句式多樣化的方法

句式多樣化的方法在寫作中，我們提倡簡練，但不是說都用簡單句。簡單句的堆砌實際上是語言技巧不老練，甚至是語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人看來，同樣的一個意思若能夠用較為復雜的句子結構來表達，其語言水平應該比只會用簡單句來表達的語言水平高出一籌，即使有些語言錯誤也應比后者取得較高的分數(shù)，因為他們使用的語言難度較高。當然我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學生去可以追求長句、復雜句。我們要求根據(jù)表達內容使用不

同的句子結構，實現(xiàn)句子結構的多變，產(chǎn)生較好的語言效果。以下是我們經(jīng)常使用的方法：長短句結合長句含有許多修飾語，適合表達準確而復雜的思想，解釋觀點或理論，描寫細致的事物；短句語氣較重，適合陳述重要的事實和想法。簡單句與含有銜接詞的復雜句交替使用，可以是整個段落生動、豐富、有節(jié)

奏感，并產(chǎn)生鮮明的對比效果。eg.原文:Ilovefastcars.Iwanttodriveeveryoneofthem.Speedismylife.It'swhatIdomybest.在這短話中，四句簡單句都沒有有效的銜接，不能使人分清其中的邏輯聯(lián)系，可優(yōu)化為為：Ilovefastcars.EvenIwanttodriveeveryoneofthembecausespeedismylifeanddrivingis

whatIdomybest.優(yōu)化后的句子使用了一個短句和一個長句。第一句起概括的作用，第二句則解釋說明。使人能分清主次，印象深刻。松散句與圓周句在松散句中，主句在前，從句在后，將主要意識放在次次要意思之前，先說最重要的事情；在圓周句中，從句在前，主句在后，把最重要的意思放到最后面，并且直到最后一個詞時集資的結構才完整。松散句簡單、明白、自然和直接，適于自然有序的陳述情況、表達想法；圓周句復雜、鄭重、文雅，容易形成意思上的高潮。eg.Shewilllivenomorethanthreemonthsifshedosenothavebonemarrowtransplantation.（松散句）HeevenrefusedtochangeanothercopyformejustbecauseIhaveopenedit.（松散句）ManypeopleofferedasmuchhelpastheycouldeventhoughtheydidnotknowAngel（松散句）Sinceitisimportantforcollegestudentstotakeanactivepartinsocialactivities,theStudent

Unionofuniversitydecidestoorganizeasocialpracticeduringthesummerholiday.圓周IfIamelectedasPresident,Iwillnotletyoudown.（圓周句）SinceIcametotheuniversity,Ihavealwaysbeenmonitorofmyclass.（圓周句）倒裝句出于修辭的考慮，把句子成分前后倒置，這種現(xiàn)象叫倒裝。倒裝句可以強調、突出被倒裝部分，達到較強

的修辭效果，給讀者留下深刻的印象。eg.Onlyinthiswaycanyousucceedintheend.Onlyinthiswaycanweputanendtopiracyandcreateahealthyenvironmentforbothcustomersandproducers.OnlybymakinggooduseoftheInternetcanwemakeadifferenceinourlife.平行結構英語中有許多句子使用相同的語法結構，由兩個或多個并列連詞連接，并在結構、詞性、時態(tài)、數(shù)等方面保持一致，這就是平行結構。經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的連詞有:both...and...,neither...nor...,either...or...,notonly...butalso...,ratherthan,nor,and,but,while,whereas,yet,aswellas等。恰當?shù)氖褂镁渥悠叫?/p>

結構可以使句式豐富，增強表達力，而且瑯瑯上口，富于音樂的美感。如：Ilikereadingpoetrybecausepoetrycanmakemecalm,pleased,andcomforted.Incontrast,sciencebooksareusuallyserious,dullanddifficult.Thisphenomenon,inmyopinion,hasnotonlyupgradedthequalityandstandardoflifeofpeople,butalsoimprovedthevalueofconsumptionofourmodernsociety.鞏固練習：修改下列句子。Withthecoldclimateandvegetationisscarce,firewoodisavaluableresource.Ihaveaveryextensiverangeofresponsibilities,includingexperiencedwithWindows,

skilledwithapplyingsoftware,andcompetenceinwrittenEnglish.3Manypeoplegetupearlytojogalongcountrylanes,toobservethewonderofnature,orjustwatchingthesunrise.4.Thecellphonehasthefunctionsofcommunicationandinformation,anditisentertaining.Withthecoldclimateandscarcevegetation,firewoodisavaluableresource.Ihaveaveryextensiverangeofresponsibilities,experiencedwithWindows,skilledwithapplyingsoftware,andcompetentinwrittenEnglish.Manypeoplegetupearlytojogalongcountrylanes,toobservethewonderofnature,orjusttowatchthesunrise.Thecellphonehasthefunctionsofcommunicationandinformation,andentertainment.主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)在主動句中，主語是動作或行為的執(zhí)行者；而在被動句中，主語是是動作或行為的支配對象。我們通常使用主動句，但是由于在被動句中不出現(xiàn)動作或行為的執(zhí)行者，在陳述事實時使用被動句會產(chǎn)生客觀、公正的效果，并使句子簡潔、順暢。如：Iwastobethrownintoschoolforthefirsttime.Ididnotknowwhattosay.Thegatewasnowclosed.Someofthechildrenburstintotears.Thebellrang.Aladycamealong,followedbyagroupofmen.Themanbegandividingusintoranks.Wewereformedintoanintricatepatterninthegreatcourtyardsurroundedbyhighbuildings;formeachfloorwewereoverlookedbyalongbalconyroofedinwood.Weplayedallsortsofgames.Inthemusicroomwesangourfirstsongs.Wealsohadourfirstintroductiontolanguage.WesawaglobeoftheEarth,whichrevolvedandshowedthevariouscontinentsandcountries.Westartedlearningnumbers,andweweretoldthestoryoftheCreatoroftheuniverse.Weatedeliciousfood,tookalittlenap,andwokeuptogoonwithfriendshipandlove,playingandlearning.在這段敘述中，為了保持敘述對象的一致性，作者交叉使用主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)，流暢自然，符合讀者的思維習慣。非謂語動詞非謂語動詞包括：、動詞不定式、動名詞、現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞。使用非謂語動詞可以在有限的空間內容納更多的信息，使句子結構緊湊、邏輯嚴謹。Consideringallthese,IbelievethatIshouldreturnhisgreatlovewithmyachievements.ConcerningthepositionofPresidentoftheStudentUnion,Ifeelqualifiedtotakethejob.Lookingintothefuture,IwilltrymybesttoservemyfellowstudentsifIamluckyenoughtobePresidentStudentUnion.Itisreallythetimetodealwiththeproblem.ThenIwentbacktothebookstore,askingforanexchange.Aftermyrepeatingseveraltimes,hereluctantlywentaway,tryingtogetanewforme.Onhearingit,IbecameannoyedandtoldhimwhatIwantedthenwasarefund.Tobeginwith,giventhefiercecompetition,you’dbettermakemoreeffortsthannecessarytopreparefortheCollegeEntranceExaminations,especiallyMathematicsandEnglish.介詞短語介詞短語具有動詞的特征，使用介詞短語同樣可以增強文章的表現(xiàn)力，突出不同動詞的重要性，適合表達抽象的含義。例如：1.Thebigsumofmoney(RMB200,000)forsuchanoperationisobviouslybeyondwhatherfamilycanafford.2.I’mwritinginreplytogiveyousomesuggestiononyourwould-bemajor.Intheiropinions,differentbooksareofdifferentuses.Inshort,takingCET-6isgoodtobothmystudyandmypersonaldevelopment.練習一：請改寫下面段落，使之句式多樣化。原文：Nowadays,manypeoplethinkthatcollegestudentsshouldtakeapart-timejobforseveraladvantages.Itgivesthestudentsachancetoknowthesocietyandtolearntobeindependent,Theycanalsogetfinancialrewardandworkingexperienceaswell,suchasteachingorsellingpractice.Itishelpfultotheirgrowth.Theycanputwhattheyhavelearnedintopractice,andknowtheirstrongandweakpoints.Theycanimprovetheirstudyandpersonality.Itisbeneficialintheirlaterlife.［分析］本段所用語言雜亂無章，邏輯松散，而且都是簡單句的拼湊，句式單調，讀來令人昏昏欲睡。我們首先加入關聯(lián)詞語，使段落內容形成一個整體，圍繞一個主題句Collegestudentsshouldtakeapart-timejobforseveraladvantages,然后用Foronething,Foranother,What’smore銜接三項理由，使之邏輯清晰。同時，我們可以把其中的簡單句按照內在關系接為復合句，使句式豐富。如Theycanalsogetfinancialrewardandworkingexperienceaswell,suchasteachingorsellingpractice.Itishelpfultotheirgrowth這兩句可用定語從句連接，合并為Theycanalsogetfinancialrewardandworkingexperienceaswell,suchasteachingorsellingpractice,whichishelpfultotheirgrowth.又如：Theycanputwhattheyhavelearnedintopractice,and