2023四省聯(lián)考英語變式題-讀后續(xù)寫(解析版)

原題1.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It’samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(斷奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.”Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn’tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Butthefamilywasnonetoohappyabouthisvisit.Theyscoldedandswattedathim.AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.Andthenhequicklylearnedsomesocialskills.Hewouldtakesomesnackstomeetthem.Forseveraldaysheplayedalldayinthetreessurroundingourhousebutcamedownatbedtime.

Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgirlsfretted.TheywantedtoseekSquirt.Wepreventedthembecauseitwastoodangerous.Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.Andthatremainedthepatternforweeks.Theexperiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfamily.Inthewildandsomewhatsillymomentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirrel,ourchildrenlearnedtovalueandappreciatelife.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他們決定收養(yǎng)它，看著這只小松鼠從瘦弱幼小，慢慢變的健康活潑，讓作者一家感覺既有趣又溫暖?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天，在樹林里，Squirt遇到了一個灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可描寫Squirt遇到這一家灰松鼠的情況，Squirt如何與灰松鼠一家交往。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，Squirt沒有回到我們家，下起了大雨?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡咭患业膿?dān)心，和最后的結(jié)果，以及作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：遇到灰松鼠——與灰松鼠一家交往——沒有回家，擔(dān)心它——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①責(zé)罵：scold/blame/rebuke②拍打：swat/slap/hit③尋找：seek/find/lookfor/searchfor④阻止：prevent/putastopto/headoff情緒類①高興的：happy/delighted②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing【點睛】[高分句型1]AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.(so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)[高分句型2]Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)變式基礎(chǔ)題12.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Whenmydaughtersreachedthethirdandfourthgrades,Isometimesallowedthemtowalktoandfromschoolaloneiftheweatherpermitted.Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedthemhomeafterschool.Ithadshortlegsandlonglovelyears.ItwasthecutestdogIhadeverseenandthegirlsbeggedmetokeepit.Thedogwasabouttwelveweeksold.Ithadnocollar(項圈)oridentifyingmarksofanysort.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.IthoughtaboutpostinganadvertisementbutIreallydidn’twantto.Itwouldbreakthekids’heartsifsomeoneshouldshowup.Besides,itsownersshouldhavewatcheditmoreclosely.Bytheendoftheweekthedogwaspartofourfamily.Itwasveryintelligentandgoodwiththegirls.Thefollowingweeksomethingtoldmetocheckthelost—and—foundsectioninthelocalpaper.OneparticularadvertisementjumpedoutatmeandmyheartbeatwithfearforwhatIread.Someonewasbeggingforthereturnofalostdogintheneighborhoodofourgradeschool.Theysoundedextremelyeager.Myhandshook,couldn’tbringmyselftopickupthepaper.Instead,IpretendedIhadn’tseentheadvertisement.Iquicklyputpaperawayinthedrawerandcontinuedwithmydusting.Ineversaidawordaboutittothekidsormyhusband.Bynowwehadnamedthedog.ItlookedlikeaMolly,sothatwaswhatwecalledit.Itfollowedthegirlseverywheretheywent.Whentheywentoutside,itwasonestepbehindthem.Whentheydidthehousework,itwastheretolendahand.Therewasonlyoneproblemwiththisseeminglyperfectpicture:myconscience(良心)wasbotheringme.IknewinmyheartIhadtocallthatnumberinthepaperandseeifourMollywasthedogtheyweredesperatelyseeking.ItwasthemostdifficultthingI’veeverdone.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.Withbutterfliesinmystomach,Idialedthetelephonenumber.SecretlyIprayednoonewouldanswer,butsomeonedid.Thevoiceontheotherendwasthatofayoungwoman.Afterdescribingthedogtoherindetail,sheimmediatelywantedtocomeover.Isaidthatmydaughtersloveitverymuchandmeanwhileapologizedfornothavingcontactedherafewdaysbefore.30minuteslater,thebellrangandMollywasbarking.Iopenedthedoor,forcingmyselftofaceit.IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.Mollystartedwaggingitstailandbarkingexcitedlyasifithadrecognizedsomeonefamiliar.Surprisedandexcited,thewomantoldmethatshecouldn’tsleepwellwithoutitandthankedusforkeepingherdogforthesedays.Sheofferedtogivemesomecashasareward,butIrefused.AftershetookMollyaway,Icrackedasmile.IknewIhaddonetherightthing―thatpuppywasexactlywhereshebelonged．【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，主要講述了一條小狗跟著孩子們來到了作者家，由于小狗很可愛，孩子們特別喜愛它，乞求作者收留小狗。作者心里明白，應(yīng)該刊登廣告尋找狗主人。但為了不傷孩子們的心，作者決定收留小狗。幾周后，作者在報紙上看到了一條尋找失蹤小狗的信息，而小狗已融入作者家中，所以作者不想打電話聯(lián)系失主，但仍良心不安，陷入糾結(jié)?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫:①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我百感交集，終于拿起了電話”可知，第一段可描寫作者打電話之后發(fā)生的事。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我請那個女人進來，她很快彎下腰，緊緊地抱住莫利。”可知，第二段可描寫小狗確實是這家人的，雖然不舍，但作者一家歸還了小狗，作者認(rèn)為自己做了正確的事情。2.續(xù)寫線索:打電話——確認(rèn)信息——失主到來——認(rèn)狗——還狗3.詞匯激活行為類①過來：comeover/dropover②道歉:apologizefor/saysorryfor③告訴：tell/inform情緒類①開心:crackasmile/happy②興奮的：excited/thrilled【點睛】[高分句型1]Isaidthatmydaughtersloveitverymuchandmeanwhileapologizedfornothavingcontactedherafewdaysbefore.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]IknewIhaddonetherightthing―thatpuppywasexactlywhereshebelonged．(where引導(dǎo)的表語從句)變式基礎(chǔ)題23.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。LittleRatLittleRatwasnotarat.Shewasagirlofseven,butmostneighboursthoughtshewasonlyfour.Peoplecalledherbythatbecauseherskinwastoodark.Intheearly1900s,lifewasrathertoughforakidwithoutparents.Shewasoftenteasedwithquestionslike,“Whoisyourfather?Whereisyourmother?”O(jiān)nenightLittleRatlaydownonherbedafteraday’sheavywork.Shewasabouttofallintosleepwhenshesawaratslippingoutofaholeinthewall.“Alittlerat!”shescreamed,whichscaredtherattoescapeaway.Lyingdown,however,somehowthegirlcouldn’tsleepanymore.“It’sgoodthatI’mnotalonehere,”shethought.Sheslippeddownfromthebed,tiptoedafewstepsaway,andlookedatthehole.Again,theratranout,shookoffthedustfromhisfursandsmelledaroundwithhislittlewetnose.Atlasthefoundachickenboneonthefloor.Theratpickedupthebonewithhisswiftpawsandbegantobiteitgreedily.“Hemustbeveryhungry,”thegirlthought.Theideamadeherfeelhungry,too.Carefullyshetookasmallpieceofbreadoutofherpocketandthrewsomeontothefloorbeforethelittlerat.Seeingnothreatfromthehumanbeforehim,theanimalreachedthebreadandallofasuddenheforgotallpossibledangersandsnatchedthebread.Sodayafterdaythegirlkeptcompanywiththelittlerat.Shefedhimwiththelittlefoodshehad,andtheratwouldeatoutofherhand.Thegirlwasbeatenbyherauntmoreoftenthanbefore,becauseshealwaysseemedeagertorunbacktoherlittleroomafterdoingthewashingintheevening.Onemorningthegirlwascarryingabarrelofwatertoheraunt’sgarden.Suddenlysheheardasharpcryfromthekitchen.Itwasheraunt.“Rat!Arat!”shescreamed.Thenthegirlheardthewomanchasingtheratinthekitchen.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癕ylittlerat!”theideaoccurredtothegirl________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thegirlwatchedtheneighboursgatheringatthedoorandwasfrightened.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Mylittlerat!”theideaoccurredtothegirl.Shewasveryworriedaboutherlittlerat,butshecouldnotdoanythingtostopheraunt.Shewasafraidthatherauntwouldscoldandbeather.Shecouldonlystanddesperatelyoutsidethekitchen.Sheheardherauntinthekitchen,screamingandbangingfromtimetotime.However,herauntdidnotseemtosucceed.Soshebegantoshoutforhelp.Whentheneighborsheardthecryforhelp,theyallgatheredatthedoor.Thegirlwatchedtheneighboursgatheringatthedoorandwasfrightened.Thistime,shereallyworriedthatherlittleratwouldbecaughtandkilled.Andtheneighborsbegantogiveadvicetoherauntinthekitchen.However,becausethekitchenspacewasverysmallandthereweremanyitems,thelittlerathidflexibly.Atthesametime,herauntwasafraidofdamagingthings,soshedidn’tcatchthemouseforawhile.Thentwoneighborsvolunteeredtohelp.Whentheyopenedthekitchendoor,theybumpedintoeachotheratthedoor.Atthatmoment,thelittleratranoutofthecrackanddisappearedquickly.Thelittlegirlfinallybreathedasighofrelief.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一名可憐的小女孩，因為沒有父母，和阿姨住在一起，但是她的阿姨對她很不好。后來，一只小老鼠為她的好朋友，小老鼠日復(fù)一日地陪伴著女孩，這讓小女孩不再感到孤獨。但是有一天，女孩的阿姨在廚房里發(fā)現(xiàn)了小老鼠，于是她開始抓老鼠。這讓女孩十分的擔(dān)心?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容““我小老鼠！”女孩想到了這個想法?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懶∨⑾氲侥强赡苁且恢迸惆樽约旱男±鲜?，女孩開始變得非常擔(dān)心，同時阿姨開始想盡辦法抓老鼠的情景。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“女孩看著鄰居聚集在門口，嚇壞了。”可知，第二段可描寫鄰居們來查看情況，并幫忙抓老鼠，但是最終女孩的小老鼠成功脫險的過程。2.續(xù)寫線索：擔(dān)心——無助——阿姨抓老鼠——無果——呼叫幫助——鄰居幫忙——投鼠忌器——小老鼠成功逃脫3詞匯激活行為類①阻止：stop/prevent②躲藏：hide/elude③破壞：damag/destroy情緒類①擔(dān)心：beworriedabout/feelanxious②絕望地：desperately/hopelessly【點睛】[高分句型1]Sheheardherauntinthekitchen,screamingandbangingfromtimetotime.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Whentheneighborsheardthecryforhelp,theyallgatheredatthedoor.(運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)[高分句型3]However,becausethekitchenspacewasverysmallandthereweremanyitems,thelittlerathidflexibly.(運用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)變式鞏固題14.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的短文。Once,therewasavillagercalledRajkumar,whowasverygreedyandlovedtotakerisks.Onesunnysummermorning,Rajkumardecidedtowalkhissheepoutofhisvillageforgrass.Afterleavinghisvillage,Rajkumarledhissheeptoasmallhill,whichwasclosetoabigforestandfarawayfromhisvillage.Whenreachingthehill,Rajkumarlookedforgreengrass.Andhefounditinthenorthernhillside.Thenhelethissheepstaytheretoeatgrass.Onehourlater,suddenlyitstartedtorainheavily.Tolethissheepescapetherain,Rajkumarledthemtoacavenearby.Andhetiedthemthere,preventingthemfromrunningaway.Whentherainbecamelessheavy,feelingbored,Rajkumarleftthecaveandwalkedaround.Soonhecametothewesternhillside.Hefoundanothercavethere.Andtohisamazement,hesawmanybigwildgoatsinsidethecave,whichwerealsotakingshelterfromrain.Rajkumarthoughtifhecouldhavethesegoats,he’dbetherichestmaninhisvillage.So,hedecidedtousegrasstoattractthemtohisvillage.Heknewtherewaslittlechanceofsuccessbecausethelocalwildgoatsfearedhumansanddidn’thavemuchtrustinhumans.Buthestillwantedtohaveatry.Sincetherewasnofreshgrassnearby,hecamebacktotheprevioushillsideandstartedcollectinggrass.SoonRajkumarmanagedtofindalotofgrass.However,hefoundhedidn’thavearopetotieit.Lookingathissheephehadtiedwitharope,hedecidedtountiethemandusetheropetotiethegrass.Althoughthatmeantthesheepwouldlaterprobablyrunaway,thinkingaboutsomanygoats,hethoughtitwasariskworthtaking.SoRajkumaruntiedhissheep.Hetiedthegrassusingtherope.Carryingthegrass,hecametothecavewherethewildgoatsstayed.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;Whenheapproached,thegoatsappearednervous._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Buthewasshockedtofindthegoatshadalreadyleftandwerequicklyjumpingtotheforest._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenheapproached,thegoatsappearednervous.Thenhestoppedandbeganputtinggrassbeforehimallthewaywhilewalkingback.Beforelongtherainbecamelight.Thegoatscameouttoeatthegrassbutstayedcautious.Soonnograssremainedandthegoatswouldn’tliketofollowhimanymore.SoRajkumarhurriedbacktocollectgrassagain.Aftercollectinggrass,herantothepreviousspotwherethegoatshadstood.Buthewasshockedtofindthegoatshadalreadyleftandwerequicklyjumpingtotheforest.Worried,heranfastafterthemandshoutedtostopthem.Butnosinglegoatturnedback,andsoonallgoatsdisappearedintotheforest.Upset,Rajkumarwalkedback,decidingtosearchforhissheep,butinvain.Nowhisclotheswereallwet,andhesatontheground,regrettingthewholething.Aftercalmingdown,hefinallyrealizeditwashisgreedandunwisedecisionthatcausedhisloss.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以設(shè)法占有野山羊為線索展開，講述了一個貪婪的村民Rajkumar想占有山里的野山羊，結(jié)果野山羊沒到手自己的綿羊也被弄丟了的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)他走近時，山羊顯得很緊張”可知，本段可以描寫Rajkumar用青草誘惑野山羊出來的過程。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“但他震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)，山羊已經(jīng)離開，并迅速跳進森林”可知，本段可以描寫Rajkumar沒有弄到野山羊，并且自己的綿羊也弄丟了。2.續(xù)寫線索：野山羊保持謹(jǐn)慎——草吃光了野山羊不再愿意跟著Rajkumar——Rajkumar很擔(dān)心大喊著制止野山羊跑走——野山羊和自己的綿羊都不見了，Rajkumar很沮喪3.詞匯激活行為類①保持：stay/keep②跟隨：follow/goafter③喊叫：shout/scream情緒類①擔(dān)心的：worried/concerned②沮喪的：upset/depressed【點睛】[高分句型1].Aftercollectinggrass,herantothepreviousspotwherethegoatshadstood.(運用了where引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句)[高分句型2].Aftercalmingdown,hefinallyrealizeditwashisgreedandunwisedecisionthatcausedhisloss.(運用了省略that的賓語從句以及itbe...that...的強調(diào)句)變式鞏固題25.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Christmaswasalmosthere.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Arrivinghome,Bensaid,“Isawtwohorsestrappedbytheheavysnow.”FatherlookedatJack,theolderson.“Well,gotakealook.Taketherifleandsomehay.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot...”Thenextmorning,BenandJacksetoffinthecold,crispsnow.Thesnowmobilesankabitinthedeepsnow,buttheykeptgoing.Atlasttheyreachedtheclearingwherethehorsesstood.“They’restarving!”saidBen.Oneofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.“Well,”saidJack,sighing,pickinguptherifle.“There’snowaytogetthemdownthroughthesnow.Andtheylookprettybad.”“No!No!”criedBen.“Weshouldtry,”hepleaded.“Howdoweknowhowbadtheyreallyare?Dadcangetthevet!”“Well,Idon’tknow,“saidJackslowly.Hewalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedthebigbrownoneontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound.“Maybeyou’reright.”Benquicklygotthehayandspreaditaround.ThehorsesatehungrilyandBenpouredwaterintoapailforthem.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.“Whatifweputthemonabigsled?”Jacksaid.“Idon’tknowhowwecouldgetasledthatbigupthere,"Dadsighed.“Ithinkthekindestthingtodoistoputthemoutoftheirmisery.”“No!”saidBen.“Welljusthavetoshovel(鏟)apathortunnelthen.”Hisparentsraisedtheireyebrows.“That’salongway,andalotofsnow.Idon’tknowifitcanbedone,”Dadsaid,“unlesswehaveanawfullotofpeopleshoveling.”Bencouldseehewaswarmingtotheidea.“We’llfindsome!”saidBen.Hegrabbedhiscoatandboots.“Comeon,Jack,let’sgo!”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,agroupofsnowmobilersarrivedwithshovelsandhotchocolate,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.Theywenttothehardwarestoreandthegasstation,puttingnoticesupinthegrocerystoreandthelibrary.Theywenttothebankandthehotel.Thentheytookthesnowmobilebackupthemountainwithmorehayandwaterandsomewarmblankets.Thehorsesseemedhappytoseethem.BenandJackstartedshoveling.Theyworkedforhoursbutonlymadeasmalldentinthesnow.“Thisishopeless,”saidJack.Heleanedonhisshovelandwipedhisdrippingnose.“Let’sgohome.Nooneisgoingtohelp.”Beninsisted,“Wecan’tgiveup.”Buthisfingerswerefrozen,hisnosenumb.Suddenly,agroupofsnowmobilersarrivedwithshovelsandhotchocolate.TheyhadfollowedBenandJack’stracksupthetrail.“Boys,takeabreak,”theysaid.“Therearemorecoming!”Peoplecameandshoveledeveryday,andadeep,narrowtrenchveryslowlyworkeditswaydownthemountain.ItwasalmostChristmas,butnoonehadtimetoeventhinkaboutthat.JackandBenconstantlywenttofeedandwaterandtalktothehorses.Ontheseventhday,hearingmuffledvoicesandthesoundofshovels,theyknewtheywerealmostthere.Inafewminutestherewasacheer,twomenwithshovelsbreakingthroughthesnowatthebottom.Everyonewascelebratingandhuggingeachother.“Wedidit,Jack!”saidBen,grinningfromeartoear.“Wealldidittogether!”【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在圣誕節(jié)前夕，遠(yuǎn)處山路上的雪又新又厚。拿著步槍和一些干草本和杰克打算去去看看被大雪困住的兩匹馬的情況。在觀察了這兩匹馬的情況后，杰克認(rèn)為最好的辦法就是讓他們結(jié)束痛苦。然而，本覺得他們應(yīng)該嘗試拯救他們，于是他們回到家里和家人商量拯救這兩匹馬的辦法?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“兄弟倆挨家挨戶地請大家來幫忙?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懶值軅z如何請求大家的幫助和兄弟倆為拯救兩匹馬，他們開始鏟雪，雖然只在雪地上留下了一個小凹痕，但是他們不放棄。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“突然，一群雪地摩托司機帶著鐵鍬和熱巧克力來了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫許多人加入拯救這兩匹馬，開始鏟雪，最終馬得救的過程。

2.續(xù)寫線索：貼廣告求助——鏟雪舉步維艱——不放棄——眾人幫助——齊心協(xié)力——拯救馬匹3.詞匯激活

行為類

①放棄：giveup/quit/abandon

②回家：gobackhome/returnhome/gohome情緒類

①無助的：hopeless/unassisted

②開懷大笑：laughaheartylaugh/grinningfromeartoear【點睛】[高分句型1]Thehorsesseemedhappytoseethem.（運用了動詞不定式tosee作原因狀語）

[高分句型2]Ontheseventhday,hearingmuffledvoicesandthesoundofshovels,theyknewtheywerealmostthere.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞hearing作狀語和省略了that的引導(dǎo)賓語從句）變式提高題16.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihadjustchangedintomyrunningclothesandwasleavingmyoffice,offforaruneventhoughitwaswellover38℃outside.Icouldn’texplainit,butIfelttheneedtorundespitetherecordheat.Aquarter-mileintomyjog,Iwasexhausted.Iadmitteddefeatandturnedaround.AsIapproachedmycar,Isawadogcirclingit.WhenIreachedforthedoorhandle,thedogdisappearedbeneaththecarintotheshade.Igrabbedmybottleandtookadrinkofwater.Ithengotdownonmykneestolookforthedog.WhenIstoodup,Ifoundhimsittinginthedriver’sseat,panting(喘息).Ireachedoverandstartedthecar,turningtheairconditioningonhigh.Heturnedhisfacetowardthevents,enjoyingthecoldair,hismoustacheblowing.Ipouredsomewaterintothebottlecapandofferedittothedog.Hedraineditinafewdesperategulps(一大口).Irefilleditseveraltimesbeforehehadhisfill.Heworenocollar.Iwalkedaroundbuttherewasnooneinsight.Istoodthere,lookingatthedogstaringbackatmethroughthewindow.Hewaitedpatientlyasifhe’dbeeninmycardozensoftimesbefore.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Leavinghiminthatheatwasoutofthequestion.Hewoulddie.Idecidedtodrivehimhome.Beforewewereoutoftheparkinglot,hehadclimbedontomylap.Helookedupatme,andthenlickedmysweatyface.“Ugh!Nolicking!”Ihadneverbeenadogperson.Theysmelt,theywereloud,andtheyweremessy.Mynewly-marriedhusbandhadalreadyresignedtothefactthatwewouldneverhaveadog.Andnowonewasinmycar,onmylap!Ipulledintomydrivewayandshruggedasmyhusbandsawthedog,hiseyeswideatthisnewdevelopment.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar.Wesattogetherwaitingforshelterworkers,whilethedogdidn’tmoveexcepttolickmyface.Strangely,Iwasalreadystartingtolikethisfeeling.Ipettedhim,comfortinghimthateverythingwouldbeokay.Whentheshelterworkersarrived,herosesuddenly,andthenloweredhiseyesdisappointedly.Seeingthesweetdogloadedontothevan,pattingonthewindowhelplessly,Ifeltamixtureofreliefandsadness.MyheartspokebeforeIknewit,“Ifheisn’tclaimed,I’lladopthim.”Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome.Atthesighto