讀后續(xù)寫：溜冰 學案-高三英語寫作專項

Craigwatchedhisoldsister,

Riley,andherfriendLizraceupanddownthelakeontheirskates(冰鞋),avoidingotherhockey(曲棍球)players.Their

skateblade

(刀片)lookedlikesilversmoke.Whenthegamewasover,thegirlsskateduptothebenchwhereCraigwassitting.CraigaskedRileywhatskatingfeltlike.

“WhenIgoreallyfast,IfeellikeI’m

flying,”shesaid.That’ssilly,thoughtCraig.Flyingissomethingbirdsdointheair,notsomethingpeopledooniceskates.ThenhewatchedRileygobackoutontheice.Sheskatedaroundandaroundtheedgeofthe

lake

withherarmspumpingandherscarftrailingbehindher.Soonshewentsofastthatherarmslookedlikewingsandherscarflookedlikeafeatherytail.Maybeskatingreallywaslikeflying.WhenRileysatdowntotakeherskatesoff,Craigsaid,“IwishIcouldfly.”Riley

retied

herskatelacesandcrouched(蹲下)nexttoCraig.“Getonmyback,”shesaid,andCraigdid.Rileystartedskating,butCraigdidn’tfeellikehewasflying.Itjustfeltlikeashakingpiggybackride.“You’retooheavy,”Rileysaid.“Ican’tgofastwhenI’mcarryingyou.”Sheskatedslowlybacktothebench.Craiggotoffherback.“Evenifyoucouldgo

fast,Iwouldn’tbeflying,”hesaidsadly.“Ineedskatestofly.”Rileydidn’tsayanythingonthewalkhome,butafewdayslatersheaskedCraigifhewantedtogoskating.“Towatch?”heasked.“Not,toskate,”shesaid

cheerfully.

“MomandIfoundapairofmyold

skates.Theymightfityou.”Theskateswerealittlebig,butwhenRileystuffednewspaperinthetoes,theyfit.Craigcouldn’tstopsmiling.Hedidn’twanttotakethemoff,buthehadtosohecouldwalktothelake.RileyandLizwentwithhim.Theycarriedtheirhockeysticksandawooden

chair.

HardlyhadtheygottothelakewhenCraigputhisskatesbackonandRiley

helped

himontotheice.翻譯：1.克雷格懷疑地看了萊利一眼，不知道這把椅子是干什么用的。___________________________________2.他抬起眼睛，環(huán)顧了一眼湖面，湖面似乎很寬闊，邊緣被霧氣模糊了。___________________________________3.克雷格小心翼翼地把腳踩在冰上，帶著強烈的懷疑和輕微的恐懼推著椅子i向前走。___________________________________4.當他向前移動時，他感覺到他的手緊緊地粘在椅子上，四肢僵硬而冰冷。___________________________________5.他們滑得如此之快，以至于他感覺到風輕輕地吹過他，湖岸邊的樹木也一閃而過___________________________________6.白色的荒野逐漸變成了一大片白云，而反射天空的湖面則與天空本身夢幻般地融化了。___________________________________7.克雷格在空中自由地伸展雙臂，完全沉浸在大自然的美麗中。___________________________________8.有那么一瞬間，滑冰的念頭溜走了，取而代之的是歡快的放松，告訴他自己其實在“飛翔”。___________________________________9.她在湖邊滑來滑去，雙臂擺動，圍巾飄在身后。___________________________________10.很快，她走得如此之快，以至于她的胳膊看起來像翅膀，她的圍巾看起來像羽毛般的尾巴。也許滑冰真的就像飛翔一樣。___________________________________答案：1.克雷格懷疑地看了萊利一眼，不知道這把椅子是干什么用的。Craig

enquiringly

cast

Riley

alook,notknowingwhatthe

chair

wasfor.（notknowing非謂語）enquiringly

adv懷疑地同義詞：disbelievinglydoubtfullydubitativelyenquiringlyskeptically·吉米探詢地看著彼特，而彼特卻聳聳肩。Jimmylooked

enquiringly

atPetewhoshruggedhisshoulders.（shrug記得雙寫）2.他抬起眼睛，環(huán)顧了一眼湖面，湖面似乎很寬闊，邊緣被霧氣模糊了。Raisinghiseyes,heglancedaroundthelake,whichseemed

broadanditsedgewasblurredwithmist.（非謂語結構+非限制性定語從句）blur

v

使…模糊不清；使暗淡·房子在薄霧中隱隱約約看不清。Thehousesappearedasa

blur

inthemist.3.克雷格小心翼翼地把腳踩在冰上，帶著強烈的懷疑和輕微的恐懼推著椅子向前走。Craigcautiouslysethisfootontheice,

pushingthechairforwardwithstrongdoubtandslightfear.（非謂語+with結構）strongdoubt：強烈的懷疑4.當他向前移動時，他感覺到他的手緊緊地粘在椅子上，四肢僵硬而冰冷。Ashemovedforward,hefelthishands

tightlygluedto

thechair,limbsstiffandcold.glue

v

粘合；似膠般固著于n.膠；各種膠合物·我們全神貫注的注視著舞臺。Oureyeswere

glued

tothestage.5.他們滑得如此之快，以至于他感覺到風輕輕地吹過他，湖岸邊的樹木也一閃而過。Theyskatedso

fast

thathefeltthe

windgentlyblowingpasthimandthetreesalongthelakebanksflashingby.（so...that句型，以及非謂語）flashby:一閃而過·我們的假期似乎一眨眼就過去了。Ourvacationseemedtojust

flash

by.美·電影《隱秘的生活AHiddenLife》臺詞Andyoucouldn'tseewhereitwasgoing,just...

thefieldsandtrees

flashing

by.你看不到它要開去哪里只看到

田地和樹木飛快地倒退

6.白色的荒野逐漸變成了一大片白云，而反射天空的湖面則與天空本身夢幻般地融化了。Thewhitewildernessgraduallytransformedintoamassivepatchofwhitecloudwhilethelakereflectingthetheskydreamilymeltedwiththeskyitself.（優(yōu)美描寫）transforminto：轉變?yōu)閐reamily：adv.夢似地，朦朧地；愛夢想地·他把火點著了，游苔莎從椅子上恍恍惚惚地看著他。Helitthefire,Eustacia

dreamily

observinghimfromhercouch.7.克雷格在空中自由地伸展雙臂，完全沉浸在大自然的美麗中。

Craig

stretched

hisarmsfreelyintheair,totally

immersed

inthebeautyofnature.

8.有那么一瞬間，滑冰的念頭溜走了，取而代之的是歡快的放松，告訴他自己其實在“飛翔”。Foramoment,thethoughtofskatingslippedaway,andinitsplacewas

cheerful

surgeofrelaxation,

tellinghimthathewasactually“flying”.（用了無靈主語以及非謂語）surge：(感情等)洋溢,奔放·他贏得比賽時感到一陣激動。Hefelt

a

surge

of

pureadrenalineashewontherace.美·電影《地球的夜晚NightonEarth第4集:DarkSeas》臺詞Atlast,thetideisturning.

Hormones

surge.?終于潮水開始轉向荷爾蒙飆升。9.她在湖邊滑來滑去，雙臂擺動，圍巾飄在身后。Sheskatedaroundandaroundtheedgeofthe

lake

withherarms

pumpingandherscarftrailing

behindher.

（用了with結構）10.很快，她走得如此之快，以至于她的胳膊看起來像翅膀，她的圍巾看起來像羽毛般的尾巴。也許滑冰真的就像飛翔一樣。Soonshewentsofastthatherarms

lookedlikewings

andherscarf

lookedlikeafeatherytail.Maybeskatingreallywaslikeflying.（用了寫作手法：明喻，用物做喻體，增加了文章的文學感）參考范文：Thensheputhishandsonthebackofthechair.

Craigenquiringly

cast

Riley

alook,

notknowingwhatthe

chair

wasfor.‘Ithelpsyouskatesteadily.

Haveatry!’Craigcautiouslysethisfootontheice,

pushingthechairforwardwithstrongdoubtandslightfear.

Raisinghiseyes,heglancedaroundthelake,whichseemed

broadanditsedgewasblurredwithmist.

Ashemovedforward,hefelthishands

tightlygluedto

thechair,limbsstiffandcold.

Frustrated,Craigpushedthechairasideandexclaimed,“Notlike

flying!It’slikebeingledbyanoldhorse!”Rileydroppedherhead,

staringatherskates.Suddenly,abrilliantideasparkledinherbrain.ShewavedherhandforLiz.Afterawhile,eachgirltookoneofCraig’shands.

Andofftheywent.Theyskatedso

fast

thathefeltthe

windgentlyblowingpasthimandthetreesalongthelakebanksflashingby.

Thewhitewildernessgraduallytransformedintoamassivepatchofwhitecloudwhilethelakereflectingthetheskydreamilymeltedwiththeskyitself.

Craig

stretched

hisarmsfreelyintheair,totally

immersedinthebeautyofnature.Foramoment,thethoughtofskatingslippedaway,andinitsplacewas