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專題復(fù)習(xí)高考寫作指導(dǎo)假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí),上個(gè)星期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問題,你寫信向館長(zhǎng)Mr.Wang反映:1.實(shí)用性的書、新書太少;2.書架上的書比較混亂;3.閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害;4.管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。書面表達(dá)DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi答題卡DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi學(xué)生習(xí)作StudentADearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi評(píng)點(diǎn)StudentA

要求考生根據(jù)所給情景,用英語寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。

情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等;提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。

本部分滿分25分,所需時(shí)間約為30分鐘。NMET的要求NMET書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次。第五檔:21~25分第四檔:16~20分第三檔:11~15分第二檔:6~10分第一檔:1~5分

0分語言地道,規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2、主要內(nèi)容:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性;上下文的連貫;語言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。4、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的,從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。NMET書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則Somethingimportant

foragoodarticleStructureInformationShinningpoints給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Introduction點(diǎn)題;一兩個(gè)句子;概括性;暗示或開門見山2.Body

中心敘述部分;層次分明3.Ending

小結(jié);呼應(yīng)主題;要求或呼吁structure給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分IntroductionWhy?Findsomeproblems2.Body

Fourproblems3.Ending

Purpose:expectsomeimprovementsstructurePreparenecessaryinformationProblems:1.實(shí)用性的書、新書太少;1.newly-published,practical2.書架上的書比較混亂;

2.ontheshelves,inamess,

outoforder3.閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害;3.readingroom,light,dim,doharmto4.管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。4.workers,chatwith,whileworkingAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsWhensearchforsomethingnewnotenoughnewbookscannotattractreadersWhenlookforwhatIwantoutoforderhardtofindtherightbookWhilereadingdimlightdoharmtoeyesWhilereadingchattingworkerscannotenjoyreadingDearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

OverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.Therefore,I’dliketovoicemyopinions,which,Ihope,wouldbeusefulforyoutocreateamorecomfortableplaceforreaders.First,therearefewnewandpracticalbooksontheshelves,andmostbooksarenotpopulartoday.Second,somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder,makingitdifficultforreaderstofindwhattheywantquickly.Third,theassistantsdidn’toffergoodservices.Instead,theywerealwayschatting.Inaddition,poorlightinthereadingroomisbadforeyes.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.Yours,AiXuexiOnePossibleVersionPossiblePatternDearXX,……butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_______for____.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,XX假設(shè)你是艾學(xué)習(xí),上個(gè)星期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問題,你寫信向館長(zhǎng)Mr.Wang反映:1.實(shí)用性的書、新書太少;2.書架上的書比較混亂;3.閱覽室的光線對(duì)視力有害;4.管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。Practice模板填空:DearMr.Wang,…butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiExercise假設(shè)你是李華,在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間,到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓?chǎng)精彩的電影,但在觀影過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。1.因廣告過多,影片放映晚點(diǎn);2.影片播放音量過大;3.安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明,存在安全隱患;4.適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯:安全出口-exit安全隱患-potentialsafetyhazardDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaPreparenecessaryinformation

1.因廣告過多,影片放映晚點(diǎn);thefilmwasdelayed,toomanyads

2.影片播放音量過大;soundtooloud3.安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明,存在安全隱患;theEXITsignsnotseenclearly,presentpotentialsafetyhazards.4.適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯:安全出口-exit安全隱患-potentialsafetyhazardAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsthedelayedfilmtooloudsoundEXITsignsnotseenclearlypotentialsafetyhazard假設(shè)你是李華,在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間,到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓?chǎng)精彩的電影,但在觀影過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。1.因廣告過多,影片放映晚點(diǎn);2.影片播放音量過大;3.安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明,存在安全隱患;4.適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。參考詞匯:安全出口-exit安全隱患-potentialsafetyhazardPractice模板填空:DearMr.Wang,…ThefirmwasgoodbutIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____________,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but

IdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.

First,thefilmwasdelayedasthereweresomanyadvertisementsatthebeginning.Itwasratherannoying.

Second,thesoundofthefilmwassoloudthatIcouldhardly

bearit.Third,theEXITsignscouldnotbeseenclearly,whichpresentedpotentialsafetyhazards.Andifsomethingterribleshoul

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