華附省實(shí)廣雅深中高三四校聯(lián) 續(xù)寫 親情類-兄弟倆冰釋前嫌講義

華附、省實(shí)、廣雅、深中2024屆高三四校聯(lián)

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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneofmyteachersonceaskedmyclasswhatourfavouritememorywas.Shewasaskingforthemomentinwhich"youfeltthebest,youfeltthatyouhadtheworldinthepalmofyourhand."Somedescribedgrandawards;othersdescribedwinningatournament.ButIfeltthebestwhenIfirstlearnedhowtoridemybikeatthirteen.Ididn'tmindmyclassmate'sstaresandsnickering,becauseIknewtherewasmoretothestory.有一次，我的一位老師問(wèn)我們班最喜歡的記憶是什么。她要求的是“你感覺最好的時(shí)刻，你感覺世界就在你的手掌心?！币恍┤嗣枋隽舜螵?jiǎng)；其他人則描述自己贏得了一場(chǎng)比賽。但當(dāng)我十三歲第一次學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車時(shí)，我感覺最好。我不介意同學(xué)的凝視和竊笑，因?yàn)槲抑肋@個(gè)故事還有更多。MybrotherandIsharedatypicalbrotherlyrelationship:wecouldn'tstandeachother.Or,tobehonest,hecouldn'tstandme.Iheroworshippedhim.Myclothesmysteriouslylookedlikehis,andevenmywordstendedtomimicthoseIheardfromhim.Manytimes,Ievenwantedtoliterallyfollowmybrother,sobbingeverytimeIwaspreventedfromhangingaroundwithhim.Needlesstosay,Iwasanannoyancetohim.Anysortofconversationwehadusuallydegradedtofighting,andtryasImight,mybrotherusuallywon.我和哥哥有著典型的兄弟關(guān)系：我們無(wú)法忍受對(duì)方。或者，說(shuō)實(shí)話，他受不了我。我崇拜他。我的衣服神秘地看起來(lái)像他的，甚至我的話也傾向于模仿我從他那里聽到的。很多時(shí)候，我甚至想跟著我哥哥，每次我被阻止和他在一起時(shí)都會(huì)哭泣。不用說(shuō)，我讓他很惱火。任何我們通常降級(jí)為戰(zhàn)斗的談話，盡管我盡了最大努力，但我哥哥通常會(huì)贏。Afterawhile,Istoppedtryingtoimpresshimandlearnedtobetotallyindifferent;perhapsthesilenttreatmentwouldgetmoreapproval.Iwaswrong.WesoonfellintoasadpatternIavoidedhim,heignoredme,anddeepinside,ithurt.Indifferentorhostile,hewasonlyabrotherinname.Sothat'showitwasbetweenus.Ibelievedwewouldforeverbeapart,twohousemateswithoutconversation,twostrangerswithoutwarmth.Andnothingmore.過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，我不再試圖給他留下深刻印象，而是學(xué)會(huì)了完全漠不關(guān)心；也許這種沉默的處理方式會(huì)得到更多的認(rèn)可。我錯(cuò)了。我們很快陷入了一種悲傷的模式——我避開了他，他不理我，內(nèi)心深處很痛苦。不管是冷漠還是敵對(duì)，他只是名義上的兄弟。所以我們之間就是這樣的。我相信我們會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)分開，兩個(gè)室友沒有交談，兩個(gè)陌生人沒有溫暖。沒有別的了。IstillrememberthedayIlearnedtorideabike.IhadreceiveditthatChristmas,whichwasgreat,untilIrealizedIhadnoideahowtorideit.Mymomwastoobusyandhadlongsinceabandonedanyattempttoteachme.Idecidedtoteachmyselftoride,alittlebiteachday,butinvain.Onthatfatefulday,itwasnodifferent.Iwasingtotheendofmydailyonehourtorture,andIwassofrustratedthatIthrewmybikeasideandbegantocry.我還記得我學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車的那一天。那年圣誕節(jié)，我收到了它，這太棒了，直到我意識(shí)到我不知道如何騎它。我媽媽太忙了，早就放棄了教我的任何嘗試。我決定自學(xué)騎自行車，每天一點(diǎn)，但都是徒勞的。在那決定性的一天，情況也沒什么不同。我每天一個(gè)小時(shí)的折磨即將結(jié)束，我非常沮喪，把自行車扔到一邊，開始哭泣。注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1.Iguessthatwaswhatcausedmybrothertoeoutside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2.Anhourlater,Iwasshowingoffmy

ridingskilltomymom._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析：故事大意我和哥哥互相無(wú)法忍受對(duì)方。我們對(duì)立的關(guān)系讓我們由敵對(duì)轉(zhuǎn)為了冷漠。雖然我們是名義上的兄弟，相處起來(lái)卻像陌生人。圣誕節(jié)收到了自行車禮物，我決定學(xué)著騎，媽媽太忙，沒法教我。我決定自學(xué)，可是這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)就是折磨。因?yàn)楹翢o(wú)進(jìn)展，我開始變得沮喪并大哭起來(lái)。參考答案：Iguessthatwaswhatcausedmybrothertoeoutside.

Iturnedmyfaceaway,fearinghewouldteaseme.Unexpectedly,hegentlypickedmybikeupandgesturedmeover,“Getonit.”Hisdeterminedlooksmoothedawaymydoubts.Ashegrippedthebackseat,Igotonthebike,tookadeepbreathandstartedtopedal,holdingtightlyontothehandlebars.Duringthewholeprocess,wedidn'ttalkmuch.Hesimplyofferedafewnecessaryinstructionsattimes.Butneveroncedidheshoutatme,nordidheletmefall.HispatientteachingprovedefficientandIgraduallygotthehangofriding.Anhourlater,Iwasshowingoffmyridingskilltomymom.

Shewasamazedtoseemeridingsteadilyaroundtheyard.Whilesharingmylearningexperiencewithherinexcitement,Inoticedmybrotherstandingatadistancesmilingatme.Icasthimagratefullookandhenoddedandthenwalkedbackintothehouse.Fromthatdayon,thesadpatternbetweenusbegantochange.Therewereoccasionalconversationsbetweenus,filledwithlessembarrassmentbutincreasingconcern.lcouldfeeladifferentkindofbrotherlyrelationshipslowlydevelopingbetweenus.Iwouldalwaystreasurethatdayasmyfavouritememory,themomentwhenIfeltthebest.下水文：Para.1.Iguessthatwaswhatcausedmybrothertoeoutside.

AsIsatthere,tearsstreamingdownmyface,mybrotherappearedoutofnowhere.

Withoutsayingaword.hepickedupmybikeandplaceitbackonitswheels,atouchofconcernflashingacrosshisface.Afterwards,heextendedahandandhelpedmeup."Enoughcrying",heblurtedout,hisvoicesurprisinglygentle.I'llteachyouhowtoridethatbike."Istartedathim,disbeliefwrittenallovermyface.Mybrother,theonewhoalwayspushedmeaway,wasnowofferingtoteachmehowtoride.Inoddedeagerly,willingtoputasideourdifferencesforthisrareopportunity.Mybrotherheldontothebackofthebike,providingsupportandbalanceasIpedaledforward.Itwasamagicalmomentwhenhefinallyletgo,andIrealizedthatIwasridingonmyown.Para.2.Anhourlater,Iwasshowingoffmyridingskilltomymom.Mymom'seyeswidenedwithamixtureofsurpriseanddelight."Ican'tbelieveit!"sheexclaimed,beamingawildsmile.Awaveofexcitementandgratitudewellingupinme,

Irushedoverandgavemybrotheraheartfelthug,thankinghimforteachingmethenewskill.

Itwasfromthatdayon

thatourrelationshipbegantotransform.Westartedspendingmoretimetogether,laughing,talkingandevensharingsecrets.Thewallsthathadseparatedusforsolongslowlycrumbledaway,replacedbyabondthatgrewstrongerwitheachpassingday.Thatdaywasforeveretchedinmymindasmyfavouritememory,themomentwhenIfeltthebest.語(yǔ)言積累：從那天起，我們的關(guān)系發(fā)生了徹底的轉(zhuǎn)變。我們不再吵架，也不再忽視對(duì)方相反，我們變得形影不離。我們會(huì)一起長(zhǎng)途旅行，探索新的地方，創(chuàng)造終生難忘的回憶。我們之間曾經(jīng)冰冷的墻壁逐漸融化。就好像學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車后，我們的生活開啟了新的篇章。Fromthatdayon,ourrelationshipunderwentapletetransformation.Wenolongerargue,norignoreeachother.Onthecontrary,webeeinseparable.Wewilltravellongdistancestogether,explorenewplaces,andcreateunforgettablememoriesforlife.Theoncecoldwallsbetweenusaregraduallymelting.It'slikelearninghowtorideabicycleopensanewchapterinourlives.2.從那天起，我們的關(guān)系開始發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變。我們開始有更多的時(shí)間在一起，談笑風(fēng)生，甚至分享秘密。我們之間長(zhǎng)久以來(lái)的隔閡慢慢消失，取而代之的是與日俱增的親情。Fromthatdayon,ourrelationshipbegantoundergoatransformation.Westartedtohavemoretimetogether,chattingandevensharingsecrets.Thelongstandingestrangementbetweenusisslowlydis