertainamountoftruthinthis,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto.......However,.......Tooursurprise,..........Nevertheless,........Unfortunately.......Ontheotherhand,.......YetdifferencewillbefoundandthatiswhyIfeelthat........Othersmayfindthistobetrue,butIdonot.Ithink.....4)表表達(dá)達(dá)““合合””的的過過渡渡詞詞語(yǔ)語(yǔ):用用于于總總結(jié)結(jié)段段落落中中上上文文的的內(nèi)內(nèi)容容,引引導(dǎo)導(dǎo)一一個(gè)個(gè)發(fā)發(fā)展展句句或或結(jié)結(jié)論論句句,也也可可以以用用于于文文章章的的最最后后一一段段。。Aboveall,Inbrief,........Accordingly,.....Inconclusion,........Allinall,.......Inotherwords,itishardtoescapetheconclusionthat........Asaconsequence,.........Inshort,.........AsIhaveshown/said/stated/....Insum,........Insummary,.......Ashasbeennoted,....Obviously,.........Bysodoing,.....Onthewhole,.....Consequently,........Presumably,.......Eventually,.........Toconclude,......Finally,........Tosumup,.....Inaword,......Tosummarize,......3.2ContentA.化抽象的概述述為細(xì)節(jié)的描描述

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Scienceandtechnologybenefitshumanbeingmuch.Sciencemakesitpossibleforanationtoensurefoodandclothing(Agriculture),sciencecanmakepeoplelivelonger(Medicine),andit'ssciencethatmakesitasmallworld(Communication).3.3Methods例證法對(duì)比法正反論證II.EndingsentenceRestatethetopicoftheparagraph.Keepitinteresting.Makeitaclosingsentencesoyourreaderknowsthisistheendoftheparagraph.這里介介紹幾幾種常常見的的寫小小結(jié)句句的方方法:1、小結(jié)句句對(duì)全全段落落總結(jié)結(jié)Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Don’targuewithparents;theywillthinkyoudon’tlovethem.Don’’targuewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Don’’targuewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Don’targuewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymother’srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:Don’’targue.2、小結(jié)句句對(duì)主主題句句呼應(yīng)應(yīng)Inthemeanwhile,peoplearoundsmokers,especiallychain-smokersarealsothreatenedbythepoisonousgasesgivenoff.Andaccordingtosomeresearchers,thepossibilityofthenegativesmokers’’cancerisevengreatersincetheybreatheinmoredangerouswastergasesthanthosesmokers.Therefore,thesmokersarealsospoilingothers’healthwhentheyaresmoking.3、小結(jié)結(jié)句用引引語(yǔ)Thereisnodoubtthatyouthdrugabuseisaserioussocialproblemandhasproducedalotofnegativeeffectsonoursociety.Themostsevereconsequenceistherapidincreaseofjuveniledelinquenciescommittedbyyouthstakingdrugs.Withthehighincidenceofyouthdrugcases,manyonce-happyfamilieshavebeenonthevergeofcollapse,whichwillinevitablydisruptsocialorderandjeopardizesocialsecurityandevennationalstability.Ontheotherhand,youngdrugaddictsalsosufferalot.Theyhavevarioussymptoms,suchasprogressivethinning,damagetotheirvitalorgans,andgeneraldeteriorationofheath.Inshort,asanoldsayinggoes,drugsturnhumanstobeasts.常用的結(jié)結(jié)尾句句句型有：：Inshort……;Inconclusion…;Tosumup……;Consequently……;Fromthepointofview,…;Inaword…;Therefore…;Thus,……Ex.Writeaparagraphaccordingtoatopicsentence.Mobilephonecanexertpositiveandnegativeeffectsonstudents.HomeworkTheimportanceofcooperation9、靜靜夜夜四四無無鄰鄰，，荒荒居居舊舊業(yè)業(yè)貧貧。。。。1月月-231月月-23Wednesday,January4,202310、雨雨中中黃黃葉葉樹樹，，燈燈下下白白頭頭人人。。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:281/4/20239:28:47PM11、以以我我獨(dú)獨(dú)沈沈久久，，愧愧君君相相見見頻頻。。。。1月月-2321:28:4721:28Jan-2304-Jan-2312、故人江江海別，，幾度隔隔山川。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:28Wednesday,January4,202313、乍見翻疑疑夢(mèng)，相悲悲各問年。。。1月-231月-2321:28:4721:28:47January4,202314、他他鄉(xiāng)鄉(xiāng)生生白白發(fā)發(fā)，，舊舊國(guó)國(guó)見見青青山山。。。。04一一月月20239:28:47下下午午21:28:471月月-2315、比不了了得就不不比，得得不到的的就不要要。。。。一月239:28下午午1月-2321:28January4,202316、行動(dòng)出成成果，工作作出財(cái)富。。。2023/1/421:28:4721:28:4704January202317、做前前，能能夠環(huán)環(huán)視四四周；；做時(shí)時(shí)，你你只能能或者者最好好沿著著以腳腳為起起點(diǎn)的的射線線向前前。。。9:28:47下下午9:28下下午午21:28:471月-239、沒有失敗敗，只有暫暫時(shí)停止成成功！。1月-231月-23Wednesday,January4,202310、很很多多事事情情努努力力了了未未必必有有結(jié)結(jié)果果，，但但是是不不努努力力卻卻什什么么改改變變也也沒沒有有。。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:281/4/20239:28:47PM11、成功就是日日復(fù)一日那一一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)小小努努力的積累。。。1月-2321:28:4721:28Jan-