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寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文thecityofBeijingtheTian’anmenSquaretheGreatWallthePalaceMuseum/theForbiddenCitytheTempleofHeaventheSummerPalacetheBeihaiParktheBeijingZootheOlympicParkWritingSteps1.PREWRITE2.OUTLINE3.DRAFT 4.REVISE 5.PROOFREAD6.PUBLISH

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北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定對這里的景點(diǎn)非常熟悉。某英語報(bào)紙正在向北京的中學(xué)生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個(gè)景點(diǎn)，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語:theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題: ●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？WritingTaskPrewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用途和功能2.標(biāo)注出主題和要點(diǎn)中的關(guān)鍵詞3.確定好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)態(tài)4.確定好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的人稱

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定對這里的景點(diǎn)非常熟悉。某英語報(bào)紙正在向北京的中學(xué)生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個(gè)景點(diǎn)，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語：theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題:●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？審題：用途、主題、要點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱ThreeparagraphsThreeanswers/ThreetopicsentencesOutlinePara1---Answer1(Topicsentence1)_____________________________Para2---Answer2(Topicsentence2)______________________________Para3---Answer3(Topicsentence3)______________________________OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Iwentboatingandtookalotofpictures.Thetripwasveryinterestingbecause...ThreeparagraphsUsesentencepatternsUsetransitionalwordsMakesureyouwritecorrectsentencesDraftKeepinmindBasicprinciplesofbeinggoodwriting:honesty,clarity,brevity,andvariety.Beinghonest:Baseyourwritingonthesubject.Beingclear:Don’tpuzzleyourreaders.Beingbrief:Don’twasteyourreaders’time;don’trepeat.Seekingvariety:Varysentencelength/expressions/vocabulary,workonaliveness.第一檔：（9~10分）

完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式多樣，詞匯豐富，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。REVISEComestraighttothepoint:IwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Descriptionoftheplace:TheBeihaiParkliesinthecenterofBeijinganditisfamousfortheWhiteTower.Significancecomesfirst:TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Quotesandsayings:Asthesayinggoes,“HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”REVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Wheredidyougo?*visitoldbuildings/palaces*enjoythebeautifulflowersandgreentrees*takephotos(of…)/climbthehill/themountain*learnaboutChineseculture/goboating*takeawalk/haveapicnicREVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Whatdidyoudothere?Itwasa/anwonderful/terrific/unforgettabletripbecause...Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?Ienjoyedthetripverymuchbecause...Thetripwasfullofsurprisesbecause…Ithelpedmelearnmoreabouttheculture.Iwasimpressedwiththebeautifulviewsandtheoldbuildings.“AwalkaboutPariswillprovidelessonsinhistory,beauty,andinthepointofLife.”(ThomasJefferson)REVISE（改進(jìn)）---豐富內(nèi)容First,…Then,…Afterthat,…Finally,…Inthemorning…Intheafternoon…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然萬能句型：notonly…butalso…Itisnecessary/important…(forsb.)todo…spend…doingsth./onsth.help(sb.)dosth./withsth.makesb./sth.do…/makesb./sth.adj.so…that…REVISE

---句型意識很重要Thetripwasinteresting.wasfulloffun wasmeaningfulwasofgreatvaluemadeadifferencetomylife

REVISE---詞匯豐富

PROOFREADPUBLISH

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TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.

TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.AsamplewritingHomeworkFinishthedraft.Reviseyourdraft.Publishyourwriting.1.新聞特寫則是用形象的事實(shí)說話。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面進(jìn)行描述，比消息更細(xì)膩、更生動、更形象。2.由于新聞特寫的畫面感特別強(qiáng)，因此常給讀者以身臨其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自來，題好一半文”，一篇文章有一個(gè)好的標(biāo)題，就像一個(gè)人有一雙明亮有神的眼睛一樣，留給別人的是將是十分美好而深刻的印象，同時(shí)也是文學(xué)修養(yǎng)，語言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，從考試的角度來說，更是作文質(zhì)量高底的一桿標(biāo)尺。4.對于話題作文的擬題我們一定要多一些有針對性的訓(xùn)練，掌握一定的技巧，達(dá)到需要應(yīng)用時(shí)信手拈來，出語不俗的效果，感動自己，征服讀者。5.這些根據(jù)材料提供的話題，進(jìn)一步挖深、提煉出來的題目，源源源于材料而高于材料