2024屆高考英語(yǔ)：兩方觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比作文課件

高考英語(yǔ)作文－－正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比人們對(duì)于網(wǎng)上交友持不同的意見(jiàn)，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊成理由反對(duì)理由你的看法1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達(dá)思想3.利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.影響學(xué)習(xí)3.可能上當(dāng)受騙注意：1、文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容

2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3、詞數(shù)為100左右參考詞匯：網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友：onlinefriends

浪費(fèi)時(shí)間:awasteoftime

上當(dāng)受騙：becheatedDebatingsideAsideBDebatingSideA1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達(dá)思想3.利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)

….SideB1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.影響學(xué)習(xí)3.可能上當(dāng)受騙

……………..chairperson?????

連詞成句1.廣交朋友

Theycanmakemanyonlinefriends/friendsonline.2.可自由表達(dá)思想

Theycanexpresstheirfeelings/thoughtsfreely.3.利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)

Itcandogoodtoforeignlanguagelearning.4.影響學(xué)習(xí)

Itcanhaveanegativeeffecton/affectyourstudy.5.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間

It

isawasteoftime.6.可能上當(dāng)受騙

Theycanbe/getcheated/takenin.Heading:

Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddicussionaboutwhether…/I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhether…/Shouldthehighschoolstudents…?(開(kāi)篇引入議題）Thebody:

(總述）OpinionsaredividedbetweentheSs./Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions/hold

differentviews./

Onthewhole,therearetwodifferentopinionsonthequestion.(SideA）SomeSsbelievethat…/Someareinfavorof…(Firstly…Secondly…Atlast)/

(SideB)However/onthecontrary,othersarguethat…/otherspreferto…/holdtheviewthat(Firstly…Secondly…Atlast)/(中間分述觀點(diǎn))Theending:Inmyopinion,/AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Ithink,/Personally,because…(結(jié)尾簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人看法)FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,What’smoreFinally,Inaword,Lastbutnotleast,SentencepatternsDemonstration

Square我行我秀

Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherstudentscanmakefriendsonline.

Differentpeopleholddifferentviews.somepeoplesayyes.Thereasonsareasfollows:Tobeginwith,theinternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Besides,chattingonline,studentscanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely.Lastbutnotleast,theycangethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.However,Othersthinkstudentsshouldnot.

Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.

It’smyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudyandsafetyinthefirstplace.Asforfriendship,wecanreadily

finditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.[參考例文]

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Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherstudentscanmakefriendsonline.

Somepeoplethinkitisofgreatusetomakeonlinefriends,whichwillgetyourlifemuchcolorful.Notonlycanitmakeachanceforyoutoexpressyourthoughtsfreely,butalsoitcandogoodtoyourforeignlanguagestudy.however,consideringstudents’surfingtheInternet,othersmaywasteprecioustimeandevenaffectthestudy.Theysayonlinefriendsoftencheatstudents.Inmyopinion,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesonmakingon-linefriends.IfwemakeonlinefriendsproperlythroughtheInternet,wecanbenefitfromit.Butwecan’tbeaddictedtoit,oritwilldoharmtous.

[例文評(píng)析]1.該文緊扣“網(wǎng)上交友”這個(gè)主題，主題突出、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、三段分布簡(jiǎn)明美觀。2.表達(dá)要點(diǎn)齊全,并合理的增加了細(xì)節(jié)。3.語(yǔ)言靈活多變，如陳述不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，分別用了不同的結(jié)構(gòu)。Somepeoplesayyes．Othersthinkstudentsshouldnot。4.語(yǔ)言有文采，正確運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如beof+抽象n,定語(yǔ)從句，倒裝，固定短語(yǔ)，分詞作狀語(yǔ)。5.邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，如notonly…,butalso…6.準(zhǔn)確的副詞運(yùn)用，如precious,even,properly1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯2.使用較豐富的句式3.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞書面表達(dá)技巧Tips一、審清題目，提煉要點(diǎn)；二、組詞造句，組句成篇；三、仔細(xì)檢查，認(rèn)真修改;四書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣HomeworkWriteacompositionaboutsurfingtheInternet在最近的一次主題為中學(xué)生課余時(shí)間是否應(yīng)該上網(wǎng)的英語(yǔ)班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們