2024屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫 親情感悟篇原文和范文 11套素材

Passage1:2022.04臺(tái)州二模父親的生日驚喜

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

ItwasacoldyetsunnySaturdaymorninginFebruary.Dad'sNewYear's

resolutionhadbeentogetfit.Mumpushedhimoutofbedandtoldhimtogojogging

bytheriver.Later,afteranicelie-in,shewentdownstairsinherdressinggownand

foundthekidswatchingTVSheturneditoffandsaidshewasgoingtodosomething

reallyspecialforDad'sbirthday.Iftheyoverheardanything,justpromisedtokeepit

secret.

JennylookedatMumwithapuzzledexpressiononherforeheadandpromised

theywouldn'tsayanythingwhateverhappened.ButJennyremindedDad'sbirthday

wasinJuneanditmightbealittletooearlytogetallsteamedupaboutit.

Silentforamoment,Mumsaidshewasnotgettingeverythingreadybutjust

wantedtospareenoughtimeforpreparationasthisyearifsabiggerdealthanusual.

Dadwasgoingtobe50.“50!Gosh,thafshalfacentury,“splutteredGerry“Iknewhe

wasoldbutIdidn'trealizehewasancient!"

Indeed,thatwaswhyMumstartedplanningaspecialpartyforhim.Mumtalkedwith

grandmaabouttheplanbecauseherhousewastheonlyoneinthefamilythatis

spaciousenoughforallfriendsandrelatives.Grandmaquiteagreedandalsostarted

preparing

“ButyouknowhowDadfeelsguiltytobotherothers.You'vegottoadmit,

remindedJennyThinkingoverthespecialoccasion,Mumwascontinuingwithher

secretwhenoneevening,Dadwassittingatthedinnertableandhesuddenlyslapped

hisforehead“IjustrealizedthatIamgoingtobe50inJune.Lefsjustquietlyforget

aboutit.Iwanttomourn（哀悼）thepassingofmyyouthinprivate/9

“Oh,comeonDad,don'tbesuchaspoil-sport!”beggedthekid,hopingtogive

mumahand.

Realizingnomorechancetohidethesecret,Mumcarefullywordedherthought

andsharedherplanofhavingalittlepartyatgrandma'shouse.Dadwasstunned（震,原

的）tonoreply

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Paragraph1:Frustrated,Mummadeacallto

grandma.________________________________________

Paragraph2:TheygoteverythingreadyasplannedwhenJunefinally

came.________________________

參考范文：

Frustrated,Mummadeacalltograndma.SensingMum'ssorrow,grandma

comfortedandadvised,hynotjustprepareasimpleyetspecialget-together?”Slapped

awakenbyMum'snewplan,thetwokidsbothburstintodeafeningcheersandskipped

roundandround.Together,theybrainstormedalistofideaswhensuddenlyJenny

murmured,“What'sDad'sresolutionforthenewyear?^^Suddenly,itallclickedand

theymerrilyreachedanagreementtoplanasecrethikingtriptothehilltheyonce

frequentedandafamilypicnicatthetop.

TheygoteverythingreadyasplannedwhenJunefinallycame.Thatmorningwhen

Dadwasabouttojogasusual,Mumhurriedtotellhimabouttheirnewplan.Seeing

thethreeinsportswear,Dadreali2something,andthistimehenodded.Alltheway,the

twokidsbouncedaround,laughingandchatting.HealongwithMum,recalledalotof

sweetmemoriesintheiryouth.Uponarrivingatthetop,thethreejustpitchedintothe

picnicinsheerpleasure.Withthecoolbreeze,Dadgazedatthemreflectivelyand

suddenlyrealizedthatit'snolongerdisturbingtocelebratebirthdaywiththeloveof

family.（主題升華）

2022.4月紹興讀后續(xù)寫一個(gè)驚喜的生日派對(duì)

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

Birthdaysaretypicallytheoccasionsfordelightandfeasting.Familyandfriends

gettogetherontheoccasionandconveytheirregardswiththebeautifulpresentsthey

bringwiththemselves.Iampersonallyabigfan-ofbirthdaysandwaitformybirthday

approximatelyamonthpriortotheday.

Thisyear,mybirthdaycameoffonlastMonday.Ididn'tknowthatmyparentshad

arrangedaspecialpartyforme.Ateighto'clockintheeveningofmyluckybirthday,I

wasaloneathomecomplainingandfrowning,andpityingmyselfformymisfortune.I

thoughtitwasgoingtobeaspecialdayfilledwithpresentsandfun,butallIreceived

wasa"HappyBirthday”.

Allofasudden,theelectricitywascutoffandtherewasacompletedarknessin

thehouse.Icouldn'tdoanything.Therefore,Idecidedtogotosleepandendthis

unluckyday.

Outoftheblueinthatquietnight,Iheardasuddennoisecomingfromdownstairs.

Startledandterriblyshocked,Isuspectedthatsomeonebrokeintothehouse.

Immediately,Itriedtophonemyparents,butnooneanswered.

Afteracoupleofminutesoffear,Istartedtocalmdown.Althoughinthemeantime

Iheardmorenoisesofpeopletalking,Isummonedupsomecourageandstartedheading

forthebasement.AsIslowlydrewclosertothebasement,Iguessedthereweremore

thanoneperson,butIfoundithardtobelieve.Therecouldn'tbealotofpeopleinour

basement!

Courageously,Iopenedthedoorofthebasement.Therewasacompletedarkness.

Therewasn'tasinglenoise.However,asIapproached,Iheardsomelaughterand

confirmedthattherewerepeople.Suddenly,thelightswereonandtherestoodmy

parentsandfriendscheeringatmewiththebeautifulpresentstheyhadcarefully

preparedforme.Itwasasurpriseparty!Theroomwasbeautifullydecoratedwith

colorfulballoons.Tablesandchairswerelaidandcoveredwithwhiteandcontrasting

redsheets.Agiganticbirthdaycakewaspositionedontheinnermosttable.

Paragraph1:Noweverythingwasreadyandthepartywassetinmotion.

Paragraph2:Thepartywasoverandtheguestsbegantoheadoff

參考范文:

Noweverythingwasreadyandthepartywassetinmotion.Surroundedbythe

guests,Imadeawishandwithallthestrengthblewthecandles.Theinstantthey

extinguished,theguestsgavearoundofapplauseandstartedscreamingwithjoy.Itwas

clearlyvisiblethattheywerehavinggreatfunandwereasexcitedasIwas.Icutthe

cakeandheardeveryonesinginginachorus“Happybirthdaytoyou"！Thenextfew

hourswedancedtogetherhappily.Thatday,weclickedmanypicturesandindeedI

createdalotofmemories.

Thepartywasoverandtheguestsbegantoheadoff.Myparentsexpressedtheir

gratitudefortheirvisit.IdashedintomyroomtotakestockofthepresentsIhad

received.IcountedthemallandestablishedthatIhadreceivedanumberofprecious

thingswhichwereofhugeusetome.Iwasdeadtiredbynow.Thedaywasaboutto

cometoanend.Stillbathedinafterglowofthesurpriseparty,Isatinmyroomand

starteddreamingformynextbirthdayandanewget-togetherwithfamilyandfriends.

2022年4月杭二中高三模擬考：叔侄握手言和

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下列短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

PrissyBakerwasinOscarMiller'sstoreonNewYear'smorning,buyingmatches

whenheruncle,RichardBaker,camein.HedidnotlookatPrissy,nordidshewish

himahappyNewYear;shewouldnothavedared.

UncleRichardhadnotbeenspeakingwithPrissyorherfathersincethetwobrothers9

quarreloverthedivisionofapieceofpropertyeightyearsago.Thefaulthadbeen

mainlyonRichard'sside,buthewastoostubborntoadmitit.

Hewasactuallyabig,strong-lookingman-anuncletobeproudof,Prissythought,

ifonlyhewerelikewhatheusedtobehimself.HewastheonlyunclePrissyhad,and

whenshewasalittlegirltheyhadbeengreatfriends;butthatwasbeforethequarrel.

RichardBakerinformedMr.MillerhewasonhiswaytoNavarretodeliveraload

ofpork."NewYear'sDaywouldbeprettymuchthesameasanyotherdaytoyou,“

saidMr.Miller,forRichardBakerwasabachelor（單身漢）.

“Well」alwayslikeagooddinneronNewYear'sDay,“saidRichardBaker."It's

abouttheonlywayIcancelebrate.IgoteverythingreadylastnightbutIhavetosend

theporknow.Iwon'tgetbackfromNavarrebeforeoneo'clock,soIguessIllhaveto

putupwithacoldbite.”

Afterherunclehaddrivenaway,Prissywalkedthoughtfullyhome.Shedidnotmean

tocookadinner,forherfatherhadtomeetafriendandwouldbegonethewholeday.

Therewasnobodyelsetocookdinnerfor.Prissy'smotherhaddiedwhenPrissywasa

baby.

Butasshewalkedhome,shecouldnothelpthinkingaboutUncleRichard.Hewould

certainlyhavecoldNewYear,coldenoughtofreezethewholecomingyear.Shefelt

sorryforhim,picturinghimreturningfromNavarre,coldandhungry,tofindafireless

houseandanuncookeddinner.

Para.1

SuddenlyanideacameintoPrissyshead.

Para.2

Prissyhadjustsetthetablewhenanangryvoicecutthroughthepeace.

參考范文：

SuddenlyanideacameintoPrissyshead.Whynotgotouncle'sandpreparea

fragrantdinnerforhim?Withoutanyhesitation,PrissyrantoRichard'shomeasfastas

possible.Onherarrival,sheslidintothehousewithherheartthumpingstrongly.She

tookoutthefrozenfoodfromthefridgeandmixedtheingredientstogether.Shemade

somebread,whichsmelledgood.Shecookedthebestfoodsheevercooked,thefood

lookedparticularlyinviting,itmustbeheruncle'sfavoritefood.Prissythoughtto

herself,wishingthatherunclewouldlikeit.

Prissyhadjustsetthetablewhenanangryvoicecutthroughthepeace.ItwasUncle

Richardthatyelled.uHowdareyou…"However,hardlyhadRichardstoppedhisyelling

withfurywhenhesawthebrightroom.Intohissightcamethetidyandcleantableand

afeastfordinner."Mydadwouldbegonethewholeday.So..."sheaddedwitha

sincerevoice."I'msosorryforthequarrelbetweenus.Butcouldweeattogetherto

celebratetheNewYearjustlike8yearsago?”Tearswellingupwithguiltyandsorrow,

Unclesteppedtowardher,strokeherheadandgatheredherintohistenderembrace.

ThefamilywasrebuiltandRichardfinallyadmittedhisfaultandgotrelievedby

Prissy'sconcernanddevotion.

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第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下列短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事

It'shardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfatherstoplay-

protector,provider-canmakethemseemimpenetrable（不可理解的）.That'showitwas

withmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrant

community.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn'tgettoseehim

loosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn'ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableor

whenwewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowantto

staythatway.

BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasbom-hisearlyhopes

anddreams,lovesandheartbreaks-letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoo

muchforustohandle.Ididn'twanttothreatentheintegrity（完整）ofhishardshell.

Ihadgottenusedtoit,anditmademefeelsecure.

Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,things

hadtochange.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedto

knowthathehadfacedthemtoo.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,because

IfeltlikeIhadlostmine.

Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmight

bethekey.Anemailcanbecrafted（精心制作）slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeak

atacomfortabledistanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He'dbeupinhisoffice-a

comfortableplacefilledwithbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofold

newspapers.Tdbeatmydeskinanapartment20minutesaway.

SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,

ifhefeltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimself,somethingthatwouldgiveme

much-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.

Paral:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.

Para2:1closedtheemailandstartedtocry.

參考范文：

Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascanned

threedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,

reachedbackintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistory

oflove,longing,self-doubt,fearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesome

practicalsuggestionsonhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igot

thesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughfbrmydadtosettledowninanewcountry

atanearlyage.Iwasalsoimpressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedintheface

ofdifficulty.

Para2:1closedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopened

upearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn'ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyown

struggles,hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwasso

simple:Ijusthadtohit"Send".We'vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven't

beenmagicallysolved,butgettingtoknowmydadbetter-andlearningtolovehim

more-hasmadethetoughstuffmoremanageableandlifesweeter.Ifshardtotalkto

dadssometimes,butI'mgladthatIfoundawaytotalktomine.

2022.03屆濰坊高三一模驗(yàn)收讀后續(xù)寫爺爺?shù)墓照?/p>

AGIFTFORGRANDPA

Summervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwith

excitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthe

grandparents1eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefun

theyhadwithgrandparents.

Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.Behindtheproperty

wastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,

attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.

JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,

shoutingexcitedly"Grandpa,weareback!”

Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhis

strengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandma

explainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn'tstanduponhisown

forever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly（倔強(qiáng)地）,"Ican!”Certainly,hewasstuckin

hisboyishway.Mumandgrandparentswerehappytomeetagainafteralongtime.

Theysattogetherandchattedaboutwhathappenedrecently.

Thebrothersweresoonboredwithadultconversation,wentoutandwanderedinto

theforest.Talltreesstretcheduptotheheavenswithlargebranchescrossingeachother,

whileyoungonesrosestraightlikesoldiers.Grandpawasonceagreatexplorerfullof

wisdom.Hecouldtellwherethebirdscamefromonlybytheircallsandsongs.The

trees,birds,lizards,lotsofbugs...HowmanymerrymomentstheyspentwithGrandpa

inthekingdom!

ButnowGrandpacouldn'tgetup.Thismadethemworried.t6We9dthinkouta

waytocheerhimup.“Jacksaid."Grandpaisabirdlover,andwecancatchhimabird."

Berlinsuggested.uButhehatesbirdsbeingcaged!”Jackshookhishead.

ThenabrightideacametoJack'smind."Whynotmakeacane（拐杖）outofa

youngtree!"

參考范文

Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.TheysetaboutmakingacaneforGrandpa

immediately.

Themomenttheychoseayoungtreeofmoderatesize,theycutitdownandthen

removedthebranchesandskinswithaknife.Withasmallwoodfastenedonthetopas

ahandle,afashionablecanecameintobeing（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)表伴隨）.Tomakethe

handlefeelcomfortable,theywrappedasoftclotharoundit.Berlin,fullofinnovative

ideas,carved（制作拐杖的動(dòng)作鏈）wordsGiftToGrandpaonthecane.Whatacool

cane!

JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.Staringatthefancycane,Grandpawas

sohappywithsmilesonhisfaceshininglikeadiamond（高興的心'理描寫）.He

thankedhisgrandsonsforthewonderfulgiftwithaffection,"Youbrothersarereally

greatcreators!"Supportinghimselfwiththecane,Grandpacouldn'tcontainhimselfand

wenttotheforeststepbystep.（拐杖發(fā)揮作用，爺爺來到森林）Watchingthetrees

andgrassaround,heemotionallysaidhewouldforevercherishthefondmomentsthey

weretogetherintheforest（場(chǎng)景復(fù)現(xiàn)，共同回憶甜蜜時(shí)刻）

武漢市2022屆高中畢業(yè)生二月調(diào)研考試（2.23）姐弟鏟雪

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整

的短文。

Shovelingthesnowhadalwaysbeenthebestpartaboutwinter.NotthatIthought

itwasfun,butmydad'sreactiontoacleandrivewaykeptmegoing.Hehatedshoveling

snowmorethananything.So,Itookituponmyselfateightyearsoldtodoitforhim.

EverytimeIsawsnowfallfromthesky,Iknewtheuniversewasreadytoputmeto

work.

Iwouldrunandputonmyjacket,snowbootstopreparemyselffortheworkahead.

Buteverysingletime,beforeIwentoutside,Iwouldstopbymyoldersister'sroomto

seeifshewantedtohelpme.Iknewshewouldsayno,butIalwaysaskedanyway.

Onedaytherewasalotofsnow,andtherewasnowayIwouldbeabletocleanit

allupmyself.Itwasgettingdark,andIhatedthethoughtofmydadhavingtoshovel

thesnowafteralongdayofwork.SoIdidtheroutineandknockedonmysister'sdoor.

AsIexpected,shegavemethesameold"no”.Annoyed,Iaskedagain.Withoutsaying

anythingfurther,shegotup,pushedmeoutoftheroomandslammed（平地關(guān)上）the

doorinmyface.

Istoodtheresilentlyforasecond.Then,Iturnedaround,wentoutofthehouse,

andsetoutinthecoldtotackletheenemythatlayinmydriveway.ButIcouldn'tcalm

down.Iwasreallyangrythatshewouldleavemetobattlethisalone.AllIwantedwas

somehelp.ThemoreIrememberedevery"no"shehadeversaidtome,theangrierI

became.

Ifoughttirelessly,myshortarmsswingingfromsidetosidewhilethewindcut

againstmycheeks.Afteronelonghour,Iwasnotevenhalfwaydone.Lookingatthe

victorioussnow,IthoughtofDad'sdisappointment.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Feelingbitteranddesperate,Icouldn'tstopmytears.

MysisterandIwentoutside.

范文：

Feelingbitteranddesperate,Icouldn'tstopmytears.Myinnerangerwaslikea

growingmonster,uncontrollablydrivingmetotheedgeofmadness.BeforeIrealized

it,Iwassobbinginmysister'sroom,withbulletsofwordsfiringthroughmymouth,

expressingmylong-burieddissatisfactiontowardsherabsencefrommysnow

shovelingexperiences.ThehouseseemedtobeholdingitsbreathwhenIstoppedmy

accusation,stillweeping."Pleasedon'tcry.Everyteardropofyoursisareminderof

howselfishIwas.I'msorry.Wouldyougivemeanotherchancetogoshovelingwith

you?”,saidmysisterwithgentlenessandsincerityinhervoice.

MysisterandIwentout.Morethanhalfofthedrivewaywasstillblanketedin

whitebutIwasn'taloneinthisbattleanymore.Everyshovelofsnowwasawitnessto

theenergyandexcitementinme.Bythetimewefinished,mybackwasaching,muscles

sore,andbodyexhausted.However,deepinsidemewasabrother,whowasso

overcomewithhappinessthathefeltontopoftheworld.Thatwasthebeautyof

companionship.Andfromthebrightsmilebloomingonmysister'sface,Icouldtell

thatshefeltthesame.Arminarm,wewalkedinsideasdarknessfell,waitingforfather

tocomehome.

202H105湖麗衢聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫

第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事

ThereisnothingmorewonderfulthanthesmelloftheAdirondackair!Itfillsyour

lungswithpurityandfreshnessthatmotivatesaloveforliving.Everyweekendinthe

summer,myfatherwouldplanatripfromourhomeinupstateNewYorktooneofthe

splendidlakesnestledamongthetallpinesandthickforestsoftheAdirondack

Mountains.Therewerenofavorites,instead,eachlakewasanadventuretoexploreand

enjoy.

OnetripthatIwillneverforgetwasavisittoOneidaLakeatthefoothillsofthe

mountains.Afterarrivingatthelakebeacharea,weemptiedthecarofourpicnic

supplies,towels,blanketsandbeachchairs,carryingthemthroughawooded

paththatseemedlikeaforeverdistance.Oncewelocatedtheperfectpicnicspot,

mydad,sisterandIranintothesplashingwaveswithourbeachball,leavingmy

motherbehindtonsetup".Inthelake,weimmediatelyplayed“monkeyinthe

middle”foratleastanhour,andthenafterretiringtheball,myfatherletus

divefromhisknee,throwingusupintheairandturningusoverlikethick

pancakesonagrill.Thistimelessgamewentonandonasourbeggingfor"more,

more^neverstopped.

Whenwefinallytiredofourgames,mydadstoppedtowatchmyoldersister.She

lovedsynchronizedswimming（花樣游泳）andstartedpracticingskillsthatherteam

usedincompetition.Myfather,beinganathletehimself,wasabsorbedinhershow.I

wassadthatnoonewasplayingwithme:noonewaswatchingme.Ibecameboredand

jealouswatchinghershowoff.Iwasinsulk（憤怒）anddecidedtoswimbymyselfand

trysomeofmysister'sskillsonmyownindeeperwater,farfrombothofthem.The

wavesweregettingstronger,butIdidn'tcare.Ijustwantedtodowhatmysistercould

dosothatIcouldcatchmyfather'sattention.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞。

Paragraph1AsItookabreathtotryadive,ahugewaveswallowedme.

Paragraph!Itwasmydad!

參考范文：

Onepossibleversion:

AsItookabreathtotryadive,ahugewaveswallowedme.Ichokedandthena

hugeundercurrentsweptmedeeperbeneaththewaves.Theverythoughtofdyingfilled

mewithamadpanic.Ikickedmylegswildly,losinganyhopeforabreath.Iremember

tryingtostandup,butthesandybottomhaddisappeared.AsIcameupsearchingfor

thesurface,strugglingforoxygen,sputteringtoclearmylungs,Ifeltafirmgraspon

myarmandapulltosafety.

Itwasmydad!HehuggedmetightlyandcarriedmebacktoaplacewhereIcould

stand.Therewasnoscolding,justabighugandsmilebecauseheknewIwasallright.

Hehadbeenwatchingmeallalong!Hehadnevertakenhiseyeoffme,evenashehad

theothereyeonmysister.Hehadprotectedme.Beingtoldbysomeonethatyouare

lovedisgreat,butexperiencingthatloveisawesome.Withouthiswatchingoverme,

withouthislovingme,IwouldnotbethestrongwomanIamtoday.

常州市2021-2022屆高三年級(jí)第一學(xué)期期中考試生日驚喜

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。

ThatDecember,withChristmasapproaching,mymotherwasoutatworkwhenI

letmyselfintoherbedroomoneafternooninsearchofasafetypin.Itookthekey

hiddenunderthecarpet,unlockedthedoorsteppedin.Standingagainstthewallwasa

big,blackbicyclewithballoontires.Irecognizeditinstantly.Itwasthesamesecond-

handbikeFdbeenadmiringinaBaltimoreStreetshopwindow.Somehowmymother

musthavescrapedtogetherenoughforadownpaymentandmeanttosurprisemewith

thebicycleonChristmasmorning.

Iwasdeeplymovedbythediscoveryandyetsickenedbytheknowledgethat,

burstingintoherroomlikethisIhadrobbedherofthepleasureofseeingmeastonished

anddelightedonChristmasday.Iimmediatelybackedout,putthekeybackinitshiding

place,andthoughtoverwhattodo.

IdecidedthatbetweennowandChristmasImustdoabsolutelynothingtoreveal

theslightesthintofmyterribleknowledge.Nothingmustdenyherthehappinessof

seeingmecompletelyamazedonChristmasday.Ievenstartedpracticingmysurprised

faceinfrontofthemirror,testingexclamationsofdelight:"Wow!""Abikewithballoon

tires!Idon'tbelieveit!"ThedayfinallycamewhenChristmasarrived.Mymotherwoke

meandmysisterearlyinthemorning."GoseewhatSantaClausbroughttoyou.”

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答Heartbeatracing,Icameoutofmy

bedroom.

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywiththeshirtwhenmymomcried

behindme,"Wait!There'ssomethinginbedroomIforgetallabout.n

范文：Heartbeatracing.Icameoutofmybedroom.Tomydisappointment,onlyafew

smallbrightlywrappedpackageswerelyingundertheChristmastree.Nobicycle.My

heartsankasifbeingsplashedbycoldwater.SlowlyIopenedmypackage,onlytosee

ashirtlyinginside.WhatIfeltwasbitterdispleasure.Whathappenedtomybicycle?I

couldn'thelpthinkingmymomhadfoundthebikejusttooexpensiveandeventually

sentitback.Icouldfeeltearswellingupinmyeyesas]clenchedtheshirt.

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywiththeshirtwhenmymomcried

behindme,"Wait!There'ssomethinginmybedroomIforgotallabout."Shewentto

herroom,andamomentlatercamebackwheelingthebigblackbicyclewithballoon

tires.Ididn'thavetopretendtheexcitementandsurpriseasthebicyclecameintomy

sight.Ithrewmyarmsaroundmymomandkissedherspontaneously."Thankyoumom!

ThisisthebestChristmasgiftI'veeverhad!"Abrilliantgrinbloomedonmymom's

faceassheheldmetightly.Hidingherpleasureofseeingmysurprisedface,shesaid,

"Allrightnow,it'sonlyabicycle."

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第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事

Asacountrymusicsonggoes,“She'sawildonewithanangel'sface.^^Thatismy

youngersister,Lulu.WhenIthinkofher,Ithinkoftryingtotameawildhorse.

ItishardtofindwordstodescribemyrelationshipwithLulu.”All-outnuclearwarfare"

couldnotinterpretitquiteexactly.Theironyisthatweareverymuchalike:weshare

thehot-temperedandfast-forgivingpersonality.

Speakingofpersonalities,theChineseZodiac（屬相）describesLuluandme

perfectly.PeoplebominthePigYearare“stubborn"and"tough“andoften“flyinto

anger/9althoughthey"neverharbouragrudge（記仇）“astheyarehonestandwarm-

hearted.ThatisLuluandIexactly,withanagegapoftwelveyears.

Ihadmyfirstface-offwithLuluwhenshewasaboutfive.Itwasafreezing

winterafternooninNewHaven,Connecticut.MumandDadwereatwork.Babysitting

Luluathome,IdecidedthatitwouldbetheperfecttimetointroduceLulutothepiano

asIwasinthelearningprocessmyself.

Excitedaboutworkingtogether——withherbrowncurls,roundeyes,andChina

dollface,Luluwasdesperatelycute-Iputheronthepianobench,ontopofsome

comfortablepillows.Ithendemonstratedhowtoplayasinglenotewithasinglefinger,

andaskedhertodothesame.Asmallrequest,b