高中英語(yǔ)寫作

Writing

LessonRoseMarch

27th,2017ContentObjectivesYou

will

be

activated

therelationshipbetweenthe

known

knowledge

and

the

new

one

.You

will

make

a

deep

understanding

of

what

a

good

essay

should

be

.

Youwillvoiceyouropinionsandlearnfromyourpeers.You

will

raise

awareness

of

marine

creature

protection.Reviewthewords污染n.

過(guò)度捕撈n.

工業(yè)的

adj.

農(nóng)業(yè)的adj.

化學(xué)物n.

政府n.

應(yīng)付vt.

禁止vt.

解決方法n.

教育vt.

part

one

pre-writingWhat

is

a

good

essay?Spring

Festival

is

the

most

important

and

popularfestival

in

China.

Before

Spring

Festival

,the

people

usually

clean

and

decorate

their

houses.

And

they

go

to

the

Flower

Fairs

to

buy

some

flowers…Firstly,

pay

attention

to

the

diet.

We

should

eat

lots

of

fruit

and

vegetables,

because

they

are

rich

in

fiber

and

Iow

in

fat.

As

a

proverb

says,

“An

apple

a

day

keeps

the

doctor

away.“So

fruit

is

good

for

health.

Don’t

have

a

lot

of

food

that

contains

too

much

fat,

such

as

butter.

1.

a

topic

sentence

and

supporting

sentences2.

proper

linking

wordsOurmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhard.Sheisgoodatallthesubjects.Shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Shehassetusagoodexample.?

Could

you

please

add

these

linking

words

to

the

passage?

asyouknow,so

that,what’smore,

inaddition,

inaword,Asyouknow,ourmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhard

so

that

sheisgoodatallthesubjects.What’smore,shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Inaddition,sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.

In

a

word,

shehassetusagoodexample.Do

you

think

linking

words

are

important?kinds

of

linking

words

examples表示順序關(guān)系firstly，to

begin

with,

secondly,

then，lastly,

in

the

end,

eventually表示讓步關(guān)系anyway，anyhow，though(although)，inanycase，afterall，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系however,nevertheless,but表示時(shí)間過(guò)渡suddenly,later,meanwhile,soon,inthemeantime,表示概括總結(jié)inaword,inconclusion,inshort,tosumup,

to

make

a

summary表示同位關(guān)系inotherwords,forexample,namely,thatistosay，forinstance，表示增補(bǔ)和遞進(jìn)inaddition，what’smore，moreover，furthermore,besides，tomakethingsworse，notonly…butalso表因果關(guān)系because(of),for,since,as,

so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat表?xiàng)l件關(guān)系if,onthecondition(that),aslongas,unless,orelse3.

advanced

vocabulary

and

varied

sentence

patternsIt

is

(this

young

boy)

that

helps

the

old

granny.

被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分

I

do

hope

you

can

come

if

possible.強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It

is

….that/who…用who時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)部分指人；而用that時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)部分指人或物.句子去掉it

is

…that…以后仍完整，對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)無(wú)影響。加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣Only

in

this

way

can

you

solve

the

problem.Not

only

is

the

son

fond

of

the

cartoons

but

also

his

parents

take

great

interest

in

them.倒裝句：tips：當(dāng)not

only置于句首時(shí)，前半句需進(jìn)行倒裝（be動(dòng)詞，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和助動(dòng)詞置于主語(yǔ)之前）后半句語(yǔ)序正常。采取措施：

take

measures

to

do

sth.一方面，另一方面：

on

the

one

hand,

one

the

other

handfor

one

thing,

for

another這是我們不該遲到的原因。This

is

the

reason

why

we

shouldn’t

be

late.Some

advanced

expressions:Part

two

topic

discussion

&

writing為了引起更多人對(duì)海洋生物保護(hù)的關(guān)注，某雜志準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)行以How

to

protect

marine

creatures為主題地英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇演講稿參加比賽：1.海洋生物的益處2.海洋生物面臨的威脅3.保護(hù)措施注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

4.運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的相關(guān)單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型。

5.參考詞匯：威脅th