學生寫作錯誤分析

學生寫作錯誤分析1.InDecember16th,2014.

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寫作中拼寫易錯的語法,錯句及詞匯點評

二：語法方面A:名詞的復數(shù)形式,這些名詞的復數(shù)形式直接加Sboysdaystoysroofsproofschiefsbeliefs由man或woman構(gòu)成的合成詞中，通常全都要變?yōu)閺蛿?shù)mensingers男歌手mencooks男廚師womendoctors女醫(yī)生 下列名詞總是以復數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)：congratulations祝賀thanks謝謝stairs樓梯glasses眼睛savings積蓄belongings所有物papers試卷、論文manners禮貌spirits心情conditions條件、環(huán)境sands沙灘Teachers’Day教師節(jié)theStudents’Union學生會4.下列限定詞修飾名詞時，這一名詞必須用復數(shù)形式afew，many，anumberof，alotof/lotsof，all，both，oneof+……，以及二以上的數(shù)詞修飾名詞時例：afewhours’bus-ride幾小時的公交車程B：動詞方面：人物類、地點類、科普類等作文中，句子常用一般現(xiàn)在時，但學生容易漏寫第三人稱單數(shù)式例Helooksyoungerbecausehealwayskeepsoptimistic.2.進行時態(tài)的句子中，學生往往會漏掉be（am、are、is、was、were）例１.Ourlife

isgettingbetterandbetter．２.Wewereswimminginthelakesuddenlywhenasnakeappeared.雙寫最后一個輔音字母，再加-ing的動詞還有：nod，dig，begin，run，prefer，occur，dip，drop，stop，fit，get，hit，put，regret，sit，set等另外現(xiàn)在分詞的構(gòu)成中無改y加ing的規(guī)則ShewascarryingwaterwhileIwasenjoyingdrinkingwater3.下列動詞的過去式和過去分詞學生容易出錯admittedstoppedpreferredoccurredpermittedreferredC：冠詞方面：a，an用法在學生中作文中經(jīng)常出錯例１.AsanAmericanplayer，heisanhonestman.２.Takeanumbrellawithyouincaseitrains.三：句子方面

A：中式英語例1.最近事故極多學生錯句：Recentlyhasmanyaccidents.正確句子：2.有40%的學生沒有足夠的睡眠學生錯句：Therehave40%studentsdon’thaveenoughsleep.正確句子：點評：某時某地“有”只能用therebe句型3.我和他昨天參觀了一個博物館學生錯句：Iandheyesterdayvisitedamuseum.正確句子：點評：表示時間,地點的名詞只能放在句子開頭或結(jié)尾另外：人稱排序是：你，他，我。B：句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，從句缺主語，或前后時態(tài)不一致。他雖然失敗了，但沒有泄氣。學生錯句：Althoughhefailed，don’tloseheart...正確句子：點評：復合句中，主從句都應(yīng)該有主語，并注意前后時態(tài)必須一致。C：Thismorning/lastweek/nextmonth(year),here/there前不能使用介詞Therehavebeenagreatnumberofaccidentslately/recently.Fortypercentofstudentsdon’thaveenoughsleep.YesterdayheandIvisitedamuseum.Althoughhefailed，hedidn’tloseheart例：今天上午他來看我學生錯句：Hecametoseemeinthismorning.正確句子：學生到達那兒時，他們就開始工作了學生錯句：Whenstudentsarrivedatthere,theysetaboutworking.正確：D:詞性誤用。名詞和動名詞常用來做主語和介詞賓語，動詞常用來做謂語。例：1.早起床是一個好習慣學生錯句：Getupearlyisagoodhabit.正確句子：2.我非常喜歡騎自行車學生錯句：I’mverykeenoncycle.正確句子：3.加稅已經(jīng)影響了我們大家學生錯句：Thetaxincreaseshaveeffectusall.正確句子：Hecametoseemethismorning.Whenstudentsarrivedthere,theysetaboutworking.Gettingupearlyisagoodhabit.I’mverykeenoncycling.Thetaxincreaseshaveaffectedusall.thoughtexplanationembarrassThough/Althoughgovernmentofficialthroughunknownignore/beforesuccessenvironmentattentionsucceedavailableconclusionsuccessfulmuseumcompetitionweatherhighschooldecisionwhetherheightprivilegeessentialenoughscheduleconvenientstrengthrestaurantnecessarywidthhealtheffectdepthhealthyaffectyouthoccasioneffectivepreparingforeignbesides/besiderequirementarrangementimmediatelyfifthargumentappreciatetwelfthequipmentpronunciationninthintelligencethousandsofwrittenequal篇章連貫：過渡句前太啰嗦，不會快速進入主題，多余句子多，如deeplyinspiredbysuchapassage,Ifirmlysupporttheideathatweshouldswitchliveswithsomeoneforashorttime；忽略了三個要點的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，缺乏前后呼應(yīng)。任務(wù)二與任務(wù)三無聯(lián)系，不會從任務(wù)二中得到任務(wù)三的體會；錯用firstly,secondly,和其他議論文的句式，如ThereisnodoubtthatIwouldwanttobeateacher.等于各種文段；不少學生生搬硬套某些作文框架或套路。如第一句“為什么”，有許多學生