萬(wàn)能寫作模板：讀后續(xù)寫

萬(wàn)能寫作模板：讀后續(xù)寫題型解析：讀后續(xù)寫是寫作的一種新題型，顧名思義就是我們?cè)陂喿x一篇還未寫完的文章之后，按照語(yǔ)段所給的開頭寫出兩個(gè)語(yǔ)段（約150詞），從而把這篇文章未寫完的部分補(bǔ)充完整，使之渾然一體。讀后續(xù)寫不僅要求考生準(zhǔn)確使用詞匯和語(yǔ)言框架，會(huì)合理潤(rùn)色語(yǔ)言，更重要的是，它還要求考生能夠明白應(yīng)該如何整理續(xù)寫內(nèi)容，以使得其形成和前文統(tǒng)一連貫的、能夠表述完整信息的表達(dá)內(nèi)容。應(yīng)該說(shuō)，這種題型是閱讀理解和書面表達(dá)的溝通橋梁，它不僅考查了考生在閱讀文章的基礎(chǔ)上分析文章邏輯的能力，又考查了考生的創(chuàng)造力、想象力，以及運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確豐富的語(yǔ)言進(jìn)行表達(dá)的能力。解題方法：寫作步驟.讀文精讀文章，確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫作思路，通過精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索，比如，是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索，這樣有利于考生"順藤摸瓜〃完成續(xù)寫。確定文章體裁和主要內(nèi)容（話題）。注意文中的關(guān)鍵詞，也就是故事中的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物和事件等信息。.審題仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求。一般短文后面的"注意〃都有對(duì)此次短文續(xù)寫的具體要求,如詞數(shù)限制、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示，這樣考生才能做到“心中有數(shù)”。.謀段在讀文、審題的基礎(chǔ)上，先仔細(xì)閱讀續(xù)寫部分所給出的兩段段首文字，再構(gòu)思這兩段要寫的段落大意。根據(jù)原文情節(jié)確定好段落大意，找出每一段的寫作要點(diǎn)，然后再補(bǔ)充相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)和常識(shí)，這兩段加起來(lái)要能寫出10到15個(gè)句子，以滿足續(xù)寫詞數(shù)的要求。.初寫擬寫草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句。在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后，擬寫草稿。擬寫時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性及語(yǔ)言的豐富性，并通過句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。寫作時(shí)要注意，所用的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)要與原材料一致。.定稿完成初稿后，考生需先結(jié)合原材料中故事線索讀一讀自己續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容，既要確保所寫內(nèi)容沒有與原材料相矛盾的地方，又要保證內(nèi)容上前后連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；然后潤(rùn)色續(xù)寫部分，可使用高分單詞或短語(yǔ)，運(yùn)用各種從句、介詞短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等高級(jí)表達(dá)，合理添加過渡詞；最后譽(yù)寫文字，這個(gè)過程考生務(wù)必做到"字跡工整、清晰〃。萬(wàn)能模板讀后續(xù)寫“八步走〃.情緒——情緒描寫。從原材料中體會(huì)作者相應(yīng)情緒，借助情緒的延續(xù)，以此為銜接，續(xù)寫。.細(xì)節(jié)-一進(jìn)一步描述。.轉(zhuǎn)折一個(gè)人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折。.轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)--一事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，讓人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。.失望--問題仍然沒有解決或者又出現(xiàn)了新的問題。.想法--面對(duì)沒有解決的問題或者新問題，突然有了想法或感觸。.結(jié)局--在想法或感觸的影響下，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。.點(diǎn)題--呼應(yīng)前文備注：這八步不是固定的，考生可以根據(jù)自己的想法打亂部分順序，也可以略寫個(gè)別環(huán)節(jié)。此步驟，可讓續(xù)寫有話可說(shuō)，讓情節(jié)續(xù)寫跌宕起伏，前提是要讀懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脈絡(luò)?！灸０宸段摹壳拔奶嵋涸谖倚〉臅r(shí)候，我的家里有一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)：在萬(wàn)圣節(jié)進(jìn)行雕刻南瓜比賽。我很想贏得比賽，于是每年都選擇一個(gè)很大的南瓜。有一年，我在雕刻南瓜的時(shí)候不小心把頭卡在了南瓜里。Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Myheadspandizzilyasiftheworldswirled.Atmywit'send,Ifeltastaboffear.（"我〃的情緒：慌張、無(wú)奈）"Don'tpanic!Papa,Papa,weneedyourhelp,Jasonexclaimed.Intimeovercamemyfather.（借助夕卜界幫助）HeembracedmyneckandpulledbackwithstrengthwhileJasonpinnedpresseddownthepumpkin.（——系歹U動(dòng)作描寫）Itdidn'twork,though.（問題未解決）“Whynottearthepumpkindirectlysuddenlyrangoutmother'svoice.（新想法）Inasplitsecond,acreakbrokeoutoverhead,followedbyarayoflight,whichIseeminglyhadn'tseenforages.（問題得至U解決）ButwhatdidIseeMymotherwasfilmingalltheway.（銜接句）ThatvideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Tomysurprise,soonmyvideowasfollowedbyaseaoflikes,mymailboxfloodedwithsimilarstories.（彳銜接句）Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic.AlittleembarrassedasIwas,awaveofwarmthwelledupinside.（細(xì)節(jié)描寫之我的心情）Thenagoodideaflashedacrossmymind.（想法）"Isn'titagoodideatosharestoriesonlinetochoosethefunniestItoldJason,jumpingwithjoy.（做法，為結(jié)局做鋪墊）“Amazing!Let'scallitPumpkin'sCompetition.Jasongiggled.（Jason的反應(yīng)，照應(yīng)開頭）萬(wàn)能模板高分素材之單詞和短語(yǔ)L情緒描寫&2.細(xì)節(jié)描寫：哭：howling（嚎哭），sob,weep,burstintotears,burstoutcrying.（one'seyes）brimwithbefilledwithtears怕：horror;frightened,scared,speechless,in（a）panic,inacoldsweat,befilledwithterror,rootedtothespot,freeze,one'skneesfeelweak,（hands）sweat高興、激動(dòng)：（動(dòng)詞）dance,jumpleapwithjoy,feelasurgeofjoyexcitement,whistle,overcomewithhappinessdelightjoyexcitement,（one'seyes）twinkle,（one'sheart）beatpoundwildly;（形容詞）delighted,overjoyed,excited,thrilled,wildwithjoy傷」心、痛苦feelasurgeofsadness,（sadness）surgewithinsb.,one'sheartache,overcomewithsadness生氣、‘憤怒：feltgetangryfurious,feelasurgeofangerragefury,eyesblaze,stormoutofintooff,stormsayangrily,sth.makessb.'sbloodboil,sth.makessb.extremelyangry,claspone'sfiststeeth,sb.'sbloodisup3.轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人努力或借助外界鼓起勇氣：pluckuptakegathersummonupone'scourage毫不猶豫：withouteventhinking,withoutdelay,withouthesitation,withoutasecondthought4,轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎：asif,seemingly,appear,seem欣慰：breathasighofrelief,sighwithrelief,toone'srelief.失望：但是問題還未解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題徒勞invain,nouse,withoutsuccess茫然ataloss,atsea,blankly,belostinafog.想法：突然有了一個(gè)想法（一句話說(shuō)明這個(gè)想法）occurto,hit,strike,flashintoone'smind,crowdinone'smind,dawnon.結(jié)局：過段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過了——段時(shí)間notlong,shortlyafterwards,beforelong,foraninstantmoment令人驚訝的是toone'ssurprise,strangelyenough.」總結(jié)：,點(diǎn)題，□乎應(yīng)前文realize,echo,linger;whisperinone'smind,downdeepinone'sheart高分素材之句式★情緒描寫&細(xì)節(jié)描寫哭：1.Alumpcametohisthroat.2.Hereyeswereredfromcrying.3.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.4.Tearscoursedtrickledstreamedrandownhercheeks.害怕：1.Shewastoofrightenedtotellherfamilywhathadhappened.2.Hisheartwaspounding,asifhewerefrightened.3.Lizawassofrightenedthatshecouldn'tmakeasound.4.Ibowedmyheadtimidlyanddarednotlookatmyfather'scloudyface.5.Mybrainisblank.Ijustwanttoleavethishorribleplace.高興、激動(dòng)：1.Whensheknew...shefeltexcitedthrilled.2.Whensheknew...hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.3,Whensheknew...herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.4.Whensheknew...awildexcitementtookholdofher.5.Knowing...shefeltasurgeofexcitement.傷）心、痛苦:1.Asadnesscameoverher.2.Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.4.Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.5.Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.生氣、’憤怒：1.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.2.Hefeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.3.Boilingwithrage,heshookhisfistatme.4.Filledwithfury,shewasunabletoutterasingleword.★轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人努力或借助外界鼓起勇氣：1.Hesummoneduphiscourageandlodgedaprotestwithhisfather.Ifinallypluckedupthecouragetoaskherfor..毫不猶豫：1.Shecouldhardlywaitto...2.HardlythinkingWithouteventhinking,heranto...★轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰Itseemedasifthatsomeonewascomingtosaveus.Oftentimesourtearsofremorserevealaglimmerofhope.Awaveofrelieffloodedthroughme...Awaveofreliefwashedoverhim...l.ltsuddlyoccurl★失望：但是問題還未解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題Butbadluckforme,Ifailedinmyattempttopersuadeher.Sheclosedhereyestightlyinavainattempttoholdbackthetears.Alloureffortswereinvain.Shekeptpacing,wonderingwhattodonext.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shedidn'tknowwhattodonext.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shewasunsureofwhattodonext.Shewasatalosswhattodo.Hewasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.★想法：突然有了一個(gè)想法Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthat...IthitmethatIhadachoice.Athoughtstruckherthat...Itdawned