高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題之助人類+節(jié)日里的紅裙與給予之心+講義

讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。TheWilsonswerehavingdinner.ThefoodwasleftfromtheirThanksgivingdinnertwodaysbefore：turkeysoupandturkeymeatmixedwithpotatoes.Eleven-year-oldAngelinaasked，”Arewehavingturkeyicecream,too?”Herfatherreplied,“Angelina,haveyouforgottenthatIhadnojobforawholeyear?NowIhaveworkagain.Youshouldbeverythankful.”“I'msorryIsaidthatabouttheturkey!ButunlessIgetanewdress，IwillnotlookgoodfortheChristmasFestival.”Angelinamurmured.

TheFestivalwasthewinterholidaycelebrationofagroupshebelongedto:theAvalonGirls'ServiceClub.Theywrotecheerfulcardsforhospitalpatients.Theycookedmealsforthehomeless.ButtheChristmasFestivalwasdifferent.Thegirlsworepartyclothesandmanypeoplecametoseethemperform.Angelinahadonlyaplaingraydressthatshehadworntotheeventlastyear.Andnowitwasalittletooshort.Angelinaappealedtoherparentstobuyoneforher,abeautifulreddressinForbes'Store.Hermothersighed,“Well,wecannotbuyit.Wehavetobecareful.YouneverknowwhenImightlosemyjob.”

Allhopewasnotgone.TherewasasignintheForbes’storewindowthatsaid”layaway(分期付款)”.Angelinapulledtenworndollarbillsfromhercoatpocket.Sherantothestoreandbeggedthesalesperson,Mrs.Harding,tohold’her’dressforher.”O(jiān)k.Butyoumustcomebackintwoweekstopaytherest”Angelinafeltlikejumpingintotheair.ShewassohappythatshetoldMrs.HardingabouttheAvalonServiceClub'sworkanditsChristmasparty.

Then,Angelinashookandsufferedinthecoldwindlookingforwork.Finally,Angelinagotajobmakingnewclothingfordolls.Angelinawasexcellentatsewing.Sureenough,thedolls'dressesturnedoutbeautiful.Shegottwentydollars.Still，shewasfarfromhavingenoughmoneyforherdress.Shefelthelplessasthefinalpaymentdatearrived.

ShereturnedsadlytoForbes'Store,“Idon'thaveenoughmoneyforthedress.”ThenshesawMrs.Harding'seyeswerered.Shelookedlikeshehadbeencrying.Shesaidthestorewasclosingandshewaslosingherjob.注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語己為你寫好；Paragraph1:Suddenly,MrsHardingsaidthatshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngeliacouldhaveit.

Paragraph2:Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.

文章大意：這個故事講述了11歲的AngelinaWilson在家庭經(jīng)濟緊張的情況下，渴望擁有一件新裙子參加AvalonGirls'ServiceClub的圣誕節(jié)日慶典。盡管她的父親已經(jīng)一年沒有工作，現(xiàn)在重新就業(yè)，她的母親也擔心可能會失業(yè)，Angelina還是向父母請求買一件她在Forbes'Store看到的漂亮紅裙子。店里的分期付款計劃讓Angelina看到了希望，她開始找工作賺錢。她通過為玩偶制作衣服的兼職賺取了一些錢，但仍然不足以支付裙子的全款。在最終付款日到來時，她悲傷地回到商店，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)因為商店要關閉，店員Mrs.Harding即將失業(yè)。Mrs.Harding感動于Angelina的堅韌和AvalonServiceClub的精神，決定幫助她支付余款。故事最后，Angelina在街頭看到一個裝扮成圣誕老人的人為窮人募集捐款，深受啟發(fā)，決定用自己的方式回饋社區(qū)，將她的縫紉技能用于為他人制作衣物，籌集資金。這個故事強調(diào)了給予比接受更有福，以及社區(qū)支持和個人努力的重要性。原文中有幾處伏筆，它們在續(xù)寫中得到了回應：Angelina對新裙子的渴望：她對新裙子的向往為故事奠定了基礎，并推動了她之后尋找工作和賺錢的行為。家庭的經(jīng)濟狀況：提到了Angelina的父親一年沒有工作，現(xiàn)在重新就業(yè)，而母親擔心可能失業(yè)，這為Angelina的內(nèi)疚和對金錢的擔憂埋下了伏筆。Forbes'Store的分期付款計劃：這個計劃為Angelina提供了一線希望，也為她后來的行動設定了目標。Angelina的縫紉技能：她擅長縫紉，這為她找工作和賺錢提供了可能。Mrs.Harding的同情：Mrs.Harding對Angelina的同情和愿意為她保留裙子，預示了她可能會在故事中扮演重要角色。在續(xù)寫中，這些伏筆得到了回應：Angelina找工作的努力：她通過自己的縫紉技能找到了為玩偶制作衣服的工作，這直接回應了她對新裙子的渴望和她需要賺錢的處境。Mrs.Harding的慷慨：在Angelina無法支付余款時，Mrs.Harding決定為她支付余款，這回應了之前她對Angelina的同情和支持。商店關閉的消息：這個意外的消息為Angelina帶來了新的情感沖擊，同時也強化了Mrs.Harding決定幫助她的動機。Angelina的回饋：在故事結尾，Angelina看到一個像圣誕老人的人為窮人募集捐款，她決定用自己的方式回饋社區(qū)，這回應了她通過努力工作和社區(qū)支持學到的給予的重要性。續(xù)寫要點：第一段要點：描述Angelina如何接受Mrs.Harding的幫助，她的情感反應，以及這一行為對她意味著什么。展現(xiàn)Mrs.Harding的慷慨決定對Angelina產(chǎn)生的深遠影響，以及她如何感受到社區(qū)的支持和節(jié)日的真正精神。第二段要點：敘述Angelina看到街頭的“圣誕老人”和她的內(nèi)心感受，以及這一情景如何激發(fā)她想要回饋社區(qū)的愿望。描述Angelina決定如何使用自己的技能來幫助他人，以及她如何將個人的渴望轉(zhuǎn)化為對更大社區(qū)目標的貢獻。參考答案

Suddenly,MrsHardingsaidthatshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngeliacouldhaveit.ThiscommitmentmadeAngeliaecstatic,herheartthumpingwildly.ThefantasticsceneofherpeersintheclubsurroundingherandcastingenviousandworshipinglookoverattheChristmaspartyflashedacrosshermind.Herfaceflushedandeyessparkled.Gigglesandchucklesweretosoundwhenadepressedfacewithredeyesreflectedintohereyes.Sheshiveredwithagustofchillinstantlyrunningdownherspine.ShefeltalittleashamedforhermomentaryselfishthoughtofbeautifyingherselfregardlessofthehardsituationofMrsHarding.Heracceptingheartwithdrew.“Thankyouverymuchindeedforyourkindness!MrsHarding!”saidAngelia,“MerryChristmastoyouandgoodluckforyourjobhunting!”Shestrodeout.

Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.Standinginthehardblowingwindandflutteringdensesnowflakes,hewasseenbusywarmlygreetingandsaying“Thankyou!MerryChristmas!”tothepedestriansdroppingmoneyinthecharitybox,afacebrimmingwithhappiness.“Donateitorkeepitformyself？”shepondered,withaconflictingheart,holdingtightlythetwenty-dollarbillshehadearnedbysewingharddollclothing,“Theformerwillgototheneedypeopleforlifenecessitiesandthelatter,thelong-expecteddress,maybe,isjusttoshowoff.”Thehauntingred-eyedMrsHardingaswellastheamazinglysimilar-seeminglifescenewhereherfatherhadbeenlaidoffdeterminedherchoice.ShesteppedupandgavehimhermoneyintheadmiringlookoftheSantaClausandotherdonators.Snowflakeswerestilldancingalongwithherdreamofchildrenallwearingbeautifuldresses.MelodiousChristmassongswereonandon!下水文1Paragraph1:Suddenly,Mrs.HardingsaidthatshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngelinacouldhaveit."I'vebeenwatchingyouworkhard,Angelina,"shesaid,hereyesglisteningwithkindness."YourdeterminationandthespiritoftheAvalonGirls'ServiceClubtouchedmyheart."Shereachedintoherpurseandpulledoutthenecessaryamounttocoverthedress,handingittoastunnedAngelina."Consideritagiftforyourdedicationtohelpingothers."Angelinawasoverwhelmedwithgratitude."Thankyousomuch,Mrs.Harding,"shewhispered,huggingthereddressclosetoherchest.Thewarmthofhumancompassioninthefaceofadversitywasagiftmorepreciousthananyfabric.Paragraph2:Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.Thefestivespiritofgivingwasintheair,anditinspiredAngelinatotakeaction.Sherememberedthetendollarsshehadearnedfromherdoll-dressingjob.WithaheartfullofhopeandthespiritofChristmas,sheapproachedthemananddonatedherhard-earnedmoney."Everylittlebithelps,"themansaid,hiseyescrinklinginasmilethatremindedherofthejoyshehadbroughttoMrs.Harding.Angelinaleftthescenewithalighterwalletbutafullerheart,knowingthatshehadcontributedtospreadingjoyduringtheChristmasFestival.Thereddresssheheldwasnotjustabeautifulgarmentbutasymbolofthekindnessandgenerositythatfilledherheart.下水文2Paragraph1:Suddenly,Mrs.HardingsaidthatshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngelinacouldhaveit."I'veseenhowhardyou'vebeentrying,Angelina,"shesaid,hervoicethickwithemotion."YourspiritisareminderofthetruemeaningofChristmas."Withagentlesmile,Mrs.Hardingcompletedthepurchase,handingoverthebeautifulreddressasasymbolofhersupport.Angelinastoodthere,speechless,hereyesbrimmingwithtearsofjoyandgratitude.Thedre