研究生英語寫作 第一次

Post-graduateEnglishWriting研究生英語寫作左雁北京物資學院外語學院

編輯ppt(A)Englishwriting:WritingstagesStructureDifferentwritingtasksWritingstrategies

(B)Translation:LanguagedifferencesandtranslationTranslationtechniques編輯pptUnit1（A）Gettingstarted編輯pptUnitGoalsforWriting:

Studentswill…Betterunderstandwhatgoesintothepre-writingstageUnderstandhowtoorganizeandmapoutideasbeforewritingKnowhowtousesubordinateclauses

編輯pptPractice1

YouaregoingtowriteashortbiographyoftheAmericanactor,MarlonBrando.Readtheinformationandthenwriteaparagraphusingallofthelistedpoints.編輯ppt

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MarlonBrandowasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.HediedonJuly1,2004oflungfailure.Hewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachild.Hisfirstjobwasaditchdigger.In1947hebecamefamousovernightafterappearinginAStreetcarNamedDesire.Hestunnedaudienceswithhisremarkablehonesty,sexualityandintensity.MarlonBrandochangedmodernactingbypopularizing“Method”acting.“Method”actingisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.HewontheOscarin1972forhisroleinTheGodfatherandherefuseditbecauseheobjectedtothewaythefilmindustrydepictedNativeAmericansonscreen.Hewasnominatedfor8Oscarsandwon2andisoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema.編輯ppt

MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewentontochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.Theactor,whostunnedaudienceswithhisremarkablehonesty,sexualityandintensity,becamefamousovernightin1947afterappearinginAStreetcarNamedDesire.Hewasnominatedfor8Oscarsandwon2,includingoneforhisroleinTheGodfatherwhichwasrefusedbecauseheobjectedtothewaythefilmindustrydepictedNativeAmericansonscreen.MarlonBrandodiedoflungfailureonJuly1,2004.編輯pptAnalyzing

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Paragraph編輯pptAnalyzingtheParagraphOriginalParagraphvs.ImprovedParagraphNumberofsentences?

10vs.5Sentencesbeginwithwhichwords?

He/Hisvs.avarietyofbeginnings編輯pptMarlonBrandowasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.SubordinateclauseAdditionalinformationfitswellinthesentence編輯ppt

Hewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachild.Hisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger…MarlonBrandonchangedmodernactingbypopularizing“Method”acting.

Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewenton

tochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.

Relativeclause–additionalinformationisaddedtotheendofasentenceratherthanusedasanindividualsentence編輯ppt

MarlonBrandodiedoflungfailureonJuly1,2004.RepeatingthenameinthefinalsentenceSimple,directandtothepoint;agoodwaytoendapieceofwritingAreminderthatsimplesentencesareokaywhenusedwithmorecomplexsentences編輯pptClausesAclause:asentence,orpartofasentence,withitsownverbExamples:ThrowtheballIthrowtheballIthrowitThrowit編輯pptThreekindsofclauses:

1.Main2.Subordinate

3.Relative1.amainclause:themoreimportantclauseinasentence;itisacompletesentence.2.asubordinateclause:theclausewhichislessimportantthanthemainclause;it’snotacompletesentenceExample:MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.Subordinateclausesusuallybeginwithwhichwords?who,whose,which,that,where編輯ppt

BITstudentsstudyhard.MostBITstudentsaremale.BITstudents,whostudyhard,aremostlymale.BITstudents,whoaremostlymale,studyhard.Beijingisoneoftheworld’sbiggestcities.Beijinghostedthe2008OlympicGames.Beijing,whichhostedthe2008OlympicGames,isoneoftheworld’sbiggestcities.Beijing,whichisoneoftheworld’sbiggestcities,hostedthe2008OlympicGames.MakethisthemainclauseMakethisthemainclause編輯pptRelativeClauses3.arelativeclause:aclausewhichisaddedontoanotherclause;itgivesadditional,orrelated,information.Example: -Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewentontochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.Relativeclausesusuallybeginwithwhichwords?

who,whose,which,that,where

編輯pptRelativeClauseMakearelativeclausefromthesesentencesMarlonBrandowonanOscarforTheGodfather.TheGodfatherisaboutanItalian-Americanmafiafamily.MarlonBrandowonanOscarforTheGodfather,whichisaboutanItalian-Americanmafiafamily.編輯pptRelativeClauseMakearelativeclausefromthesesentencesMarlonBrandowasborninOmaha.Omahaiswherehealsodied.MarlonBrandowasborninOmaha,wherehealsodied.編輯pptDirections:

Forthispart,youareto

read

the

following

passage

and

write

a

composition

of

no

less

than

150

words

as

required.

You

are

advised

to

avoid

using

such

stereotyped

expressions

or

sentences

as

“l(fā)ast

but

not

the

least”.

根據(jù)某調(diào)查報告……What

do

you

think

of

the

two

choices?

What

social

realities

are

reflected?編輯pptPractice2Itisusefultomakealistofinformationyouwanttoincludeinyourwriting.Let’stakeasanexamplethequestion:

Whatmakesagoodstudent?Putaticknexttothefactorsthatyouthinkcontributetomakingagoodstudent.

1.cationalbackground5.motivation8.personality3.race6.gender9.family編輯pptMappingAfteryouhavelistedtheitemsyouwanttoincludeinyourwriting,Itistimetoorganizeandgroupthem.Thiscanbedonethroughaprocesscalledmapping.Awritingmapprovidesavisualoutlineofwhatyouwillincludeinyourpaper.Itincludesmajorthemesandsub-themes.編輯ppt

educationalbackground

interesteducatedvs.uneducated teachersinstillinterest?privatevs.publicschooling subjectqualityofschool materialsused qualityofteachingactivitiesdone

intelligence

motivation IQchemicalmakeupofbrainteacherproperlymotivates?definitionof“intelligence”family/friendsprovide? grades needtopassexams?WhatMakesaGoodStudent?Tip!Yourwritingmapmayormaynotlookliketheoneprovidedhere.Itcantakeanyshapeorformyoufeelmostcomfortablewith.Also,thereisnoneedtospendtoomuchtimemakingawritingmap.Severalminutesofconcentratedthoughtmightbeenoughforyoutoorganizeyourideassufficiently.編輯pptDothembeforeyouwrite.Don’tspendalotoftimeonthem.Severalminutesisenough.Usethemtosketch,oroutline,yourthoughts.WritingMaps編輯pptUnit1（B）DifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglish編輯ppt漢英句子差異與翻譯

漢語句子：語義型或意合型英語句子：語法型或形合型編輯ppt

漢語：“板塊”式結(jié)構(gòu)（“竹節(jié)”式結(jié)構(gòu)）英語：“多枝共干”型

eg.他們進行挑釁活動，制造緊張局勢，必須馬上停止。

Theymuststopalltheirprovocationsatonce,whichcreatetensions.編輯ppt

眼下,咱只盼著有關(guān)部門對“工薪族”們作一個詳細的調(diào)查,對我們的收入心里有個數(shù),別出來個咱累死也夠不著的房價。（分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)）

Now,Iamexpectingthedepartmentsconcernedtosurveyonus"thesalaried”,soastogainaclearunderstandingofourincomeandabandonsuchahighpricewecan’taffordevenifwetoiltodeath.編輯ppt

中西方思維模式的差異編輯ppt

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“獅子頭”式的漢語句式

村東頭的王大媽來了，受壞人欺騙的村民們也來了。編輯ppt

“孔雀尾”式的英語句式：

TherecameAuntWangwhodweltattheeasternendofthevillage,andalsocamethevillagerswhohadbeendeceivedbythescoundrel.

去年他為了完成一個項目在實驗室用計算機努力地干了十個月。編輯ppt

Heworkedhardwithacomputerinthelabfortenmonthsinordertocompleteaprojectlastyear.編輯pptWritingaCV/Resume

Acurriculumvita,orCV,isaninformativesummaryofallacademicandprofessionalachievements.Usuallylongerthanaresume,aCVcanbethreeormorepagesandoftenincludesrelevantexperiencesoutsideofaperson'sprofessionalandacademiclife,suchasvolunteeringexperienceandinterests.OneofthemaindifferencesbetweenaresumeandaCVisitspurposeindifferentcountries.InEuropeaCVisusedintheplaceofaresumetoapplyforemployment,whereasintheUnitedStatesaCVismainlyusedforacademic-basedapplications.編輯ppt

1.Firstyouneedtowriteyourname,addressandcontactdetails.(Supplyingaphoto)2.Youshouldthenwriteashortsummaryofyourskills.Makeitshortbutpowerful.3.Educationbackground–Youneedtolisttheschoolsoruniversitiesyouhaveattended4.WorkExperience–Youneedtowritedownyourworkexperiencenext.5.Summary/aimsachieved–Writeabriefsummaryofskillsorqualificationsyouhaveachieved.6.References–Writedowncontactdetailsofpreviousemployers.編輯ppt

Name:

StevenWindsor–Nationality–BritishCitizenAddress:

90CarillonAvenue,Richmond,Surry,England,UKTelephone:182XXXXXXXXEmail:steven87@hotmail.co.ukSkype:steven234編輯ppt

Objectives:Thiswillbethefirstthingthatyourfutureemployerwillread.

Toworkinafriendlymotivatedenvironment,aswellasbeingaproficientteammemberinbothgivingandseekingadvice.Tocontinuetochallengemycapabilities,whileconductingmyselfinaprofessionalandcontrolledmanner.Toselfevaluateonaregularbasistokeepupwithnewtechnologiesinanever-changingworld.Tocontinuetoexpandenrichingmyawarenessofdifferentculturesaround,aswellastolearnthesimplefundamentalsofpopularforeignlanguagessoastointeractmoreconfidently.編輯ppt

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