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Suggestionletter應用文寫作一Para1:描述對方情況/問題

+寫信目的1.Sorrytoknowthat……(大致描述問題).I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning+名詞短語2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon……andI'lltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.3.I’mwritingtooffermysuggestionson……題干部分會給出Para2:提建議的句型1.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingmeasures.(總起)2.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbemuchbetter.3.被動句/非謂語作主語（重要信息提前）比如：Doingsthisawisechoice,which+功能4.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat+虛擬語氣5.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...6.You'dbetterdo/notdoYoumightaswelldosth7.Youmayconsiderdoingsth.8.虛擬+倒裝：WereIyou,Iwould......Para3:結尾套話（提出希望）——價值2分！1.Intheend,Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/practical/helpful.2.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifyouwouldconsidermysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.3.Idohopeyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.4.Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetocontactme/Don'thesitatetoletmeknowifyouhaveanyproblem.

假如你是Mary，你的好友陳潔最近因為考試頻率過高，課業(yè)繁重，感到身體不適，嚴重影響了學習。因此，她發(fā)e-mail給你，尋求你的建議和幫助。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示予以回復。內容要點：1.健康合理的飲食；2.有規(guī)律且適度的運動；3.……注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結尾已為你寫好；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChenJie, __________________________Yours,MarySuggestionletterThefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbecomemuchbetter.林逸婧/黃思琪(獨立主格)Asyourfriend,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanbebackonyourtrackassoonaspossibleandstudyhappily.李好雨Doingexerciseregularlyisawisechoice,whichwill

surelymakeyoucheerfulandraiseyourlearningefficiency.朱思晴DearChenJie, 許真渝

Learningthatthefrequentexamsandlotsofhomeworkhavetroubledyoualot,I'mwritingtohelpyouworkouttheproblem. Therefollowsthesuggestions.Itisstronglyrecommendedthatyouhaveabalanceddietwhichallowsyoutogainabundantnutritionandkeepfit.Exercisingregularlyandadequatelymakesyourefreshed.Additionally,you'dbetterlistentosomesoftmusicandreadsomebooksyoulike,throughwhichyourstresswouldbedrivenaway. Iwillappreciateitifyoutakemysuggetionsintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,MaryDearChenJie, 黃思琪

Sorrytoknowthatyouhavetroubleinstudy.I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningstudyhabits.

Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Firstly,itwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucoulddevelopabalanceddiet.Additionally,you'dbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.Lastly,stayinguptostudydoesharmtoyourhealth.Havingadequateresttimeisawisechoice,whichcanregainyourenergy. Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetoturntomewheneveryouhavetrouble.Yourssincerely,MaryDearChenJie, Ifeelsosorrytohearthatyouarefeelingbadthesedays.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthyandkeepattentiveinclass.Thefollowingaremysuggetions. Healthyeatinghabitsareofgreatimportance.Soyou'dbetterhaveyourmealsontimeandkeepabalanceddiet.Then,takingmorningexerciseeverydayisanicechoice,whichhelpstobuildupyourbody.Youcandosomesportstorefreshyourselfifweatherpermits.Finally,don'tstayuptoolate;otherwiseyou'llsufferaloteverynight.

Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggetions.Hopeyou'llfeelwellsoon.Yourssincerely,LiHuaSuggestionletter應用文寫作二（寧波九校聯(lián)考）注意審題！不同的題目，要求的段落結構也不同一：內容要點： 1.健康合理的飲食； 2.有規(guī)律且適度的運動； 3.……二：內容包括： 1.你對這個事件的看法。 2.你的建議

假如你是Jack,你的同學Ben給你發(fā)了一個電子郵件（e-mail）,請根據(jù)信息的內容，用英語給他回復。內容包括：1.你對這個事件的看法。2.你的建議注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可適當添加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。DearJack,I'mwritingtoyouforsomeadvice.

IplayedabadjokeonmybestfriendJohntheotherday.Ididn'trealizethatthejokehadgonealittletoofaruntilhestartedtoignoremeandrefusetotalktome.Itmademeveryupset.However,Idon'twanttoapologizebecauseIthinkitwasonlyajoke,butIdon'twanttoloseourfriendship,either.WhatshouldIdo?DearBen,Sorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.____Yours,JackFACTPROBLEM1)Ithinkit'syourfault.(委婉點it's+adj+ofsbtodosth）1.你對這個事件的看法。（句型提高）學霸版Franklyspeaking,

it'sinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers,eventhoughyoumeannoharm.其他不同觀點？Bothofyoushouldsharetheresponsibility.Neitherofyouaretoblame.進擊版It'sinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers.2)Youthinkitisonlyajoke,butitmightbeunacceptableforJohn.(定從/名從)1.你對這個事件的看法。（句型提高）WhatyouthinkisonlyajokemightbeunacceptableforJohn.許真渝Thejokewhichyouconsideracceptablemighthurtyourfriend.葉均涵

2.你的建議（句型提高）1)Ithinkyoushouldmakeanapologytoyourfriend.Itisimportanttorebuildyourfriendship.（定從）2)Ithinkyoushouldwritealettertohimandtellhimyourapologyandyoudon'twanttoloseyourbestfriend.（非謂）Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldwritealettertohim,tellinghim

yourapologyandyoudon'twanttoloseyourbestfriend.章子怡Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldmakeansincereapologytoyourfriend,whichisofimportancetorebuildyourfriendship.黃佳樂2.你的建議（句型提高）3)Youcanwriteanapologyonthepaper.Inthiswayyoucanavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.(動名詞作主語)4)Youcanexplaintoyourfriend.Itcanletyourfriendknowwhatyouthink.(動名詞作主語)1.Writinganapologyonthepaperisawisechoice,whichenablesyoutoavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.葉鈞涵Explainingtoyourfriendassoonaspossibleisaneffectivechoice,whichenablesyourfriendtoknowwhatyouexactlymean.張家豪2.Ifyoudon'twanttoapologizetohimfacetoface,writingaletterisawisechoice,whichisbeneficialtoavoidtheembarrassment.

余昕冕DearBen,

Sorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthismatter. Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtoplaythejokeproperly.Otherwise,itwilldoharmtoyourfriendshipratherthanimproveit.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ifyoudon'twanttoapologizeinperson,you'dbettershowhimyourapologybysendinghimsomegifts.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldhelphimenthusiasticlywhenheisinneed.

Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Yours,Jack金歆悅DearBen,

Sorrytohearthatyou’rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.Iknowyou’refeelingtorn

betweenmakinganapologyandlosingthefriendship.Iguessyoujustwantedtoplayajokeanddidn’tmeantohurtJohn.Buthetookitseriouslyandfelthurt.Ithinkneitherofyouar