河北中考英語作文寫作講解-話題-計劃安排-課件

滿分作文的標準：

包含所有要點（—不能丟落要點）圍繞內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富（—不能限于回答問題或逐句翻譯）應(yīng)用豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯（—表達不能過于單一）用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚（—表達有層次，會用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，注意周圍呼應(yīng)）沒有語言錯誤（—杜絕任何小錯）.無“過”便是“功正確為先；流暢為好；文采為妙。注重銜接與連貫滿分作文的標準：

包含所有要點寫作:

1.分析體裁2.選定人稱3.時態(tài)：時態(tài)錯誤扣三分4.要點全5.字數(shù)要夠6.書寫一定要工整寫作:書面表達要求：1）使用正確的時態(tài)2）使用正確的詞語3）要有清晰的思路4）要有不同的句子5）要有一定的連接書面表達要求：

分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針對“計劃安排”這一話題，主要考查了介紹自己的周末計劃。結(jié)合全國近年與“計劃安排”這一話題相關(guān)的書面表達可知此話題主要涉及以下命題角度：活動時間及地點安排、具體活動內(nèi)容安排等。命題探索 分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針對“計劃安排”這

人教課本中涉及“計劃安排”這個話題的單元有：教材鏈接 人教課本中涉及“計劃安排”這個話題的單元有：教材鏈接英語課上，老師要求同學們介紹個人的周末計劃，假設(shè)下面表格內(nèi)容是你的計劃提綱，請根據(jù)表格中提示的活動內(nèi)容，寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹你的周末計劃，并在班上與同學交流。

審主題：周末計劃；審時態(tài)：一般將來時審文體：應(yīng)用文審人稱：第一人稱英語課上，老師要求同學們介紹個人的周末計劃，審主題：周末計劃Saturday

WatchTVGotoabookstoreSundayVisitgrandparents

...要點1：周六的計劃要點2：周天的計劃SaturdayWatchTVGotoabookst要求：(1)發(fā)言稿須包括三個所列要點和一個補充要點；

(2)發(fā)言稿中四個要點都要適當發(fā)揮；

(3)發(fā)言稿中不得涉及真實的人名、校名和地名；

(4)詞數(shù)：80個左右(已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù))。

Hi,everyone!Here’smyplanfortheweekend._________要求：(1)發(fā)言稿須包括三個所列要點和一個補充要點；【教材好句范例】1.IwouldliketoinviteyoutotheopeningofournewlibraryatNo.9HighSchool.[八(上)Unit9P71]2.I’mmakingsomeplanstoworkinanoldpeople’shomethissummer.[八(下)Unit2P10]時間地點安排【教材好句范例】時間地點安排3.Iwanttoputoffmyplantoworkinananimalhospitaluntilnextsummer.[八(下)Unit2P12]4.MyfamilyistakingatriptoWuhanattheendofthismonthtovisitmyauntanduncle.[八(上)Unit9P66]3.Iwanttoputoffmyplant【句子仿寫】1.我想邀請你和我們一起去公園野餐。

_______________________________________________________2.九月末的時候我將去上海旅行并拜訪我的朋友們。

Iwouldliketoinviteyoutogoonapicnicintheparkwithus.I’mtakingatriptoShanghaiattheendofSeptembertovisitmyfriends.【句子仿寫】Iwouldliketoinvitey3.我們班正計劃于六月十日在我們教室里舉辦一個聚會。

_________________________________________________________________________________________4.我們想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。

OurclassismakingsomeplanstohaveapartyinourclassroomonthetenthdayofJune.Wewanttogotothefieldstopickupfruitandvegetables.3.我們班正計劃于六月十日在我們教室里舉辦一個聚會。Ou【教材好句范例】1.Marydecidedtotryoutforajobatanafter-schoolreadingprogramlastyear.[八(下)Unit2P11]2.Ourclassistryingtocomeupwithsomeideastocheerupsickchildrenbecausetheyareoftensad.[八(下)Unit2P12]3.I’mgoingto

bringmynewcameratotakelotsofphotos！具體計劃內(nèi)容【教材好句范例】具體計劃內(nèi)容【句子仿寫】1.今年夏天我決定去海南度假。

_______________________________________________________2.我這周末將去市圖書館借一些關(guān)于科學的書。

3.Frank正盡力在用一種友好的方式和他的同學們交流。

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IdecidetogotoHainanforvacationthissummer.I’mgoingtothecitylibrarytoborrowsomesciencebooksthisweekend.Frankistryingtocommunicatewithhisclassmatesinafriendlyway.【句子仿寫】IdecidetogotoHainan【句子擴寫范例】1.Ihopetobeateacher.→Ihopetobeateacher.Iwouldbenicetomystudents.2.MaybeI’llbeanairplanepilot.→MaybeI’llbeanairplanepilot.Thatwouldbeacooljob.理想愿望【句子擴寫范例】理想愿望3.SowhydoIwanttobeafarmer?→SowhydoIwanttobeafarmer?Becauseitisreallyanimportantjob.Everyoneneedsfood,andIwanttogrowthebestcrops.3.SowhydoIwanttobeafa【句子擴寫】1.Iwillworkhardinthenewyear.(擴寫具體做法)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Iwillspendmoretimewithmyfamily.(擴寫具體表現(xiàn))______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillworkhardinthenewyear.Iwillpaymoreattentiontomystudy.Iwillspendmoretimewithmyfamily.Iwillsharemyjoysandtearswiththem.【句子擴寫】Iwillworkhardinthe3.Iwanttobehealthierthanbefore.(擴寫具體計劃)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Ihopetobeadoctor.(擴寫原因)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwanttobehealthierthanbefore,soIwilleathealthyfoodanddosports.Ihopetobeadoctor.Becauseitisagreatjob.Everyoneneedshealthybodies,andIcanhelppatients.Iwanttobehealthierthanbe

Ourclassaregoingtohaveapicnicinapark.Wearesupposedtoarriveattheparkat8：00a．m..Afterarrivingthere,someofusaregoingto①____________(活動1).Atthesametime,afewclassmateswhoareinterestedinmusiccan②________________(活動2).Atnoon,wewill③__________________________________(活動3).Intheafternoon,weplanto④_________________________________________________(活動4)．playgames活動安排singsongstogethersitaroundandhaveawonderfullunchcollectrubbishthatisthrownawaybycarelessvisitorsOurclassaregoingto

Hi,everyone!Here’smyplanfortheweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,I’mgoingtowatchTVtorelaxmyselfafteralongweek’sstudy.Iamfondofwatchingcomediesandcartoons.OnSaturdayafternoon,I’mgoingtoabookstoretobuysomebooks.Readingisoneofmyhobbies.ImissmygrandparentssomuchthatI’mgoingtovisitthemonSunday.I’llhelpthemdosomehousework.AfterIcomeback,I’lldomyhomeworktogetreadyforthenextweek.That’smyweekend.Howdoyoulikeit?

Thankyou!Hi,everyone!Here’smy

(2019黃石改編)假如你是李華，你的外國同學Tom寫了一封郵件詢問你暑假的安排，請你根據(jù)所給提示和要求，給Tom回封郵件。提示：(1)Readsomeusefulbooks. (2)Helpmyparentsdosomehousework. (3)Doexercisewithsomefriends.寫作練兵寫作練兵(2019黃石改編)假如你是李華，你的外國同要求：(1)郵件須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。 (2)郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，校名和地名。 (3)詞數(shù)80個左右。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))要求：(1)郵件須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。DearTom，I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作練兵寫作練兵

NowI’mgoingtotellyoumyplansforthesummervacation. Firstofall,Iwanttoreadsomemeaningfulandgoodbooks.Maybethesebookswillbehelpfulformyfuturestudy.Then,Iwanttospendmoretimehelpingmyparentsdosomehousework,suchasDearTom，寫作練兵寫作練兵________________________________________________________Iwonderhowdoyouplanyourvacation?Writetomesoon. Yours，LiHua寫作練兵寫作練兵sweepingthefloororwashingdishesafterdinner.Finally,Iplantogototheparkwithmyfriendsev