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2023年1月浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題蜂鳥(niǎo)報(bào)恩Iwasinvitedtoаcookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahumming

bird,desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-websandwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedаpieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherIremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredher

headandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhaps

she

hadbeenstruggling

against

thewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.However,sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foralongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Forаmoment,allwerespeechless.Then

someonesaid,Shemusthavecometo

say

good-bye.Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.

Readforbasicinformation.storywhenwherewhowhatBriefsummary:Isavedahummingbirdinafarm.thehummingbirdandIduringthecookoutinthefarmIsavedahummingbirdPara1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.

蜂鳥(niǎo)到第二段才出現(xiàn)，所以第一段不能寫(xiě)我與蜂鳥(niǎo)相遇的情節(jié)。Analysethegivensentences.給出的句子一般為過(guò)渡句，首先提到了我和農(nóng)場(chǎng)，為避免敘述跳躍，接下來(lái)的敘述也應(yīng)從我或者農(nóng)場(chǎng)開(kāi)始同理，第二段的敘述應(yīng)從我或者蜂鳥(niǎo)開(kāi)始。第二段開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)名我準(zhǔn)備離開(kāi)，注意第一段結(jié)尾與第二段開(kāi)頭的銜接Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Raisequestionsforthegivensentences.1.WhatwasIthinkingofwhenIenteredthefarm?2.WhatdidIdowhenIwasinthefarm?3.HowdidIfeelwhenIarrivedthefarm?HowaboutwhenIleftwithoutseeingthehummingbird?1.WhatdidIfeelwhenIsawthehummingbird?2.Whatdidthehummingbirddowhenitsawme?3.Didthehummingbirdcomealone?1.WhatwasIthinkingofwhenIenteredthefarm?thehummingbirdWeatherthebrokenwindowgotfixedornot?Wouldtherebeanotheranimaltrappedinthemilkinghouse?3.HowdidIfeelwhenIarrivedthefarm?excitedcurioushopetoseethehummingbirdagainHowaboutwhenIleftwithoutseeingthehummingbird?disappointed

worriedthrilledandexcited

relieved

1.WhatdidIfeelwhenIsawthehummingbird?happyexcitementfloodedovermeIheavedasighofrelievebeseizedwithhappinessExpressionsaboutbird1.拍動(dòng)翅膀：2.婉轉(zhuǎn)歌唱:3.翅膀:4.盤(pán)旋：5.啄：falpchirpflyaroundpeckwing翻譯句子：1.那只蜂鳥(niǎo)又浮現(xiàn)在了我的腦海中。（固定搭配）2.一陣失落涌上心頭。（心理描寫(xiě)）3.我下車(chē)四處張望，卻沒(méi)發(fā)現(xiàn)它的影子。Thehummingbirdcametomymind.Asenseoflosswelledup.Ialightedandlookedaround,butfoundnosignofit.翻譯句子：1.我看到它十分高興。（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）2.當(dāng)看到它時(shí)，我如釋重負(fù)，眼里含著淚光。（用一.....就...句型）3.我把車(chē)停在路邊，急忙走向農(nóng)場(chǎng)，充滿了期待。（形容詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）Iwasseizedwithhappiness

.At

，Ifeltrelievedwithsparkinmyeyes.Iparkeddownthestreetandrushedtothefarm,

.Appreciatethesample.Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Thinkingaboutthebrokenwindowoncetrappedthehummingbird,Ialightedfromthecarandmademystraightwaytothemilkinghousetocheckit.Thewindowhadbeenrepairedwellandnospider-webshadbeenseen.Thehummingbirdcametomymindagain.Iwalkedoutofthemilkinghouse,lookedaroundbutfoundnosignofthehummiingbird.Withasenseofloss,Isighedandopenedthedoorofmycar.Appreciatethesample.Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.Atthesightofit,myheartwaswildwithpleasure,thinkingthehappyreunioniscoming.Thehummingbirdapproachedasitflappeditswingsandchirpedhappily.Iopenedmypalmandletitstay.“Howareyoudoing?Myoldfriend!”Isaidexcitedlywithhappytearsinmyeyes.Thehummingbirdopeneditsmouthandputablueburryinmypalmandstartedtoflyaroudme.“Thankyou!”IsaidinalowvoiceandIsawhereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.thankyou.Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.Atthesightofit,myheartwaswildwithpleasure,thinkingthehappyreunioniscoming.Thehummingbirdapproachedasitflappeditswingsandchirpedhappily