BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)初級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求

BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)初級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求自然商業(yè)書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作必須力求“自然”，不能滿篇都是過(guò)時(shí)的商業(yè)行話。例子：使用過(guò)時(shí)商業(yè)行話的句子自然的句子Inpliancewiththeafore-mentionedagreement,dispatchofgoodswillbeundertakensubsequenttoreceiptofsaidmonies..Asagreed,weshallforwardthegoodstoyouwhenwehavereceivedyourcheque.WeshouldbeobligedifyoucouldcontactourMrsXiaoatanearlydate..PleasecontactMrsXiaosoon.Webegtoinformyouthatweareherewithcancelingourorderforthesame..Iamafraidwearecancelingourorderfortheabovegoods.Assuringyouofourbestattentionatalltimes,andawaitingthefavourofyourearlyresponse..Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Duetothefactthatyourcontracthaslapsed,weareunabletoplywithyourrequest..Asyourcontractcontracthaslapsedwecannotdoasyourequest.xx年BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)初級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求：可讀性強(qiáng)商業(yè)書(shū)信要求可讀性強(qiáng)。為了使信讀起來(lái)生動(dòng)有趣，寫(xiě)信人應(yīng)該盡量防止使用單調(diào)的語(yǔ)言，力求使語(yǔ)言構(gòu)造富于變化?？墒褂玫姆椒ㄓ校?變化文法構(gòu)造變換句子的文法構(gòu)造也可提高信文的可讀性。寫(xiě)信時(shí)不要千篇一律地使用同一種表達(dá)方法。例如，下面這個(gè)句子可以用多種方法改寫(xiě).增強(qiáng)書(shū)信的可讀性，還應(yīng)注意運(yùn)用精練的語(yǔ)言商業(yè)書(shū)信必須語(yǔ)言精練，能用一個(gè)單詞的地方盡量不要使用多個(gè)單詞。例如：高冗余度語(yǔ)言低冗余度語(yǔ)言Inasmuchaswerequireactiveconsiderationpriortomakingadecision,Iamafraidthat,inthecircumstances,youwillhavetowait.Asweneedtoconsiderbeforemakingadecision,Iamafraidyouwillhavetowait.xx年BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)初級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求：積極的語(yǔ)氣下面左邊的三個(gè)句子采用提“中性”的語(yǔ)氣，而右邊相應(yīng)的句子語(yǔ)氣那么顯得積極。這種積極的語(yǔ)氣可以使一個(gè)句子聽(tīng)上去更有誠(chéng)意。中性積極Iaminreceiptofyourorderfor250pairsofNiky‘Conga’sportsshoes..Thankyouforyourrecentorderfor250pairsofNiky‘Conga’sportsshoes.Youfailedtosendyourordertousbeforethenewpriceswereintroduced..Unfortunately,wedidnotreceiveyourorderbeforethenewpriceswereintroduced.WecannotdevotemuchtimetoyourvisitastheMarchSalesfiguresarebeingpiledandwearevery