（2023年）廣東省深圳市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)測(cè)試卷(含答案)

（2023年）廣東省深圳市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)測(cè)試卷(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.1．面對(duì)今年的就業(yè)形勢(shì)，很多大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后選擇到農(nóng)村去發(fā)展，比如去農(nóng)村當(dāng)“村官”。

2．你認(rèn)為到農(nóng)村就業(yè)對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)是好的就業(yè)選擇嗎?請(qǐng)說(shuō)明理由。

2.假設(shè)你是李明，假期即將到來(lái)，你打算做一次為期三周的旅行，希望找個(gè)外國(guó)朋友作為游伴(Travel-mate)。擬一個(gè)尋游伴的啟事，交代清楚日程安排、費(fèi)用分擔(dān)情況、對(duì)方的要求等，并說(shuō)明對(duì)方和你一起出游的好處。

Travel-mateWanted

3.1.現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的年輕人把手機(jī)短信作為交流的主要渠道

2.使用手機(jī)雉的利與弊

3.我的觀點(diǎn)

MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed3OminutestowriteALettertotheEditorofaCampusMagazinetopresentyourviewaboutwhethertheextremesportsshouldbebannedandwhetherpeopleshouldbeallowedtorisktheirlives.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheguidelinesgivenbelowinChinese:

1.TomGranger，19歲，是一所大學(xué)極限運(yùn)動(dòng)俱樂(lè)部(TheUniversityExtremeSportsClub)的成員。他在一次進(jìn)行高空彈射特技表演時(shí)，因設(shè)備出現(xiàn)故障，不幸身亡。這一慘劇在校園內(nèi)外引起了廣泛爭(zhēng)議。請(qǐng)你給編輯寫(xiě)一封信，表明你對(duì)這件事的看法。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

--事情的起因和你對(duì)此事的態(tài)度，是支持大學(xué)生從事極限運(yùn)動(dòng)，還是反對(duì)大學(xué)生從事極限運(yùn)動(dòng)

--闡明你持有這種看法的理由

--結(jié)論

ALettertotheEditorofaCampusMagazine

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學(xué)生出去旅行經(jīng)常會(huì)選擇“自助游”

2．分析大學(xué)生選擇“自助游”的原因

3．我的看法

Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheValueofScience.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.有的人認(rèn)為，科學(xué)的價(jià)值在于對(duì)人類物質(zhì)生活的提高作出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)；另一些人則認(rèn)為，科學(xué)的真正價(jià)值在于它提高了人的整體素質(zhì).你的看法如何？寫(xiě)出你的觀點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)舉例說(shuō)明你的理由.

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledALetterofApplication.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.你即將大學(xué)畢業(yè)，申請(qǐng)出國(guó)攻讀博士學(xué)位

2.介紹個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)厲，所學(xué)專業(yè)以及專長(zhǎng)

3.公派出國(guó)，費(fèi)用由中國(guó)政府提供

4.希望申請(qǐng)被接受

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnPrivateTutoring.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.為孩子聘請(qǐng)家教目前非常普遍

2．有人認(rèn)為這對(duì)孩子有幫助，有人則不以為然

3．我的看法

OnPrivateTutoring

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanapplicationfortheassistantlibrarianinyourschool.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.介紹你的姓名、班級(jí)、專業(yè)等基本信息

2.列舉你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，證明你能勝任此職位

3.表明你對(duì)此工作的熱情，渴望得到鍛煉的機(jī)會(huì)

AnApplicationfortheAssistantLibrarian

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEnergyCrisis,Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.能源是當(dāng)今世界所面臨的主要問(wèn)題之一。

2.能源的重要性

3.如何保護(hù)能源

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Bothnaturalgasandgasolineare___________andthusneithercanbeconsideredrenewable.

12.

Therapidriseintemperaturewillleadtoclimatechangeswhichfinallyinturnwill______inthelongrun.

13.Onlineservicedeliveryofonecompanycanbesuppliedthroughnetworkofanotherthanksto______.

14.

Acalorieisaunitofenergyassociatedwithanythingcontainingenergy.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Survey-Feedback-Action,whichoffersastatisticalmeasurementofbothemployeesatisfactionandsubordinates'opinionsofmanagement'sleadershipperformance,iscarriedout______.

16.

Adialectisavarietyofalanguagespokenbyaverysmallnumberofpeople.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.

Globalhydroelectricpowerintheoryisapproximately______thantheamountthathasbeentakenadvantageoftoday.

18.

Itissuggestedtoprovideopportunitiesforemployeestoexpresstheirideasabout______.

19.ManyruralregionsinEurope,suchastheGreekvillageofPrastos,areplaguedwithenvironmentalhazardsasmoreandmorefieldslayunattended.

20.PartⅡReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)

Directions:Inthispart,youwillhave15minutestogooverthepassagequicklyandanswerthequestionsonAnswerSheet1.Forquestions1-7,choosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA),B),C)andD).Forquestions8-10,completethesentenceswiththeinformationgiveninthepassage.

PizzaHut

PizzaHutwasstartedin1958,bytwobrothersinWichita,Kansas.FrankandDanCarneyhadtheideatoopenapizzaparlor.Theyborrowed$600fromtheirmother,andopenedtheveryfirstPizzaHut.In1959,thefirstfranchiseunitopenedinTopeka,Kansas.Almostadecadelater,PizzaHutwouldbeservingonemillioncustomersaweekinits310locations.In1970,PizzaHutwasputontheNewYorkStockExchangeunderthetickersymbolPIZ.

In1986,PizzaHutintroduceddeliveryservice,somethingnootherrestaurantwasdoing.Bythe1990s'PizzaHutsaleshadreached$4billionworldwide.In1998,PizzaHutcelebratedits40thanniversary,andlauncheditsfamouscampaign"TheBestPizzasUnderOneRoof."In1996,PizzaHutsalesintheUnitedStateswereover$5million.Outofalltheexistingpizzachains,PizzaHuthadthelargestmarketshare,46.4%.However,PizzaHut'smarketsharehasslowlyerodedbecauseofintensecompetitionfromtheirrivalsDomino's,LittleCaesar'sandnewcomerPapaJohn's.Homedeliverywasadrivingforceforsuccess,especiallyforPizzaHutandDomino's.

However,thisforcedcompetitorstolookfornewmethodsofincreasingtheircustomerbases.Manypizzachainsdecidedtodiversifyandoffernewnon-pizzaitemssuchasbuffalowings,andItaliancheesebread.Thecurrenttrendinpizzachainstodayisthesame.Theyalltrytocomeupwithsomenewer,bigger,betterpizzaforalowprice.Offeringspecialpromotionsandnewpizzavariationsarepopulartodayaswell.Forexample,chickenisnowacommontoppingfoundonpizzas.

Inthepast,PizzaHuthasalwayshadthefirstmoveradvantage.Theirmarketingstrategyinthepasthasalwaysbeentobethefirst.Oneoftheirmainstrategiesthattheystillfollowtodayisthediversificationoftheproductstheyoffer.PizzaHutisalwaysaddingsomethingnewtotheirmenu,tryingtoreachnewmarkets.Forexample,in1992thefamousbuffetwaslaunchedinPizzaHutrestaurantsworldwide.Theyweretryingtooffermanydifferentfooditemsforcustomerswhodidn'tnecessarilywantpizza.

Anotherstrategytheyusedinthepastandarestillusingisthediversificationoftheirpizzas.PizzaHutisalwaystryingtocomeupwithsomeinnovativewaytomakeapizzaintosomethingslightlydifferent—differentenoughthatcustomerswillthinkit'sawholenewproduct.LookatsomeofthepizzasPizzaHuthasmarketedinthepast.In1983,PizzaHutintroducedtheirPanPizza,whichhadaguaranteeofbeingreadytoeatin5minuteswhendiningatPizzaHutrestaurants.In1993,theyintroducedthe"BigFoot",whichwastwosquarefeetofpizzacutinto21slices.In1995,theyintroduced"StuffedCrustPizza",wherethecrustwouldbefilledwithcheese.In1997,theymarketed"TheEdge",whichhadcheeseandtoppingsallthewaytotheedgeofthepizza.Currently,theyaremarketing"TheBigNewYorker,"tryingtobringthefamousNewYorkstyle.pizzatothewholecountry.

AnotheropportunitythatPizzaHuthasistheirneworderingonlinesystem.AnyonewithInternetaccesscanorderwhatevertheywishandgetitdeliveredtotheirhousewithoutevenspeakingtosomeone.Thisprogramhasjustbeenstarted,sowedonothaveanynumberstosupportwhetherornotitwillbeasuccess.

Lastly,PizzaHuthasalwaysvaluedcustomerserviceandsati

A.1958B.1959C.1969D.1970

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(35)

A.Writing.B.Science.C.English.D.Mathematics.

22.(39)

23.聽(tīng)力原文：W:WelcometoJingliHotel.HowmayIhelpyou?

M:I'dlikearoomplease.

W:Wouldyoulikeasingleoradouble?

M:I'dlikeadouble,please.

W:MayIhaveyourname,please?

M:Yes.ItisSparlly.

W:Couldyouspellthatoutplease?

M:That’sS-P-A-R-L-L-Y.

W:Howmanyareinyourparty?

M:Justthetwoofus.

W:Ok.Andhowlongwouldyouliketostayhere?

M:Twoweeks,fromMarch3rdtoMarch17th.

W:Ok.Canyoufillintheform.please?

M:Sure.(Fillingintheform)Hereyouare.

W:Thankyou.Howwillyoubepaying?

M:IsVisaOK?

W:That'llbefine.Andwouldyoulikeawake-upcall?

M:Yes,I'dlikeawake-upcallfor6:30.

W:Ok.Isthereanythingelse?

M:Yes,onemorething:whereisyourcanteen?

W:Thecanteenisonthesecondfloor.Wealsohaveacafeteriaonthetopfloor.Ifyouwouldlikesomethingtodrink,youcaneithercallroomserviceorcomedownhere.

M:Ok.Thankyou.

W:Youarewelcome.Hereisyourkey.Yourroomis801ontheeighthfloor.Youcantakeanelevatorattheendofthishall.

M:Thankyou.

(20)

A.Teacherandstudent.

B.Managerandguest.

C.Receptionistandguest.

D.Friends.

24.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Didyouheartheweatherforecastthismorning?

W:Yes.Itsaidpartlycloudytoday,withastrongwindfromthenorthwest.Thehighesttemperaturewillbesixbelowzero,atleastinthemorning.Butintheafternoonitwillrisealittlebit.

Q:Whatisthehighesttemperatureinthemorning?

(15)

A.Sixteenbelowzero.

B.Sixbelowzero.

C.Sixteenabovezero.

D.Sixabovezero.

25.(43)

26.(21)

A.Theperformanceshavebeenrescheduled.

B.Studentdiscountticketsareavailable.

C.Pricesforallticketshavebeenreduced.

D.Ushersareneededatthetheater.

27.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Joanandherfriendwenttoanewrestaurantlastnightandsaidthatitservedthebestfoodtheyeverhad.Besides,theenvironmentisquietandbeautiful.

W:That'squitearecommendation.Maybeweshouldseeforourselves.

Q:Whatwillthespeakersprobablydo?

(13)

A.AskJoantorecommendagoodrestaurant.

B.EatdinneratJoan'shouse.

C.Asktheirfriendsabouttherestaurant.

D.Gototherestaurant.

28.(25)

A.QuotationsB.Inquiry.C.Quantity.D.Indication

29.(29)

A.Toshowthekeyroleplayedbyairtrafficcontrollers.

B.Toshowthegreatresponsibilityshoulderedbythepilots.

C.Togiveanexampleofairdisasters.

D.Toshowthatairtravelisfarsaferthandrivingacar.

30.聽(tīng)力原文：W:DowehaveanyassignmentforMonday?Idon'thaveanythingwrittendown.

M:Nothingtoreadinthetextbook,butwehavetoseeamovieandwriteaparagraphaboutit.

Q:WhathavethestudentsbeenassignedtodobeforeMonday?

(13)

A.Nothing.

B.Tocheckoutbooksfromthelibrary.

C.Toseeamovieandwriteaparagraph.

D.Toreadthenextchapterinthetextbook.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

【C8】

32.

Unionworkerselecttheirrepresentativestomakeupsystemtoworkwithtradeunionofficials______.

33.

Akeyloggerisasoftwarethatcouldbeusedto______.

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S4】

35.

【S5】

36.

【S2】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.(91)

38.

【S6】

39.

【S5】

參考答案

1.IstheCountrysideaGoodCareerChoiceforGraduateStudents?[1]Todaymanycollegestudentsaredeterminedto"gotothecountryside"whentheygraduate.ThousandsofthemchoosetoworkasvillageadministratorsinChina.Inmyopinionthisisahealthytrendinoursociety.[2]Ontheonehandithelps[3]alleviatejob-huntingpressuresonthosenewcollegegraduates.Whileit'sdifficultforthemtofindjobsinthecitytherearegoldenopportunitiesinthecountry.Workinginthecountrysidemayprovidethemwithdecentsalaryandvaluablelifeexperience.[4]Ontheotherhandwiththeknowledgeacquiredinuniversitythestudentscanhelpupgradetheruralgovernanceimprovefarmingtechnologiesandmakelifeinthecountrymorecolorfulandinteresting.[5]Justasmanycollegegraduatessayit'snolongerashameforthemtoseekcareersinthevastruralareas.[6]Choosingtoworkinthecountrydoesgoodtoboththestudentsandthecountryinthelongrun.IstheCountrysideaGoodCareerChoiceforGraduateStudents?[1]Today,manycollegestudentsaredeterminedto"gotothecountryside"whentheygraduate.ThousandsofthemchoosetoworkasvillageadministratorsinChina.Inmyopinion,thisisahealthytrendinoursociety.[2]Ontheonehand,ithelps[3]alleviatejob-huntingpressuresonthosenewcollegegraduates.Whileit'sdifficultforthemtofindjobsinthecity,therearegoldenopportunitiesinthecountry.Workinginthecountrysidemayprovidethemwithdecentsalaryandvaluablelifeexperience.[4]Ontheotherhand,withtheknowledgeacquiredinuniversity,thestudentscanhelpupgradetheruralgovernance,improvefarmingtechnologies,andmakelifeinthecountrymorecolorfulandinteresting.[5]Justasmanycollegegraduatessay,it'snolongerashameforthemtoseekcareersinthevastruralareas.[6]Choosingtoworkinthecountrydoesgoodtoboththestudentsandthecountryinthelongrun.解析：[1]點(diǎn)題，指出許多大學(xué)生到農(nóng)業(yè)就業(yè)的現(xiàn)象，如到農(nóng)村當(dāng)“村官”。

[2][4]ontheonehand和Ontheotherhand從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)闡述作者的看法，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。

[3]alleviate"減輕”，為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。

[5]seekcareers“找工作”的另一種表達(dá)，為亮點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)。

[6]用dogoodtoboththestudentsandthecountry總結(jié)全文，完滿作結(jié)。

[寫(xiě)作指南]

本文要求對(duì)某一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析，并提出自己的看法。按照題目要求，可以如下安排文章內(nèi)容:

第一段描述社會(huì)現(xiàn)象:當(dāng)今許多剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生選擇到農(nóng)村就業(yè)，如有的大學(xué)生到農(nóng)村當(dāng)“村官”。

第二段提出自己的看法，認(rèn)為大學(xué)生到農(nóng)村就業(yè)是一個(gè)好現(xiàn)象。從大學(xué)生自身和農(nóng)村的發(fā)展這兩個(gè)角度說(shuō)明其好處。

第三段總結(jié)全文，并進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明大學(xué)生去農(nóng)村就業(yè)是好的選擇。

2.Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady--collegestudentpreferred--tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekendwhenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunmingtheworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2daysandthenwe'llheadforJinggangshanaformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisittherewewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghaisothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.AseverybodyknowsShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghaisothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes"JustasthereisParadiseinheaventhereareSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth"soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogetherourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldbearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglishandIwouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming@126.com)orphonecall(12345678).Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady--collegestudentpreferred--tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekend,whenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunming,theworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2days,andthenwe'llheadforJinggangshan,aformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisitthere,wewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghai,sothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.Aseverybodyknows,ShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghai,sothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes,"JustasthereisParadiseinheaven,thereareSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth",soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogether,ourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldbearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglish,andIwouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming@126.com)orphonecall(12345678).

3.MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS①Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeoplehavejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajorcommunicationchannel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemostfrequentlyusedfunctionforthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrommakingcalls.③SMShasbroughtusmanyadvantages.Firstlywiththetipofyourfingermessageswithwordsdigitalpicturesandmusiccanbesenttoanotheruserwithinseconds.What'smoreyoucansendonemessagetomanyuserswithoutrewritingitSecondlycomparedwithmakingcallsSMSismuchcheaperbecausetheproviderchargesonly0.1￥permessage④Howevershortmessagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequiteannoyingandthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeencheatedorfooledbythem.⑤AsformeIpreferusingthiswayofcommunicationitgivesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalsohopesomemeasuresshouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbagemessagessothatwecanenjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafelyMyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS①Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplehavejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajorcommunicationchannel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemostfrequentlyusedfunctionforthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrommakingcalls.③SMShasbroughtusmanyadvantages.Firstly,withthetipofyourfinger,messageswithwords,digitalpicturesandmusiccanbesenttoanotheruserwithinseconds.What'smore,youcansendonemessagetomanyuserswithoutrewritingitSecondly,comparedwithmakingcalls,SMSismuchcheaperbecausetheproviderchargesonly0.1￥permessage④However,shortmessagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequiteannoying,andthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeencheatedorfooledbythem.⑤Asforme,Ipreferusingthiswayofcommunication,itgivesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalsohopesomemeasuresshouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbagemessagessothatwecanenjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafely解析：①審題及布局。這是一篇比較典型的提綱式作文。按照文章提示的要求，首先應(yīng)該對(duì)越來(lái)越多的年輕人把手機(jī)短信作為交流的主要渠道這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單介紹，然后說(shuō)明使用手機(jī)短信的利與弊，最后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，即喜歡這種交流方式與否。在布局上，根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱來(lái)展開(kāi)，采用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)即可。第一段介紹這種現(xiàn)象；第二段說(shuō)明使用短信交流的利弊，應(yīng)該注意根據(jù)自己的觀點(diǎn)事先安排說(shuō)明利弊的比重，即如果認(rèn)為利大于弊，就應(yīng)該多說(shuō)明益處，反之亦然；第三段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。②語(yǔ)言。本文是一篇論說(shuō)文，論說(shuō)要層次分明，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔流暢，盡量避免重復(fù)使用同一句式或詞匯，以增加文采。時(shí)態(tài)上采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。

4.ALettertotheEditorofaCampusMagazine3March2006DearEditorIwasabsolutelyappalledbythesenselessdeathofTomGranger.Itisquiteimpossibletobelievethatpeopleareallowedtorisktheirliveslikethis.PersonallyIthinkthatpeopleshouldwanttobesafeandprotectedfromdanger.Theyshouldnotfinddangerousactivitiesthrillingandexciting.Equallythisclubshouldnotattractweakandvulnerableyoungpeoplewhobelievetheymustdosomethingtotallyoutrageoustoimpresspeopleandwinrespect.Thisclubhasnovalueeitherforthemembersorforthesociety.Infactitputsavalueonthemostnegativethingofall—possibledeath.IfIsawavulnerableandunbalancedpersonplayingwithagunIwouldtakeitawayfromhim.Similarlywhenweseepeopleareabouttohurtthemselveswemuststopthem.Inadditionthereissomethingchildishtooaboutthedesiretotraverseofficialboundaries.Canoeingwhereyouaren'tsupposedtobecanoeingjumpingwhereyou'renotsupposedtojumpinvolvestheguiltyfreedomofachildbreakingtherules.Paradoxicallyanobsessionwithbreakingrulesactuallyleavesyoubeholdentothem.TheUniversityshouldstoptheExtremeSportsClubandthegovernmentshouldbanextremesportsthroughoutthecountry.Yoursfaithfully(Signature)ALettertotheEditorofaCampusMagazine3March2006DearEditor,IwasabsolutelyappalledbythesenselessdeathofTomGranger.Itisquiteimpossibletobelievethatpeopleareallowedtorisktheirliveslikethis.Personally,Ithinkthatpeopleshouldwanttobesafeandprotectedfromdanger.Theyshouldnotfinddangerousactivitiesthrillingandexciting.Equally,thisclubshouldnotattractweakandvulnerableyoungpeople,whobelievetheymustdosomethingtotallyoutrageoustoimpresspeopleandwinrespect.Thisclubhasnovalue,eitherforthemembersorforthesociety.Infact,itputsavalueonthemostnegativethingofall—possibledeath.IfIsawavulnerableandunbalancedpersonplayingwithagun,Iwouldtakeitawayfromhim.Similarlywhenweseepeopleareabouttohurtthemselves,wemuststopthem.Inaddition,thereissomethingchildish,too,aboutthedesiretotraverseofficialboundaries.Canoeingwhereyouaren'tsupposedtobecanoeing,jumpingwhereyou'renotsupposedtojumpinvolvestheguiltyfreedomofachildbreakingtherules.Paradoxically,anobsessionwithbreakingrulesactuallyleavesyoubeholdentothem.TheUniversityshouldstoptheExtremeSportsClubandthegovernmentshouldbanextremesportsthroughoutthecountry.Yoursfaithfully,(Signature)

5.Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplanajourneytheyusuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravelagency.[2]TherearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosingSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplanajourney,theyusuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravelagency.[2]Therearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosing解析：本文是“現(xiàn)象-原因分析-自己的看法”類作文。對(duì)于大學(xué)生自助游的原因分析是本作文的難點(diǎn)。范文給出廠三個(gè)方面的原因：自助游省錢(qián)；更有趣；更自由。對(duì)于每一個(gè)原因，范文也都戶以擴(kuò)展，都是“主題+擴(kuò)展”的結(jié)構(gòu)。讀者在自己寫(xiě)作時(shí)，重點(diǎn)也是要訓(xùn)練自己分析問(wèn)題的能力。大學(xué)生選擇自助游，還有別的原因嗎?如何用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)?比如：自助游更有挑戰(zhàn)性；通過(guò)自助游，可以培養(yǎng)學(xué)生自己的策劃能力；可以擁有個(gè)性化的旅游線路，得到其他游客沒(méi)有過(guò)的經(jīng)歷；等等。說(shuō)到“我的看法”，可以表示支持，也町以表示部分支持，甚至可以表示反對(duì)。無(wú)論是什么態(tài)度和看法，都應(yīng)該給出理由——即使是對(duì)第二段提到的理由總結(jié)一下也可以。

[1]介紹現(xiàn)象，以outline第l點(diǎn)為依據(jù)。

[2]用以引出原因的常用句型。

[3][5][7]onereason…anotherreason…thethirdreason…層次分明。

[4]對(duì)[3]加以擴(kuò)展，[6]對(duì)[5]加以擴(kuò)展。[4]和[6]使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使句式富于變化。

[7]同樣是prefer，本句用prefer…ratherthan,與[1]的prefer…to有同有異。

[8]提出自助游是goodchoice的看法。

[9]對(duì)[8]給予支持，也是前面一段話的小結(jié)。

6.THEVALUEOFSCIENCEAtthementionofthevalueofsciencepeoplewillimmediatelyassociateitwithbeneficialresultsofscientificdiscoveries—thejoysandconvenienceswhichsciencehasbroughtintohumanlife.Itistruethatsciencehasrevolutionizedourwayoflifeandtransformedthelivesofbillionsofpeople.Ithasbecomethenew"magic"whichiscapableofdoingeverything.Thelatestdevicesandgadgetsaroundyouforbetterlivinghaveallcomeaboutasaresultoftheapplicationofscientificknowledge.AndpeoplenowcanhardlylivewithouttelephonesTVsetsjetplanesandcomputers.Butthetruevalueofsciencedoesnotmerelylieinthosethings.Itisfullyappreciatedbythewayinwhichsciencecontributestoman'sintellectualgrowthandspiritualwell-being.Itliesratherwithitsprocessthanwithitsresults.Whyarepeoplesoeagertobecomescientists?Whydoscientistsspendtheirwholelifeonobservationexperimentsandresearches?Scientistsarecompelledbycertainbasichumanurges.Oneistheurgetoexplore.ThespiritofColumbusofGalileoandofEinstein—thespiritofconqueringunchartedplacesdiscoveringunknownfactsandclimbinguntroddenmountainpeaks—isaninborngiftweareallendowedwith.Anotheristheurgetocreate.ItisnotonlyembodiedinthecountlessinventionsmadebyEdisontheworldfamousinventorbutalsoexpressedinwhatanordinarycarpenterdoes—hetendstostandasideadmiringatthatexquisitepiecehehasjustfinished.Obviouslysciencedoesmorethanprovidemanwithmaterialthings—ithelpsmantosatisfyhisstrongdesireforexplorationandtofullydevelophisintellectualpotentials.Scienceisman'smostpowerfulweaponwithwhichmanhasfreedhimselffromtheyokeofignoranceandconsequentfear.Scienceisman'streasurehousewhichhasconstantlyprovidedhimwithvitalityhopesambitionsunderstandingandinsights.Scienceisman'sbestfriendwhoisalwaysreadytohelp—helpelevatehimspirituallyandintellectually.Andscienceinitstruesenseisacelebrationofthehumanspirititself.THEVALUEOFSCIENCEAtthementionofthevalueofscience,peoplewillimmediatelyassociateitwithbeneficialresultsofscientificdiscoveries—thejoysandconvenienceswhichsciencehasbroughtintohumanlife.Itistruethatsciencehasrevolutionizedourwayoflifeandtransformedthelivesofbillionsofpeople.Ithasbecomethenew"magic"whichiscapableofdoingeverything.Thelatestdevicesandgadgetsaroundyouforbetterlivinghaveallcomeaboutasaresultoftheapplicationofscientificknowledge.Andpeoplenowcanhardlylivewithouttelephones,TVsets,jetplanesandcomputers.Butthetruevalueofsciencedoesnotmerelylieinthosethings.Itisfullyappreciatedbythewayinwhichsciencecontributestoman'sintellectualgrowthandspiritualwell-being.Itliesratherwithitsprocessthanwithitsresults.Whyarepeoplesoeagertobecomescientists?Whydoscientistsspendtheirwholelifeonobservation,experiments,andresearches?Scientistsarecompelledbycertainbasichumanurges.Oneistheurgetoexplore.ThespiritofColumbus,ofGalileo,andofEinstein—thespiritofconqueringunchartedplaces,discoveringunknownfactsandclimbinguntroddenmountainpeaks—isaninborngiftweareallendowedwith.Anotheristheurgetocreate.ItisnotonlyembodiedinthecountlessinventionsmadebyEdison,theworldfamousinventor,butalsoexpressedinwhatanordinarycarpenterdoes—hetendstostandasideadmiringatthatexquisitepiecehehasjustfinished.Obviously,sciencedoesmorethanprovidemanwithmaterialthings—ithelpsmantosatisfyhisstrongdesireforexplorationandtofullydevelophisintellectualpotentials.Scienceisman'smostpowerfulweapon,withwhichmanhasfreedhimselffromtheyokeofignoranceandconsequentfear.Scienceisman'streasurehouse,whichhasconstantlyprovidedhimwithvitality,hopes,ambitions,understandingandinsights.Scienceisman'sbestfriend,whoisalwaysreadytohelp—helpelevatehimspirituallyandintellectually.Andscience,initstruesense,isacelebrationofthehumanspirititself.

7.DearProfessorSmithIwouldliketoapplyforaplaceattheGraduateSchoolofPhysicsoftheUniversityofIllinoisforstudiesinastrophysicsleadingtothedegreeofDoctorofScience.Iwasbornin1982andgraduatedinPhysicsfromBeijiDearProfessorSmith,IwouldliketoapplyforaplaceattheGraduateSchoolofPhysicsoftheUniversityofIllinoisforstudiesinastrophysicsleadingtothedegreeofDoctorofScience.Iwasbornin1982,andgraduatedinPhysicsfromBeiji

8.[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudywhileothershold