初中英語(yǔ)寫作課件

EnglishWriting1精選課件初中英語(yǔ)作文要求要求學(xué)生在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出60-80詞左右的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。2精選課件主要問(wèn)題要點(diǎn)不全線索不清3精選課件【我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)】審題確定文體記敘文書(shū)信。。。把人稱和時(shí)態(tài)定下來(lái)列出要點(diǎn)句句之間，段段之間最好能用連接詞、句子，如firstofall，aboveall，atlast，高級(jí)一點(diǎn)的可以用meanwhile4精選課件抄改連擴(kuò)抓審書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法5精選課件假定你叫張華，最近從報(bào)紙上得知美國(guó)某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：

●表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；

●感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；●希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。

注意：1．詞數(shù)80-100；

2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；

3．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,

__________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,ZhangHua6精選課件針對(duì)3要點(diǎn)goodforthedevelopmentofmyhometownmorejobs好處同意該項(xiàng)目Howevernoiseandpollutionmoreinformation7精選課件再加點(diǎn)寫信的客套話，就ok了全文如下8精選課件DearSirorMadam,Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ihaverecentlylearnedfromthenewspaperthatyouaregoingtobuildafactoryhereinmyhometown.Thereisnodoubtthatitisgoodforthedevelopmentofmyhometownanditwillprovideuswithmorejobs.Mostofusstandbytheprogram.However,someofusareworriedthatthefactorywillmakemuchnoiseandpollutetheenvironmentofthearea.Iwouldliketoknowwhetheryouhaveanyplansfortheenvironmentprotection.Wouldyoupleaseofferusmoreinformationaboutit?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YoursfaithfullyZhangHua

9精選課件緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來(lái)一個(gè)輕松的暑假。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面方框內(nèi)的提示寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕募倨谟?jì)劃。暑假計(jì)劃1、好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松2、讀書(shū)，因?yàn)樽x書(shū)既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識(shí)3、陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)4、參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)5、……注意：1、詞數(shù)80～100；2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名；3、方框內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：知識(shí)knowledge,

社會(huì)活動(dòng)socialactivities

時(shí)態(tài)10精選課件Thesummerholidayiscoming.I'mgoingtohaveagoodrestandlearntorelaxmyself.Iwillreadmoreusefulbooksbecausereadingmorebooksisnotonlyinterestingbutalsocanmakemelearnmoreknowledge.Iwilltrytospendmoretimeinchattingwithmyparentsandhelpthemtodosomehousework.IamgoingtotakepartinthesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.Ifpossible,I'dliketogotoShanghaiforavisitoftheWorldExpo.I'msureI'llhaveaninterestingandmeaningfulsummerholiday.11精選課件開(kāi)頭1、開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，揭示主題

文章一開(kāi)頭就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如"HowISpentMyVacation"(我怎樣度假)的開(kāi)頭是：

Ispentmylastvacationhappily.

下面是題為"Honesty"(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開(kāi)頭：

Honestyisoneofthebestvirtues.Anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected.Onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasa"liar",andislookeduponbyhonestpeople.12精選課件2、交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開(kāi)頭

在文章的開(kāi)頭，先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。例如"ATriptoJinshan"(去金山旅游)的開(kāi)頭：

ThedaybeforeyesterdaymyclasswentonabustriptoJinshan.Thebusridetheretookthreehours.Thelongtripmadeusverytired,butthesightofthebeautifulsearefreshedus.

13精選課件3、回憶性的開(kāi)頭

用回憶的方法來(lái)開(kāi)頭。例如"ATriptotheTaishanMountain"(泰山游)的開(kāi)頭是：

IremembermyfirsttriptotheTaishanMountainasifitwereyesterday.

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4、概括性的開(kāi)頭

即對(duì)要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個(gè)概括性的介紹。如"TheHappinessofReadingBooks"(讀書(shū)的快樂(lè))的開(kāi)頭：

Peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.ButIsaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.15精選課件5、介紹環(huán)境式的開(kāi)頭

即開(kāi)頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如"AnAccident"(一場(chǎng)事故)的開(kāi)頭是:

Itwasarainyandwindymorning.Theskywasgloomy,thetemperaturewaslow,andthestreetwasnearlyempty.Iwasonmywaybacktoschool.Suddenly,aspeedingcarcameroundthecorner.

16精選課件6、交待寫作目的的開(kāi)頭

在文章的一開(kāi)頭就交待寫作目的，如通過(guò)文章要表?yè)P(yáng)誰(shuí)，批評(píng)誰(shuí)，或說(shuō)明一個(gè)什么問(wèn)題等。如"PollutionControl"(控制污染)的開(kāi)頭：

InthisarticleIshalldrawyourattentiontothesubjectofpollutioncontrol.17精選課件1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall，F(xiàn)irstly/First，Secondly/Second…Andthen，F(xiàn)inally，Intheend，Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的：Whatismore，Besides，Moreover3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的：However，Onthecontrary，butAlthough+clause(從句)，Inspiteof+n/doing，Ononehand…Ontheotherhand…Some…，whileothers…常用連接詞：18精選課件表示并列關(guān)系的：and,aswellas,or…表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but,yet,however…表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…表示因果關(guān)系的：so,therefore,asaresult…表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…表示列舉的：forexample,suchas…表示總結(jié)性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…19精選課件4.表因果關(guān)系的：Because，AsSo，Thus，Therefore，Asaresult5.表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：Inotherwords6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：Forexample，句子;Forinstance，句子;suchas+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact8.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)：AsfarasIknow，Inmyopinion9.表總結(jié)：Inshort，Inaword，Inconclusion，Insummary20精選課件一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法；但說(shuō)理性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)的說(shuō)明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。結(jié)尾

21精選課件1、首尾呼應(yīng)，畫龍點(diǎn)睛在文章的結(jié)尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點(diǎn)明主題，深化主題，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。如“ICannotForgetHer”（我忘不了她）的結(jié)尾：

Afterherdeath，Ifeltasifsomethingweremissinginmylife.Iwassadoverherpassingaway，butIknewshewouldnothavehadanyregretsathavinggivenherlifeforthebenefitofthepeople.

22精選課件2、重復(fù)主題句結(jié)尾回到文章開(kāi)頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。如“ILoveMyHomeTown”（我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng)）的結(jié)尾：

Ilovemyhometown，andIloveitspeople.Theytoohavechanged.Theyaregoingallouttodomoreforthegoodofourmotherland.

23精選課件3、自然結(jié)尾隨著文章的結(jié)束，文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Fishing”（釣魚(yú)）的結(jié)尾：

Icaughtasmanyastwentyfishintwohours，butmybrothercaughtmanymore.Tiredfromfishing，welaydownontheriverbank，bathinginthesun.Wereturnedhomeverylate.

24精選課件4、含蓄性的結(jié)尾

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點(diǎn)明作者的看法，而是讓讀者自己去領(lǐng)會(huì)和思考。如“ADayofHarvesting”（收割的日子）的結(jié)尾：

Eveningcamebeforewerealizedit.Weputdownoursicklesandlookedateachother.Ourclotheswerewetwithsweat，butoneveryfacetherewasasmile.

25精選課件5、用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾

雖然形式是問(wèn)句，但意義卻是肯定的，并具有特別的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用，引起讀者深思。如“ShouldWeLearntoDoHousework？”（我們要不要學(xué)做家務(wù)？）的結(jié)尾。

Everyoneshouldlearntodohousework.Don'tyouagree，boysandgirls？

26精選課件6、指明方向，激勵(lì)讀者結(jié)尾表示對(duì)將來(lái)的展望，或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。如“Let'sGoinforSports”（讓我們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)）的結(jié)尾：Aswehavesaidabove，sportscanbeofgreat