廣東省佛山市順德區(qū)高三下學期第二次質量檢測卷讀后續(xù)寫課件

1.讀后續(xù)寫保證平均分的基本操作時間精力分配：30分鐘？做題速度？結構：段落/完整程度/尤其最后一行；書寫：是否打輔助線/圓潤扁平/涂改統(tǒng)一；2.文本分析情節(jié)發(fā)展2.文本分析情節(jié)發(fā)展Backgroundinformation:Mydaughtersaid“Hi”toMr.ManwithnegativefeedbackandItriedtofindoutwhy.Risingaction:IknewthereasonthroughmyneighbourandIcameupwithsomeadvice.Climax:WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid“No,notthat.”_______________________________________________________Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,“Thankyou,fromMr.Man.”_______________________________________________________________Mydaughter’sresponse/prepareanddeliverthegifttoMr.Manmydaughterandmyownresponse/ourinfluenceonMr.Man/thetheme2.文本分析2.文本分析3.高級句式with+賓語+賓補非謂語獨立主格主從+is/was+表從倒裝句無靈主語強調句定從虛擬語氣同位語從句Thereisnodenyingthat...4.下水作文（段一）我感到自己有點耐心耗盡，就問女兒的看法。她告訴我，給Mr.Man送一幅特別的畫可以減輕他的難過和思念。我點點頭，同意了她富有創(chuàng)意的想法。我還沒來得及提醒她準備繪畫文具，她就沖去開始準備了。大約半個小時后，她手里拿著一幅畫，里面畫著一對夫婦在山巔看旭日東升。畫的底下寫著，“每天都是新的一天”。我微微一笑，示意她可以送過去給Mr.Man。第二天等我們放學歸家后，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)門把手上掛著一封金色的信。女兒走過去，拿起信封并打開了它。4.下水作文我感到自己有點耐心耗盡，就問女兒的看法。她告訴我，給Mr.Man送一幅特別的畫可以減輕他的難過和思念。Seizedbyarippleofconfusionandimpatience,Iaskedmylittlegirl’sopinion.SheeagerlyrespondedthatsendingMr.Manaspecialdrawingwouldhelprelievehisgriefandmissing.我點點頭，同意了她富有創(chuàng)意的想法。Inoddedmyheadandagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.Noddingmyhead,Iagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.4.下水作文我還沒來得及提醒她準備繪畫文具，她就沖去開始準備了。HardlyhadIremindedhertoprepareutensilswhensherushedtostarthercreation.大約半個小時后，她手里拿著一幅畫，里面畫著一對夫婦在山巔看旭日東升。畫的底下寫著，“每天都是新的一天”。Itwasafterhalfanhourthatshecametomewithapaintinginwhichacoupleissharingafullsunriseonasummit,atthebottomofwhichread,“Everydayisanewday”.4.下水作文我微微一笑，示意她可以送過去給Mr.Man。Ismiledandsignaledhertopresent/deliverittoMr.Man.Withasmileonmyface,Isignaledhertopresent/deliverittoMr.Man.第二天等我們放學歸家后，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)門把手上掛著一封金色的信。女兒走過去拿起信封并打開了它。Thenextdaywhenwereturnedhomeafterschool,wespottedagoldenenvelopquietlyhangingonourdoorhandle.Mydaughterreachedforit,pickeditupandtoreitopen.4.下水作文想方設法試圖安慰Mr.Man的女兒一看到這么精美的感謝信就興奮地跳了起來，臉上綻放著微笑。我的內心也感到一陣滿足和溫暖。這種溫暖源自我外向體貼的女兒，她逐漸懂得了從心理上共情他人。毫無疑問，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐漸恢復了平日的笑容和積極態(tài)度。誠然，要走出失去至親之痛，絕非易事。但Mr.Man還是竭力感激女兒的善意小舉動。我猜，或許女兒的那幅畫，真的點燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。4.下水作文4.下水作文（段二）毫無疑問，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐漸恢復了平日的笑容和積極態(tài)度。TherewasnodenyingthatwithhersupportMr.Mangraduallyregainedhisnormalsmileandpositivity.誠然，要走出失去至親之痛，絕非易事。但Mr.Man還是竭力感激女兒的善意小舉動。我猜，或許女兒的那幅畫，真的點燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。Bynomeanswasiteasytostepoutofthesadnessoflosinglovedones,yetMr.Manstrovetoappreciatemygirl’slittlekindact.Ibetmydaughter’sdrawingdidsparklearayofhopeinhislife.4.下水作文WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid‘No,notthat.’.Seizedbyarippleofconfusionandimpatience,Iaskedmylittlegirl’sopinion.SheeagerlyrespondedthatsendingMr.Manaspecialdrawingwouldhelprelievehisgriefandmissing.Noddingmyhead,Iagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.HardlyhadIremindedhertoprepareutensilswhensherushedtostarthercreation.Itwasafterhalfanhourthatshecametomewithapaintinginwhichacoupleissharingafullsunriseonasummit,atthebottomofwhichread,“Everydayisanewday”.Ismiledandsignaledhertopresent/deliver