十年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文

十年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文2011年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"I’mamemberof”.以“我是~的一員”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子。提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團(tuán)的一員，或者作家庭，班級(jí)，社區(qū)的一員，寫(xiě)出你的經(jīng)歷，感受等。Usethefollowingpointsasareference.Areyougladtobeamemberof ?Whatdoyoudoinit?Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?例文+點(diǎn)評(píng)：Itha§been2year與 Ibecameamember口fthegroup"AnimaIIthasb鴕n+時(shí)間段+sint息+過(guò)去的時(shí)間點(diǎn)whichIfeeldIw白白ndproudnfmyself-Notonly非限定性定語(yǔ)從句 Notonly...but業(yè)。倒裝句，用法請(qǐng)參見(jiàn)我其他的帖子dowecollectinformationabouttheanimalsindangerbutwealsoposttheinformationontheinternet.Inaddition,weoftenspend邏輯詞ourweekendsorholidaystakingphotosofthosebeautifulanimals.Itisinthiswaythatweattractmorepeopletoloveandprotect強(qiáng)調(diào)句animals.IhadneverfoundmyworksomeaningfuluntilIjoinedthisgmup,Nrve「willIgEtoutofit.(95w)Never的倒裝句2010年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:I'mproudofmyself1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?要求：至少60字范文：Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,ThestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.butmyparentsencouragedme:“impossibleisnothing,”“youcouldchallengeyourself!”sowiththeencouragementofthem,,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn,tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!滿分作文+點(diǎn)評(píng)：Likethosemanyteenagersyoucanseeinthestreet,Iamjusta定語(yǔ)從句commonstudent,nothingdifferent.Iamstillproudofmyself,however,forIamtryingtogetbettereverydayEarlytobedand活用諺詁earlytorise,Imakemyselffullofenergyalldaylong.Iseldomwasteanyminuteduringtheclasses,whichhelpsmetobehighly~非限定性定一從句efficientwhilestudying.Besides,Ialsokeepmyselfhealthyby省略句takingexerciseeveryday.Tosumup"nevergiveupimprovingdSHdoi砥民通過(guò)做B事達(dá)到假A事的目的,初中英語(yǔ)必會(huì)語(yǔ)法myself,andthatisthereasonwhyIamproudofmyself.(98w)定語(yǔ)從句2009年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Iwanttodosomethingformyschool以“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool（我想為學(xué)校做一件事）”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。學(xué)生習(xí)作：Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,"Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean."ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?點(diǎn)評(píng)：此文分三層，先提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后寫(xiě)出自己怎么做的，最后寫(xiě)了我可以讓我的學(xué)校變得干凈讓每個(gè)人寬恕我，結(jié)尾緊扣全文，寫(xiě)出我會(huì)怎么做。全文立意新穎，區(qū)別于傳統(tǒng)的作文，有自己的生活背景，寫(xiě)出了從我原來(lái)是怎么做到現(xiàn)在的轉(zhuǎn)變過(guò)程，沒(méi)有重大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是一篇值得參考的好文章。例文：Myschoolisinthecentreofthecityandtheairaroundisnotfreshenoughbecauseoftheheavytraffic.Ourschoolhasn,tnoticedit,soIwanttoplantmoretreesinmyschooltotakeinpollutedgases.Iwillusemysavingstobuysomeplantsandseeds.Inaddition,IwillcallonmyschoolmatestoberesponsibleforthemwhenIgraduatefromschool.Ihopethatmyschoolwillbecleanerandprettier.2008年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題：網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有兩個(gè)版本：（1）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent（s）”.以“爸爸/媽媽的故事”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。例文：Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum,sparents,mum,stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.（2）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Lovearoundme”.以“我身邊的愛(ài)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。（總分16分）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.（短文須包含下列要點(diǎn)）Isthereanylovearoundyou?（Giveoneortwoexamples.）Howdoyoufeelwhenyougetlovefromhim/her/them?Whatareyougoingtodotoshowyourlove?范文：Mylifeisfulloflove.Myparentsalwaysgivetheirlovetomegenerously.WhenIwasintrouble,theyencouragedmeandstayedbymysideallthetime.Theyaskedmenevertogiveup.IfeelwarmandthankfulwhenIgetlovefromthem.Inreturn,I'mdeterminedtowinstillgreaterprogressinmystudiesandtobeagoodperson.Iknowthisisjustwhattheywantmost.2007年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.以“我不喜歡……”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。段文開(kāi)頭已給，所給部分不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。一Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.（短文須包含下列要點(diǎn)）Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?（Giveatleasttworeasons.）ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…范文（1）：MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Forexample,Ihatetogoswimming.IamabletoswimbutIthinkitisdangerous.Ihatetoreadghoststories,too,becausetheyarenotonlyfrighteningbutalsoboring.Besides,theyteachmenothing.Infact,Ihatetellingliesmost.Apersonwhotellsliesisdishonest.Ifyoutelllies,nobodywillbelieveyouanymorewhentheyfindoutthetruth.SoIhatetotellliesmost.Iwanttobeanhonestperson.范文（2）：Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What,smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.2006年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.以“我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型僅供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer...Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…例文：Iamanordinaryperson,Ihaveanordinarydream:Isadoctor.Becausedoctormaylettheseexperiencepersonallythehumanwhichtheindispositionsufferstogetridofthepain.Mayletthehumanchangethehealth.Atthesametime,Ibelievedthat,willhelpothers,ownalsotobeabletoobtainjoyfully.Therefore,IhopedfutureImightbeadoctor.2005年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.以“成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂(lè)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。以下圖片僅供參考。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。學(xué)生習(xí)作：IthinkIhaveahappylife,thoughIcannotdothethingsIlike.Forexample,Ilikereadingdifferentbooksinmysparetime,especiallysomedetectivestories.Butmymumalwaysasksmetopractiseplayingthepianoonehoureveryday.That'sboring.Ilikehavingpartieswithmyfriendsduringtheholidays.ButIhavetodolotsofhomeworks.Teacher