讀后續(xù)寫打碎花瓶的小男孩講義2023屆高考英語作文備考

讀后續(xù)寫材料Ittookplaceinateacher'sfamily.Oneday,Banwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschoolwhenheaccidentallythrewaballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.Whatmadethemmoreupsetwasthatthevastwasnotacommondecoration,butanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavoritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepieceshastily/hurriedlyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Asthemotherherselfdustedthevaseeveryday,shenaturallynoticedthecracks（裂紋）thatevening.Tohersurprise5therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atthedinnertime,sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroom.Andfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthatsonwaslyingforallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However,inthefaceofherson'snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers,Ben'smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn*tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotoherstudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunished,butashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismombecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Paral:Themothersaid,uThischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat.”Para2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared. PreparationWho: Where: What:When: Theme: 寫作構思段一主要寫什么？段一：媽媽說，“這塊巧克力是對你的想象力的獎勵：一只會開窗的貓。”（根據段二所給的首句，本段主要寫男孩的壞態(tài)度和母親給男孩巧克力的過程。）細節(jié)：L男孩尷尬，生氣，并否認;.母親給小孩第二顆巧克力。.男孩的態(tài)度；.母親給小孩第三顆巧克力。段二主要寫什么？段二：手上拿著一些巧克力，男孩的壞態(tài)度消失了。（壞態(tài)度消失了，說明本段要寫男孩認錯，和感悟（圍繞文章的主題“誠實。）細節(jié)：.男孩開始后悔并內疚;.認錯；.母親感欣慰；.明白的大道理。SAMPLEParal:Themothersaid,“Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination—awindow-openingcat."However,Benfeltsoashamedthathisfaceturnedred.Buthestilldeniedwhathehaddone,stampinginanger.Hismotherignoredhiswords,andhandedhimanotherchocolatetohim,sayingwithasmile,uThischocolateisforyourgoodrepairwork/5Asenseoffrightanduneasinesswelledupinsidehim.Butheyelled,'Believeme.Itwasthecatthatbrokethevase.Notme!"Mominterruptedhim,deliveredhimthethirdchocolateandsaidpatiently,'Thischocolateisarewardforpersistence.5,Para2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.Overwhelmedbyasenseofembarrassmentandguilt,hedidn*tlookathismotherinhereyesbecausehismomgavehimsomechocolatesinsteadofblaminghim.Afterrealizinghismistake,heloweredhishead,admittedhismistakeforlying,andsincerelyapologizedtohismother,uSorry,Mum.Ifsmyfaulf.Relievedandsatisfied,hismothergavetherestof