高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作表達微技能（全國）09慰問信

09慰問信（2013年，山東卷）假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)雙下要點給他回封郵件：1.未及時回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本書面表達考查提綱類作文。從寫作要點和得分點來看，考生應(yīng)在宏觀上把握書信體寫作的要求，如格式、文體等，寫作段落以三段式為宜，首段體現(xiàn)問候、寫信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可詢問Tom暑假里的打算，體現(xiàn)書信體的交際性；而中間段具體交待未及時回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微觀層面上應(yīng)具體把握寫作的內(nèi)容和語言，做到句子之間有效的連接，長短句結(jié)合，多用doing及物做主語，句子加半句原因、結(jié)果、目的等具體細節(jié)的解釋、利用簡單而有效的中文思路擴展英文細節(jié)。考生若能在寫作部分做到內(nèi)容充實符合要求、語言精彩與眾不同、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰一目了然，相信這樣的文章能讓考生獲得一個相對滿意的成績?！痉段狞c評】此范文表達流暢，語言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。其中值得學(xué)習(xí)的句型有：不定式作目的狀語：Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.

非謂語動詞和定語從句：Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.【經(jīng)典套路】第一段：問候+寫信背景+寫信目的第二段：“道歉”部分(相當于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分第四段：補充說明+客套話慰問信（含抗“疫”慰問信）開頭句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

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Knowingyoursituation,

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feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中間段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特別能理解你現(xiàn)在的感覺，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和時間3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是眾所周知，做...本身就極其困難4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.為了準備這次...,你已經(jīng)盡了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的錯結(jié)尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

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candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.（交代事由）It’sunderstandableforyouto.（表明主要觀點）However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.（提出建議）First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto（直面）theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具體實情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(進一步安慰并鼓勵對方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供幫助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表達愿望與祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________一、題型特點慰問信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天災(zāi)人禍的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類信要寫得及時、簡明扼要，感情要真誠，措辭要貼切，盡量以樂觀的口吻減輕親友的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵對方對日后煩人生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作充滿信心。二、寫作思路第一步：引出事實，表達惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰對方或鼓勵對方，預(yù)測未來；第三步：表達愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然發(fā)生了一場驚人的、未曾預(yù)知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.聽到地震的消息我們很難過。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我們非常遺憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我無法告知你當你聽到你發(fā)生事故我是多么難過。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我剛剛得知上個星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…當我聽說……時，我非常關(guān)心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我們是多么擔憂。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我們真心/祈禱你能很快完全康復(fù)。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我們真心希望你早日康復(fù)。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我們只有不屈不撓才能戰(zhàn)勝自然災(zāi)難。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.請向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達我們最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的幫助，請告知。1．假定你是李華，得知你的筆友Mike的家鄉(xiāng)最近發(fā)生了大地震，損失慘重。請你給他寫一封慰問信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你所了解的災(zāi)情；2.你的擔憂；3.你的幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，得知你的美國網(wǎng)友Bill的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生山火，房屋被燒毀，他現(xiàn)在住在臨時避難所。請你寫一封郵件慰問他，內(nèi)容要點如下：1.詢問受災(zāi)情況，表示關(guān)心；2.鼓勵他振作起來，重建家園。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：山火mountainfireDearBill,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李華。你的英國好友Joe競選籃球隊隊長失敗了。他給你來信說他很受挫敗。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他寫一封慰問信。要點：1.得知消息；2.安慰并鼓勵他；3.表達自己的關(guān)心和祝愿。提示：1.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)：不少于100詞（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。3.參考詞匯：競選runforDearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Zack來郵件告訴你說，他未能通過"朗誦唐詩"選拔賽。請你用英文給Zack寫一封慰問郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.點明得知的情況；2.表達理解和安慰；3.鼓勵對方。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加情節(jié)和連貫語。參考詞匯：

"朗誦唐詩"選拔賽thetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．據(jù)報道，7歲的美國男孩Trump得知自己身患癌癥（cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會（ACS）決定，每當Trump收到一封慰問信，就多為他分擔3美元的治療費。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Trump寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.表亦鼓勵；3.祝他早日康復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假設(shè)你叫王紅，得知你的英國朋友Andrew的愛犬Sparky發(fā)生了意外永遠離開了他，請你給他寫—封慰問信。注意:1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假設(shè)你是李華。重陽節(jié)即將來臨，校學(xué)生會決定組織大家去敬老院開展慰問活動。請你給你的外國朋友一來自英國的交換生John寫一封郵件，邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括;1.活動簡介;2.具體安排（出發(fā)時間、地點等）。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫;3.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:重陽節(jié)“DoubleNinthFestival”;敬老院“nursinghome”DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假定你是某國際中學(xué)的李華，將參加校志愿者協(xié)會慰問社區(qū)的留守兒童。請寫信邀請你校交換生Cathy一起參加，內(nèi)容包括：1．活動內(nèi)容；2．發(fā)出邀請。提示詞：留守兒童left-behindchildren注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCathy,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua9．假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國朋友Jenny的來信。她在信中說，由于剛進入高中，還不能適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境，不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給她回信。1.向Jenny表示問候和慰問。2.針對她的問題提出幾點建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Eric最近總吃外賣，導(dǎo)致消化不良。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示慰問；2.提出建議；3.表達祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。得知英國好友Jim在他們學(xué)校運動會的接力賽(therelayrace)中摔倒，導(dǎo)致腿部骨折，請你用英文寫一封郵件給他，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示慰問；2.康復(fù)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.開頭語和結(jié)語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua12．假設(shè)你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友David剛隨父母搬家并換了一所新學(xué)校，他希望在新學(xué)校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的幫助。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，提供在新學(xué)校交朋友的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.對他搬新家表示慰問；2.提供在新學(xué)校交朋友的建議（至少兩點）。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假定你是李華，上周與交換生Henry一起參加為期三天的社區(qū)志愿者活動，但Henry因故缺席了最后一天的活動，請根據(jù)以下要點向他介紹相關(guān)情況：1.表示慰問；2.活動內(nèi)容及流程；3.個人感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1．DearMike,Howareyoudoing?Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.I’mreallyworriedaboutyou,yourfamilyandallyourfriendsthere.I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.Bestwishestoyouall!Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生給家鄉(xiāng)最近發(fā)生大地震的筆友Mike寫一封慰問信，需描述自己所了解的災(zāi)情，表達擔憂，并說明自己的幫助?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累難過的：sorry→sad,sorrowful糟糕的：terrible→dreadful,awful,horrible發(fā)生：happen→occur,takeplace困難的：difficult→hard,tough為……擔心：beworriedabout→beconcernedabout一定程度上：tosomeextent→insomeway,toacertainextent,tosomedegree克服：getover→conquer,overcome困難：difficulty→obstacle,barrier2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.拓展句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates,which,tosomeextent,mayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.(運用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作hear的賓語)[高分句型2]Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.(運用了連接副詞how引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作imagine的賓語)[高分句型3]I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.(運用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作hope的同位語)2．DearBill,Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.Areyouoryourfamilyinjured?Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.Howabouttheconditionsthere?Doyouhaveenoughclothesandfood?Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.Cheerup!I'msureyouwillrebuildyourhometownsoon.Anyway,tomorrowisanotherday!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。得知你的美國網(wǎng)友Bill的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生山火，房屋被燒毀，他現(xiàn)在住在臨時避難所，現(xiàn)要求你根據(jù)所給要點寫一封郵件慰問他?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累非常：extremely→badly擔心的：worried→anxious損害：damage→harm導(dǎo)致：cause→leadto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.拓展句：Becauseyourhousewasburneddown,youarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句）【高分句型2】Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）3．參考范文：DearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeel.However,wecanlearnmorelessonsfromfailurethanfromsuccessMaybeitisagoodthingforyourfuture.Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.Learnfromtheexperienceandthinkaboutwhattodonext.Tobeexact,first,didyoumakegoodpreparationsforthecompetition?Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.Second,whatareyourstrengthsandshortcomings?Thisisanotherquestionforyoutothinkdeeplyabout,becauseitwillmakeyournextattemptmoresuccessful.Havefaithinyourself.Youareacapable,wisepersonandIbelieveinyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友Joe寫封信，對他競選籃球隊隊長失敗，予以安慰。并簡要分析失利的原因?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累競爭（崗位）：competefor→runfor聰明的：smart→wise有能力的：able→capable確切地說：exactlyspeaking=tobeexact2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.拓展句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities,whichrangefrompracticingyourspeechestodrawingupafutureworkplan.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.(運用了由what引導(dǎo)的主語從句)[高分句型2]Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.(運用由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)4．DearZack,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.YouhavedevotedyourselftolearningChinese,especiallyChinesepoetry.Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficultforChinesethemselvestolearnChinesepoetrywell,muchlessaforeigner.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.It’snotyourfault.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給加拿大朋友Zack寫一封慰問郵件，對他未能通過“朗誦唐詩”選拔賽表示理解和安慰。【寫作分析】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時,少量一般過去時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.點明得知的情況；2.表達理解和安慰；3.鼓勵對方。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）devoteto,asweallknow,madeeveryeffort,getreadyto,makeit,bestwishes,第三步：連詞成句1.I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.2.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.3.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.4.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.5.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but,2.表因果關(guān)系：So,連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.（運用which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句）[高分句型2]SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.（運用that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）5．DearTrump,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.Pleasecheerupandholdon!I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.Don’tworryaboutthemoneybecausetheACSwilldonatethreedollarsforeachcomfortletteryoureceive.Iwillalsotellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyourtreatment.Hopeyouwillrecoversoon.Yours,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作?！緦懽鞣治觥款}目要求假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Trump寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.表示鼓勵；3.祝他早日康復(fù)。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時進行寫作。要點已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫哪幾點，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。【典型句式】這封書信的關(guān)鍵在于要點的拓展，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.定語從句的運用；I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.賓語從句的運用。6．DearAndrew,I'msosorrytohearthenewsaboutyourdog.Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.Ourpetsgiveusmuchenjoymentandpleasantcompanionship.Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.Iknowthatourpetsarenotonlyanimalsbutalsoourchildren.Theyareloyaltousandwewillfinditinterestingtoplaywithourpets.Theycanknowouremotionsasamanthinks.Theycanbringusjoyandpositiveeffectsaswell.Ihopethegoodmemorieswilleasethefeelingsofloss.YourssincerelyWangHong【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作?！緦懽鞣治觥康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信：假設(shè)你叫王紅，得知你的英國朋友Andrew的愛犬Sparky發(fā)生了意外永遠離開了他，請你給他寫—封慰問信。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：sadnessandloneliness（悲傷孤獨）；enjoymentandpleasantcompanionship（快樂和陪伴）；warmgreeting（熱烈歡迎）；not…but（不是而是）；等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！镜湫途涫健勘疚膬?nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。同時文中使用高級句子。Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.使用了定語從句；Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.運用了狀語從句。顯示出作者扎實的英語功底。值得大家學(xué)習(xí)與借鑒。7．DearJohn,Nextweekend,anactivitythemedtheDoubleNinthFestivalwillbeheldbytheStudentUnion.Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.Thisyear,we'regoingtovisittheoldinthelocalnursinghome.Livingawayfromtheirchildren,theyoftenfeellonelyandunhappy.Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.We'llgatherattheschoolgateat8amnextSaturdaymorningandgobybus.Iwouldbegladifyoucouldcome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是李華。重陽節(jié)即將來臨，校學(xué)生會決定組織大家去敬老院開展慰問活動。請你給你的外國朋友一來自英國的交換生John寫一封郵件，邀請他參加?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累喜歡：beinto→befondof參觀：visit→payavisitto計劃：plan→arrange肯定：surely→definitely2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.拓展句：TheDoubleNinthFestival,whichfallsonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,isheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）【高分句型2】Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.（運用了不定式作目的狀語，which引導(dǎo)定語從句）8．DearCathy,Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolvolunteerassociationplanstovisittheleft-behindchildreninthecommunitythisweekend.Wearewonderingwhetheryoucanjoinus?Withtheirparentsworkingfaraway,thoseleft-behindchildrenareinneedofloveandcare.Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.Yourparticipationwillsurelyaddpleasuretothismeaningfulday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信邀請你校交換生Cathy一起參加校志愿者協(xié)會慰問社區(qū)的留守兒童活動，內(nèi)容包括：活動內(nèi)容；發(fā)出邀請?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累因此：Therefore→Thus計劃做：bescheduledtodo→plantodo玩得開心：havefun→enjoyoneself真誠地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.拓展句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem,whichcanmakethemfeelwarm.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.(notonly…butalso連接句子時，notonly位于句首，該部分用部分倒裝)[高分句型2]Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.(運用了since引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，不定式作賓語補足語)9．DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.Youcanbuildupagoodrelationshipwiththembyrespectingyourteachersandhelpingyourclassmates.Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.Inaddition,itisalsohelpfultodevelopvarioushobbies,whichcanmakeyourlifemorecolorful.Allinall,Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourhighschoollife.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求給朋友提出建議幫助她更好的適應(yīng)高中生活?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion適應(yīng)：adjustto→adaptto此外：beisides→what’smore重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展并列句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.拓展句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementwhichwillrelieveyourpressure.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.（運用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句。）10．DearEric,I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.Firstly,youshouldstopeatingtakeoutfood.Instead,it’sagoodideatocookbyyourself.Inaddition,regularexerciseisalsonecessarybecauseworkingoutproperlyhelpsyoudigestbetter.Lastbutnotleast,keepagoodmoodeveryday,whichcanpositivelyaffectyourphysicalhealth.Ifyoustilldon’tgetbetteraftertwodays,youshouldseeadoctor.Ihopemyadvicewillworkforyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Eric最近總吃外賣，導(dǎo)致消化不良。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，給出建議?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion緊急的：urgent→pressing獨自：byoneself→onone’sown此外：inaddition→moreover2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.拓展句：It’surgentforyoutomakesomechangesbecauseitisbadforyourhealth.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.(運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句和because引導(dǎo)