外研版2023 必修 第一冊 Unit 1 A new start 單元滿分范文必背 學案含解析

第第頁外研版（2023）必修第一冊Unit1Anewstart單元滿分范文必背學案（含解析）Unit1ANewStart

單元話題滿分范文必背

1．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jack剛剛升入高一，但他一時無法適應新的校園生活，寫信向你征求建議。請你就此問題給他回一封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：

1.表示理解：實際上很多新生都會對高中生活感到不安，因此不必過多擔心。

2.提出建議：

(1)報名參加課外活動，結(jié)交新朋友；

(2)做好日程安排，關注學習；

(3)

3.表達希望和祝愿。

要求：80詞左右，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJack,

____________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

(

【

答案】參考范文

D

ear

Jack

,

I

am

sorry

to

hear

that

you’re

having

trouble

adjusting

to

your

high

school

life.

Actually,

many

freshmen

are

confused

about

high

school

life

,

so

don’t

worry

about

it

too

much.

I’m

writing

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice.

First

,

I

recommend

that

you

sign

up

for

extra-curricular

activities

which

can

help

you

make

more

new

friends

.

In

this

way

you

will

feel

less

lonely

and

your

school

life

will

become

more

colorful

and

interesting.

Second

,

you

should

make

a

good

schedule

and

focus

on

your

studies.

As

a

teenager,

studying

hard

is

our

responsibility

.

Finally

,

it

is

a

good

idea

to

read

some

good

novels,

which

can

make

you

feel

happy.

I

hope

my

suggestions

will

be

helpful

for

you

and

you

will

have

a

good

time

every

day.

Y

ours

,

Li

H

ua

)

(

【導語】本篇書面表達屬

于應用文。要求考生寫一份信給英國朋友

Jack

，因為他剛剛升入高一，

無法適應

新的校園生活，由此寫信對他進行

安慰并提出建議。

【

詳解】

1.

詞匯積累

傷

心

：

sorry→

sad

提供：

offer

→

provide

建議：

advice→

suggestion/tip

有益處

的

：

helpful→

beneficial

2.

句式拓

展

簡

單句變復合句：

原句：

I’m

writing

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice.

拓展句：

I’m

wr

iting

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice

,

which

is

listed

as

follows

.

【點睛】【高分句型

1

】

First

,

I

recommend

that

you

sign

up

for

extra-curricular

activities

which

can

help

you

make

more

new

friends.

(運用了

that

引導賓語從句，同時使用

which

引導的定語從句

)

【

高分句型

2

】

As

a

teenager

,

studying

hard

is

our

responsibility

.

(運用了

動名詞作主語的結(jié)構(gòu))

)

2．如果你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom，想了解你在高中的學習生活，請根據(jù)下列要求寫一封信告知他。1.對高中學校的第一印象。(老師、同學)

2.你最喜歡的學科及其原因。

3.學習上存在的困難和應對策略。

4.你在高中想取得的目標和期待。

注意：1.按提示寫，可適當發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

2.字數(shù)100字左右。

DearTom,

_________________

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearTom,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousaidinyourletteryouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.HereI’mwritingtotellyousomedetails.

Onmyfirstdayinschool,Ifoundmyselfinafriendlyandacademicatmosphere.Theteachersareveryknowledgeableandreadytopouralltheyknowintoourmind,andthestudentsareverykindtoeachother.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitmakesmeabletounderstanddifferentcultures.However,Ihavetroubleinrememberingwords.Aftertalkingwithmyteacher,Idecidetolearntomakeupaninterestingstoryusingthenewwords,hopingitwillbehelpful.Asforthefuture,I’maimedatgoingintotop10inmyclass.

Bestwishes.

Yours,LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達是應用文寫作，要求考生給英國筆友Tom寫封信，告訴他你高中的學習和生活情況。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

收到……的來信：hearfrom→receivetheletterfrom

對……好奇：becuriousabout→wonder

準備好做……：bereadytodo…→bepreparedtodo…

在……上有困難：havetroublein→havedifficultyin

有幫助的：helpful→ofhelp/beneficial

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousaidinyourletteryouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.

拓展句：I’mgladtoreceivetheletterfromyou,inwhichyousaidyouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.

【點睛】【高分句型1】MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitmakesmeabletounderstanddifferentcultures.(使用了because引導原因狀語從句和“make+賓語+賓補”結(jié)構(gòu))

【高分句型2】Aftertalkingwithmyteacher,Idecidetolearntomakeupaninterestingstoryusingthenewwords,hopingitwillbehelpful.(使用了動名詞短語作介詞賓語、不定式短語作賓語、現(xiàn)在分詞短語分別作方式狀語和伴隨狀語、省略引導詞that的賓語從句)

3．假設你是高一新生李華，進入高中階段，面對全新的校園生活有很多感想。請你給你的英國筆友John

寫一封郵件分享你的新生活，內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信目的；

2.介紹高中校園生活：學校環(huán)境、學習情況、你的感受……；

3.你的期待和展望。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

_________________________________________________

【答案】DearJohn,

HowiseverythinggoingwithyouIjustenteredtheseniorsecondaryschoolandbecameafreshmanlastmonth.ItisthestartofanewchapterinmylifeandmyheartisfilledwithsomanystrongfeelingsthatIcan’twaittotellyou.AndthereforeI’mwritinginordertosharemynewschoollifewithyou.

Mynewschooldiffersinmanywaysfrommypreviousone.Thecampusisbigandbeautifulwithalotoffieldsforustotakeexercise.Ourteachingbuildingsaresurroundedbygreentreessothatwecanrelaxourmindsduringthebreaks.Inmynewschool,althoughstudentsstillsitinrowsaswedidinthepast,wedependmoreoneachotherinsteadofteacherstosolveproblemsandthuslearnmorebyhavinggroupdiscussionsandsharingourideasorcheckingourworktogether,whichmakesmefeelchallengedandyetexcited.

Inthenextthreeyears,IhopeIwilldevelopcompetenceinavarietyofnewskillsandhaveahappier,morefruitfulandsatisfyinglife.WhataboutyouLookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

【導語】這是一篇應用文。要求考生以李華的身份給碧悠John寫信，分享自己的高中生活。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

開始：start→beginning

充滿：befilledwith→befullof

從前的：previous→former

各種各樣的：avarietyof→varietiesof/various

(

2.

句型拓

展

合并句

子

原句：

The

campus

is

big

and

beautiful

with

a

lot

of

fields

for

us

to

take

exercise.

Our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

trees

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

拓展句

：

Not

only

is

the

compus

big

and

beautiful

with

a

lot

of

fields

for

us

to

take

exercise,

but

also

our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

trees

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

【點睛】

[

高分句型

1]Our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

tree

s

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

(運用了

so

t

h

at

引導的目的狀語從句)

[

高分句型

2]In

my

new

school,

although

students

still

sit

in

r

ows

as

we

did

in

the

past

,

we

depend

more

on

each

other

instead

of

teachers

to

solve

problems

and

thus

learn

more

by

having

group

discussions

and

sharing

our

ideas

or

checking

our

work

together,

whi

ch

makes

me

feel

challenged

and

yet

excited

.

(運用了

although

引導的讓步

狀

語從句和

which

引導的非限制性定語從句)

)

4．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter剛到廣州學習，他來信說，很難適應在廣州的學習和生活，十分沮喪，請你給他回信表示安慰并提出建議，內(nèi)容包括：

1．表示安慰；

2．針對問題提出建議；

3．表達希望。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)80左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearPeter,

LearningthatyouarefeelingithardtoadapttothestudyandlifeinGuangzhou,I’mwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.

____________________

Yours,

LiHua

(

【

答

案】

Dear

Peter,

Learning

that

you

are

feeling

it

hard

to

a

dapt

to

the

study

and

life

in

Guangzhou

，

I

’

m

writing

to

offer

you

some

suggestions

.

In

fact

,

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment.

Don’t

worry.

Firstly,

try

to

join

your

classmates

in

various

activities

,

which

can

help

you

further

understand

the

local

culture

and

customs.

Besides

,

listen

to

your

teacher

’

s

lectures

carefully

and

often

discuss

the

relevant

topic

with

your

classmates.

Last

but

not

least

,

smile

to

the

people

around

you

and

they

may

return

you

a

happy

day

.

I

hope

my

advice

will

be

helpful

for

you

.

Y

ours

,

Li

Hu

a

【

導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假定你是李華，你的英國朋友

Peter

剛到廣州學習，他來信說，很難

適應在廣

州

的學習和生活，十分沮喪，請你給他回信表示安慰并提出建議，內(nèi)容包括：

1.

表示安慰；

2.

針

對

問

題提出建議；

3.

表達希望。

【

詳解】

1.

詞匯積累

各種各樣

的

：

various→a

variety

of

有關的：

relevant→concerne

d

建議

：

advice→suggestion

此外：

Besides=In

addition

2.

句式拓

展

合并簡

單句

原句：

In

fact

,

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment

.

Don’t

worry.

拓展句：

Don

’

t

worry

,

because

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment.

【點睛】

[

高分句型

1]

Firstly,

try

to

join

your

classm

ates

in

various

activities

,

which

can

help

you

further

understand

the

local

culture

and

c

ustoms

.(

運用了

which

引導的非限制性定語從句

)

[

高分句型

2]

I

hope

my

advice

will

be

helpful

for

you.(

運用了省略連接詞的賓語從句

)

)

5．假設你是新星中學的學生李華。最近，新來的國際交流生David想加入學校的俱樂部，寫郵件詢問你的意見，請你給他回一封信,內(nèi)容如下：

1.推薦一個俱樂部；

2.介紹俱樂部的活動；

3.告知報名方式。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

DearDavid,

Yours,LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Learningthatyouareinterestedinourschool’sclubsandwonderwhichonetochoose,Iammorethanwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.

IrecommendChineseChessClub,themostpopularclubinourschool.Twiceaweek,membersoftheclubgathertohaveclasses,practisingingroupstoimprovetheirskills.Besides,everymonth,mastersinthisfieldareinvitedtogivelecturesonvarioustopicsaboutChinesechess,suchasitshistoryanddevelopment,fromwhichthemembersgettoknowtheculturalvaluebehindthisgame.Ithinkyouwillhaveachancetotrainyourthinking,makemorefriendsandlearnaboutChineseculturethroughtheseactivitiesintheclub.

Ifyouwouldliketojoinit,youmaysignupbyfillingouttheinformationatwww.beforenextSunday.Ihopemysuggestionisofhelptoyou.

Yours,LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。新來的國際交流生David想加入學校的俱樂部，寫郵件詢問意見，要求考生給他回信并給出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：advice→suggestion

聚集：gather→gettogether/assemble

另外：besides→inaddition/moreover

機會：chance→opportunity

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

(

原句：

I

hope

my

suggestion

is

of

help

to

you.

拓展句：

I

hope

my

suggestion

is

helpful

to

you

.

【點睛】

[

高分句型

1]Besides,

every

month,

masters

in

this

field

are

invited

to

give

lectures

on

various

topics

about

Chinese

chess,

such

as

its

history

and

development,

from

which

the

members

get

to

know

the

cultural

value

behind

this

game.

(

運用了

“

介詞

+which”

引導非限制性定語從句

)

[

高分句型

2]

If

you

would

like

to

join

it,

you

may

sign

up

by

filling

out

the

information

at

www.

before

next

Sunday

.

(

運用了

if

引導條件狀語從句

)

)

6．假定你是李華，你的英國好友Angela寫信告訴你她很不適應高中生活，感到很孤獨。請你根據(jù)以下要點，用英語給她回一封電子郵件。

1.注意學習方法，培養(yǎng)良好的學習習慣。

2.多交一些朋友，友情會使人忘記孤獨。

3.積極參加各種活動，使自己的生活更加有趣。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

(

___

_________________________________________

【

答案】

Dear

Angela,

I

’

m

sorry

to

hear

that

you

are

having

trouble

adapting

to

your

high

school

life,

but

this

situation

can

be

easily

changed

if

you

take

my

advice

.

First

,

you

should

try

to

adjust

your

approaches

to

studies

and

form

good

learning

habits.

Secondly,

why

not

make

some

friends

They

can

help

you

to

forget

your

loneliness.

Thirdly,

it

would

be

a

good

idea

if

you

take

an

active

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities,

which

will

help

you

to

make

life

more

interesting.

By

doing

so,

you

will

be

happier

with

your

new

life

soon

.

I

hope

you

will

find

these

ideas

useful

.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國好友

Angel

a

回一封電子郵件，

幫助她解決不適應高中

生

活

，感到孤獨的問題。

【

詳解】

1.

詞匯積累

得

知：

hear→learn

)

(

困難：

trouble→difficulty

建

議：

advice→tip

希

望

：

hope→wish

2.

句式拓

展

簡單句變

復合句

原句：

By

doing

so,

you

will

be

happier

w

ith

your

new

life

soon

.

拓展句：

If

you

do

so,

you

will

be

happier

with

your

new

lif

e

soon

.

【點睛】【高分句型

1

】

Thirdly,

it

would

be

a

go

od

idea

if

you

take

an

active

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities

,

which

will

help

you

to

make

life

mor

e

interesting

.

(

運用了

which

引導的非限制性定語從句

)

【高分句型

2

】

By

doing

so,

you

w

ill

be

happier

with

your

new

life

soon

.

(

運用了非謂語動詞動名詞作介詞賓

語

)

)

7．假如你是李華，你的朋友小東給你寫了一封郵件，說他進入高中以來，感覺學習壓很大，不適應新的生活和學習環(huán)境。請你給他會封郵件，給他提一些建議。

要點：1.向你的老師和同學求助；

2.多做運動，放松大腦，釋放壓力；

3.保持自信，堅持探索。

要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

(

【

答案】

Dear

Xiao

Dong,

Knowing

that

you

have

trouble

with

high

school

life,

I

am

really

concerned.

Therefore,

I

am

writing

to

offer

you

some

advice

.

First

,

why

not

turn

to

your

teachers

and

classmates

If

you

do

this,

I

am

sure

you

will

soon

improve

yourself.

Second

,

taking

more

exercise

can

not

only

rest

your

brain

but

also

help

you

concentrate

on

study.

Last

but

no

least

,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring.

That

way

you

will

gain

more

confidence.

I

hope

you

find

these

tips

helpful

to

you

.

Y

ous

,

)

(

Li

H

ua

【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇應用

文

。要求考生給朋友小東回信，

就如何適應新的生活和學習環(huán)境提出建

議

。

【

詳解】

1.

詞匯積累

擔

心的：

concerned→worried

提供某人某物

：

offer

sb.

sth.→provide

sb.

with

sth.

首

先：

first→to

begin

with

幫助：

help→assis

t

2.

句式拓

展

合并句

子

原句：

Last

but

no

least

,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring.

That

way

you

will

gain

more

confidence

.

拓展句：

Last

but

no

least,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring,

which

will

help

you

gain

more

confidence

.

【

點睛】

[

高分句型

1]

Knowing

that

you

have

trouble

wit

h

high

school

life

,

I

am

really

concerned

.

(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，

that

引導

賓

語從句)

[

高分句型

2]

If

you

do

this,

I

am

sure

you

will

soon

improve

your

self

.

(運用了

if

引導條件狀語從句)

)

8．假如你是李華，你的米國筆友Tom來信告訴你，在新學期他要來中國當交換生，想讓你給他一些建議，幫助他盡快適應中國的高中學習和生活。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括如下：

1.收信的感受；

2.學習方面的建議(課堂、課后)；

3.期待他的到來。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：exchangestudent

DearTom,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

【答案】DearTom,

DelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoChinatobeanexchangestudentnextterm,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceinordertohelpyouadapttothenewlifehereasfastaspossible.

Tobeginwith,it’simportanttopayfullattentiontowhatteacherssayandtakenotesintime.Besides,youmayfinditdifficulttounderstandChineseasanexchangestudent,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.What’smore,makefriendswiththem,whichwillmakeyourlifehereeasier.

IhopemysuggestionsworkandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!

Yours,LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給米國筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，對于新學期他要來中國當交換生給他一些建議，幫助他盡快適應中國的高中學習和生活。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的：delighted→glad

為某人提供某物：offersbsth→providesthforsb

此外：besides→additionally

向某人求助：asksbforhelp→turntosbforhelp

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Besides,youmayfinditdifficulttounderstandChineseasanexchangestudent,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.

拓展句：Besides,youmayfindit’sdifficultforanexchangestudenttounderstandChinese,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.

【點睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,it’simportanttopayfullattentiontowhatteacherssayandtakenotesintime.(運用了what引導的賓語從句)

【高分句型2】What’smore,makefriendswiththem,whichwillmakeyourlifehereeasier.(運用了which引

(

導的

非

限制性定語從句)

)

9．假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack剛剛升入高中，但是他一時無法適應新的校園生活，寫信向你征求建議。請你給他回復一封建議信。內(nèi)容包括：1)你寫信給我說對剛成為高中新生而感到焦慮和不安，我理解你的感受。

2)以下是我的一些建議：①我建議你報名參加一些活動，比如...(活動/俱樂部)，這樣可以認識更多新朋友。②我認為上課應努力學習，這樣可以盡快適應高中的學習。③我建議多與老師和同學交流，分享自己的感受，這樣可以更好地體會高中的生活。3)我希望這些建議能夠幫助到你，期待你的回信。

要求：

詞數(shù)應為80字左右；

可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字數(shù)。

DearJack,

____________________

Yours

LiHua

(

【答案】

Dear

Jac

k

,

I

understand

how

you

feel

when

you

write

to

me

that

you

are

anxious

and

upset

about

being

a

freshman

in

new

high

school

.

I

have

some

suggestions

for

you

.

Firstly,

I

suggest

you

sign

up

for

some

activities,

such

as

basketball

club

where

you

can

make

more

friends.

Secondly,

I

think

you

should

study

hard

in

class,

so

that

you

can

adapt

to

senior

high

school

as

soon

as

possible.

Thirdly,

I

advice

that

you

should

communicate

with

your

teachers

and

classmates

,

share

you

true

feelings

,

so

that

you

can

better

experience

the

life

of

high

school.

Finally

,

I

hope

these

suggestions

will

help

you

and

look

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.

)

(

Y

ours

,

Li

H

ua

【導語】

本

篇書面表達是一篇應用文，

要求考生給英國筆友

Jack

寫信，

提出一些關于適應新的校園生活的

建

議。

【

詳解】

1.

詞匯積累

建議

：

suggestion→advice

首先：

firstly

→

to

begin

with

應該：

should→be

supposed

to

幫助：

help→assis

t

2.

句式拓

展

簡單句變

復合句

原句：

I

have

some

suggestions

for

y

o

u

.

拓展句：

I

have

some

sugges

tions

for

you

,

which

I

think

will

be

helpful

.

【點睛】

[

高分句型

1]Firstly,

I

suggest

you

sign

up

for

some

activities

,

such

as

basketball

club

where

you

can

mak

e

more

friends

.(

運用了

where

引導定語從句

)

[

高分句型

2]Thirdly,

I

advice

that

you

should

communicate

with

your

teachers

and

classmates

,

share

you

true

feelings

,

so

that

you

can

better

experience

the

life

of

high

school

.(

運用了

that

引導賓語從句

，

so

that

引導狀語從

句

)

)

10．假設你是新華中學的學生李華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學李明，他一時無法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封信：

1.幫他分析原因；2.給他提建議；3.陳述你幫助他的具體打算。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不算入總字數(shù)；

3.請按照如下格式在答題卡相應位置作答。

DearLiMing,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearLiMing,

Understandably,itcanbehardtoadjusttoanewschoolandclass.