2023年全國乙卷試卷作文評講(1)課件-2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

2024屆一輪復(fù)習(xí)全國乙卷試卷作文評講CompositionCommentaryPART0672.你校英文報社正在組織以“LearningANewSkill”為主題的征稿，請你以投稿的方式，用英文講述假期里學(xué)習(xí)一項新技能的經(jīng)歷。請包括以下要點(diǎn)：（1）學(xué)習(xí)到的新技能；（2）描述你的體驗與感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

列提綱前三審：1)審體裁：記敘文：介紹學(xué)習(xí)一項新技能；2)定人稱：第一人稱；3)定時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。

定要點(diǎn)，列提綱：1)提出新技能2)描述體驗與感受

定要點(diǎn)，列提綱：1)提出新技能

①學(xué)習(xí)技能方面：學(xué)科技能，興趣班，寫作提升班等，

②業(yè)余情趣的培養(yǎng)：書法繪畫，廚藝，陶藝，音樂，舞蹈，剪紙，中國傳統(tǒng)文化興趣培養(yǎng)等；③體育和身體鍛煉方面：各項體育運(yùn)動，競走，跑步，爬山，游泳，跆拳道，太極等；④生活技能：做飯，做衣服，做家務(wù)，修剪草坪，養(yǎng)寵物，照顧家畜等。2)描述體驗與感受

體驗：親身處于某種環(huán)境中而產(chǎn)生認(rèn)識。

感受：接觸外界事物得到的影響。123段落行數(shù)要點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵詞要點(diǎn)拓展L3-4L5-6L4-5Background+Newskill+Reason/ImportanceProcessmethodresultcognition+feelingcognition：thementalactionorprocessofacquiringknowledgeandunderstandingthroughthought,experience,andthesensesParagraph1——Howtoenrichasentence?1.Duringtherecentvocation,Ilearnedanewskill---photography.在最近的假期里，我開始了新的學(xué)習(xí)之旅，獲得了一項令人著迷的新技能——攝影。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________在埋頭于成堆的書中學(xué)習(xí)和所有科目的考試之后，最終，我開始了學(xué)習(xí)一項生活技能的新旅程——攝影。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Otherbackgroundinformation?

Duringtherecentvacation,I____________anewjourneyoflearningand___________________a

fascinatingnewskill---photography.

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buriedin2.由于高考的壓力，大多數(shù)像我這樣的學(xué)生被父母要求只專注于學(xué)習(xí)。令人高興的是，我在最近的假期里得到了學(xué)習(xí)烹飪的寶貴機(jī)會。3.聽說我被著名的烹飪暑期班錄取了，我欣喜若狂。4.作為一個喜歡烹飪和嘗試不同食譜的人，我很高興能學(xué)習(xí)制作美味的自制香腸背后的技術(shù)。Duetothepressureofthecollegeentranceexamination,moststudentslikemearerequiredtoonlyfocusonstudies.__________,Igainedthepreciousopportunitytolearncookingintherecentvacation.OnhearingthatIamadmittedbythecelebratedcookingsummerclass,I___________it.JoyfullyjumpedatAssomeonewhoenjoyscookingandexperimentingwithdifferentrecipes,Iwasexcitedtolearnthetechniquesbehindmakingdelicioushomemadesausages.overjoyed/thrilled/pleasedParagraph2——Howtowriteashortmainsentence?1.However,thelearningprocessisfarfromeasy.2.TheentireprocessoflearningisfullofhardshipsParagraph2——Howtowriteaproperprocess?起初，我發(fā)現(xiàn)很難開始，因為我之前沒有制作領(lǐng)結(jié)的知識或經(jīng)驗。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________然而，在視頻教程和練習(xí)的幫助下，我逐漸掌握了竅門。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Ifounditdifficult/challenging

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precisionandattentiontodetail.However,withtheguidanceofmymother,Islowlybutsurely

masteredtheartofsausagemaking.Paragraph2——Howtowriteaproperprocess?然而，通過堅持和練習(xí)，我逐漸提高了我的技術(shù)，并開始欣賞折紙所需要的精確和精致。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我參加了一個在線攝影課程，在此期間我學(xué)習(xí)了構(gòu)圖，照明和通過圖像講故事的藝術(shù)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However,_______________________,Igraduallyimprovedmytechniqueandbeganto_________________________________requiredforpaperfolding.with

persistenceandpracticeappreciatetheaccuracyanddelicacyI_____________anonlinephotographycourse,____________Ilearnedaboutcomposition,lightingandtheartofstorytellingthroughimages.enrolledinduringwhichParagraph2——Howtowriteaproperprocess?為了實(shí)踐我的新知識，我冒險到戶外去捕捉自然之美、充滿活力的城市景觀和人們臉上的情緒。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我學(xué)會了不同的打結(jié)方式，調(diào)整絲帶的長度和形狀，選擇合適的材料和顏色來搭配我的衣服。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Topracticemynewfoundknowledge,I__________outdoorscapturingthebeautyofnature,_______________cityscapes,andtheemotionsonpeople’sface.venturedvibrant/livelyIlearneddifferentwaysoftyingtheknot,adjustingthelengthandshapeoftheribbon,andchoosingappropriatematerialsandcolorstomatchmyoutfits.Paragraph3——Howtowriteyourcognitionandfeeling?除了完成一個漂亮的手工藝品的滿足感，我發(fā)現(xiàn)制作領(lǐng)結(jié)的過程給我?guī)砹艘环N平靜和專注的感覺。它需要注意細(xì)節(jié)和耐心，這幫助我放慢了節(jié)奏，忘記了日常生活中的任何干擾和壓力__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________completingabeautifulhandicraft,Ifoundthatit

broughtmeasenseofcalmnessandfocus.

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fromdailylife.BesidesthesatisfactionofParagraph3——Howtowriteyourcognitionandfeeling?這讓我想起了走出自己的舒適區(qū)，嘗試新事物，欣賞手工工藝品的重要性。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________整個過程都是親自動手的，需要大量的工作，但看到和品嘗最終產(chǎn)品是令人難以置信的回報__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itremindedmeoftheimportanceof

_____________________________,tryingnewthings,andappreciatingthebeautyofhandmadecrafts.steppingoutofmycomfortzoneTheentireprocesswashands-onandrequiredalotofwork,butitwas

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toseeandtastethefinalproduct.incrediblyrewardingParagraph3——Howtowriteyourcognitionandfeeling?一張紙是一個強(qiáng)有力的提醒，提醒我們每個人都有潛在的創(chuàng)造力。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________它提醒我，有時候最簡單的表達(dá)方式可以帶來最大的快樂和滿足。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Apieceofpaperwas__________________of

thepotentialforcreativitythatlieswithinallofus.apowerfulreminderItremindedmethat

sometimesthesimplestformsofexpressioncanbringthegreatestjoyand_____________________.fulfillment/satisfactoryLearningaNewSkillAfter

beingburiedinpilesofbookstolearnandexaminationsofallsubjectstofinish,eventually,inarecentvacationIembarkonanewjourneyofacquiringalifeskill---handicrafts.Theentireprocessoflearningisfullofhardships.Atfirst,Ifounditdifficulttostart,

asIhadnopriorknowledgeorexperienceinmakingabowtie.However,withthehelpofvideotutorialsandpractice,Igraduallygotthehangofit.

Ilearneddifferentwaysoftyingtheknot,adjustingthelengthandshapeoftheribbon,andchoosingappropriatematerialsandcolorstomatchmyoutfits.Besidesthesatisfaction,theprocessofmakingabowtiebroughtmeasenseofcalmnessandfocus.Itrequiredattentiontodetailsandpatience,whichhelpedmeslowdownmypaceandforgetaboutanydistractionsorstressfromdailylife.（學(xué)習(xí)技能本身帶來的啟示）Learningthisnewskillnotonlyexpandedmyabilitiesbutalsoenrichedmylifewithafunandrewardingactivity.Itremindedmeoftheimportanceofsteppingoutofmycomfortzone,tryingnewthings,andappreciatingthebeautyofhandmadecrafts.（學(xué)習(xí)帶來的啟發(fā)）LearningaNewSkill

Goodskillsmakeabigdifference.Duringthe

summervacation,I'vegotaskilltoclimbthemountain,which

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allowedmetoobtainnormalsenseandboardenmyknowledge.

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HuaGouMountain.Thoughitwasexactlytoughtoclimbup

andmoveon,wefinallymadeittothetopwithcontinuous

efforts,whereweadmiredbeautifulsunset.Frommyperspectiveofview,itisthroughclimbing

thatIstepoutofmycomfortablezonetofacethe

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